Dark Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#dark
dark seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Squeeze

#dark
#gothic
#evil
#crush
#seductive
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My shadow
Not our full reflection
Dark is needed
A slight perception of us
A little injection
Of light Allows
Silhouette Outline
making shapes
During
night time
Stuck to us
Like glue
A partner in dark
Until morning
When the sun shines
Creating a glow
He must go
Me and my shadow.....
Dark is needed
A slight perception of us
A little injection
Of light Allows
Silhouette Outline
making shapes
During
night time
Stuck to us
Like glue
A partner in dark
Until morning
When the sun shines
Creating a glow
He must go
Me and my shadow.....
#dark
#shadows
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Liz Windsor the walking dead who is considerably less interesting I find than the average stiff awaiting an autopsy!
By Stanley Collymore
An absolutely distasteful, failed marriage, yet very pathetically
for in excess of over 30 years
dishonestly and publicly conveying
to your distinctively rather gullible
serfs that Phillip who was actually your husband, but undeniably so
very crucially, living with another woman by whom it's rather well
known he'd distincly fathered a
bastard daughter, herself dead
while serially, routinely fucking
lots of other slappers for good
measure; yet for all that, there
was the pathetic outright lying ...
An absolutely distasteful, failed marriage, yet very pathetically
for in excess of over 30 years
dishonestly and publicly conveying
to your distinctively rather gullible
serfs that Phillip who was actually your husband, but undeniably so
very crucially, living with another woman by whom it's rather well
known he'd distincly fathered a
bastard daughter, herself dead
while serially, routinely fucking
lots of other slappers for good
measure; yet for all that, there
was the pathetic outright lying ...
#jealousy
#hate
#dark
#greed
#denial
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Witch Queen 9(He's All I See)

#dark
#gothic
#ForbiddenLove
#passion
#witches
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Dead
I died all because
My eyes were closed last hear me
I'm the abyss bitch
My eyes were closed last hear me
I'm the abyss bitch
#love
#dark
#fiction
#graveyard
#SelfDiscovery
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the dark beckons, darklings
I fell into hell when you slip away
I weep with an intensity that would bleed you
I am desolate but I will walk on
there are no easy exits, well not for me
I came here especially for the darkness
I have a mission to complete
for the broken and the misshapen souls
I am a unique beauty
only my own recognize me
I am here for you, did you know?
I see you clearly in the shadows
thinking I couldn't love you if I only knew
come out little darkling
I am lonely of cause
I stole the day to cast me in the...
I weep with an intensity that would bleed you
I am desolate but I will walk on
there are no easy exits, well not for me
I came here especially for the darkness
I have a mission to complete
for the broken and the misshapen souls
I am a unique beauty
only my own recognize me
I am here for you, did you know?
I see you clearly in the shadows
thinking I couldn't love you if I only knew
come out little darkling
I am lonely of cause
I stole the day to cast me in the...
#dark
#ILoveYou
#gothic
#vampires
#lover
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Abuse Yourself for Me
Sexual violence
Psychological mayhem
Faucet between your legs
Running hot
Pain virtuoso
Abuse yourself for me
You know I need that
Psychological mayhem
Faucet between your legs
Running hot
Pain virtuoso
Abuse yourself for me
You know I need that
#anxiety
#dark
#violence
#BDSM
#pagan
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20 Comments
She's Beautiful

#dark
#gothic
#fiction
#ForbiddenLove
#bisexual
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By....By......By.....By

#dark
#gothic
#death
#SelfHarm
#evil
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SkullnXbone hand
(Introduction)
such a wing of beauty
laid in the palm of the underworld
papilio ulysses
on a skullncrossbone hand
she flew to
the hollow of its eyes
inflamed the green fibres
of a once before winter storyland
lifted its arm to release her
onto grey discourse
weeping the clouds
aggregating carnality
alkaline with kind
diffuse rains down
upon all of the damned
she raised purple and blue roses
blessed the black with true sentiment
the way that a skeleton could never understand
….he...
such a wing of beauty
laid in the palm of the underworld
papilio ulysses
on a skullncrossbone hand
she flew to
the hollow of its eyes
inflamed the green fibres
of a once before winter storyland
lifted its arm to release her
onto grey discourse
weeping the clouds
aggregating carnality
alkaline with kind
diffuse rains down
upon all of the damned
she raised purple and blue roses
blessed the black with true sentiment
the way that a skeleton could never understand
….he...
#dark
#beauty
#gothic
#rose
#separation
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just off Walking Street

#regret
#dark
#sex #learning
#sex #learning
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Mirror Reflections Ah Laugh
How is not glory.....leaving bodies...
Lifeless for their crimes against me
....Tell why I'm not wrong......the laws of
......The land does not approve of it
Oh mirror reflection u.....ah laugh at me...
U should we are one......we are ability
Walk with me reflection as.....I.....walk within....an ah circle eyes upon.....
Us and this trigga I just pulled
The lives I took in self defense.........
Mirror I'm such a crook like........
U reflectively ah show......and say....
I must leave u now..........and...
Lifeless for their crimes against me
....Tell why I'm not wrong......the laws of
......The land does not approve of it
Oh mirror reflection u.....ah laugh at me...
U should we are one......we are ability
Walk with me reflection as.....I.....walk within....an ah circle eyes upon.....
Us and this trigga I just pulled
The lives I took in self defense.........
Mirror I'm such a crook like........
U reflectively ah show......and say....
I must leave u now..........and...
#dark
#gothic
#evil
#culture
#tradition
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