Poems About Dating by Top Critiquers
#dating
Poems about dating by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
VD on VD
Today is the day
Valentine's Day you fool
Grab your partner and have a great time tonight
If he or she is taking you out to some exclusive restaurant,
Don't forget when ordering Clams, Penne and Alfredo sauce,
That there's no side order of Gonorrhea, Chlamydia or Genital Warts
V.D. or Venereal Disease can infect & destroy
Be honest, be upfront, play it safe, so you can enjoy
On Halloween you tell the kids to be cautious
Some VD can make you sick, some can make you nauseous
Don't forget the flowers, the candy and some Trojan...
Valentine's Day you fool
Grab your partner and have a great time tonight
If he or she is taking you out to some exclusive restaurant,
Don't forget when ordering Clams, Penne and Alfredo sauce,
That there's no side order of Gonorrhea, Chlamydia or Genital Warts
V.D. or Venereal Disease can infect & destroy
Be honest, be upfront, play it safe, so you can enjoy
On Halloween you tell the kids to be cautious
Some VD can make you sick, some can make you nauseous
Don't forget the flowers, the candy and some Trojan...
#dating
#inspirational
#satirical #ValentinesDay
#satirical #ValentinesDay
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16 Comments
What will it take
For sure what I'm saying might be, happening in someone's own personal life, For sometimes down the very roads of our lives, that we will shed some tears in the silent of the darkness of our lives. But yet it's not over when you cry out in silence, while you are trying desperately not to cry. But instead you chose to fight back, the deepness of the truth of the fears that will haunts, you mostly in the wee hours of the night. For always remember that what doesn't kill you, only makes you that much stronger than you think. 🤔 For sure it's gonna be hard just to forget, about that part...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
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My Niece and Her Coffee Date
So so afraid of love
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
#coffee
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
#dating
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
474 reads
28 Comments
I WISH YOU KNEW

#FallingInLove
#admiration
#dating #crush
#dating #crush
276 reads
4 Comments
His Voice
when i hear his
voice penetrate
my brain i get
wet instantly
it makes my
thighs quiver
my pussy drip
like putty in his
hands in a sec
his baritone is
my aphrodisiac
my Kryptonite
and soft spot
i wanna drink
it from his lips
breathe it like
melodic poetry
i save his apps
to have him close
when he's not here
if only i could bottle it
voice penetrate
my brain i get
wet instantly
it makes my
thighs quiver
my pussy drip
like putty in his
hands in a sec
his baritone is
my aphrodisiac
my Kryptonite
and soft spot
i wanna drink
it from his lips
breathe it like
melodic poetry
i save his apps
to have him close
when he's not here
if only i could bottle it
#dating
#lover
951 reads
26 Comments
I'LL TAKE YOU FOR A SPIN
I'll take you for a spin,
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
if it is not a sin
to ask this woman out
with me - it is my shout.
We can be " just be a pair"
who happen to car share.
In anonymity
you and I can just be,
away from gossipy
neighbours and family.
The time belongs to us,
not like being on bus.
No one will bat an eye
as they see us go by
to where I'm taking you.
You can choose what we do
at our destination.
Let loose imagination!
#dating
#love
#relationships #romantic
#relationships #romantic
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0 Comments
Glancing at me
Your look shatters all the mirrors
hanging on the walls
of my labyrinth...
mystical!
Your look makes me feel
like a bacteria under a microscope.
Your gaze does not
fall asleep
when the moon comes
and reflects the sun.
Your gaze brings danger
on black wings.
The danger of your gaze
keeps hovering
over the curtains, the sheets,
the lamps.
The danger of you in me.
In you floating on the skin,
in the hair, in the gums...
The danger of being followed ...
hanging on the walls
of my labyrinth...
mystical!
Your look makes me feel
like a bacteria under a microscope.
Your gaze does not
fall asleep
when the moon comes
and reflects the sun.
Your gaze brings danger
on black wings.
The danger of your gaze
keeps hovering
over the curtains, the sheets,
the lamps.
The danger of you in me.
In you floating on the skin,
in the hair, in the gums...
The danger of being followed ...
#mirror
#myself
#FallingInLove
#dating
#crush
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3 Comments
Homo Authentithicus
Tragic indeed is the state of a man
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
#technology
#dating
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0 Comments
Reassembly Required
It's not that I don't have the ingredients
to be a proper man.
A curious-worthy man.
It's that so much is scattered.
How much time do you have...
At the dining table,
forking around with our
April thanksgiving.
Our third date;
No more napkins
covering our laps.
Seems more like the twentieth,
as our disclosures are shared,
consumed with of course's.
Yet one, covered, stainless domed lid;
Do you know I fell in love with you
during...
to be a proper man.
A curious-worthy man.
It's that so much is scattered.
How much time do you have...
At the dining table,
forking around with our
April thanksgiving.
Our third date;
No more napkins
covering our laps.
Seems more like the twentieth,
as our disclosures are shared,
consumed with of course's.
Yet one, covered, stainless domed lid;
Do you know I fell in love with you
during...
#honesty
#dating
589 reads
19 Comments
Candlelight Dreaming
At first, the flame flickers…
From a spark -
swaying.
A beginning…
Romantic piano enters…
A slow start -
playing.
A portal opening…
Her hips are curvatures…
sultry shadows -
curved
Like… Dreams of sunsets over meadows
So undeserved.
Glass of wine in one hand -
magic wand
in the other hand...
Held…
Like… The meld of sun meeting moon – Beheld.
As… Sparks spark in life like parts.
And… Aromas rise in Somas of lunar tides.
...
From a spark -
swaying.
A beginning…
Romantic piano enters…
A slow start -
playing.
A portal opening…
Her hips are curvatures…
sultry shadows -
curved
Like… Dreams of sunsets over meadows
So undeserved.
Glass of wine in one hand -
magic wand
in the other hand...
Held…
Like… The meld of sun meeting moon – Beheld.
As… Sparks spark in life like parts.
And… Aromas rise in Somas of lunar tides.
...
#love
#romantic
#beauty
#WritingPoetry
#dating
773 reads
5 Comments
Dating is Dated (or should be)
Much like kindergarten
prepares children for childhood
the 1950s model of dating
prepared young men and women for their adult roles.
In the old days
the man was the provider
so he paid on dates.
The woman took great care with her appearance,
a crucial part of her role.
Sometimes the man ordered for the woman in restaurants
without even consulting her.
I wouldn't have survived.
"The lady will have the salmon"
"Eww! I will not. I HATE fish!"
That would have...
prepares children for childhood
the 1950s model of dating
prepared young men and women for their adult roles.
In the old days
the man was the provider
so he paid on dates.
The woman took great care with her appearance,
a crucial part of her role.
Sometimes the man ordered for the woman in restaurants
without even consulting her.
I wouldn't have survived.
"The lady will have the salmon"
"Eww! I will not. I HATE fish!"
That would have...
#culture
#dating
#tradition
137 reads
9 Comments
when she wasn't there
what does a sherry glass
look like the following day he had a pint
look like the following day he had a pint
#dating
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3 Comments
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