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Beaver Blood
Where is the moon
It should be full
No shadows
Yet spirits pull.
Evil that lurks
Cautious and confused
Cosmic forces
are amused.
It should be full
No shadows
Yet spirits pull.
Evil that lurks
Cautious and confused
Cosmic forces
are amused.
Author's Note
For the space / cosmic enthusiasts, a heads up. “The second total lunar eclipse of 2022 will turn the moon a reddish-copper color for 85 minutes on Nov. 8, 2022”. More info and source: https://www.space.com/blood-moon-lunar-eclipse-november-2022-guide. November's full moon is called a Beaver moon.
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Re. Beaver Blood
4th Nov 2022 00:17am
Re. Beaver Blood
4th Nov 2022 00:31am
I enjoyed this poem. Beaver Blood - such an interesting title.
Pulled me in and piqued my interest.
Also, thanks for the info regarding the eclipse.
Pulled me in and piqued my interest.
Also, thanks for the info regarding the eclipse.
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4th Nov 2022 4:35pm
Re. Beaver Blood
4th Nov 2022 4:27am
Dear L,
As a poem it has a lot of creative imagery. And it’s about the moon, which I totally dig. I really enjoyed the sweet rhyming affect. It’s a lovely write. Informational and poetic at the same time. H🌷
As a poem it has a lot of creative imagery. And it’s about the moon, which I totally dig. I really enjoyed the sweet rhyming affect. It’s a lovely write. Informational and poetic at the same time. H🌷
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4th Nov 2022 4:35pm
Re. Beaver Blood
5th Nov 2022 10:19pm
You know I'll be attempting to take pictures and of course, howling along!! 🐺🔭🌝
Thanks for the info, Leo
I knew this one was coming but I always appreciate the heads up.
🌹 💙
Thanks for the info, Leo
I knew this one was coming but I always appreciate the heads up.
🌹 💙
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5th Nov 2022 11:27pm
Re. Beaver Blood
7th Nov 2022 3:25pm
I love the title and that picture is da bomb. ;)
Loving the Halloween feel of this...
A blood moon, no shadows and so many spirits.
Evil lurking within the bloody aftermath.
Never cautious... always needing blood.
Cosmic forces are always amused.
Thanks for the information... I was not aware so that's great.
Reddish-copper... beautiful...
And leave the poem up damnit! ;)
Loving the Halloween feel of this...
A blood moon, no shadows and so many spirits.
Evil lurking within the bloody aftermath.
Never cautious... always needing blood.
Cosmic forces are always amused.
Thanks for the information... I was not aware so that's great.
Reddish-copper... beautiful...
And leave the poem up damnit! ;)
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12th Nov 2022 12:46pm
Re. Beaver Blood
8th Nov 2022 11:39am
Thanks for the heads up. I wasn't aware of this lunar eclipse. Hope so it's visible in my city.
I'm a selenophile and I really enjoyed this piece. Love the title, btw.
Thanks for sharing😊 🌹
I'm a selenophile and I really enjoyed this piece. Love the title, btw.
Thanks for sharing😊 🌹
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12th Nov 2022 12:45pm
Re. Beaver Blood
19th Nov 2022 2:38pm
A short, riveting piece so packed with knowledge, mystery and intrigue. It's amazing how powerful a few words can be; and, the pic binds the words and is so perfect.
A magnetizing and beautiful write. Loved it!
A magnetizing and beautiful write. Loved it!
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19th Nov 2022 5:28pm
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25th Nov 2022 12:55pm
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1st Dec 2022 7:24pm
Beaver moon eh, what a fab intense intrigue, hauntingly poetic. Kudos for this fine poem!!
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2nd Dec 2022 3:27pm
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Re: Re. Beaver Blood
4th Apr 2023 1:37pm
Wow, that was an impressive comment. Much appreciated Mr. Black.
You picked up on the turmoil created when a full moon is expected but the Earth's shadow blocks it.
You picked up on the turmoil created when a full moon is expected but the Earth's shadow blocks it.
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17th Oct 2023 00:30am
Re. Beaver Blood
5th Dec 2023 10:09pm
I agree with Debbie! What a great poem with an interesting pic to illustrate it. I love it!
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5th Dec 2023 11:28pm
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Re. Beaver Blood
24th May 2024 9:41pm
Well thank you for the author note because that's not where my thoughts immediately went.
The poem is a lovely piece of brevity that creates intrigue and sparks the imagination.
The poem is a lovely piece of brevity that creates intrigue and sparks the imagination.
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Re: Re. Beaver Blood
25th May 2024 00:48am
Hmm, wonder what your 1st impression was? lol! The lunar powers can cause confusion! : )
Thanks for the read and comment.
Thanks for the read and comment.
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25th May 2024 1:53am