Poems About Astronomy Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about astronomy seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
stevenyprince
alysha
alysha
Poem Published
12th Nov 2023 9:35am
12th Nov 2023 9:35am
Stars
Still some stars at dawn
They stay cuz they are strong
Not because they hang on
There are no expectations
That desires are to be fulfilled
Only that all that is,
Is what is desired
Where these cloudy thoughts are simply passing through
From above stars enjoy the view
And are being enjoyed too.
Thank you stars for your truth-
That there is so much space out here in space
And like you, I arise, release & illuminate
They stay cuz they are strong
Not because they hang on
There are no expectations
That desires are to be fulfilled
Only that all that is,
Is what is desired
Where these cloudy thoughts are simply passing through
From above stars enjoy the view
And are being enjoyed too.
Thank you stars for your truth-
That there is so much space out here in space
And like you, I arise, release & illuminate
#dreams
#inspirational
#universe
#TruthOfLife
#astronomy
44 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Nov 2023 8:59pm
5th Nov 2023 8:59pm
Convolutions
So silently the dewfall moon
arose when all the fog dispersed
it formed a lycanthropic thirst
to which all life may well attune,
and all the psyches long abed
lay subject to the muted beams
titillating woebegone dreams
like a greenhouse in the infrared
or signal wave propagation
from an ionospheric bounce
only radios can pronounce
as receivership oblation,
blent into a celebration...
of glory in complete gyration!
arose when all the fog dispersed
it formed a lycanthropic thirst
to which all life may well attune,
and all the psyches long abed
lay subject to the muted beams
titillating woebegone dreams
like a greenhouse in the infrared
or signal wave propagation
from an ionospheric bounce
only radios can pronounce
as receivership oblation,
blent into a celebration...
of glory in complete gyration!
#universe
#moon
#sky
#nature
#astronomy
85 reads
6 Comments
Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
15th Oct 2023 8:59pm
15th Oct 2023 8:59pm
Wonderful
Oh wonderful flowers that Bloom in Spring...
Oh wonderful birds that chirp and sing...
Oh wonderful stars that sparkle and shine...
Oh wonderful stars their light is divine...
Oh wonderful birds that chirp and sing...
Oh wonderful stars that sparkle and shine...
Oh wonderful stars their light is divine...
#earth
#stars
#astronomy
104 reads
3 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
7th Sep 2023 11:05am
7th Sep 2023 11:05am
World Of Dreams
Dreams,an unusual place.
Full of wonder,full of grace.
Full of characters of all kinds.
As we travel inside our minds.
And you never know what you will find.
You sail away in your bed,asleep.
And you explore the dream world,very deep.
As you fly,swim or simply dream away.
And your true self,in a dream will never decay.
It's like looking in a mirror,that points out your insecurities.
You lay down in your bed as all your worries go away.
And you take a plane to another dimension.
Full of memories and people,old...
Full of wonder,full of grace.
Full of characters of all kinds.
As we travel inside our minds.
And you never know what you will find.
You sail away in your bed,asleep.
And you explore the dream world,very deep.
As you fly,swim or simply dream away.
And your true self,in a dream will never decay.
It's like looking in a mirror,that points out your insecurities.
You lay down in your bed as all your worries go away.
And you take a plane to another dimension.
Full of memories and people,old...
#dreams
#universe
#moon
#night
#astronomy
81 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
12th Aug 2023 1:59pm
12th Aug 2023 1:59pm
Perseid
Auriga, Jupiter, and a crescent moon
Owned a very early eastern sky
As lowly hung the Dipper's northern spoon
With a brace of meteors blasting by!
And Cassiopeia, above it all,
Was regal on her meridian throne
Watching stars shoot in their final fall
Of plasma transmutation from stone!
The Pleiades, so coquettishly aglow
As seven stellar sisters so divine,
Embraced my mortal psyche, so far below,
With the sibling light of their rise and shine...
First to withdraw into daybreak's beams
Of Aurora mastering...
Owned a very early eastern sky
As lowly hung the Dipper's northern spoon
With a brace of meteors blasting by!
And Cassiopeia, above it all,
Was regal on her meridian throne
Watching stars shoot in their final fall
Of plasma transmutation from stone!
The Pleiades, so coquettishly aglow
As seven stellar sisters so divine,
Embraced my mortal psyche, so far below,
With the sibling light of their rise and shine...
First to withdraw into daybreak's beams
Of Aurora mastering...
#earth
#universe
#moon
#stars
#astronomy
152 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
11th Jul 2023 1:32pm
11th Jul 2023 1:32pm
Blake Hole
fifteen seconds at the speed of light from here
there is a deserted rock, empty and abandoned
which has roamed the universe for eternity.
planet nothing is the name of this crystal stone
but everyone just calls it home bitter home
everyone pretends not to squander the little one.
all the inhabitants are proud enough to forget
that are just the beings on the smooth surface
of a tiny grain of sand in the ocean of stars.
the universe follows its course towards the navel
in an eternal self-referential dream so atheistic ...
there is a deserted rock, empty and abandoned
which has roamed the universe for eternity.
planet nothing is the name of this crystal stone
but everyone just calls it home bitter home
everyone pretends not to squander the little one.
all the inhabitants are proud enough to forget
that are just the beings on the smooth surface
of a tiny grain of sand in the ocean of stars.
the universe follows its course towards the navel
in an eternal self-referential dream so atheistic ...
#universe
#stars
#atheism
#astronomy
#disappointment
104 reads
4 Comments
Naajir
Poem Published
30th Jun 2023 6:06am
30th Jun 2023 6:06am
Mood Swing #6 : Resonance
"the power of imagination makes us infinite"
John Muir
its gestation was noticed
not necessarily in the very beginning
but as time created movements
a field of enigmatic proportions
entered into this [p]lane of existence
enhancing magnetically charged particles
drawing unto its radius
two distinct realms of experience
perhaps it was an experiment of sorts
a collusion of some faraway gods
conspiring out of amusement
or just sheer wonderment
to...
John Muir
its gestation was noticed
not necessarily in the very beginning
but as time created movements
a field of enigmatic proportions
entered into this [p]lane of existence
enhancing magnetically charged particles
drawing unto its radius
two distinct realms of experience
perhaps it was an experiment of sorts
a collusion of some faraway gods
conspiring out of amusement
or just sheer wonderment
to...
#love
#God
#humankind #astronomy
#humankind #astronomy
219 reads
0 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
24th Jun 2023 3:10pm
24th Jun 2023 3:10pm
Space Lullabies
I saw the starless look in your eyes.
I saw you were sad,so I sang you lullabies.
About space,the universe and planets.
About your beautiful moonlight shine.
I turned my head around and admired your glow.
The glow you have even if there is snow.
Your voice sounded like an angelic lullaby the day you confessed to me.
My heart fluttered and I told you I will never leave.
And you told me all I have to do is believe.
With gentle words,you made my happiness grow.
And when you are with me,I see your presence glow.
An...
I saw you were sad,so I sang you lullabies.
About space,the universe and planets.
About your beautiful moonlight shine.
I turned my head around and admired your glow.
The glow you have even if there is snow.
Your voice sounded like an angelic lullaby the day you confessed to me.
My heart fluttered and I told you I will never leave.
And you told me all I have to do is believe.
With gentle words,you made my happiness grow.
And when you are with me,I see your presence glow.
An...
#love
#astronomy
138 reads
1 Comment
LunasChild8
Poem Published
21st Jun 2023 2:10pm
21st Jun 2023 2:10pm
Galaxies
I want to see all the galaxies
Let’s fly away to infinity
A cosmic wonder that goes on for eternity
So come fly with me
Set yourself free and come fly with me.
Let’s fly away to infinity
A cosmic wonder that goes on for eternity
So come fly with me
Set yourself free and come fly with me.
#hope
#dreams
#rhyming #astronomy
#rhyming #astronomy
181 reads
6 Comments
Ald
Poem Published
14th May 2023 10:56am
14th May 2023 10:56am
The° <pipe>>
When I see in mirror
I see a rose and a tree.
She laughed so hard
That she became a swan
Mushroom.
Trying to get out of a
Car wedding in pool.
Sucking mangoes.
I see a rose and a tree.
She laughed so hard
That she became a swan
Mushroom.
Trying to get out of a
Car wedding in pool.
Sucking mangoes.
#universe
#astronomy
134 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
10th May 2023 6:49am
10th May 2023 6:49am
After Midnight
The power of the moon was low;
She lurked amid the mist,
Exactly where her golden glow
Was by the treetops kissed.
And Venus sank into the sea
Before the moon arose,
As if to say, enticingly,
She loves how Neptune flows!
But she'll be up tomorrow night
To blow a twilight kiss
Of love for fading solar light,
And mesonoxian bliss...
Devoted to each lunar beam
That dances on the dew
Seducing one more lover's dream
Where phantasies come true!
She lurked amid the mist,
Exactly where her golden glow
Was by the treetops kissed.
And Venus sank into the sea
Before the moon arose,
As if to say, enticingly,
She loves how Neptune flows!
But she'll be up tomorrow night
To blow a twilight kiss
Of love for fading solar light,
And mesonoxian bliss...
Devoted to each lunar beam
That dances on the dew
Seducing one more lover's dream
Where phantasies come true!
#romantic
#beauty
#moon
#night
#astronomy
340 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2023 6:59pm
22nd Apr 2023 6:59pm
Rob Zomb. meet fester Jewel/////?
dear Kat I don't know where you are Asland you mean Island
fantasy not over Disney
now be my zombie forever.
ollie, ollie oxen free
come out germy kids
I am momma who cares blare
blaze them up while you can plagued.
fantasy not over Disney
now be my zombie forever.
ollie, ollie oxen free
come out germy kids
I am momma who cares blare
blaze them up while you can plagued.
#angels
#astronomy
#aliens #scifi
#aliens #scifi
158 reads
2 Comments
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