Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
#breakup
breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
20th Feb 2021 00:17am
20th Feb 2021 00:17am
LOVE DEATH DEPRIVED
art thou in meander
beloved, beneath the silver moon
boon to Hecate
nay, slave
in darkness dine
and I deprived of thee
hath thou courted him
with thy taunt
for scytheman be not spurned
after thy simper of need
thou sealeth thy doom
in death, yea, the yoke
of destiny
or hath thou scorned my love
beloved
thine eyes turned
away from mine teary countenance
for I Jealous of strange attention,
swiftly hath forsaken thee
and turned once more
to behold thee ...
beloved, beneath the silver moon
boon to Hecate
nay, slave
in darkness dine
and I deprived of thee
hath thou courted him
with thy taunt
for scytheman be not spurned
after thy simper of need
thou sealeth thy doom
in death, yea, the yoke
of destiny
or hath thou scorned my love
beloved
thine eyes turned
away from mine teary countenance
for I Jealous of strange attention,
swiftly hath forsaken thee
and turned once more
to behold thee ...
#love
#breakup
#suicide
400 reads
2 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
1st Apr 2021 8:30pm
1st Apr 2021 8:30pm
Cemetery of our Senses (+Reading)
I walk through the graveyard of our feelings,
To find that cherished grave -
Where we buried a joyful moment
Where we left what was ...
I am slowly walking in the dark,
Trying to see without light
Where once I was with you
Among the warm rays warmed ...
I walk through the cemetery of our senses,
Making my way in the dull darkness
I walk carefully, I won't stumble ...
I would only get to the place
I am walking remembering the road
We once walked ...
To bury the anxiety that
comes from a...
To find that cherished grave -
Where we buried a joyful moment
Where we left what was ...
I am slowly walking in the dark,
Trying to see without light
Where once I was with you
Among the warm rays warmed ...
I walk through the cemetery of our senses,
Making my way in the dull darkness
I walk carefully, I won't stumble ...
I would only get to the place
I am walking remembering the road
We once walked ...
To bury the anxiety that
comes from a...
#relationships
#breakup
#conflict
#memories
#graveyard
852 reads
39 Comments
DevilsChild
Poem Published
10th Feb 2021 7:52am
10th Feb 2021 7:52am
i WiLl FaLl!!!
#anger
#breakup
#conflict
431 reads
0 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
5th Nov 2020 8:38pm
5th Nov 2020 8:38pm
Deadwood
Deadwood in water
Drifting out of memory
Nothing to no one
Drifting out of memory
Nothing to no one
#breakup
#friendship
#senryu #disappointment
#senryu #disappointment
475 reads
5 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 2:45pm
28th Jan 2025 2:45pm
A Terrible Depth
Every beautiful surface has a terrible depth. - unknown
The mysterious formation
of pristine turquoise glaciers
in my heart.
Are the monuments of all
my cold goodbyes.
The terrible ache of the chaos of life,
broke off an island of ice
seeking the why.
The tip of the iceberg is
frozen shards of what's left behind.
Sinking voyaging thoughts
from the dark depths of my mind.
Standing there is a beautiful man
who says take my hand.
I will forever be your land.
The mysterious formation
of pristine turquoise glaciers
in my heart.
Are the monuments of all
my cold goodbyes.
The terrible ache of the chaos of life,
broke off an island of ice
seeking the why.
The tip of the iceberg is
frozen shards of what's left behind.
Sinking voyaging thoughts
from the dark depths of my mind.
Standing there is a beautiful man
who says take my hand.
I will forever be your land.
#breakup
#water
144 reads
12 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
13th Mar 2024 10:03pm
13th Mar 2024 10:03pm
Lost Love Haiku from the Cafe
Lost Love Haiku from the Cafe
her lost voice
in the meadowlark song
outside his window
newspaper clipping
daguerreotype of sweetheart
married to a stranger
the crescent moon
of her once upon a time slipper
transits his tears
timbre
of her mezzo soprano
memory echo
golden opportunity
a locomotive barreling by
his freight train blues
jewelry box
holds the diamond ring
she once wore for him
her lost voice
in the meadowlark song
outside his window
newspaper clipping
daguerreotype of sweetheart
married to a stranger
the crescent moon
of her once upon a time slipper
transits his tears
timbre
of her mezzo soprano
memory echo
golden opportunity
a locomotive barreling by
his freight train blues
jewelry box
holds the diamond ring
she once wore for him
#love
#heartbroken
#breakup
#haiku
#memories
237 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 10:12am
25th Sep 2024 10:12am
Just Like Last Summer
As your shadow fades
from my sight, I could only
remember you to
be smiling and playing that
guitar just like last summer.
from my sight, I could only
remember you to
be smiling and playing that
guitar just like last summer.
#breakup
#dialogue
#fiction
#lover
#tanka
169 reads
0 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
9th Jun 2024 7:39pm
9th Jun 2024 7:39pm
The mosquito from hell
The mosquito from hell
Is buzzing in my room
Metalic
With a metalic scratch
I try to catch it but it is fast
It has put me down
Is buzzing in my room
Metalic
With a metalic scratch
I try to catch it but it is fast
It has put me down
#breakup
#conflict
#love
153 reads
2 Comments
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