Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
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breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Phantom2426
Poem Published
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
11th Feb 2020 5:14pm
Death by Love
I have cast the stone
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
I got pissed off
She left my brother
dead to the world
She live him until he
died on top of her
So I guess the irony is
he gave it all he had
but that wasn't enough
She need more power
#anger
#love
#women
#breakup
#power
457 reads
4 Comments
DetectiveOGasm
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2024 12:01pm
22nd Aug 2024 12:01pm
The Haunting Of Love
Is it really ever over?
This suspension of love
packing up
moving on
no longer the recipient
of the warmth
or the canvas of desire
once favored,
but now dismissed
and reminded at strange times
of comforts missed
even in slumber
there is no escape
and you remember
vividly
how those passions burned
a dream can place you
right back in that feeling
before it was gone
even though the traces
of its power,
play out in memory
like an old,...
This suspension of love
packing up
moving on
no longer the recipient
of the warmth
or the canvas of desire
once favored,
but now dismissed
and reminded at strange times
of comforts missed
even in slumber
there is no escape
and you remember
vividly
how those passions burned
a dream can place you
right back in that feeling
before it was gone
even though the traces
of its power,
play out in memory
like an old,...
#breakup
#love
#relationships
198 reads
4 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2024 7:04am
22nd Jun 2024 7:04am
Gone
It's been months, still can't put myself together.
Stupid of me to believe I'd be yours forever.
The things your uncle did to you, your best friends suicide.
All the horrors you went through, for you I often cried.
When I thought you'd killed yourself, both times left me broken.
The sweet things that you'd say to me, I so needed to hear spoken.
The beauty in your movement, when you'd practice dance.
You are such an A type, to think I stood a chance.
I hope your life is perfect, I hope your dreams come true.
Despite the way it ended, I'll always...
Stupid of me to believe I'd be yours forever.
The things your uncle did to you, your best friends suicide.
All the horrors you went through, for you I often cried.
When I thought you'd killed yourself, both times left me broken.
The sweet things that you'd say to me, I so needed to hear spoken.
The beauty in your movement, when you'd practice dance.
You are such an A type, to think I stood a chance.
I hope your life is perfect, I hope your dreams come true.
Despite the way it ended, I'll always...
#breakup
#love
147 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
27th Dec 2022 1:20am
27th Dec 2022 1:20am
wasn’t there at breakfast
didn’t understand that
she’d left him until he
bumped into her in town
that very afternoon and
couldn’t help noticing
the suitcase in her hand ..
she’d left him until he
bumped into her in town
that very afternoon and
couldn’t help noticing
the suitcase in her hand ..
#breakup
169 reads
2 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
20th Feb 2021 00:17am
20th Feb 2021 00:17am
LOVE DEATH DEPRIVED
art thou in meander
beloved, beneath the silver moon
boon to Hecate
nay, slave
in darkness dine
and I deprived of thee
hath thou courted him
with thy taunt
for scytheman be not spurned
after thy simper of need
thou sealeth thy doom
in death, yea, the yoke
of destiny
or hath thou scorned my love
beloved
thine eyes turned
away from mine teary countenance
for I Jealous of strange attention,
swiftly hath forsaken thee
and turned once more
to behold thee ...
beloved, beneath the silver moon
boon to Hecate
nay, slave
in darkness dine
and I deprived of thee
hath thou courted him
with thy taunt
for scytheman be not spurned
after thy simper of need
thou sealeth thy doom
in death, yea, the yoke
of destiny
or hath thou scorned my love
beloved
thine eyes turned
away from mine teary countenance
for I Jealous of strange attention,
swiftly hath forsaken thee
and turned once more
to behold thee ...
#love
#breakup
#suicide
351 reads
2 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2024 1:19am
23rd Mar 2024 1:19am
Heart Break Is...
When a happy heart keeps brewing love as a drink to share...
Then realizes there is no longer anyone sipping from the cup
Then realizes there is no longer anyone sipping from the cup
#heartbroken
#breakup
#hurt
206 reads
3 Comments
Lamjhnsn1
Poem Published
19th Aug 2024 7:11am
19th Aug 2024 7:11am
Brevity
Don't view my brevity,
As simply curt.
Our love's longevity,
has been cut,
& I'm fleeing hurt.
But this path freeing,
Is being shut.
As simply curt.
Our love's longevity,
has been cut,
& I'm fleeing hurt.
But this path freeing,
Is being shut.
#breakup
122 reads
2 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
Ode to the Drunk Girl, Don't Text That Man
Babe, we’ve talked about this too many times to be sane.
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
#alcohol
#breakup
#friendship
#love
#motivational
201 reads
13 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 8:39pm
9th Jun 2024 8:39pm
The mosquito from hell
The mosquito from hell
Is buzzing in my room
Metalic
With a metalic scratch
I try to catch it but it is fast
It has put me down
Is buzzing in my room
Metalic
With a metalic scratch
I try to catch it but it is fast
It has put me down
#breakup
#conflict
#love
105 reads
2 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
30th Dec 2023 1:25am
30th Dec 2023 1:25am
Cracked Ribs
When I inhale
It’s so painful
When I exhale
It’s still stressful
I can’t even sigh
How can something
So hurtful
Keep me alive
It hurts to breathe
And yet I’m still here
Words have a way of
Pushing me down
They have their way
Of not making a sound
My hearts too big
It doesn’t fit
But forgiveness
Expands brittle ribs
His words, they crack my ribs
His works, they crack my ribs
Someone
Please make it stop
Someone
Please help me call the cops ...
It’s so painful
When I exhale
It’s still stressful
I can’t even sigh
How can something
So hurtful
Keep me alive
It hurts to breathe
And yet I’m still here
Words have a way of
Pushing me down
They have their way
Of not making a sound
My hearts too big
It doesn’t fit
But forgiveness
Expands brittle ribs
His words, they crack my ribs
His works, they crack my ribs
Someone
Please make it stop
Someone
Please help me call the cops ...
#breakup
#conflict
#hurt
515 reads
26 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
4th Jul 2019 7:21pm
4th Jul 2019 7:21pm
Our universes once danced, now they just collide
Where were you
when I was laying in heap
screaming my head to the night
Why didn't you come
when I was scared
crying alone
We used to dance, now we just collide
How is it for you
waking up with new eyes
A fresh perspective
as surreal for you as it is for me?
We used to dance, now we just collide
Evident
we are dead to one another
just ghosts
that linger faintly
Like a brief summer breeze
erased
painted out the picture
We used to dance, now we just collide
when I was laying in heap
screaming my head to the night
Why didn't you come
when I was scared
crying alone
We used to dance, now we just collide
How is it for you
waking up with new eyes
A fresh perspective
as surreal for you as it is for me?
We used to dance, now we just collide
Evident
we are dead to one another
just ghosts
that linger faintly
Like a brief summer breeze
erased
painted out the picture
We used to dance, now we just collide
#heartbroken
#breakup
#hurt
424 reads
4 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
23rd Jun 2024 3:51pm
23rd Jun 2024 3:51pm
Get Outta My Head
A decade ago unexpectedly I had miracle vision
Heaven opened serendipitous and ornate walked her by decision
Not just any but her specially given entrusted to me
This woman submitted to love a good man who yearns reciprocity
Both have big ideas and long for family shared
She embodied me in essence all ten years and genuinely cares
Meeting was not by chance but so godly ordained
In five days strangers became bound she would share his last name
Its puzzling how two weeks fused both uniquely fit
By three months two souls were inseparable and could...
Heaven opened serendipitous and ornate walked her by decision
Not just any but her specially given entrusted to me
This woman submitted to love a good man who yearns reciprocity
Both have big ideas and long for family shared
She embodied me in essence all ten years and genuinely cares
Meeting was not by chance but so godly ordained
In five days strangers became bound she would share his last name
Its puzzling how two weeks fused both uniquely fit
By three months two souls were inseparable and could...
#nostalgia
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
#peace
230 reads
10 Comments
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