Dark by Top Critiquers Poems
#dark
dark by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The art of translucency and how thin skin learns skilled illumination
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I
I'm
You
Me
We
Our
Myself
Your
Them
Their
There
Heart
Soul
_______________
Memories weigh
of weary skin
plum-violet plumes
easily find a harsh yellowish
single moments solidly afix
so reflective- gathering
strength finds solace
upon a stair rest
Simple, it seemed—then
youth aglow in heels ...
I
I'm
You
Me
We
Our
Myself
Your
Them
Their
There
Heart
Soul
_______________
Memories weigh
of weary skin
plum-violet plumes
easily find a harsh yellowish
single moments solidly afix
so reflective- gathering
strength finds solace
upon a stair rest
Simple, it seemed—then
youth aglow in heels ...
#hope
#dark
#TruthOfLife
#learning
#philosophical
246 reads
32 Comments
The Haunting Of Tituba
So, you want to write me story my child
To see how I mystified those Puritans with my sorcery lies
I could tell the wicked hour by the high moon in da sky
When the roosters crow by and by
Give you life, kiss your soul with death
Bid at my feet, untie my hands with one blown breath
In the cathedral of downfalls by that ole Masters’ will
Sacrifice to the land, wind, and earth, before the spirit kill
In ethereal of channeling, you summoned me to give unto your contingency passage to shine
Giving reprieve to my wandering soul through the...
To see how I mystified those Puritans with my sorcery lies
I could tell the wicked hour by the high moon in da sky
When the roosters crow by and by
Give you life, kiss your soul with death
Bid at my feet, untie my hands with one blown breath
In the cathedral of downfalls by that ole Masters’ will
Sacrifice to the land, wind, and earth, before the spirit kill
In ethereal of channeling, you summoned me to give unto your contingency passage to shine
Giving reprieve to my wandering soul through the...
#dark
#pagan
#magic
#witches
#curse
210 reads
12 Comments
Slipstream
Weathered breeze
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
Across the surface
Of the night -
In star like
Distances,
Dark recesses
&
Absences -
Voided star light
&
Nullified moon light,
Tonight:
Footprints in the sand -
Womb of madness,
Antipodes of the land,
Solemn silence,
A vow of sadness -
Speaking circuitous,
Holes in the sky,
Deepened darkness,
Everything is a lie -
Roaming the outer edges
Beckoning discovery,
Slipped crypt of sages,...
#dark
#shadows
#FeelingLost
130 reads
6 Comments
INSPIRED BY 'PRIMAL NEEDS'
I drive you hard against the wall,
my tool nails you, I give you all
the naked lust, that's been pent up
In clothed chaste daytime, like a tup.
We're both in unshamed nakedness,
you smell of your wet readiness.
Like a dog with an on-heat bitch,
my lust is roused to fever pitch.
You confided your inner need
and your yearning to do the deed,
Taking a submissive part
as I drive your long legs apart.
A deed where there's no lying back,
No leisured fumbling in the sack.
Like steel when it is...
my tool nails you, I give you all
the naked lust, that's been pent up
In clothed chaste daytime, like a tup.
We're both in unshamed nakedness,
you smell of your wet readiness.
Like a dog with an on-heat bitch,
my lust is roused to fever pitch.
You confided your inner need
and your yearning to do the deed,
Taking a submissive part
as I drive your long legs apart.
A deed where there's no lying back,
No leisured fumbling in the sack.
Like steel when it is...
#lust
#dark
#erotic #rhyming
#erotic #rhyming
469 reads
2 Comments
Nightmare: The Purge
If the purge came
alive into the real world
It would be our worst
nightmares come true
I've been to hell and
back and would
participate so it's
kill or be killed
The Loner of your
family must die
because he causes
nothing but pain
That's the only person
I would kill
The rest you
leave up to fate
alive into the real world
It would be our worst
nightmares come true
I've been to hell and
back and would
participate so it's
kill or be killed
The Loner of your
family must die
because he causes
nothing but pain
That's the only person
I would kill
The rest you
leave up to fate
#anger
#dark
#murder
#TruthOfLife
#nightmares
351 reads
6 Comments
seduction
seducing heaven. a siren's song
intimate pretender gambling with fate
little glimpses of future potential entice
darkly intriguing I use my allure to cast magic
lithe but powerful I spin my spell
passion's spark in the dark and you come
following me into the mists
where I take my time with you
kissing your brow
feasting of your soul
I borrow my tempest from the winds
they tell me where to go
you look at me with glazed eyes
dazed and confused, still you come
hypnotized by my melody
you let your guard down ...
intimate pretender gambling with fate
little glimpses of future potential entice
darkly intriguing I use my allure to cast magic
lithe but powerful I spin my spell
passion's spark in the dark and you come
following me into the mists
where I take my time with you
kissing your brow
feasting of your soul
I borrow my tempest from the winds
they tell me where to go
you look at me with glazed eyes
dazed and confused, still you come
hypnotized by my melody
you let your guard down ...
#lust
#dark
70 reads
2 Comments
goosebumps facing the anesthetist
in the sounds
of wheels
on the bed of steel
resounding through
hollow echoes
of quiet halls
between
I. C. U.
and
I'll see you
soon
filling the sanitized air
that hard lump in the
throat
brimming yet
vacant
strapped to the
white sheet
wired to VAD*
-yet protesting
flat in supine
glaring at surgical light
counting to nine
fighting the night
heart racing
to a state of chilled
euphoric flight
of wheels
on the bed of steel
resounding through
hollow echoes
of quiet halls
between
I. C. U.
and
I'll see you
soon
filling the sanitized air
that hard lump in the
throat
brimming yet
vacant
strapped to the
white sheet
wired to VAD*
-yet protesting
flat in supine
glaring at surgical light
counting to nine
fighting the night
heart racing
to a state of chilled
euphoric flight
#dark
#home
#emotional #StreamOfConsciousness
#emotional #StreamOfConsciousness
88 reads
Mercury Webs
Metal legs
Weaving mercury webs
Casted spells
Sculpting eggs
Of francium cells
Transforming earth
A Maman birth
Weaving mercury webs
Casted spells
Sculpting eggs
Of francium cells
Transforming earth
A Maman birth
#dark
#birth
#motherhood
117 reads
17 Comments
Evil
He deambulates in the finest clothes
Handmade by exclusive tailors
But each stitch
Bought with the blood from
Unsuspecting, naive souls
Who fell prey
To his charms, his honeyed words
And, sadly, their own
Eagerness
For wealth.
Handmade by exclusive tailors
But each stitch
Bought with the blood from
Unsuspecting, naive souls
Who fell prey
To his charms, his honeyed words
And, sadly, their own
Eagerness
For wealth.
#sadness
#dark
#greed
45 reads
0 Comments
Under The Skin.
---U---
Stack
---U---
Back
---U---
Attack
---U---
Stop anybody
---U---
Fit the demographic
---U---
Search for weaponry
---U---
Justify your brutality
---U---
---Should---
---+---
Step back
Step back
Step back.
---U---
Harm minorities
---U---
Leave a bitter taste in my friend's community.
That's what he told me.
©Wired6. 13/5/2022
Stack
---U---
Back
---U---
Attack
---U---
Stop anybody
---U---
Fit the demographic
---U---
Search for weaponry
---U---
Justify your brutality
---U---
---Should---
---+---
Step back
Step back
Step back.
---U---
Harm minorities
---U---
Leave a bitter taste in my friend's community.
That's what he told me.
©Wired6. 13/5/2022
#dark
#frustration
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0 Comments
STANDING IN FRONT OF A MIRROR CALLING FOR BLOODY MARY

#dark
#evil
#scary
152 reads
5 Comments
Haunted
Haunted
I can't believe it was so cheap, the budget just matched with mine, all these rooms at this price, it's old but it's quite devine
I put the key in the lock, the door seemed heavy and quite stiff, I forced it to open wide, it had that old house whiff
I opened all the windows, I made sure all the curtains were opened wide, but I just had a strange feeling, a gnawing deep inside
It felt like I was not alone, there was a presence of pending doom, no matter where I went it followed me, in each and every room
When I took a shower,...
I can't believe it was so cheap, the budget just matched with mine, all these rooms at this price, it's old but it's quite devine
I put the key in the lock, the door seemed heavy and quite stiff, I forced it to open wide, it had that old house whiff
I opened all the windows, I made sure all the curtains were opened wide, but I just had a strange feeling, a gnawing deep inside
It felt like I was not alone, there was a presence of pending doom, no matter where I went it followed me, in each and every room
When I took a shower,...
#dark
#scary
#fear
302 reads
2 Comments
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