Poems About Astronomy by Top Critiquers
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Poems about astronomy by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
adagio
Poem Published
6th Apr 2022 00:51am
6th Apr 2022 00:51am
Woven In Mystery
Dreams go on forever
with rings of Saturn
not receding
on a planet of blue
where everything is dense
woven in mystery
of prisms
bejeweled at night
eight planets from the sun
with rings of Saturn
not receding
on a planet of blue
where everything is dense
woven in mystery
of prisms
bejeweled at night
eight planets from the sun
#astronomy
#philosophical
#emotions
376 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
A Tool
I’m but a dust particle caught within your gravitational pull
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
#love
#universe
#rhyming #astronomy
#rhyming #astronomy
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2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 4:54am
8th Mar 2025 4:54am
Decem
The Queen’s Tarot (Decem) The name, “December” itself comes from the Latin word decem, meaning “ten,” as it was the tenth month in the ancient Roman calendar.
However, no specific Roman person or deity was named after December, I was a little surprised all the zodiacs I have thoroughly researched.
I have gathered all the Zodiacs, and even some of the Calendar Days were named after some Roman God, Goddess, or some form of Roman festive event.
The month December did retain its numerical origin even after the calendar was...
However, no specific Roman person or deity was named after December, I was a little surprised all the zodiacs I have thoroughly researched.
I have gathered all the Zodiacs, and even some of the Calendar Days were named after some Roman God, Goddess, or some form of Roman festive event.
The month December did retain its numerical origin even after the calendar was...
#astronomy
126 reads
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
6th Feb 2025 7:13am
6th Feb 2025 7:13am
silent beauty (stars)
another
early morning
before
the sun
even dreams
of waking,
the cluster
of stars
visible
somewhere,
even though
hidden from
my view,
i know
they are
just
above me,
silent beauty
waiting.
early morning
before
the sun
even dreams
of waking,
the cluster
of stars
visible
somewhere,
even though
hidden from
my view,
i know
they are
just
above me,
silent beauty
waiting.
#astronomy
#night
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
76 reads
6 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
Lost in Space - Mars
Walternate Universe Beta-2
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
#dreams
#universe
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
268 reads
4 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
1st Dec 2018 8:27pm
1st Dec 2018 8:27pm
Gypsy Weave
Gypsy Weave
Andalusian Gypsy smile
With Iberian irises aglow
Soft as medieval moonshine
Where she bathes in the court of the Lions
With the splash of an Alhambra fountain
On Mediterranean mystique
Where her moonbeam eyes
Form the tapestry of her trade
To cast her spell with woven secrets
Embedded like mosaics
Hidden in the weave of her art
Andalusian Gypsy smile
With Iberian irises aglow
Soft as medieval moonshine
Where she bathes in the court of the Lions
With the splash of an Alhambra fountain
On Mediterranean mystique
Where her moonbeam eyes
Form the tapestry of her trade
To cast her spell with woven secrets
Embedded like mosaics
Hidden in the weave of her art
#love
#romantic
#universe #astronomy
#universe #astronomy
530 reads
2 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
15th May 2022 8:26pm
15th May 2022 8:26pm
Black Ocean
I live on the other
Side of the moon
Where I exhaled my
Last breath into the
Mouth of the
Black Ocean
Where I was smelted
Into a burning
Silver tidal wave
Of magnetic fields
Dispersed as
Paralyzed stars
And I am grateful
My time in the
Mirage of blue
Skies has died
It ached with a
Blinding brightness
Always feeling the
Graceful pull of
The water of night
High above ground
My black ocean savior
Filled with tragic magic
Showing me how to float ...
Side of the moon
Where I exhaled my
Last breath into the
Mouth of the
Black Ocean
Where I was smelted
Into a burning
Silver tidal wave
Of magnetic fields
Dispersed as
Paralyzed stars
And I am grateful
My time in the
Mirage of blue
Skies has died
It ached with a
Blinding brightness
Always feeling the
Graceful pull of
The water of night
High above ground
My black ocean savior
Filled with tragic magic
Showing me how to float ...
#moon
#night
#astronomy
816 reads
28 Comments
DaVinci_07
Leo
Leo
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2022 10:45pm
3rd Nov 2022 10:45pm
Beaver Blood
Where is the moon
It should be full
No shadows
Yet spirits pull.
Evil that lurks
Cautious and confused
Cosmic forces
are amused.
It should be full
No shadows
Yet spirits pull.
Evil that lurks
Cautious and confused
Cosmic forces
are amused.
#earth
#moon
#astronomy
883 reads
28 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 2:56am
29th Aug 2024 2:56am
Aries
Spin the astrology wheel
see where the compass points
I’m not the star of one thing
more of a mixed bag of several joints
Django unchained born Aries off the cuffs
I missed the cusp by four days
Known as passionate and emotional
I’ll knock you down in 4 ways
Or albeit Ram in 4 waves
calculative known to rock a few ships
A battle plan in mastered hands
is how fore horns stay equip ...
see where the compass points
I’m not the star of one thing
more of a mixed bag of several joints
Django unchained born Aries off the cuffs
I missed the cusp by four days
Known as passionate and emotional
I’ll knock you down in 4 ways
Or albeit Ram in 4 waves
calculative known to rock a few ships
A battle plan in mastered hands
is how fore horns stay equip ...
#astrology
#astronomy
#happiness
#respect
#uplifting
209 reads
2 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
25th Oct 2022 7:38pm
25th Oct 2022 7:38pm
Medical call!
With urgency, emergency rush to rejuvenation to regenerate an create D.NA. unrestricted by laws, according to this power universe, universally equipped even noble one's!
Will admit, it's sort-of like a heavenly gift!
Reformed and transformed from being less to magnificent!! Feeling terrific prolific, with poetic codes deeply in scripted within, now let the new origin proceed to begin.
A new extended existence, inner sanctum operated and formulated, constructed and demonstrated, fall in line for roll call next time you hear medical call,upgraded with a new state of mind...
Will admit, it's sort-of like a heavenly gift!
Reformed and transformed from being less to magnificent!! Feeling terrific prolific, with poetic codes deeply in scripted within, now let the new origin proceed to begin.
A new extended existence, inner sanctum operated and formulated, constructed and demonstrated, fall in line for roll call next time you hear medical call,upgraded with a new state of mind...
#universe
#stars
#shadows
#astronomy
#aliens
377 reads
2 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 3:51pm
14th Sep 2021 3:51pm
Meteor
Scape made in shape
of
Mind -
Pulsating
Shapeless,
nearly
still,
Stillness of will,
Until
Granule
Horizon
Genesis
Interjection
Vision -
Expansion
Pyre of nothingness -
Higher than all of this,
Brighter than being,
Clearer than seeing.
Communicate your self
Awareness.
Formulate the feeling
of
your
kiss.
of
Mind -
Pulsating
Shapeless,
nearly
still,
Stillness of will,
Until
Granule
Horizon
Genesis
Interjection
Vision -
Expansion
Pyre of nothingness -
Higher than all of this,
Brighter than being,
Clearer than seeing.
Communicate your self
Awareness.
Formulate the feeling
of
your
kiss.
#beauty
#earth
#astronomy
762 reads
4 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
17th Jul 2020 4:06am
17th Jul 2020 4:06am
NEOWISE
Last time you made a visit
was our dawn
Just learning
to scatter seeds into soil
to gather into settlements
to scratch our thoughts into stone...
To be "civilized"
Look at us now as you pass by again --
Billions of tiny
insignificant lives
still scrabbling in the dirt
gathering in our tribes
wrting thoughts with our thumbs now
but none of them new....
Have we developed
in any of the ways that count?
Come check on us again
in another 6,000 years
Maybe then we'll have it
figured out
was our dawn
Just learning
to scatter seeds into soil
to gather into settlements
to scratch our thoughts into stone...
To be "civilized"
Look at us now as you pass by again --
Billions of tiny
insignificant lives
still scrabbling in the dirt
gathering in our tribes
wrting thoughts with our thumbs now
but none of them new....
Have we developed
in any of the ways that count?
Come check on us again
in another 6,000 years
Maybe then we'll have it
figured out
#astronomy
#philosophical
594 reads
8 Comments
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