Poems About Dating by Top Critiquers
#dating
Poems about dating by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
8th Nov 2024 11:13am
One Nervous Teenager
He would go to those dances
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
#dance
#dating
#fiction
#school
#ShortStory
84 reads
6 Comments
Her
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 9:41am
13th Jan 2025 9:41am
Lying Next to You
My body fits perfectly
And I’m surprised at how we don’t consummate this new friendship
But at how well you know what I need
Your kindness shows with every touch
My arms, my back, my face
Every warm sigh as I burrow deeper
While your arms receive me
You caress my long auburn hair and I can hear your smile
And mind wants you to pull my head back
My loins want you to claim the customary yearning
But you’ve just listened to me tell you my story
You know it’s my heart that yearns to be held
That what I need is to be received...
And I’m surprised at how we don’t consummate this new friendship
But at how well you know what I need
Your kindness shows with every touch
My arms, my back, my face
Every warm sigh as I burrow deeper
While your arms receive me
You caress my long auburn hair and I can hear your smile
And mind wants you to pull my head back
My loins want you to claim the customary yearning
But you’ve just listened to me tell you my story
You know it’s my heart that yearns to be held
That what I need is to be received...
#dating
#erotic
#relationships
232 reads
14 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
12th Sep 2023 11:08pm
12th Sep 2023 11:08pm
I WISH YOU KNEW
#FallingInLove
#admiration
#dating #crush
#dating #crush
234 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
2nd Dec 2024 3:08am
What will it take
For sure what I'm saying might be, happening in someone's own personal life, For sometimes down the very roads of our lives, that we will shed some tears in the silent of the darkness of our lives. But yet it's not over when you cry out in silence, while you are trying desperately not to cry. But instead you chose to fight back, the deepness of the truth of the fears that will haunts, you mostly in the wee hours of the night. For always remember that what doesn't kill you, only makes you that much stronger than you think. 🤔 For sure it's gonna be hard just to forget, about that part...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
106 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
27th Dec 2022 1:16pm
27th Dec 2022 1:16pm
My Niece and Her Coffee Date
So so afraid of love
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
#coffee
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
#dating
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
445 reads
28 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 6:50am
25th Nov 2023 6:50am
YOU FIRE MY END
You're so naughty
when out with me.
You fire my end
when down you bend
with legs upright
within my sight,
your minidress
showing bareness -
because you go
so commando
when on a date
to snare your mate,
tempt him inside
on homeward ride.
when out with me.
You fire my end
when down you bend
with legs upright
within my sight,
your minidress
showing bareness -
because you go
so commando
when on a date
to snare your mate,
tempt him inside
on homeward ride.
#erotic
#rhyming
#dating #temptation
#dating #temptation
280 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 3:45pm
19th Jan 2025 3:45pm
Wow! A date!
Just thinking to myself...
this bitch is getting
dinner and a movie!
He's looking for action!
Sorry if that offends you...
am I being greedy
to take what's offered?
Yah! Dinner and a movie!
We hit Denny's.
I order steak and shrimp.
Shame they don't serve alcohol.
He picks an action movie.
Large drink and candy -
I'm not into picking popcorn
out of my teeth. I love sweets.
Sweet tarts are my favorite!
Guys love when you
turn your tongue blue
and ask them if they've
ever...
this bitch is getting
dinner and a movie!
He's looking for action!
Sorry if that offends you...
am I being greedy
to take what's offered?
Yah! Dinner and a movie!
We hit Denny's.
I order steak and shrimp.
Shame they don't serve alcohol.
He picks an action movie.
Large drink and candy -
I'm not into picking popcorn
out of my teeth. I love sweets.
Sweet tarts are my favorite!
Guys love when you
turn your tongue blue
and ask them if they've
ever...
#dating
#sex
88 reads
3 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
29th Nov 2022 12:34pm
29th Nov 2022 12:34pm
First Date
To have tried so many times
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
#FallingInLove
#dating
#crush #LookingForLove
#crush #LookingForLove
463 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
13th Jan 2024 8:00am
13th Jan 2024 8:00am
Homo Authentithicus
Tragic indeed is the state of a man
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
#technology
#dating
103 reads
0 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
21st Jun 2024 2:00pm
21st Jun 2024 2:00pm
His Voice
when i hear his
voice penetrate
my brain i get
wet instantly
it makes my
thighs quiver
my pussy drip
like putty in his
hands in a sec
his baritone is
my aphrodisiac
my Kryptonite
and soft spot
i wanna drink
it from his lips
breathe it like
melodic poetry
i save his apps
to have him close
when he's not here
if only i could bottle it
voice penetrate
my brain i get
wet instantly
it makes my
thighs quiver
my pussy drip
like putty in his
hands in a sec
his baritone is
my aphrodisiac
my Kryptonite
and soft spot
i wanna drink
it from his lips
breathe it like
melodic poetry
i save his apps
to have him close
when he's not here
if only i could bottle it
#dating
#lover
772 reads
26 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 11:10am
6th Apr 2023 11:10am
Glancing at me
Your look shatters all the mirrors
hanging on the walls
of my labyrinth...
mystical!
Your look makes me feel
like a bacteria under a microscope.
Your gaze does not
fall asleep
when the moon comes
and reflects the sun.
Your gaze brings danger
on black wings.
The danger of your gaze
keeps hovering
over the curtains, the sheets,
the lamps.
The danger of you in me.
In you floating on the skin,
in the hair, in the gums...
The danger of being followed ...
hanging on the walls
of my labyrinth...
mystical!
Your look makes me feel
like a bacteria under a microscope.
Your gaze does not
fall asleep
when the moon comes
and reflects the sun.
Your gaze brings danger
on black wings.
The danger of your gaze
keeps hovering
over the curtains, the sheets,
the lamps.
The danger of you in me.
In you floating on the skin,
in the hair, in the gums...
The danger of being followed ...
#mirror
#myself
#FallingInLove
#dating
#crush
242 reads
3 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
10th Jun 2020 11:55pm
10th Jun 2020 11:55pm
You Got It... It’s Yours
We’re now dancing in the mystic light
Cosmic infused soaring wings taking a Heavenly flight
Down below only hell and fiery blows
Twisted tongues speak ill will, why? Only God truly knows
Touch me gently, mm...oh yes…touch me right there
Caresses my skin so gently as wisps of air
Shh… tonight belongs to us, kisses, one soul now becomes a pair
Spiritually aligned as we inhale celestial scents
Hunger of its vibrancy, in its sensation, bodies spent
Love spells worshiping Kismet karma,...
Cosmic infused soaring wings taking a Heavenly flight
Down below only hell and fiery blows
Twisted tongues speak ill will, why? Only God truly knows
Touch me gently, mm...oh yes…touch me right there
Caresses my skin so gently as wisps of air
Shh… tonight belongs to us, kisses, one soul now becomes a pair
Spiritually aligned as we inhale celestial scents
Hunger of its vibrancy, in its sensation, bodies spent
Love spells worshiping Kismet karma,...
#lover
#dating
#passion
1019 reads
20 Comments
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