Dark Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#dark
dark seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
ENVY!
By Stanley Collymore
How can anyone either sensibly
or realistically believe that to
unilaterally, unwarrantedly
and so inanely bigotedly, personally
taking to quite horribly demonizing
and without a shred of evidence to
literally substantiate much less so
validate their spurious and clearly
unsubstantiated hostile, and also
invariably, collectively dangerous
and unbearable accusations that
someone, or basically numerous
persons, whom they subjectively
dislike or very vehemently abhor,
are in effect...
How can anyone either sensibly
or realistically believe that to
unilaterally, unwarrantedly
and so inanely bigotedly, personally
taking to quite horribly demonizing
and without a shred of evidence to
literally substantiate much less so
validate their spurious and clearly
unsubstantiated hostile, and also
invariably, collectively dangerous
and unbearable accusations that
someone, or basically numerous
persons, whom they subjectively
dislike or very vehemently abhor,
are in effect...
#jealousy
#hate
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
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Can't the Windsors do anything without it turning into a PR exercise?
By Stanley Collymore
Charles at 74 years of age
himself is mourning on
mother's day 2023 his
dead 96 years old mother Liz
who, by any definition of the
term, and which also is very
clearly, logically, and rightly
so understood by everyone
other than the cravenly, so
pathetic, quite distinctively
mindless also sycophantic
monarchical serfs and the
surfeit, of unquestionably
likeminded and evidently
significantly, intellectually
challenged ones was too
undeniably, a thoroughly
lousy...
Charles at 74 years of age
himself is mourning on
mother's day 2023 his
dead 96 years old mother Liz
who, by any definition of the
term, and which also is very
clearly, logically, and rightly
so understood by everyone
other than the cravenly, so
pathetic, quite distinctively
mindless also sycophantic
monarchical serfs and the
surfeit, of unquestionably
likeminded and evidently
significantly, intellectually
challenged ones was too
undeniably, a thoroughly
lousy...
#hate
#dark
#greed
#denial
#emptiness
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cruelty
insipient cruelty be thy name
with the dusk's urgency be away
conjured on a dare
my snare set to bate
lured into a state of tranquility
lulled into sleep
you see what you like
not what is before you
an ancient, with the hunger of a thousand
a greed so deep it can't be measured
lilt on the wind invites you in
are you amused?
quicken the pulse with a dagger bared
the prey tastes much better afraid
I take my time with you
lusting your flesh I must indulge my tastes
dining on the soul ...
with the dusk's urgency be away
conjured on a dare
my snare set to bate
lured into a state of tranquility
lulled into sleep
you see what you like
not what is before you
an ancient, with the hunger of a thousand
a greed so deep it can't be measured
lilt on the wind invites you in
are you amused?
quicken the pulse with a dagger bared
the prey tastes much better afraid
I take my time with you
lusting your flesh I must indulge my tastes
dining on the soul ...
#dark
#gothic
#vampires
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4 Comments
Shattered Sky
I'm feeling weak tonight
Like the air isnt enough for my lungs
Unsettled, anxious, unnerved
Ribs rattle, restraining a heart
That rails the cage, screaming for him
Rejecting reason of time or distance
She wails to be wrapped in your bones.
Come home, we cry,
My battered heart and I...
I moved the world for you.
Nothing makes sense
About your cruel dance
When I've bled for all but you.
Im holding more than planned
Now I've forgotten to stand
Shatted by ghosts of you.
I'm buried with unmet promises ...
Like the air isnt enough for my lungs
Unsettled, anxious, unnerved
Ribs rattle, restraining a heart
That rails the cage, screaming for him
Rejecting reason of time or distance
She wails to be wrapped in your bones.
Come home, we cry,
My battered heart and I...
I moved the world for you.
Nothing makes sense
About your cruel dance
When I've bled for all but you.
Im holding more than planned
Now I've forgotten to stand
Shatted by ghosts of you.
I'm buried with unmet promises ...
#dark
#heartbroken
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The darkness side of love
Our love has become dark hauntingly beautiful. There's no tears to shed when I saw you all in black in our day to remember each year. That will not turn to rest on a beautiful rainy night on Halloween it makes me grin with excitement. Who says you can't find an angel in the moonlight shining so bright like the stars for this love can't die because it is immortal like our friends from transylvania waiting for our return home to sing the songs of old lyrics of new our love will not turn cold like ocean blue.
#love
#dark
#gothic
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the masquerade
sultry night taste my delights in the darkened kingdom
where the great masquerade is in procession
feeling the pull of the macabre you are at once enchanted
delicious women in all stages of undress amuse you
but you can't take your eyes off of one
a red headed lass with a challenging gaze
there is just something about her
so with great flair you present yourself
little dreamer fantasizes about the dark
it calls her to the edge for a fatal encounter
she smiles as you approach not knowing the danger
suave and with style...
where the great masquerade is in procession
feeling the pull of the macabre you are at once enchanted
delicious women in all stages of undress amuse you
but you can't take your eyes off of one
a red headed lass with a challenging gaze
there is just something about her
so with great flair you present yourself
little dreamer fantasizes about the dark
it calls her to the edge for a fatal encounter
she smiles as you approach not knowing the danger
suave and with style...
#dark
#vampires
#orgasm
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reckoning
snubbed by the elite for being different
I excel doing things otherwise
enchantment grace please show me your face
in darkness gloom I need some growing room
in the depths where I soar, my mind is sore of worry
I cast a spell, I request legion to do my bidding
at my behest they are sent on the winds
to affect in my favor the future fate of my soul
I attend the grand masquerade
making love with my chosen host
I seek retribution for services rendered
did you think I was a free whore?
insidious...
I excel doing things otherwise
enchantment grace please show me your face
in darkness gloom I need some growing room
in the depths where I soar, my mind is sore of worry
I cast a spell, I request legion to do my bidding
at my behest they are sent on the winds
to affect in my favor the future fate of my soul
I attend the grand masquerade
making love with my chosen host
I seek retribution for services rendered
did you think I was a free whore?
insidious...
#lust
#dark
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8 Comments
Much wiser and certainly far cleverer than the Brits, these French guillotine lovers!
By Stanley Collymore
Retain the British monarchy,
the serf sycophants avidly
proclaim, solely and also
allegedly, they ludicrously maintain
because of the phenomenally very
huge amounts of money evidently
which laughably, they themselves
and obviously as well their in situ
presence always supposedly but
in reality not so, magnanimously
effectively bring into the country.
Nah! Unquestionably, the actual,
literally most visited city, across
the western world and distinctly
so within Europe itself is...
Retain the British monarchy,
the serf sycophants avidly
proclaim, solely and also
allegedly, they ludicrously maintain
because of the phenomenally very
huge amounts of money evidently
which laughably, they themselves
and obviously as well their in situ
presence always supposedly but
in reality not so, magnanimously
effectively bring into the country.
Nah! Unquestionably, the actual,
literally most visited city, across
the western world and distinctly
so within Europe itself is...
#hate
#dark
#greed
#denial
#emptiness
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Alchemist III
In spilled curses where you name me
In basins splintered by design
Visions of what is and will be
I feel my smoke, your breath
In every smothered line
On mountains of vessels buried
On crimson hilltops grinning low
Falling beneath labors carried
If it leads me to Hell
On your word I will go
When all the voices are boring
We hear the delight of the gun
When all these worlds crumble away
I return to the only one
With all our talk of morning
We sure...
In basins splintered by design
Visions of what is and will be
I feel my smoke, your breath
In every smothered line
On mountains of vessels buried
On crimson hilltops grinning low
Falling beneath labors carried
If it leads me to Hell
On your word I will go
When all the voices are boring
We hear the delight of the gun
When all these worlds crumble away
I return to the only one
With all our talk of morning
We sure...
#love
#dark
#relationships
#spiritual
#MentalHealth
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Inbetween What Is
Chased by the rain I celebrate
Fell in love with a memory
Confused so let me demonstrate
Liminal induced fantasy
Wade wistfully through water's past
I tremble at the slightest breeze
A child lost on a crooked path
Coaxed further by a burning tree
Braised in lights of their fuchsia
Twisted to the beige of their sound
Painted wrong to write their futures
What will they do when Hell breaks out?
Enchanted by the misery
Adrift acids, oceans many.
Fell in love with a memory
Confused so let me demonstrate
Liminal induced fantasy
Wade wistfully through water's past
I tremble at the slightest breeze
A child lost on a crooked path
Coaxed further by a burning tree
Braised in lights of their fuchsia
Twisted to the beige of their sound
Painted wrong to write their futures
What will they do when Hell breaks out?
Enchanted by the misery
Adrift acids, oceans many.
#love
#dark
#spiritual
#MentalHealth
#SelfReflection
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quickens the bloodlust
dissonate soul
open your black tablet
and proceed to cause discomfort amongst the host
listless need will you relent?
if not, I will in depths unknown
and hearts reendowed shake your internal temple
I am the fear bringer
I linger at the doors of your heart
blackening your days and terrifying your heart
I seek redemption for all the I am
after all I bring out the best in you
soul charmer, you vixen
we follow you everywhere
with discoveries everyday
we know where you like to play
gentle viper...
open your black tablet
and proceed to cause discomfort amongst the host
listless need will you relent?
if not, I will in depths unknown
and hearts reendowed shake your internal temple
I am the fear bringer
I linger at the doors of your heart
blackening your days and terrifying your heart
I seek redemption for all the I am
after all I bring out the best in you
soul charmer, you vixen
we follow you everywhere
with discoveries everyday
we know where you like to play
gentle viper...
#dark
#vampires
#magic
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Tales Of A Flayed Angel
^^^
there she stood
stilled in defiant beauty
on display as an archaeological find
of unknown origin
eternally posed for the curious
visitors laden with a peculiar taste
a for dark extravagance
^^^^
bemused and bewitched by
her immovable stance
molded meticulously by scripture
swirled within the folds of esoteric pottery
into a picture suggesting a worth more ...
there she stood
stilled in defiant beauty
on display as an archaeological find
of unknown origin
eternally posed for the curious
visitors laden with a peculiar taste
a for dark extravagance
^^^^
bemused and bewitched by
her immovable stance
molded meticulously by scripture
swirled within the folds of esoteric pottery
into a picture suggesting a worth more ...
#dark
#gothic
#night
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