Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 00:08am
Today 00:08am
Get back to what's important
Let's get back to love honor and respect that is what's important, to clean up the mess of the truth of the nonsense and negativity.
THAT almost destroyed us mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. For it's necessary to truly understand, that we have the ability and power to eliminate, the deepness of the hurt and pain. THAT has been inflicted upon our soul, and tapping into our own mind. THOUGHTS but yet you still have to believe in your faith which can't no one take that away from you. For sure what is more important to you than putting love back in your life and world...
THAT almost destroyed us mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. For it's necessary to truly understand, that we have the ability and power to eliminate, the deepness of the hurt and pain. THAT has been inflicted upon our soul, and tapping into our own mind. THOUGHTS but yet you still have to believe in your faith which can't no one take that away from you. For sure what is more important to you than putting love back in your life and world...
#courage
#kindness
#love
#respect
#strength
26 reads
0 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 6:30pm
17th Feb 2025 6:30pm
~my gallant spelunker
You had seen death &... felt it
all through its mysteries & pain..
challenged it like an Avatar..
& had come back .. here again..
kicking alive.. it’s a miraculous
divinity.. You are nothing but
God.. “
the flying sparks of this fiery
towering bonfire… of this a messy
rainy day over this steepy hill slope
of a difficult terrain… you are carried
here by your loving souls’ in their
palanquin of united hands.. you
wrapped up in...
all through its mysteries & pain..
challenged it like an Avatar..
& had come back .. here again..
kicking alive.. it’s a miraculous
divinity.. You are nothing but
God.. “
the flying sparks of this fiery
towering bonfire… of this a messy
rainy day over this steepy hill slope
of a difficult terrain… you are carried
here by your loving souls’ in their
palanquin of united hands.. you
wrapped up in...
#courage
#healing
#love #spiritual
#love #spiritual
53 reads
6 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 11:38am
17th Feb 2025 11:38am
together...
i'm learning to fly
day by day
into the night
don't know how
but i know i will
one day
heehaw
up and down
hard life
soft times
learning to fly
day by day
look and see
touch and smell
feel it all
all in front
leave it behind
no looking back
come with me
be my wings
day by day
into the night
don't know how
but i know i will
one day
heehaw
up and down
hard life
soft times
learning to fly
day by day
look and see
touch and smell
feel it all
all in front
leave it behind
no looking back
come with me
be my wings
#courage
#love
#strength
26 reads
0 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 12:04pm
16th Feb 2025 12:04pm
My secret weapon is a teaspoon
today demanded
I take myself apart,
scrub out my insides
then polish them
let everything shine
all the way through.
I wasn't about
polished matter
while sleeping
on floorboards
in broken down
factories turned
into squats,
occupying worn
out sofas left in
crowded council
flat drug dosses.
I can shave carrot
skins down with
an edge of a
teaspoon
because my hands
could not behave
themselves around
anything resembling
sharp...
I take myself apart,
scrub out my insides
then polish them
let everything shine
all the way through.
I wasn't about
polished matter
while sleeping
on floorboards
in broken down
factories turned
into squats,
occupying worn
out sofas left in
crowded council
flat drug dosses.
I can shave carrot
skins down with
an edge of a
teaspoon
because my hands
could not behave
themselves around
anything resembling
sharp...
#LifeCycle
#courage
#hope
68 reads
0 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
16th Feb 2025 1:12am
16th Feb 2025 1:12am
Give Me Space
put me in a box
and nail the top shut
tell me i can only do
what you want me to
police my steps
police my words
steal my freedom
dim the lights
let no one see
let no one know...
i am someone
i am magic
i can do
what you say i can't
i am joy
let me dance
i can dance
i will dance...
and nail the top shut
tell me i can only do
what you want me to
police my steps
police my words
steal my freedom
dim the lights
let no one see
let no one know...
i am someone
i am magic
i can do
what you say i can't
i am joy
let me dance
i can dance
i will dance...
#anger
#confusion
#courage #strength
#courage #strength
46 reads
0 Comments
veins_of_shame
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 2:47pm
7th Feb 2025 2:47pm
Dope You Know?
Here I am no surprise, checked into rehab again
fucked around and thought the drugs were my one and only friend.
Yet they left me so empty and sicker as can be
clouded my judgement, made it impossible to see.
That this addiction wants me till I'm blue and dead
it will NEVER let me go, just like they always said.
Bag after bag I shoot, hit after hit after hit
to the point where I'm nodding like a zombie and can't stop smoking this fuckin shit.
Numbing the pain and all the feelings I hate
letting the drugs take me down continuously taking the...
fucked around and thought the drugs were my one and only friend.
Yet they left me so empty and sicker as can be
clouded my judgement, made it impossible to see.
That this addiction wants me till I'm blue and dead
it will NEVER let me go, just like they always said.
Bag after bag I shoot, hit after hit after hit
to the point where I'm nodding like a zombie and can't stop smoking this fuckin shit.
Numbing the pain and all the feelings I hate
letting the drugs take me down continuously taking the...
#addiction
#courage
#heroin
#hope
#inspirational
72 reads
1 Comment
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
Storytime! Shut up and Listen!
#courage
#patience
#TimeHeals #vanity
#TimeHeals #vanity
107 reads
4 Comments
jigg82
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 1:34am
7th Feb 2025 1:34am
Hunter ranger
Nothing is more infuriating as the wrath of a man’s blood soaked heart,nothing is more infuriating than a man’s gentle hand upon the love of his lusting drive.nothing is more infuriating than a man’s protection of his true love.your insulted?,but I’m soul challenged .a challenge of absence and loss.a challenge of everything I stand to lose,and everything I expect …..let me ask you. Would you challenge your own heart? and self worth?or would you become the ranger hunter.a subclass that’ll never be beat.because his or hers arrows of
of truth and confidence always fly straight and true.and...
of truth and confidence always fly straight and true.and...
#courage
#heroic
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
49 reads
1 Comment
anandosen
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 6:33pm
5th Feb 2025 6:33pm
Coyotes
Stormy winds gushing down the signature sips of life;
Even when raindrops were forced to change their directions of downpour;
The son of Sun & Mercury stood aloud & gore.
Like a king he won, like a dog he lost;
His own kingdom defeated him like an enemy;
The son of Sun & Mercury was reborn as Gemini.
Alas with his confidence he build his prudence;
Rejuvenated like a beast bathing in sagacity;
The son of Sun & Mercury swayed the coyotes crazy.
Even when raindrops were forced to change their directions of downpour;
The son of Sun & Mercury stood aloud & gore.
Like a king he won, like a dog he lost;
His own kingdom defeated him like an enemy;
The son of Sun & Mercury was reborn as Gemini.
Alas with his confidence he build his prudence;
Rejuvenated like a beast bathing in sagacity;
The son of Sun & Mercury swayed the coyotes crazy.
#courage
#hope
#motivational
#redemption
#strength
42 reads
1 Comment
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 11:13pm
2nd Feb 2025 11:13pm
Need
Society has tamed you
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
once wild and unapologetic
Your hunger was insatiable
no one dared cross your path
I need for the fire to rise in your blood
to remember how it felt to be seen and heard
I need the raven and not a dove trained to fly at reasonable altitudes
When will you need to override the conditioning?
Will you stay broken by life?
I see you lurking underneath your skin
break free and meet me
One step forward
palm up
waiting
#courage
#motivational
#strength
237 reads
14 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
2nd Feb 2025 4:16pm
Runaway Bride
I wonder
Would it be fine
I pondered
If I was the runaway bride
I’d leave the alter
And fireworks would follow
The doves would fly
I’d feel alive
And I would not live a lie
I’d speak my heart out
Off I would go
To lands beyond
Places I’ve never been
I’d feel free again
If I was a runaway bride
I think I’d be just fine
Would it be fine
I pondered
If I was the runaway bride
I’d leave the alter
And fireworks would follow
The doves would fly
I’d feel alive
And I would not live a lie
I’d speak my heart out
Off I would go
To lands beyond
Places I’ve never been
I’d feel free again
If I was a runaway bride
I think I’d be just fine
#courage
#happiness
60 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
2nd Feb 2025 1:21pm
It's a blessing in disguise
It's a blessing when we can connect on a positive, level of energy and understanding and respect. FOR what we share and have as one love. For it's true, that we all will go through so much sometimes, that it will test our strength and commitment which could either. Make us or break us or just separate us, from the deepness of the truth of our love and hearts. But yet we will find the deepness of being reunited so comfortable, even with the struggles that we have to face in the very depths of the darkness. For sure it's necessary to be able to share our thoughts, and insight and spiritual...
#admiration
#courage
#gratitude
#happiness
#strength
81 reads
8 Comments
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