Poems About Astronomy Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about astronomy seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Duice
Poem Published
29th Aug 2024 2:56am
29th Aug 2024 2:56am
Aries
Spin the astrology wheel
see where the compass points
I’m not the star of one thing
more of a mixed bag of several joints
Django unchained born Aries off the cuffs
I missed the cusp by four days
Known as passionate and emotional
I’ll knock you down in 4 ways
Or albeit Ram in 4 waves
calculative known to rock a few ships
A battle plan in mastered hands
is how fore horns stay equip ...
see where the compass points
I’m not the star of one thing
more of a mixed bag of several joints
Django unchained born Aries off the cuffs
I missed the cusp by four days
Known as passionate and emotional
I’ll knock you down in 4 ways
Or albeit Ram in 4 waves
calculative known to rock a few ships
A battle plan in mastered hands
is how fore horns stay equip ...
#astrology
#astronomy
#happiness
#respect
#uplifting
192 reads
2 Comments
AaronBraveHeart
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 4:53pm
15th Jul 2024 4:53pm
My "Ea" Series: Chapter I. The Flame Imperishable
I am initiating an entire series, which I shall post under the "Ea" title.
It will concern Tolkien's Universe and it will be an interpretative "essay" in poetic style as to how I perceive the mechanism behind Creation within his Lore.
The Flame Imperishable is Immortal.
Ever shifting and evasive but the Centre.
It is The Law within three Circles Verbal,
intersected, causing Life of the Inventor.
"Let there be Light!"
uttered The Father, our God.
The Word through his Might,
he birthed as his Son;...
It will concern Tolkien's Universe and it will be an interpretative "essay" in poetic style as to how I perceive the mechanism behind Creation within his Lore.
The Flame Imperishable is Immortal.
Ever shifting and evasive but the Centre.
It is The Law within three Circles Verbal,
intersected, causing Life of the Inventor.
"Let there be Light!"
uttered The Father, our God.
The Word through his Might,
he birthed as his Son;...
#astronomy
#God
#JRRTolkien
#spiritual
#universe
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Jesse
Jesse Rose
Jesse Rose
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 12:07pm
15th Jul 2024 12:07pm
Time Trucker
Time trucker,
flashing on by.
Galaxies inside him
Universe behind
Life lucker
Walking on his bones
Riding on a new born star
Who knows where he roams
Time trucker
Milky way does drip
Stars and constellations
on his fingertips
Life lucker,
He's aint no moonstrucker, he's a
Time trucker
flashing on by.
Galaxies inside him
Universe behind
Life lucker
Walking on his bones
Riding on a new born star
Who knows where he roams
Time trucker
Milky way does drip
Stars and constellations
on his fingertips
Life lucker,
He's aint no moonstrucker, he's a
Time trucker
#astronomy
#scifi
#travel #universe
#travel #universe
138 reads
2 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
24th Jun 2024 4:07pm
24th Jun 2024 4:07pm
Lumen
Deep blue as the sea at night
Scattered orbs of light
They shine
Lighting up the sky
With hints of what has been
Constellations understood
By few
The ones who traveled across the sea
By the lights of the sky
When did this tradition die
We rely on technological
Devices we think we need
We learn to read
But do we actually read what’s in between
The sky we see is ever changing
A sneak peak into another world
I never get bored of this work of art
The one I only witness when it’s night
This is quite...
Scattered orbs of light
They shine
Lighting up the sky
With hints of what has been
Constellations understood
By few
The ones who traveled across the sea
By the lights of the sky
When did this tradition die
We rely on technological
Devices we think we need
We learn to read
But do we actually read what’s in between
The sky we see is ever changing
A sneak peak into another world
I never get bored of this work of art
The one I only witness when it’s night
This is quite...
#astronomy
#sky
#stars
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 11:32am
11th Jun 2024 11:32am
A Voyage to Hell
When my sun comes down
a blood red cosmos astounds
i appear with winter's wind
I'm free as summer's sin
sing a song this mourning
telling tales of warning
purple clouds, demon bubbles
cosmic dreams, strangers in trouble
to die is to wake at the strike of twelve
he welcomes us all to the gates of hell
a blood red cosmos astounds
i appear with winter's wind
I'm free as summer's sin
sing a song this mourning
telling tales of warning
purple clouds, demon bubbles
cosmic dreams, strangers in trouble
to die is to wake at the strike of twelve
he welcomes us all to the gates of hell
#astronomy
#clouds
#dreams
#hell
#rhyming
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6 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
21st May 2024 2:09am
21st May 2024 2:09am
Midnight May
Brightest May, with the sun borne breeze,
I love to watch the way you play
with every bird up in the trees
in all the glory of your day!
I see your youth in each new leaf
as antidote for feeling old
and reassurance that all grief
will somehow be by you consoled.
Your hearty clover, now in bloom,
breeds whilom thoughts of maypole dance
and happy memories exhume
as soil for some fresh romance.
And when your wind declines to chime
I'll build a fire in the pit
to watch your moon rise, just in time,
as...
I love to watch the way you play
with every bird up in the trees
in all the glory of your day!
I see your youth in each new leaf
as antidote for feeling old
and reassurance that all grief
will somehow be by you consoled.
Your hearty clover, now in bloom,
breeds whilom thoughts of maypole dance
and happy memories exhume
as soil for some fresh romance.
And when your wind declines to chime
I'll build a fire in the pit
to watch your moon rise, just in time,
as...
#astronomy
#moon
#stars #sun
#stars #sun
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6 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2024 9:22pm
22nd Apr 2024 9:22pm
The Shepherd's Hour
The Shepherd's Hour
The moon is red on misty horizon
Within a dancing fog, and the plains
In vapor dozing, the frog complains
Among the reeds, where chill has arisen
***
Water flowers have closed their petals
In distance far, poplars show profile
Straight and tight their ghosts unseen awhile
And between the bush, glowworms shuttle
**
The owls now awake, noiseless take flight
Rowing the black air with heavy wings
The zenith full, a fainting glow blinks
White, Venus emerges, it is Night *
...
The moon is red on misty horizon
Within a dancing fog, and the plains
In vapor dozing, the frog complains
Among the reeds, where chill has arisen
***
Water flowers have closed their petals
In distance far, poplars show profile
Straight and tight their ghosts unseen awhile
And between the bush, glowworms shuttle
**
The owls now awake, noiseless take flight
Rowing the black air with heavy wings
The zenith full, a fainting glow blinks
White, Venus emerges, it is Night *
...
#astronomy
#earth
#moon #stars
#moon #stars
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2 Comments
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
14th Apr 2024 1:08pm
14th Apr 2024 1:08pm
The Universe
The universe is wide.
With stars,sparkly and bright.
That illuminates the night.
And erases all of our fright.
No matter the length or height.
We always look at it as an incredible sight.
Blue,purple,black.
There isn't anything the universe does lack.
Now,let me loud and clear.
The universe is the reason we are here.
With stars,planets,space.
The galaxies dance in grace.
Like dark,magical lace.
That puts a smile on your face.
With nightlights far away.
In our memory and existence,it does...
With stars,sparkly and bright.
That illuminates the night.
And erases all of our fright.
No matter the length or height.
We always look at it as an incredible sight.
Blue,purple,black.
There isn't anything the universe does lack.
Now,let me loud and clear.
The universe is the reason we are here.
With stars,planets,space.
The galaxies dance in grace.
Like dark,magical lace.
That puts a smile on your face.
With nightlights far away.
In our memory and existence,it does...
#hope
#universe
#uplifting #astronomy
#uplifting #astronomy
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 10:19pm
10th Apr 2024 10:19pm
Gravimetric
The moon betwixt the new and full
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
no entity at all
but nature as a psychopath
who likes to have things fall.
goes through the afternoon,
then from the full the Earth will pull
it back to newly lune.
And thus as heaven's shuttlecock
it rackets to and fro
above the sultry summer stock
and over winter snow.
Thereby is how the game is played,
by every planetoid,
in varied orbitals arrayed
throughout the stellar void...
where nothing postulates the math
no entity at all
but nature as a psychopath
who likes to have things fall.
#earth
#universe
#moon #astronomy
#moon #astronomy
229 reads
3 Comments
Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
10th Apr 2024 3:35am
10th Apr 2024 3:35am
Moon's Day Out
Yesterday was,
I freely admit,
one of the most
fulfilling days
of my existence.
I had tons of fun
in front of the Sun
For four blessed minutes
I took center stage
blocking that gas balls
braggadocious rays.
Granted, without his
warmth and light
would no living
organism survive.
But, hey, I'm important too
Am I not the prince tides?
Could you see
the birds go crazy
and the humans shout
when I blocked the big guy out?
Man I felt such happiness
blanketing the
world in darkness. ...
I freely admit,
one of the most
fulfilling days
of my existence.
I had tons of fun
in front of the Sun
For four blessed minutes
I took center stage
blocking that gas balls
braggadocious rays.
Granted, without his
warmth and light
would no living
organism survive.
But, hey, I'm important too
Am I not the prince tides?
Could you see
the birds go crazy
and the humans shout
when I blocked the big guy out?
Man I felt such happiness
blanketing the
world in darkness. ...
#sun
#moon
#nature
#funny
#astronomy
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1 Comment
Isgyppie_
Poem Published
8th Apr 2024 4:28pm
8th Apr 2024 4:28pm
Astral
Today you can find me in the cosmos
While my body lay limp in bed
A blue silk blindfold tied around my eyes
A cat purring softly by my side
But my mind is in the cosmos
For Earth is too much to bear
And I need to escape
Flesh stricken by gravity’s weight
Consciousness lighter than air
As I rise from my body slowly
I look down upon the Earth
Bones in backyards
Souls who are starved
Floating by unanswered prayers
In the cosmos there is mystery
That alters my small perspective
But...
While my body lay limp in bed
A blue silk blindfold tied around my eyes
A cat purring softly by my side
But my mind is in the cosmos
For Earth is too much to bear
And I need to escape
Flesh stricken by gravity’s weight
Consciousness lighter than air
As I rise from my body slowly
I look down upon the Earth
Bones in backyards
Souls who are starved
Floating by unanswered prayers
In the cosmos there is mystery
That alters my small perspective
But...
#universe
#astronomy
#NaPoWriMo2024
200 reads
12 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Mar 2024 11:07pm
30th Mar 2024 11:07pm
The End
The hidden sun hides
shadows over the cosmos
a cosmic breath entombed
colliding worlds, awaiting doom
shadows over the cosmos
a cosmic breath entombed
colliding worlds, awaiting doom
#universe
#apocalypse
#astronomy
216 reads
4 Comments
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