Poems About Astronomy by Top Critiquers
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Poems about astronomy by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
13th Feb 2023 2:18pm
13th Feb 2023 2:18pm
Sexuality, Space Junk, Parts and Labor
The world is sex
Not necessarily procreation
Heathens get away with just desserts
Out on the perimeter there are observers
Wondering about these objects at high altitudes
America keeps shooting them down
Space junk collected
One wonders what's inside ?
Dogs have it right
Sniffing each other, tails wagging
It's parts and labor for them
We wish sometimes to be on that leash
Not necessarily procreation
Heathens get away with just desserts
Out on the perimeter there are observers
Wondering about these objects at high altitudes
America keeps shooting them down
Space junk collected
One wonders what's inside ?
Dogs have it right
Sniffing each other, tails wagging
It's parts and labor for them
We wish sometimes to be on that leash
#sex
#America
#universe
#animals
#astronomy
180 reads
22 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2023 6:59pm
22nd Apr 2023 6:59pm
Rob Zomb. meet fester Jewel/////?
dear Kat I don't know where you are Asland you mean Island
fantasy not over Disney
now be my zombie forever.
ollie, ollie oxen free
come out germy kids
I am momma who cares blare
blaze them up while you can plagued.
fantasy not over Disney
now be my zombie forever.
ollie, ollie oxen free
come out germy kids
I am momma who cares blare
blaze them up while you can plagued.
#angels
#astronomy
#aliens #scifi
#aliens #scifi
158 reads
2 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
30th Dec 2022 3:06am
30th Dec 2022 3:06am
Standing Among The Regression Of Time
Today marks the unfathomed universal regressing vortex known as Mercury Retrograde, this is the last stigmata on the galaxy and the unknown wondrous affects you may be experiencing and cannot comprehend with the naked eye.
This is more so the time to take notice of neglectful tasks that have not been unaccomplished, due to stress, work, and other various reasons such as, not enough time in the course of the day or devoid of ingenuity to finish any endeavor.
During this intergalactic chance to reap from those unfinished abilities, which may bring peace, or roadblocks in...
This is more so the time to take notice of neglectful tasks that have not been unaccomplished, due to stress, work, and other various reasons such as, not enough time in the course of the day or devoid of ingenuity to finish any endeavor.
During this intergalactic chance to reap from those unfinished abilities, which may bring peace, or roadblocks in...
#TruthOfLife
#astronomy
#philosophical
398 reads
4 Comments
jmcchesnie
Joylyn
Joylyn
Poem Published
6th Nov 2023 00:13am
6th Nov 2023 00:13am
Gazing at the Stars
Heaven's Bean Pot
filled with many stars
as I look through my telescope
from a world quite afar.
I can see the planet Mars
and the spiraling Milky Way
the Big Dipper and the Little one
seem a million miles away.
All swimming in a sea
of sparkling midnight blue
and what should come to mind
but the evening I spent with you.
It takes me back to that night
not so very long ago
when I held you in my arms
and gazed at the stars aglow.
filled with many stars
as I look through my telescope
from a world quite afar.
I can see the planet Mars
and the spiraling Milky Way
the Big Dipper and the Little one
seem a million miles away.
All swimming in a sea
of sparkling midnight blue
and what should come to mind
but the evening I spent with you.
It takes me back to that night
not so very long ago
when I held you in my arms
and gazed at the stars aglow.
#love
#universe
#stars #astronomy
#stars #astronomy
68 reads
3 Comments
Confluence
Poem Published
5th Oct 2023 4:57am
5th Oct 2023 4:57am
Aurora Borealis
swirling my fingers
in the Arora borealis
of our hallowed moments
unsurprised
to feel familiar fire spread anew
fevered blush staining my haunted countenance
I watch
as bursts of pulsar
shooting stars
and the heat of us suffuse
infusing my musing
with decadence
do you remember
how we shared oxygen
brewed intoxicating potions
such heady concoctions
we imbibed like the dying
desperate for peace
release
and healing
defiantly daring the unknown
making it our home ...
in the Arora borealis
of our hallowed moments
unsurprised
to feel familiar fire spread anew
fevered blush staining my haunted countenance
I watch
as bursts of pulsar
shooting stars
and the heat of us suffuse
infusing my musing
with decadence
do you remember
how we shared oxygen
brewed intoxicating potions
such heady concoctions
we imbibed like the dying
desperate for peace
release
and healing
defiantly daring the unknown
making it our home ...
#love
#moon
#mountains
#astronomy
#emotions
246 reads
7 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
[ NaPoWriMo - 2023 Collection ] Cosmologically Speaking
In The Beginning
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
#astrology
#spiritual
#astronomy
#magic
#NaPoWriMo2023
592 reads
9 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
Lost in Space - Mars
Walternate Universe Beta-2
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
#dreams
#universe
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
138 reads
4 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
5th Nov 2023 8:59pm
5th Nov 2023 8:59pm
Convolutions
So silently the dewfall moon
arose when all the fog dispersed
it formed a lycanthropic thirst
to which all life may well attune,
and all the psyches long abed
lay subject to the muted beams
titillating woebegone dreams
like a greenhouse in the infrared
or signal wave propagation
from an ionospheric bounce
only radios can pronounce
as receivership oblation,
blent into a celebration...
of glory in complete gyration!
arose when all the fog dispersed
it formed a lycanthropic thirst
to which all life may well attune,
and all the psyches long abed
lay subject to the muted beams
titillating woebegone dreams
like a greenhouse in the infrared
or signal wave propagation
from an ionospheric bounce
only radios can pronounce
as receivership oblation,
blent into a celebration...
of glory in complete gyration!
#universe
#moon
#sky
#nature
#astronomy
85 reads
6 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
6th Apr 2022 00:51am
6th Apr 2022 00:51am
Woven In Mystery
Dreams go on forever
with rings of Saturn
not receding
on a planet of blue
where everything is dense
woven in mystery
of prisms
bejeweled at night
eight planets from the sun
with rings of Saturn
not receding
on a planet of blue
where everything is dense
woven in mystery
of prisms
bejeweled at night
eight planets from the sun
#astronomy
#philosophical
#emotions
270 reads
2 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
A Tool
I’m but a dust particle caught within your gravitational pull
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
#love
#universe
#rhyming #astronomy
#rhyming #astronomy
186 reads
2 Comments
Adelphina
Poem Published
15th May 2022 8:26pm
15th May 2022 8:26pm
Black Ocean
I live on the other
Side of the moon
Where I exhaled my
Last breath into the
Mouth of the
Black Ocean
Where I was smelted
Into a burning
Silver tidal wave
Of magnetic fields
Dispersed as
Paralyzed stars
And I am grateful
My time in the
Mirage of blue
Skies has died
It ached with a
Blinding brightness
Always feeling the
Graceful pull of
The water of night
High above ground
My black ocean savior
Filled with tragic magic
Showing me how to float ...
Side of the moon
Where I exhaled my
Last breath into the
Mouth of the
Black Ocean
Where I was smelted
Into a burning
Silver tidal wave
Of magnetic fields
Dispersed as
Paralyzed stars
And I am grateful
My time in the
Mirage of blue
Skies has died
It ached with a
Blinding brightness
Always feeling the
Graceful pull of
The water of night
High above ground
My black ocean savior
Filled with tragic magic
Showing me how to float ...
#moon
#night
#astronomy
682 reads
28 Comments
Cipher_O
Poem Published
14th Sep 2021 3:51pm
14th Sep 2021 3:51pm
Meteor
Scape made in shape
of
Mind -
Pulsating
Shapeless,
nearly
still,
Stillness of will,
Until
Granule
Horizon
Genesis
Interjection
Vision -
Expansion
Pyre of nothingness -
Higher than all of this,
Brighter than being,
Clearer than seeing.
Communicate your self
Awareness.
Formulate the feeling
of
your
kiss.
of
Mind -
Pulsating
Shapeless,
nearly
still,
Stillness of will,
Until
Granule
Horizon
Genesis
Interjection
Vision -
Expansion
Pyre of nothingness -
Higher than all of this,
Brighter than being,
Clearer than seeing.
Communicate your self
Awareness.
Formulate the feeling
of
your
kiss.
#beauty
#earth
#astronomy
675 reads
4 Comments
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