Anniversary Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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anniversary seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 00:43am
8th Nov 2024 00:43am
turns out we’re the romantic comedy ..
for our thirty first we went to the pictures
but it was a really creepy film and
even though it had hugh grant in it was
nothing like notting hill
but it was a really creepy film and
even though it had hugh grant in it was
nothing like notting hill
#anniversary
94 reads
7 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 10:50pm
13th Oct 2024 10:50pm
October Poems 2024 >> though oft i un-fête her tight bonds
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
October 14
though oft i un-fête her tight bonds
a Wedding Anniversary Poem for Odessa
my wife is a treasure;
my life gains sheer measure
from latitude bound in her breast.
both morning and night time
regaling my flight time,
she ferries my soul to the crest
of treacherous mountains,
past lecherous dead-ends
contending to chagrin my joy.
her sweet, gentle spirit
has healing balm in it,
whose steadfast supplies never cloy.
...
October 14
though oft i un-fête her tight bonds
a Wedding Anniversary Poem for Odessa
my wife is a treasure;
my life gains sheer measure
from latitude bound in her breast.
both morning and night time
regaling my flight time,
she ferries my soul to the crest
of treacherous mountains,
past lecherous dead-ends
contending to chagrin my joy.
her sweet, gentle spirit
has healing balm in it,
whose steadfast supplies never cloy.
...
#anniversary
#birthday
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeCycle
182 reads
4 Comments
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 1:01am
14th Jul 2024 1:01am
Ten Years of Posting to The Day
Ten years of words
Ten years of rain
Ten years spent absurd
Ten venting in vain
Ten minutes of joy reigning
Then ruled by another
Ten years of pens smothered
Ten years of keys covered in
Grease and tears
From my veins weeping
Ten years with very few brothers,
friendless
Years flew by,
at times seemingly endless
and still my word relentless
Picked up the passion to pen while cutting grass
where a mind does wander
I imagine some of the greatest lines
come from fishers and...
Ten years of rain
Ten years spent absurd
Ten venting in vain
Ten minutes of joy reigning
Then ruled by another
Ten years of pens smothered
Ten years of keys covered in
Grease and tears
From my veins weeping
Ten years with very few brothers,
friendless
Years flew by,
at times seemingly endless
and still my word relentless
Picked up the passion to pen while cutting grass
where a mind does wander
I imagine some of the greatest lines
come from fishers and...
#birthday
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#anniversary
316 reads
6 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 5:56pm
30th Jun 2024 5:56pm
For My Husband on Our Anniversary
Inside my mouth is the ocean's heart,
A briny drop of the ancient start,
Where life unfurled from depths unseen,
A taste of time, both sharp and keen.
Your kiss, my love, is salt and sweet,
A confluence where two souls meet,
Tears and sweat, the love we've sown,
In love’s embrace, our truths are known.
Beneath your touch, I am transformed,
Not just a wife, but spirit warmed,
We ride the waves of primal seas,
In this dance, we move with ease.
I am the tide, you are the moon,
In our marriage bed our bodies swoon,...
A briny drop of the ancient start,
Where life unfurled from depths unseen,
A taste of time, both sharp and keen.
Your kiss, my love, is salt and sweet,
A confluence where two souls meet,
Tears and sweat, the love we've sown,
In love’s embrace, our truths are known.
Beneath your touch, I am transformed,
Not just a wife, but spirit warmed,
We ride the waves of primal seas,
In this dance, we move with ease.
I am the tide, you are the moon,
In our marriage bed our bodies swoon,...
#anniversary
#love
#marriage #sex
#marriage #sex
490 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2024 8:30pm
3rd Apr 2024 8:30pm
First experience at Six Flags Great Adventure
In July this will mark the 40th anniversary of my 1st time at Six Flags Great Adventure in Jackson New Jersey.
Prior to Great Adventure, I had some experience with Amusement Parks. My parents and grandparents have taken me to Adventureland in Farmingdale Long Island since 1980. My first roller coaster experience was there in 1982. Accompanied by my father, I rode a coaster called the Galaxy. A simplistic, figure 8 coaster that hit speeds of 30 mph. At that time, I thought it was the greatest thing on Earth!
In 1983 my parents took my brother & I to Disney World. That...
Prior to Great Adventure, I had some experience with Amusement Parks. My parents and grandparents have taken me to Adventureland in Farmingdale Long Island since 1980. My first roller coaster experience was there in 1982. Accompanied by my father, I rode a coaster called the Galaxy. A simplistic, figure 8 coaster that hit speeds of 30 mph. At that time, I thought it was the greatest thing on Earth!
In 1983 my parents took my brother & I to Disney World. That...
#family
#anniversary
#memories
#nostalgia
#ThrillSeeking
159 reads
8 Comments
dnzmemn66
Poem Published
28th Jan 2024 6:41am
28th Jan 2024 6:41am
Anniversary
Love is a song
That I shall sing
Love is a gift
That I shall bring
Love is the tears
That fall from my face
Love is the memories
I can’t erase
We raised a child
Then there were two
When I look in their eyes
I think of you
A few years behind us
Many more ahead
Our marriage is more
Than just sharing a bed
So, I raise my glass
To offer a toast
To the one I care about
The very most
HAPPY ANNIVERSARY
That I shall sing
Love is a gift
That I shall bring
Love is the tears
That fall from my face
Love is the memories
I can’t erase
We raised a child
Then there were two
When I look in their eyes
I think of you
A few years behind us
Many more ahead
Our marriage is more
Than just sharing a bed
So, I raise my glass
To offer a toast
To the one I care about
The very most
HAPPY ANNIVERSARY
#love
#marriage
#anniversary
229 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
31st Oct 2023 00:19am
31st Oct 2023 00:19am
upon our thirtieth wedding anniversary
always said that what first
attracted me to you were your legs
I know that’s sexist, because that’s what attraction is, it discriminates
but when I looked at your face, the
out of bed too soon face, the lined, early morning work face, the tired, but undefeated face, I fell in love
attracted me to you were your legs
I know that’s sexist, because that’s what attraction is, it discriminates
but when I looked at your face, the
out of bed too soon face, the lined, early morning work face, the tired, but undefeated face, I fell in love
#love
#marriage
#beauty
#anniversary
#WritingPoetry
174 reads
2 Comments
Sapphirewolf
Poem Published
5th Jul 2023 4:56am
5th Jul 2023 4:56am
Freedom on the 4th
Each fallen soul from every generation
Has built our nation's firm foundation
The uniforms through years have changed
But the reasons they fight are still the same
Let's not forget our men our women so brave
For each minute in war they come closer to the grave
In our flag they'll always fly
And guard our nation with a watchful eye
Our freedom paid with blood and sweat
A decision I'm sure they'll never regret
Don't think fireworks on the 4th of July
Remember the ones who lived, who died
Has built our nation's firm foundation
The uniforms through years have changed
But the reasons they fight are still the same
Let's not forget our men our women so brave
For each minute in war they come closer to the grave
In our flag they'll always fly
And guard our nation with a watchful eye
Our freedom paid with blood and sweat
A decision I'm sure they'll never regret
Don't think fireworks on the 4th of July
Remember the ones who lived, who died
#birth
#death
#anniversary
167 reads
0 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
11th Dec 2022 9:16pm
11th Dec 2022 9:16pm
A Sudden Sluice of Sea-Ice
The kid drops his bucket and spade / And climbs into the sun.” Nick Cave
Sea-ice shoals are spooned
Into surrogate vessels of feeling,
Tidal grief has sunk emotions
Girl at the point where the pier once lay
Could be disturbed moments away from
Sleeping with the fishes
I turn my back on the portentous vision
And paint the sky red with seagull blood
As diamonds plucked from expensive watches
Temporal is the temptation to crush auld crystal,
Tougher than slate, finger bone br/e/aker
They’d look beautiful abreast...
Sea-ice shoals are spooned
Into surrogate vessels of feeling,
Tidal grief has sunk emotions
Girl at the point where the pier once lay
Could be disturbed moments away from
Sleeping with the fishes
I turn my back on the portentous vision
And paint the sky red with seagull blood
As diamonds plucked from expensive watches
Temporal is the temptation to crush auld crystal,
Tougher than slate, finger bone br/e/aker
They’d look beautiful abreast...
#sea
#nature
#anniversary #LifeCycle
#anniversary #LifeCycle
183 reads
13 Comments
LiamReeduus
LiamReedus
LiamReedus
Poem Published
27th Nov 2022 11:55am
27th Nov 2022 11:55am
Casa Del Reedus
Floral Embroidered Velvet Lace Gown
As though it was painted direct.
Her 9 inch crystal Stiletto.
Ninety Eight Million shes a boss respect.
Soleil Lalique Crystal Edition her fragrance.
Clé de Peau Beauté moisturizer her velvet skin.
Peruca knottless braids a vision that enchants.
Hundred fifty million pesos, I'd spend again.
All black hand tailored silk suit.
Black python skin shoes.
Black fedora with python strap.
Looking at my wife I'm not as good as you.
2022 G Wagon savage sand paint.
Black gold Rolex...
As though it was painted direct.
Her 9 inch crystal Stiletto.
Ninety Eight Million shes a boss respect.
Soleil Lalique Crystal Edition her fragrance.
Clé de Peau Beauté moisturizer her velvet skin.
Peruca knottless braids a vision that enchants.
Hundred fifty million pesos, I'd spend again.
All black hand tailored silk suit.
Black python skin shoes.
Black fedora with python strap.
Looking at my wife I'm not as good as you.
2022 G Wagon savage sand paint.
Black gold Rolex...
#love
#anniversary
#pregnancy
243 reads
1 Comment
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
31st Oct 2022 11:33pm
31st Oct 2022 11:33pm
What Will Survive Of Us Is Love
We burned you into little shells and stars
Melted fingers into perpetual prayer,
Blazed the manuscripts of our library.
In memoriam, set fire to the psalm breeze.
There is no other place where
Their ghosts can ever roam,
Than in our hearts’ mantelpiece.
The hearth will soon be a heath
Where no kites or birds fly.
In the unforgiving space between minds
Guillotined by Alzheimer blades,
Absence anvils the tender hearts:
Each hug is a final hug.
From Dad, the strength and compassion
From Mum, the fear and...
Melted fingers into perpetual prayer,
Blazed the manuscripts of our library.
In memoriam, set fire to the psalm breeze.
There is no other place where
Their ghosts can ever roam,
Than in our hearts’ mantelpiece.
The hearth will soon be a heath
Where no kites or birds fly.
In the unforgiving space between minds
Guillotined by Alzheimer blades,
Absence anvils the tender hearts:
Each hug is a final hug.
From Dad, the strength and compassion
From Mum, the fear and...
#hope
#death
#anniversary #LifeCycle
#anniversary #LifeCycle
238 reads
11 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
30th Oct 2022 9:31pm
30th Oct 2022 9:31pm
It Never Gets Old
Silently she drops to her knees
(thankful for padded carpet).
She still carries the graceful dancer
from earlier years though it’s more difficult now.
Yes, she’s been here before.
Exactly in this place.
Too many times to count.
She leans into his warmth and thinks,
it never gets old.
(thankful for padded carpet).
She still carries the graceful dancer
from earlier years though it’s more difficult now.
Yes, she’s been here before.
Exactly in this place.
Too many times to count.
She leans into his warmth and thinks,
it never gets old.
#anniversary
532 reads
5 Comments
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