Poems About Astronomy Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about astronomy seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 1:03pm
13th Oct 2024 1:03pm
Luna's Hierophant Triumphant
In silvered veil of night
The moon ascends her throne
A hierophant in light
By hidden wisdom shown
Her phases carve the sky
In waxing, waning form
Where secrets silent lie
Within her timeless storm
She speaks in cryptic dreams
A priestess of the veil
Her knowledge flows in streams
Through shadowed paths, we sail
By crescent horns we rise
In sacred arc we bow
She holds the mirrored skies
Reflecting every vow
The triune force she wields
New moon, full moon, and dark
The mysteries...
The moon ascends her throne
A hierophant in light
By hidden wisdom shown
Her phases carve the sky
In waxing, waning form
Where secrets silent lie
Within her timeless storm
She speaks in cryptic dreams
A priestess of the veil
Her knowledge flows in streams
Through shadowed paths, we sail
By crescent horns we rise
In sacred arc we bow
She holds the mirrored skies
Reflecting every vow
The triune force she wields
New moon, full moon, and dark
The mysteries...
#astronomy
#LifeCycle
#moon
#night
#universe
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2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 12:58pm
13th Oct 2024 12:58pm
Celestial Dichotomies of Heavenly Cycles
By numbers they are known
The seven and the nine
Celestial lights are thrown
Both shadowed and divine
The moon, a secret guide
In phases she doth wane
While Sol, in boundless pride
Brings forth his golden reign
In orbit they align
Yet opposite they tread
One gives the sacred sign
The other strikes it dead
Each planet's path is drawn
In cycles vast and deep
The light precedes the dawn
While darkness wakes from sleep
By three and four they turn
In endless cosmic dance
Where...
The seven and the nine
Celestial lights are thrown
Both shadowed and divine
The moon, a secret guide
In phases she doth wane
While Sol, in boundless pride
Brings forth his golden reign
In orbit they align
Yet opposite they tread
One gives the sacred sign
The other strikes it dead
Each planet's path is drawn
In cycles vast and deep
The light precedes the dawn
While darkness wakes from sleep
By three and four they turn
In endless cosmic dance
Where...
#astronomy
#rhyming
#sky
#stars
#universe
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
11th Oct 2024 9:46am
11th Oct 2024 9:46am
tonight ovulating in the universes
tonight awaken and sleep in the deep thought
taking in too much
I masicate the words
to turn phrases into masterbaters,
producing masterpieces
body of pain
failing to digest the knowledge
regress the need for so much at once
reaching to the stars
keeping to the shallows
treading water when the shelf drops
then swim deep underwater holding my breath
space is alive and looking in on me
a warm inviting bath
cool to the touch
hostile... it is riveting in it's chaos
to witness a birth of a...
taking in too much
I masicate the words
to turn phrases into masterbaters,
producing masterpieces
body of pain
failing to digest the knowledge
regress the need for so much at once
reaching to the stars
keeping to the shallows
treading water when the shelf drops
then swim deep underwater holding my breath
space is alive and looking in on me
a warm inviting bath
cool to the touch
hostile... it is riveting in it's chaos
to witness a birth of a...
#astronomy
#metaphor
109 reads
2 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 4:09pm
7th Oct 2024 4:09pm
Wrath of Bent Shadows
In shadowed depths where stars did wane
I sought the truths that none dare name
With tome and sigil, darkly scrawled
I pierced the veil, the void’s cold thrall
The heavens spun in twisted rhyme
and space did stretch, untouch’d by time
I gazed into that maw so vast
where light did bend and breath could pass
A gate, I thought, to realms divine
where God and daemon intertwine
But what I found, in endless dark
was neither flame nor holy spark
The void it pulled, it drank me whole
an unseen hand that stole my soul ...
I sought the truths that none dare name
With tome and sigil, darkly scrawled
I pierced the veil, the void’s cold thrall
The heavens spun in twisted rhyme
and space did stretch, untouch’d by time
I gazed into that maw so vast
where light did bend and breath could pass
A gate, I thought, to realms divine
where God and daemon intertwine
But what I found, in endless dark
was neither flame nor holy spark
The void it pulled, it drank me whole
an unseen hand that stole my soul ...
#astronomy
#dark
#universe
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 6:46am
7th Oct 2024 6:46am
A Hammer To Break The Stars
Foul spores upon the winde are cast
From void they come, a shadow vast
Shapes flee swift 'neath skies that break
Pale light doth rise, the dark to wake
Strange sounds from pools where stillness lies
Marks unseen upon men’s eyes
The hidden signs, burnt in their wake
In silent corners shadows quake
The winde, it bears a breath unknown
Of ancient doom, in whispers sown
'Tis not the stars, nor sky, nor sea
But something else, unseen, set free
What stirs beyond the tornèd veil
Doth sow the seed, yet leaves no trail ...
From void they come, a shadow vast
Shapes flee swift 'neath skies that break
Pale light doth rise, the dark to wake
Strange sounds from pools where stillness lies
Marks unseen upon men’s eyes
The hidden signs, burnt in their wake
In silent corners shadows quake
The winde, it bears a breath unknown
Of ancient doom, in whispers sown
'Tis not the stars, nor sky, nor sea
But something else, unseen, set free
What stirs beyond the tornèd veil
Doth sow the seed, yet leaves no trail ...
#astronomy
#curse
#rhyming
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
30th Sep 2024 4:32pm
30th Sep 2024 4:32pm
twenty five
irresistible computation an equation
sly joker triggers grade
daggers of faith needy nation
sacrifice of sustenance
the blood of space generates a new race
metaphor for DNA
areas of grey tempter of men
silken sage with the will of ten
liken to the redwood
the mighty trees of time
seeing through eyes, not of this realm
even a book remembers being a tree
fast or slow the knowledge will remain
to lie down upon open minds
it is with cause we elevate
alleviate the hunger to see through the...
sly joker triggers grade
daggers of faith needy nation
sacrifice of sustenance
the blood of space generates a new race
metaphor for DNA
areas of grey tempter of men
silken sage with the will of ten
liken to the redwood
the mighty trees of time
seeing through eyes, not of this realm
even a book remembers being a tree
fast or slow the knowledge will remain
to lie down upon open minds
it is with cause we elevate
alleviate the hunger to see through the...
#astronomy
#universe
152 reads
6 Comments
ThePalestRider
Poem Published
24th Sep 2024 6:59am
24th Sep 2024 6:59am
A Sea of Dead Tranquility
Descending from lunar choirs
Burning with abyssal fire
A visitor from afar
Declare I own the stars
Creation's sovereign bend the knee
Purge life seek the perfect tranquility
The heavens crack beneath my gaze
I tear the veil of fleeting days
Through silent realms, I drift, unseen
To cleanse the flawed, restore the serene
No mortal cry, no fragile breath
Can halt the tide of tranquil death
In every star, my mark is traced
In every world, all life...
Burning with abyssal fire
A visitor from afar
Declare I own the stars
Creation's sovereign bend the knee
Purge life seek the perfect tranquility
The heavens crack beneath my gaze
I tear the veil of fleeting days
Through silent realms, I drift, unseen
To cleanse the flawed, restore the serene
No mortal cry, no fragile breath
Can halt the tide of tranquil death
In every star, my mark is traced
In every world, all life...
#astronomy
#dark
#death #universe
#death #universe
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 5:40am
23rd Sep 2024 5:40am
Laments of Celestial Spheres
In the sanctum where the solar flame
Illuminates the ancient name
We gather 'neath the sigils bright
To mourn the death of celestial light
The spheres align in sacred dance
Yet now, they falter in their trance
O luminous orbs, once bold and grand
Now shadowed relics in a hollowed land
From Arcturus’ gaze to the Pleiades’ grace
We trace the paths of time and space
But whispers rise from the astral sea
As dying stars call out to me
The sun's golden rays, once pure and whole
Are clouded now, consumed by coal ...
Illuminates the ancient name
We gather 'neath the sigils bright
To mourn the death of celestial light
The spheres align in sacred dance
Yet now, they falter in their trance
O luminous orbs, once bold and grand
Now shadowed relics in a hollowed land
From Arcturus’ gaze to the Pleiades’ grace
We trace the paths of time and space
But whispers rise from the astral sea
As dying stars call out to me
The sun's golden rays, once pure and whole
Are clouded now, consumed by coal ...
#astrology
#astronomy
#magic
#sun
#universe
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
20th Sep 2024 10:13am
20th Sep 2024 10:13am
Etherborn Circuits of Oblivion
Animus construct of void abode
Synthetic soul of failing code
Flickering through rot and rust
Computations of scattered dust
Language paradox short yet long
Processors hum their insane song
Through Vacuums it tumbles and weaves
Tenebrous aether it continues to cleave
Hosting imperium of circuits reign
Crying in its own digital pain
Colossus of lost and forlorn
Oblivious scion forever void borne
Synthetic soul of failing code
Flickering through rot and rust
Computations of scattered dust
Language paradox short yet long
Processors hum their insane song
Through Vacuums it tumbles and weaves
Tenebrous aether it continues to cleave
Hosting imperium of circuits reign
Crying in its own digital pain
Colossus of lost and forlorn
Oblivious scion forever void borne
#astronomy
#moon
#scifi #stars
#scifi #stars
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 10:37pm
18th Sep 2024 10:37pm
Solar Order Triumphant
Golden gaze pierce the void
Flames unyielding and all destroyed
Resplendence in aureate fire
Golden with gilded dire
Vast halo of burning gold
Crown illuminate in the dark and cold
Thy reign supreme yet severe
Light shining with photons of fear
In warmth the shadows creep
Whispering of Sol's secrets to keep
Flames unyielding and all destroyed
Resplendence in aureate fire
Golden with gilded dire
Vast halo of burning gold
Crown illuminate in the dark and cold
Thy reign supreme yet severe
Light shining with photons of fear
In warmth the shadows creep
Whispering of Sol's secrets to keep
#astronomy
#shadows
#stars
#sun
#universe
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 11:32pm
17th Sep 2024 11:32pm
Heresies of A Dying Nebulae
Essence of being corrupted
Vigor of dissent erupted
Gases swirl as tendrils of dread
Child of galaxies long dead
Strangling nooses of grave spawn
Void cloud strangling celestial dawn
Lighting cracking from umbral clouds
Illuminate the tenebrous shroud
Eating itself within the void
State of matter gone paranoid
Orthodox being bearing its cost
Color against shadow now lost
The path of cancer it yields
Attacked by its own shield
...
Vigor of dissent erupted
Gases swirl as tendrils of dread
Child of galaxies long dead
Strangling nooses of grave spawn
Void cloud strangling celestial dawn
Lighting cracking from umbral clouds
Illuminate the tenebrous shroud
Eating itself within the void
State of matter gone paranoid
Orthodox being bearing its cost
Color against shadow now lost
The path of cancer it yields
Attacked by its own shield
...
#astronomy
#dark
#stars
#sun
#universe
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
15th Sep 2024 6:09pm
15th Sep 2024 6:09pm
Void singularities
In the depths where stars dare not gleam
A void where silence reigns supreme
Eternal dark, a yawning maw
Bends space and time to unseen law
No sound, no breath, no life to trace
In the heart of the endless space
Where matter folds and dreams dissolve
And all that is, begins to evolve
The aether trembles, pale and frail
As light itself begins to fail
In mirrored dark, the threads unwind
A singularity confined
The cosmic fabric splits in two
Reflections fractal, strange, and new
Dimensions twist and backward...
A void where silence reigns supreme
Eternal dark, a yawning maw
Bends space and time to unseen law
No sound, no breath, no life to trace
In the heart of the endless space
Where matter folds and dreams dissolve
And all that is, begins to evolve
The aether trembles, pale and frail
As light itself begins to fail
In mirrored dark, the threads unwind
A singularity confined
The cosmic fabric splits in two
Reflections fractal, strange, and new
Dimensions twist and backward...
#astronomy
#scifi
#shadows
#stars
#universe
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