Poems About Astronomy by Top Critiquers
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Poems about astronomy by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 11:32am
11th Jun 2024 11:32am
A Voyage to Hell
When my sun comes down
a blood red cosmos astounds
i appear with winter's wind
I'm free as summer's sin
sing a song this mourning
telling tales of warning
purple clouds, demon bubbles
cosmic dreams, strangers in trouble
to die is to wake at the strike of twelve
he welcomes us all to the gates of hell
a blood red cosmos astounds
i appear with winter's wind
I'm free as summer's sin
sing a song this mourning
telling tales of warning
purple clouds, demon bubbles
cosmic dreams, strangers in trouble
to die is to wake at the strike of twelve
he welcomes us all to the gates of hell
#astronomy
#clouds
#dreams
#hell
#rhyming
155 reads
6 Comments
Her
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 8:49pm
14th Dec 2024 8:49pm
Celestial Light
Planets aligned like mine
At a different time
Same…inclination(s)
Tour guide
Life guide
When I thought
Spirituality
Belonged…elsewhere
Your patience
Kindness
Acceptance
Encouragement
Showed me
That celestial unity
Community
Spirituality
Resides on a
Much lower plane
I couldn’t be more
Grateful
That you reached
Out to me
From DUP
My found family
Ahavati, I...
At a different time
Same…inclination(s)
Tour guide
Life guide
When I thought
Spirituality
Belonged…elsewhere
Your patience
Kindness
Acceptance
Encouragement
Showed me
That celestial unity
Community
Spirituality
Resides on a
Much lower plane
I couldn’t be more
Grateful
That you reached
Out to me
From DUP
My found family
Ahavati, I...
#astronomy
#gratitude
#honesty
#LifeChangingMoment
#respect
147 reads
23 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 4:32pm
30th Sep 2024 4:32pm
twenty five
irresistible computation an equation
sly joker triggers grade
daggers of faith needy nation
sacrifice of sustenance
the blood of space generates a new race
metaphor for DNA
areas of grey tempter of men
silken sage with the will of ten
liken to the redwood
the mighty trees of time
seeing through eyes, not of this realm
even a book remembers being a tree
fast or slow the knowledge will remain
to lie down upon open minds
it is with cause we elevate
alleviate the hunger to see through the...
sly joker triggers grade
daggers of faith needy nation
sacrifice of sustenance
the blood of space generates a new race
metaphor for DNA
areas of grey tempter of men
silken sage with the will of ten
liken to the redwood
the mighty trees of time
seeing through eyes, not of this realm
even a book remembers being a tree
fast or slow the knowledge will remain
to lie down upon open minds
it is with cause we elevate
alleviate the hunger to see through the...
#astronomy
#universe
148 reads
6 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
[ NaPoWriMo - 2023 Collection ] Cosmologically Speaking
In The Beginning
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
#astrology
#spiritual
#astronomy
#magic
#NaPoWriMo2023
721 reads
9 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
17th May 2019 11:03am
17th May 2019 11:03am
E 2
Series
Uplift
Space travel
Circling
Orbit
Translucent
Float
Weightless
Peace out
Uplift
Space travel
Circling
Orbit
Translucent
Float
Weightless
Peace out
#universe
#astronomy
#scifi
645 reads
12 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
26th Nov 2024 2:41am
Abyssus
"And if you gaze long enough into the abyss, the abyss also gazes into you" - Nietzsche
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
My mind contains a special
spiral galaxy.
My solar system of soul's needs.
Billions of starry thoughts
conjoined with very dark matter.
My eyes hunt, haunt and
sometimes flatter.
Within a super massive black hole
I am caught.
Thoughts ache to be heard.
The abyss is void of vocal word.
Speech is through vibration.
Annihilation of misinterpretation.
If it is depth you crave,
plunge as deep as you...
#astronomy
#dreams
#stars #universe
#stars #universe
79 reads
11 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 6:35am
18th Oct 2024 6:35am
Her Grace
Luna! Luna! Beyond the geese!
Shining like an Argonaut fleece!
Consort to the Royal power
of sunbeams at the midnight hour!
Transfixer of our mortal eyes
upon Memento Mori skies!
Syzygy Mistress of the tides
and all the waves a surfer rides!
Cratered gem within the rings
of coronal mass ejection flings!
Fair courtesan of meteorites,
comet tails, and satellites!
Navigatrix through the spiral path
of solar flares and stellar wrath.
Majestic Queen of sonneteers!
May you hold...
Shining like an Argonaut fleece!
Consort to the Royal power
of sunbeams at the midnight hour!
Transfixer of our mortal eyes
upon Memento Mori skies!
Syzygy Mistress of the tides
and all the waves a surfer rides!
Cratered gem within the rings
of coronal mass ejection flings!
Fair courtesan of meteorites,
comet tails, and satellites!
Navigatrix through the spiral path
of solar flares and stellar wrath.
Majestic Queen of sonneteers!
May you hold...
#astronomy
#moon
181 reads
10 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
A Tool
I’m but a dust particle caught within your gravitational pull
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
#love
#universe
#rhyming #astronomy
#rhyming #astronomy
243 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
8th Nov 2024 2:06pm
Portuguese man-o-war
Who are we, lost in the vastness?
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
Sailing on seas without a compass.
From the first moment, the first breath.
In a labyrinth of doubts and shadows.
Wandering souls in search of meaning.
We cling to the intangible.
Desperate for answers,
in an indifferent and silent world.
Days drag on and nights collapse
in a relentless cycle of uncertainty.
We scream into the void, crying out for direction
but the echo is all that returns to us.
Heavy hearts and exhausted minds.
We walk among the ruins of...
#astronomy
#heroic
#karma
#sea
#universe
82 reads
8 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 9:52pm
27th Nov 2024 9:52pm
~cosmic abecedarian
viz4
#astronomy
#StreamOfConsciousness
179 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 11:38am
20th Jan 2024 11:38am
The Dawning Of The Age Of Aquarius
Well, my quest has been completed here, to earn my wings in this lifetime
To give the essence of spiritual hydration to keep Hebrew Kings on their esoteric rite of passage their soul must ascend to find
An ordained mission from the sky
For the truth is sweeter to the ears when offered off Heavenly grapevines
Me, myself, and I shall continue my spiritual earthly crusade
And allow fate to cross my destiny to seek meaningful purpose aa I intellectually whisper to ears as I softly serenade
#sexywinterbaby
To give the essence of spiritual hydration to keep Hebrew Kings on their esoteric rite of passage their soul must ascend to find
An ordained mission from the sky
For the truth is sweeter to the ears when offered off Heavenly grapevines
Me, myself, and I shall continue my spiritual earthly crusade
And allow fate to cross my destiny to seek meaningful purpose aa I intellectually whisper to ears as I softly serenade
#sexywinterbaby
#sun
#water
#peace
#universe
#astronomy
306 reads
9 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
Lost in Space - Mars
Walternate Universe Beta-2
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
#dreams
#universe
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
245 reads
4 Comments
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