Poems About Astronomy by Top Critiquers
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Mar 2024 11:07pm
30th Mar 2024 11:07pm
The End
The hidden sun hides
shadows over the cosmos
a cosmic breath entombed
colliding worlds, awaiting doom
shadows over the cosmos
a cosmic breath entombed
colliding worlds, awaiting doom
#universe
#apocalypse
#astronomy
81 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2023 6:59pm
22nd Apr 2023 6:59pm
Rob Zomb. meet fester Jewel/////?
dear Kat I don't know where you are Asland you mean Island
fantasy not over Disney
now be my zombie forever.
ollie, ollie oxen free
come out germy kids
I am momma who cares blare
blaze them up while you can plagued.
fantasy not over Disney
now be my zombie forever.
ollie, ollie oxen free
come out germy kids
I am momma who cares blare
blaze them up while you can plagued.
#angels
#astronomy
#aliens #scifi
#aliens #scifi
174 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
13th Feb 2023 2:18pm
13th Feb 2023 2:18pm
Sexuality, Space Junk, Parts and Labor
The world is sex
Not necessarily procreation
Heathens get away with just desserts
Out on the perimeter there are observers
Wondering about these objects at high altitudes
America keeps shooting them down
Space junk collected
One wonders what's inside ?
Dogs have it right
Sniffing each other, tails wagging
It's parts and labor for them
We wish sometimes to be on that leash
Not necessarily procreation
Heathens get away with just desserts
Out on the perimeter there are observers
Wondering about these objects at high altitudes
America keeps shooting them down
Space junk collected
One wonders what's inside ?
Dogs have it right
Sniffing each other, tails wagging
It's parts and labor for them
We wish sometimes to be on that leash
#sex
#America
#universe
#animals
#astronomy
204 reads
22 Comments
nightbirdblue
enbyblue
enbyblue
Poem Published
11th Oct 2017 3:28pm
11th Oct 2017 3:28pm
Infinity
From the womb of the galaxy
We came spiraling down
Sparkling treasure of stardust
Cascading all around
We condensed into matter
Separate bodies forming shape
And for everything we've known
We have given a name
For the sun is our father
Phasing moon tells time
The earth is our mother
All easily defined
But two mysteries remain
Myths to be dispelled
Universal expansion
And the mind; parallel
We came spiraling down
Sparkling treasure of stardust
Cascading all around
We condensed into matter
Separate bodies forming shape
And for everything we've known
We have given a name
For the sun is our father
Phasing moon tells time
The earth is our mother
All easily defined
But two mysteries remain
Myths to be dispelled
Universal expansion
And the mind; parallel
#universe
#nature
#spiritual
#astronomy
#learning
879 reads
19 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
13th Apr 2023 6:11am
Lost in Space - Mars
Walternate Universe Beta-2
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
“There he is” an older man greeted me as I stepped through
“We’ve heard you’ve been traveling the great vast of space”
There were several people standing next to him on a platform
“Welcome” another man said but I thought I recognized his face
“I’m Dr. Young, this is Dr. Mathers” they introduced themselves
My eyes opened wide that these men were living in Mars
“Don’t tell me Dr. Shakur and Dr. Smalls are here too” I said
“No, they passed away sometime ago and now rest amidst the stars
Do you know about...
#dreams
#universe
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
#astronomy #NaPoWriMo2023
158 reads
4 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
1st Apr 2023 6:56pm
[ NaPoWriMo - 2023 Collection ] Cosmologically Speaking
In The Beginning
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
#astrology
#spiritual
#astronomy
#magic
#NaPoWriMo2023
625 reads
9 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 10:19pm
10th Apr 2024 10:19pm
Gravimetric
The moon betwixt the new and full
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
of nature as a psychopath.
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
of nature as a psychopath.
#earth
#universe
#moon #astronomy
#moon #astronomy
106 reads
3 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
28th Sep 2022 1:22am
A Tool
I’m but a dust particle caught within your gravitational pull
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
An asteroid willing to be used by you, my Sun, as a tool
Your affection for me determines my true worth
I’ve loved and needed you since the universe’s birth
Eternal has been my love, the span of from Alpha to Omega
With the need that Mercury and Venus has for Vega
I’ve cried into a black hole creating a pool with a view
Spaghetti-ing waves at times shimmer reflecting images of you
Into the pool I beg while crying, please pity a lonely asteroid
Alone and in the freezing cold,...
#love
#universe
#rhyming #astronomy
#rhyming #astronomy
207 reads
2 Comments
adagio
Poem Published
6th Apr 2022 00:51am
6th Apr 2022 00:51am
Woven In Mystery
Dreams go on forever
with rings of Saturn
not receding
on a planet of blue
where everything is dense
woven in mystery
of prisms
bejeweled at night
eight planets from the sun
with rings of Saturn
not receding
on a planet of blue
where everything is dense
woven in mystery
of prisms
bejeweled at night
eight planets from the sun
#astronomy
#philosophical
#emotions
286 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
17th Jul 2020 4:06am
17th Jul 2020 4:06am
NEOWISE
Last time you made a visit
was our dawn
Just learning
to scatter seeds into soil
to gather into settlements
to scratch our thoughts into stone...
To be "civilized"
Look at us now as you pass by again --
Billions of tiny
insignificant lives
still scrabbling in the dirt
gathering in our tribes
wrting thoughts with our thumbs now
but none of them new....
Have we developed
in any of the ways that count?
Come check on us again
in another 6,000 years
Maybe then we'll have it
figured out
was our dawn
Just learning
to scatter seeds into soil
to gather into settlements
to scratch our thoughts into stone...
To be "civilized"
Look at us now as you pass by again --
Billions of tiny
insignificant lives
still scrabbling in the dirt
gathering in our tribes
wrting thoughts with our thumbs now
but none of them new....
Have we developed
in any of the ways that count?
Come check on us again
in another 6,000 years
Maybe then we'll have it
figured out
#astronomy
#philosophical
508 reads
8 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
15th Feb 2022 7:10am
15th Feb 2022 7:10am
Cosmos girl
#love
#erotic
#dreams #astronomy
#dreams #astronomy
367 reads
6 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
24th Jul 2023 3:02am
24th Jul 2023 3:02am
Saturn Through a Telescope
Saturn through a telescope
is bite sized,
like something you could scoop up from a bowl
with a spoon
Saturn's rings through a telescope
look like a little Hula hoop
or like the part of a plastic Saturn toy
a toddler would grip
Saturn through a low-powered telescope
does a bit of a hula itself
before coming into view
But then there it is.
As you peer into the telescope,
it's a portal to a two dimensional object
But for some
its a portal
to questions that form at the speed of light. ...
is bite sized,
like something you could scoop up from a bowl
with a spoon
Saturn's rings through a telescope
look like a little Hula hoop
or like the part of a plastic Saturn toy
a toddler would grip
Saturn through a low-powered telescope
does a bit of a hula itself
before coming into view
But then there it is.
As you peer into the telescope,
it's a portal to a two dimensional object
But for some
its a portal
to questions that form at the speed of light. ...
#childhood
#universe
#astronomy
175 reads
4 Comments
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