Dark Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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dark seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Just let it go! We all deal with family bereavement; it's quite commonplace!
By Stanley Collymore
You actually need to move on and
stop being maudlin. Bringing
this woman's name up
every simply contrived opportunity isn't
going to save the British monarchy, as
it's finally been actually, quite publicly
rumbled for what it undoubtedly is; a
feudal mafia that's really ensconced
in the 21st Century. And very simply
as for Liz Windsor herself she quite
personally and evidently effectively
generally and crucially persistently
interfered - so much for this rather
supposedly crucially...
You actually need to move on and
stop being maudlin. Bringing
this woman's name up
every simply contrived opportunity isn't
going to save the British monarchy, as
it's finally been actually, quite publicly
rumbled for what it undoubtedly is; a
feudal mafia that's really ensconced
in the 21st Century. And very simply
as for Liz Windsor herself she quite
personally and evidently effectively
generally and crucially persistently
interfered - so much for this rather
supposedly crucially...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#hate
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stop fighting your inner beast man
fighting the illusion I hold onto truth
you have never loved anyone
you pity yourself for things you alone have caused
you set into motion a sequence of events
the day you crossed my path
you think to deliver me early to my undoing
wait we're just getting to the good part
vengeance is His alone
you thought I caused your ego issue no it was God
He will recompense for all of your ego polishing you do at my expense
a demon on your back
except it isn't a woman is it?
what you really crave is a man inside you
admit...
you have never loved anyone
you pity yourself for things you alone have caused
you set into motion a sequence of events
the day you crossed my path
you think to deliver me early to my undoing
wait we're just getting to the good part
vengeance is His alone
you thought I caused your ego issue no it was God
He will recompense for all of your ego polishing you do at my expense
a demon on your back
except it isn't a woman is it?
what you really crave is a man inside you
admit...
#dark
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Hope
my heart will hold onto hope
you glory in your father
a technology cheat thief and liar
parading around as king, oppressing the weak ones
our Father sees your intentions
you will pay your debt not to me but to him
kindness covers a multitude of sin
my kind heart may be forgotten by the masses
but I am set aside for His bounty
he warns pearls before swine... little one
seeing they won't look
hearing they won't answer
my Father put me in your way
let's call it fate
He will reveal you for what...
you glory in your father
a technology cheat thief and liar
parading around as king, oppressing the weak ones
our Father sees your intentions
you will pay your debt not to me but to him
kindness covers a multitude of sin
my kind heart may be forgotten by the masses
but I am set aside for His bounty
he warns pearls before swine... little one
seeing they won't look
hearing they won't answer
my Father put me in your way
let's call it fate
He will reveal you for what...
#dark
#hope
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whores and pitty f**ks for fux sake
my Father in terror you revealed yourself...angry
desiring a human's love I took was offered to me
and it wasn't much for my part of the unfair exchange
he pities himself for his problems
and tells women it's my fault he is as such
I believe the same about his ex he is a good gaslighter
he wants revenge but I have to wonder for what?
for taking my hand-ups year in and out for loving and supporting him
when his mom just wanted to cast him aside
or for adopting his problems as my own?
I am guilty for ignoring the...
desiring a human's love I took was offered to me
and it wasn't much for my part of the unfair exchange
he pities himself for his problems
and tells women it's my fault he is as such
I believe the same about his ex he is a good gaslighter
he wants revenge but I have to wonder for what?
for taking my hand-ups year in and out for loving and supporting him
when his mom just wanted to cast him aside
or for adopting his problems as my own?
I am guilty for ignoring the...
#dark
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She will disappear
Why don't you disappear
Sick of your face each year
Listen to me my dear
The end is growing near
You have tried to threaten me
You have tried to kill me
I'm stronger then you thought I would be
Open your mouth, taste my sweet addiction
Come a little closer, endure my depraved affliction
Accuracy & outcome, guided this conviction
No time for remorse, another crucifixion
Eat the bite
Rinse it down
Run for cover
Stroke the ground
Within is the rival
Must annihilate, for survival
...
Sick of your face each year
Listen to me my dear
The end is growing near
You have tried to threaten me
You have tried to kill me
I'm stronger then you thought I would be
Open your mouth, taste my sweet addiction
Come a little closer, endure my depraved affliction
Accuracy & outcome, guided this conviction
No time for remorse, another crucifixion
Eat the bite
Rinse it down
Run for cover
Stroke the ground
Within is the rival
Must annihilate, for survival
...
#dark
#hate
#murder
#relationships
#rhyming
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Your obsession with Meghan is seriously concerning, Amanda Platell!
By Stanley Collymore
It's not as if the Daily Mail hires
you for your purportedly quite
outstanding talent Amanda
Platell! Clearly very unquestionably to
anyone, with the merest modicum of
intelligence, or basic commonsense
it's basically apparent that you have
none of these! However, you simply
do have one quite specifically toxic
and undoubtedly verminous ability;
simply inured racism, that through
the Daily Mail's obviously pathetic
and undeniably literally obsessive ...
It's not as if the Daily Mail hires
you for your purportedly quite
outstanding talent Amanda
Platell! Clearly very unquestionably to
anyone, with the merest modicum of
intelligence, or basic commonsense
it's basically apparent that you have
none of these! However, you simply
do have one quite specifically toxic
and undoubtedly verminous ability;
simply inured racism, that through
the Daily Mail's obviously pathetic
and undeniably literally obsessive ...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#hate
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The Devils Comet
Pons and Brooks may have discovered me
But I've existed since the beginning of history
Travelling around haunting the universe
Altering space and time with my death curse
Tempting your mind with harbingers of change
Causing public unrest to be so deranged
Some just see my glowing head and tail
But others know my true message details
I'm not just frozen chunks of dust rock and ice
I have an unstable diatomic composition inside
When my nucleus explodes you will feel my horns
No longer can you hide under your rose of thorns ...
But I've existed since the beginning of history
Travelling around haunting the universe
Altering space and time with my death curse
Tempting your mind with harbingers of change
Causing public unrest to be so deranged
Some just see my glowing head and tail
But others know my true message details
I'm not just frozen chunks of dust rock and ice
I have an unstable diatomic composition inside
When my nucleus explodes you will feel my horns
No longer can you hide under your rose of thorns ...
#dark
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either you or them
interesting curiosity invested in the outfit...spin
when altercations inevitibly rise
because the body is a poor representation for the soul
left scarred from the war
tormented for it, it's okay I've seen myself look worse
beauty given and then taken
there are so many ways to shatter the soul
sorrow and pain, being beautiful ingrediants to making a tasty being
with enough love and attention at pivatol moments
our minds see what they want to
I know I am more than my some of parts
it is a mortal tomb met to distract...
when altercations inevitibly rise
because the body is a poor representation for the soul
left scarred from the war
tormented for it, it's okay I've seen myself look worse
beauty given and then taken
there are so many ways to shatter the soul
sorrow and pain, being beautiful ingrediants to making a tasty being
with enough love and attention at pivatol moments
our minds see what they want to
I know I am more than my some of parts
it is a mortal tomb met to distract...
#dark
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Gaze of Glass
Home is
where you are
chipping the stone
to grave applause
a look in the eyes
when the lights go down
awake to
crouching
(sure)
~the stars are not right
for a place
in.between
dilated paranoia,
a mawkish glass
for snorting past
with a blunting bite
as fingertips
crawl on storms
with a ~click
in the night...
a quick blue fire
from Zippo & flesh
within the heat
of a ~~menthol slide:
a...
where you are
chipping the stone
to grave applause
a look in the eyes
when the lights go down
awake to
crouching
(sure)
~the stars are not right
for a place
in.between
dilated paranoia,
a mawkish glass
for snorting past
with a blunting bite
as fingertips
crawl on storms
with a ~click
in the night...
a quick blue fire
from Zippo & flesh
within the heat
of a ~~menthol slide:
a...
#anxiety
#dark
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Uniquely Silent
yes, I agree Father I am too sensitive
it is better not to care, to be numb and disconnected
and only sharing my inner thoughts with you
you're right humans will let you down
only being disappointed when I have sorely misunderstood your point
you set me apart for yourself alone to savor
and I have clung to what I can see with my mortal eyes
to my disgrace
even when you have proven time and again that they will betray me
I have set aside the wrongs done to me desiring their company
with a need to belong and I do for the most part ...
it is better not to care, to be numb and disconnected
and only sharing my inner thoughts with you
you're right humans will let you down
only being disappointed when I have sorely misunderstood your point
you set me apart for yourself alone to savor
and I have clung to what I can see with my mortal eyes
to my disgrace
even when you have proven time and again that they will betray me
I have set aside the wrongs done to me desiring their company
with a need to belong and I do for the most part ...
#dark
#hell
#love
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Winds blow
Wings aglow,
In the night they glance, so free,
Winds ablow,
Stars above that softly glow,
Butterflies in twilight's trance,
Bats in flight, in starry chance,
Wings aglow.
In the night they glance, so free,
Winds ablow,
Stars above that softly glow,
Butterflies in twilight's trance,
Bats in flight, in starry chance,
Wings aglow.
#dark
#dreams
#night
#stars
#wind
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A highly implausible alibi Nathan Cofnas for one's own inherent inferiority!
By Stanley Collymore
Yours is an utterly stupid premise,
Nathan Cofnas, that significantly
very evidently appeals to white
racists and pathetic white supremacists
like yourself, as well as basically Useful
Idiot non-whites who obviously can't, or
just simply, undoubtedly won't think for
themselves, and rather unquestionably
like the undeniably actually perennially
battered wife or girlfriend, who literally
fatuously sticks with a brutal husband
or lover; and doing so unquestioningly,
because she truly has no...
Yours is an utterly stupid premise,
Nathan Cofnas, that significantly
very evidently appeals to white
racists and pathetic white supremacists
like yourself, as well as basically Useful
Idiot non-whites who obviously can't, or
just simply, undoubtedly won't think for
themselves, and rather unquestionably
like the undeniably actually perennially
battered wife or girlfriend, who literally
fatuously sticks with a brutal husband
or lover; and doing so unquestioningly,
because she truly has no...
#dark
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#hate
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