Anniversary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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anniversary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
28th Oct 2022 10:37pm
28th Oct 2022 10:37pm
The Anniversary
#love
#marriage
#murder #anniversary
#murder #anniversary
363 reads
7 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
27th Oct 2022 9:58pm
27th Oct 2022 9:58pm
The Anniversary
#marriage
#murder
#anniversary
235 reads
1 Comment
mysteriouslady
Poem Published
6th Oct 2022 1:58am
6th Oct 2022 1:58am
21 years.....
Right about now we were
introduced
as the happily wedded couple
Mr & Mrs
Wow what a feeling
and in church no less!
(the grannies were happy about that lol )
we knew it was going to be a wild ride
Wild doesnt even explain it
A ride we had to experience....
young and in love
ready to conquer the world
together hand in hand
Theres been some dark days within these 21 years
rough child births
kids needing specialists when born
stress, mortgage, car payments, more stress ...
introduced
as the happily wedded couple
Mr & Mrs
Wow what a feeling
and in church no less!
(the grannies were happy about that lol )
we knew it was going to be a wild ride
Wild doesnt even explain it
A ride we had to experience....
young and in love
ready to conquer the world
together hand in hand
Theres been some dark days within these 21 years
rough child births
kids needing specialists when born
stress, mortgage, car payments, more stress ...
#love
#anniversary
467 reads
16 Comments
peninnah
Poem Published
4th Aug 2022 6:51pm
4th Aug 2022 6:51pm
TWO BOYS AND A DOG!
Two boys and a dog!”
“What?” He ask again
“Two boys and a dog,” She repeats. Firmly! “That’s what I bring to the table!”
He studies her for a silent minute, so she gets up to leave. “Surely, he cannot handle this…”
“So?!” He interrupts her thoughts, “I mean,let me halla at you for a moment ma!” He takes her hand, and gently leads her back to sit.
“Two boys and a dog,huh?”
“See,I know you and ‘em babies have been let down one too many times before, and on behalf of my people, I apologize.”
She rolls her eyes impatiently, accompanied with a...
“What?” He ask again
“Two boys and a dog,” She repeats. Firmly! “That’s what I bring to the table!”
He studies her for a silent minute, so she gets up to leave. “Surely, he cannot handle this…”
“So?!” He interrupts her thoughts, “I mean,let me halla at you for a moment ma!” He takes her hand, and gently leads her back to sit.
“Two boys and a dog,huh?”
“See,I know you and ‘em babies have been let down one too many times before, and on behalf of my people, I apologize.”
She rolls her eyes impatiently, accompanied with a...
#love
#men
#motherhood
#marriage
#anniversary
331 reads
5 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Jul 2022 2:10pm
26th Jul 2022 2:10pm
The Guy Who Wanted To Do More
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#anniversary
#sensual
#temptation
284 reads
0 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
22nd Jun 2022 11:49pm
22nd Jun 2022 11:49pm
ONE YEAR IN
We are both begging
And commanding at the same time
And position
Acting not with fear
But wonder in the face
Of demolition
We had champagne
On our first date because our love
Is celebration
And still I find
You are a constantly occurring
Revelation
And commanding at the same time
And position
Acting not with fear
But wonder in the face
Of demolition
We had champagne
On our first date because our love
Is celebration
And still I find
You are a constantly occurring
Revelation
#relationships
#rhyming
#anniversary
220 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
27th Apr 2022 2:09am
27th Apr 2022 2:09am
Winsome
Let me say good night to the guests, family, and friends.
Winsome, this is how I truly feel about you.
Your name signifies the kind of person that you are.
The first letter W represents wonderful.
The second letter I is for industrious.
The third letter N symbolizes neighbourly.
The fourth letter S is for spiritual.
The fifth letter O typifies outgoing.
The sixth letter M is for motherly.
And the last letter E stands for encouraging.
Winsome, I am so glad that you are my sister.
Your exemplary qualities appeal to me, ...
Winsome, this is how I truly feel about you.
Your name signifies the kind of person that you are.
The first letter W represents wonderful.
The second letter I is for industrious.
The third letter N symbolizes neighbourly.
The fourth letter S is for spiritual.
The fifth letter O typifies outgoing.
The sixth letter M is for motherly.
And the last letter E stands for encouraging.
Winsome, I am so glad that you are my sister.
Your exemplary qualities appeal to me, ...
#happiness
#love
#motivational
#inspirational
#anniversary
372 reads
2 Comments
OG-Poetry
Poem Published
25th Dec 2021 2:28pm
25th Dec 2021 2:28pm
you
once i was a lonely man
and i dream that i met you
i dreamed that i dreamed i fell in love…
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too..
me and You
just us two
it’s all about You
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too
me and You
till it’s through
just us two
You
(now…
be mine now)
and i dream that i met you
i dreamed that i dreamed i fell in love…
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too..
me and You
just us two
it’s all about You
i’m dreaming
i’m dreaming of you
thinking that you love me too
me and You
till it’s through
just us two
You
(now…
be mine now)
#love
#relationships
#marriage
#anniversary
#FallingInLove
1377 reads
8 Comments
saint_gw
Gregory
Gregory
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2021 2:56am
2nd Dec 2021 2:56am
Just Getting Started
Our anniversary is here,
and we’ve just scratched the surface.
It’s been another year,
And our love is still perfect.
I don’t deserve this,
this wonderful life,
or this beautiful woman
I have as my wife.
Find rest in this place,
only yours from the start,
this sacred space
that you’ve held in my heart.
After all that we’ve seen,
and all we’ve been through,
there’s one thing I need,
and that’s more time with you.
and we’ve just scratched the surface.
It’s been another year,
And our love is still perfect.
I don’t deserve this,
this wonderful life,
or this beautiful woman
I have as my wife.
Find rest in this place,
only yours from the start,
this sacred space
that you’ve held in my heart.
After all that we’ve seen,
and all we’ve been through,
there’s one thing I need,
and that’s more time with you.
#marriage
#anniversary
799 reads
6 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
29th Apr 2021 5:33pm
29th Apr 2021 5:33pm
Have A Happy 20th Anniversary
For Vanessa and Cleon
You've been a wonderful couple for 20 years
Something has kept you together until this moment
You don’t have to ask yourselves what it is
There’s evidence of genuine love on your faces
Your affection for each other keeps showing
You’ve treated each other kindly over the years
And you still smile lovingly at each other
This is something that only true love can do
Strong love guarantees a lifelong marriage
If your love stays strong, you'll always be together
True love has no end, you can be sure of...
You've been a wonderful couple for 20 years
Something has kept you together until this moment
You don’t have to ask yourselves what it is
There’s evidence of genuine love on your faces
Your affection for each other keeps showing
You’ve treated each other kindly over the years
And you still smile lovingly at each other
This is something that only true love can do
Strong love guarantees a lifelong marriage
If your love stays strong, you'll always be together
True love has no end, you can be sure of...
#happiness
#love
#kindness
#marriage
#anniversary
283 reads
0 Comments
dkzksaxxas_DanielX
Poem Published
9th Dec 2020 10:48pm
9th Dec 2020 10:48pm
Cuarenta y Cuarenta ... Números de la Suerte de John
The day Chappy shot
The Man Down
(fckn 40 yrs ago)
I didn't know what to do.
Maybelike 'shit or go blind',
or sumsuch as that.
(Me head be spinnin' for years).
40 yrs old was this Great One.
40 yrs ago & he was no more.
Must've been someone's......
Número de la suerte. **
Han pasado cuarenta años.
Cuarenta años aquí.
Debe haber sido el día de suerte de alguien. *
*(must have been someone's lucky day)
**(lucky number)
...
The Man Down
(fckn 40 yrs ago)
I didn't know what to do.
Maybelike 'shit or go blind',
or sumsuch as that.
(Me head be spinnin' for years).
40 yrs old was this Great One.
40 yrs ago & he was no more.
Must've been someone's......
Número de la suerte. **
Han pasado cuarenta años.
Cuarenta años aquí.
Debe haber sido el día de suerte de alguien. *
*(must have been someone's lucky day)
**(lucky number)
...
#death
#fate
#anniversary
#heaven
#hell
376 reads
3 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
7th Oct 2020 3:55pm
7th Oct 2020 3:55pm
Wedding Anniversary
The celebration of a wedding anniversary is a very special event for a fine couple like you
It is the best way to show that you still love and appreciate one another very much
The memories of the good times you spend together
Bring joy to your hearts
It is the best way to show that you still love and appreciate one another very much
The memories of the good times you spend together
Bring joy to your hearts
#love
#anniversary
#memories
362 reads
0 Comments
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