Dark Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#dark
dark seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
betwixt
echoing darkness I saunter
delicious decadence in need of a counter
salacious needs an encounter
intrepid caution is damned
withdrawing all notion
seeking on the winds
seeing is believing
I am what I hate, a witch
betwixt two worlds, I am enslaved
to serve the lusts of a master
fully in love with my magics
touching me to create
my anger brings the swiftness of fire
sire of the needful rage
exacting revenge
insidious desire doesn't allow me to break free
this wheel of fate spins ...
delicious decadence in need of a counter
salacious needs an encounter
intrepid caution is damned
withdrawing all notion
seeking on the winds
seeing is believing
I am what I hate, a witch
betwixt two worlds, I am enslaved
to serve the lusts of a master
fully in love with my magics
touching me to create
my anger brings the swiftness of fire
sire of the needful rage
exacting revenge
insidious desire doesn't allow me to break free
this wheel of fate spins ...
#dark
#love
#lust
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6 Comments
Raven's Despair
There was the crush,
and then the rush,
hard stipple of a brush,
not worn of the dashes.
I have autism,
but of no pretenses,
I see blood tipped greens,
those you call weeds
A palace was built,
The homeless guilt,
I love your sparkling eyes
Closed book to fairy cries
A cave we explored,
every treat in disguise
and I wanted some more
as your body would lay.
Memories sometimes
captivated our rhymes,
pump the blood to...
and then the rush,
hard stipple of a brush,
not worn of the dashes.
I have autism,
but of no pretenses,
I see blood tipped greens,
those you call weeds
A palace was built,
The homeless guilt,
I love your sparkling eyes
Closed book to fairy cries
A cave we explored,
every treat in disguise
and I wanted some more
as your body would lay.
Memories sometimes
captivated our rhymes,
pump the blood to...
#dark
#obsession
#UnrequitedLove
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2 Comments
Mother
Mother,
I feel,
like
an
earthquake
got buried
in
your
womb.
Smothering,
positivity
and
the love I miss,
crumbling tomb......
I forgot
how to love,
I forgot
how to feel,
I have
one emotion
and is
negativity
I'm a
narcissist,
I even
hurt a kid
who hurt
me
with her words.
She was only
a puppy at 12
I feel bad
and I feel mad
but its not enough
to assume.....
that I can change,
walk past ...
I feel,
like
an
earthquake
got buried
in
your
womb.
Smothering,
positivity
and
the love I miss,
crumbling tomb......
I forgot
how to love,
I forgot
how to feel,
I have
one emotion
and is
negativity
I'm a
narcissist,
I even
hurt a kid
who hurt
me
with her words.
She was only
a puppy at 12
I feel bad
and I feel mad
but its not enough
to assume.....
that I can change,
walk past ...
#anxiety
#confusion
#dark
#grief
#heartbroken
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0 Comments
The Flayed Hand Cometh
Winds sigh low
Whispers slither in the dust
Fires wane, embers choke
The flayed hand cometh
Sky turns grey
Sun bleeds thin behind the veil
Roots twist, drinking deep
The flayed hand cometh
Ash coats the tongue
Water blackens in the wells
Statues weep from hollow eyes
The flayed hand cometh
Walls split wide
Stone and bone collapse alike
Screams dissolve into the void
The flayed hand cometh
Veins run dry
Flesh peels back in offering
A name unspoken stirs awake
The flayed hand...
Whispers slither in the dust
Fires wane, embers choke
The flayed hand cometh
Sky turns grey
Sun bleeds thin behind the veil
Roots twist, drinking deep
The flayed hand cometh
Ash coats the tongue
Water blackens in the wells
Statues weep from hollow eyes
The flayed hand cometh
Walls split wide
Stone and bone collapse alike
Screams dissolve into the void
The flayed hand cometh
Veins run dry
Flesh peels back in offering
A name unspoken stirs awake
The flayed hand...
#dark
#despair
#fear
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0 Comments
Carved
Etching in moonlight
Dancing around the totem
Ghost drums
Marks in the stone
Tongues long forgotten
Night hums
Blood on the roots
Spilled in the pattern
Flesh numb
Smoke forms a sign
Black stars are watching
Oath sung
Limbs twist in prayer
Eyes turned to nothing
Veil strung
Shadows take shape
The hunger awakens
Doomed drums
Dancing around the totem
Ghost drums
Marks in the stone
Tongues long forgotten
Night hums
Blood on the roots
Spilled in the pattern
Flesh numb
Smoke forms a sign
Black stars are watching
Oath sung
Limbs twist in prayer
Eyes turned to nothing
Veil strung
Shadows take shape
The hunger awakens
Doomed drums
#dark
#death
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For Violets
In war torn skies the trial begins
A witch-hunt for ages untold
Dressed in white but paved in our sins
Silence golden favors the bold
Blades of greed culling deepest red
Welcome home wings of the fallen
Swing the gavel- steadfast they tread
In sacred temples we're walled in
Fester this wound now a calling
After headstones edge marking doom
A glimmer of black strikes out, reaching
Reaching for sangreal, blood in bloom
For violets unbowed, songs in the valley
For violence, its victims of the truth.
A witch-hunt for ages untold
Dressed in white but paved in our sins
Silence golden favors the bold
Blades of greed culling deepest red
Welcome home wings of the fallen
Swing the gavel- steadfast they tread
In sacred temples we're walled in
Fester this wound now a calling
After headstones edge marking doom
A glimmer of black strikes out, reaching
Reaching for sangreal, blood in bloom
For violets unbowed, songs in the valley
For violence, its victims of the truth.
#dark
#inspirational
#MentalHealth #SelfReflection
#MentalHealth #SelfReflection
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0 Comments
Sooo...
Why wouldn't you want to keep chainsawing people,
After they already died?
The way they vibrate, and look inside.
I get a hard on for mince meat pie.
I laugh at those carcasses,
Hung up and dried.
I like a bitch to bleed; dripping wet.
Don't ask me why.
After they already died?
The way they vibrate, and look inside.
I get a hard on for mince meat pie.
I laugh at those carcasses,
Hung up and dried.
I like a bitch to bleed; dripping wet.
Don't ask me why.
#dark
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3 Comments
The Thing. That Voice. This Darkness
Hallowed Hells
Midnight bell chimes
Whispers on the wind
Something came in
Click. Clack
Steps on stone
Measured, patient
Drawing near
Scratch. Scratch
Nails on wood
A slow, deliberate greeting
Creak. Groan
Shadows swell
Heavy with breath unseen
Hush. Hush
A voice, dry as withered leaves
Calling a name I’ve never spoken
Drip. Drip
From nowhere, from everywhere
The scent of earth, of rot, of time undone
Thud. Thud
A weight against the door, ...
Midnight bell chimes
Whispers on the wind
Something came in
Click. Clack
Steps on stone
Measured, patient
Drawing near
Scratch. Scratch
Nails on wood
A slow, deliberate greeting
Creak. Groan
Shadows swell
Heavy with breath unseen
Hush. Hush
A voice, dry as withered leaves
Calling a name I’ve never spoken
Drip. Drip
From nowhere, from everywhere
The scent of earth, of rot, of time undone
Thud. Thud
A weight against the door, ...
#dark
#death
#fear
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0 Comments
A Blow To Shatter The Void
Lunar Hex
Your deathly arts
That would bathe this world
Surge
Give me the sign
Fourfold towers burning
The watchers' damnation
’Neath the howling star
Death’s blessing
Shade between worlds
Eclipse of emptiness
Burning
The fold of creation
Assaulting the heavens
A crimson moon
Rending existence
Blooms of fire
Chaos rites awakened
Break the cosmos
Swallow the void
Come
Come
Come, ye deathless
Your deathly arts
That would bathe this world
Surge
Give me the sign
Fourfold towers burning
The watchers' damnation
’Neath the howling star
Death’s blessing
Shade between worlds
Eclipse of emptiness
Burning
The fold of creation
Assaulting the heavens
A crimson moon
Rending existence
Blooms of fire
Chaos rites awakened
Break the cosmos
Swallow the void
Come
Come
Come, ye deathless
#dark
#universe
36 reads
2 Comments
Lovely Disgusted Ramblings of a Self-Ingested Being
Love sick
Dumb shits
Such as myself
Stand around
Idly by
Full of nothingness
As long as you get yours
As long as royalty succeeds
We worry about nothing
We got nothing
Yet everything
Amen
To you and your motherfucking condescending albatross of a conundrum which is not anything I condone nor does your mom nor does the Pope and so we sit in this mess eating the ember and feeling incomplete just like yesterday we got nothing so now how do you feel cause I feel like nothing is that you feeling like nothing...
Dumb shits
Such as myself
Stand around
Idly by
Full of nothingness
As long as you get yours
As long as royalty succeeds
We worry about nothing
We got nothing
Yet everything
Amen
To you and your motherfucking condescending albatross of a conundrum which is not anything I condone nor does your mom nor does the Pope and so we sit in this mess eating the ember and feeling incomplete just like yesterday we got nothing so now how do you feel cause I feel like nothing is that you feeling like nothing...
#anxiety
#bittersweet
#dark
#disappointment
#emptiness
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2 Comments
vanquished
decrepit darkness, at my front door
with thoughts of lust and nothing more
insidious need, I fear, crept up
and I shew it away
inside the dusky, drool
cobwebbed and forgotten
slithering through the night
its mouth agape
a crone, spoke a spell against me
dark of day
bleak in hate
a turnkey and a latch
do not let this woman pass
secreted treachery, upon my bodice lain
sulking in the shadows resenting my beauty
its faith in the dark arts
it utter more enchantments
seek and search, upon...
with thoughts of lust and nothing more
insidious need, I fear, crept up
and I shew it away
inside the dusky, drool
cobwebbed and forgotten
slithering through the night
its mouth agape
a crone, spoke a spell against me
dark of day
bleak in hate
a turnkey and a latch
do not let this woman pass
secreted treachery, upon my bodice lain
sulking in the shadows resenting my beauty
its faith in the dark arts
it utter more enchantments
seek and search, upon...
#dark
#love
#lust #witches
#lust #witches
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5 Comments
February Frost
The oak trees in winter
into the painted grey skies
ghosts of the midwinter fires
flames of darkness, touching down on earth
the purest water of the black lake
the great cold death brought forth
into the painted grey skies
ghosts of the midwinter fires
flames of darkness, touching down on earth
the purest water of the black lake
the great cold death brought forth
#dark
#death
#nature #winter
#nature #winter
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8 Comments
DU Poetry : Dark Seeking Honest Critique Poems