Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
2nd Feb 2025 5:37am
2nd Feb 2025 5:37am
Void
I am void of passion
And starved of daydreams.
I am trapped by the mundane
And the sober.
I miss the willingness to burn
For what I loved
Even if it was terribly wrong
The only feeling I feel
So starkly
That there is nothing else
Is anger
My ever constant companion
Soldering under layers
Of facade so thick
I do not even remember
Why I am this way
And starved of daydreams.
I am trapped by the mundane
And the sober.
I miss the willingness to burn
For what I loved
Even if it was terribly wrong
The only feeling I feel
So starkly
That there is nothing else
Is anger
My ever constant companion
Soldering under layers
Of facade so thick
I do not even remember
Why I am this way
#anger
#sadness
#SelfReflection
90 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 3:15pm
1st Feb 2025 3:15pm
disrespectful
I'm unsure but I have to say I don't like being thrown in with a plageriser because I use an avatar as most of us do
my feelings are genunine and unique to me
attacking people for being private is bull
it's great you feel like putting your face online
but frankly alot of what I confess I couldn't do standing so bare
it's insulting to say that we are not real
I don't know what kind of day you're having but honestly you're wrong
you friend me on FB what for a day because my profile is private
you get what you needed from me then shut it down ...
my feelings are genunine and unique to me
attacking people for being private is bull
it's great you feel like putting your face online
but frankly alot of what I confess I couldn't do standing so bare
it's insulting to say that we are not real
I don't know what kind of day you're having but honestly you're wrong
you friend me on FB what for a day because my profile is private
you get what you needed from me then shut it down ...
#anger
305 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 11:46am
1st Feb 2025 11:46am
Pretentious People Suck!
I met this guy through friends
I decided to have them over my house a few days ago
He told me he was a philosopher
He said he was trained in school to be one
I asked him: trained like a circus clown or a soldier?
He didn't like that much
I decided to put a CD on
He asked me what CD it was
I told him it was a Motorhead album
Their 1982 album "Iron Fist"
He asked who that was
I told him Lemmy, the vocalist was a philosopher from England
He didn't like that line, or the music or his voice
He walked out of the...
I decided to have them over my house a few days ago
He told me he was a philosopher
He said he was trained in school to be one
I asked him: trained like a circus clown or a soldier?
He didn't like that much
I decided to put a CD on
He asked me what CD it was
I told him it was a Motorhead album
Their 1982 album "Iron Fist"
He asked who that was
I told him Lemmy, the vocalist was a philosopher from England
He didn't like that line, or the music or his voice
He walked out of the...
#anger
#music
#philosophical
113 reads
19 Comments
mdagedman
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 3:52am
1st Feb 2025 3:52am
Shed
A man is strong
A man is self reliant
A man is dutiful
Torn with pride in their comfort
He fights scarcity and darkness that surround them.
Alone and vigilant
While they peacefully slumber
Judging his own contempt
Longing for tenderness
A man is self reliant
A man is dutiful
Torn with pride in their comfort
He fights scarcity and darkness that surround them.
Alone and vigilant
While they peacefully slumber
Judging his own contempt
Longing for tenderness
#anger
#loneliness
#love
#masculinity
#responsibility
55 reads
0 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 1:41am
1st Feb 2025 1:41am
Geppetto
I am so happy that
You took me out of Isolation
And loneliness
Also you came
At the right time
When I needed
Somebody badly
In my life
Now I finally
Got to know you better
And you also
Got to know me better
I love your green eyes
That shines in the light
Every day
We spend a long time
Together
Also we go for a long
Walk in the area
I live in
And also we discover
What is available in the area
At the end of the day
Geppetto
Return to his home
And I return to mine
You took me out of Isolation
And loneliness
Also you came
At the right time
When I needed
Somebody badly
In my life
Now I finally
Got to know you better
And you also
Got to know me better
I love your green eyes
That shines in the light
Every day
We spend a long time
Together
Also we go for a long
Walk in the area
I live in
And also we discover
What is available in the area
At the end of the day
Geppetto
Return to his home
And I return to mine
#anger
#disappointment
#grief
#jealousy
#sadness
41 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 00:43am
29th Jan 2025 00:43am
unexplainable draw
Beneath the surface
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
#anger
#emotional
#hypocrisy
#lies
#passion
138 reads
6 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 7:05pm
26th Jan 2025 7:05pm
Black Rose
Why must we fight, day in, day out?
Let these be the last cruel words from your mouth.
Pushing me to the edge—this is no Morticia and Gomez tale,
Hatred in our eyes, each word a violent hail.
You once accused me of being a materialistic.
So I shattered everything, set the chaos in a swirl.
The TV—sliced with a knife,
That painting of love, torn from life.
I broke the dishes, screaming in pain,
Materialistic, I'll destroy it all in vain.
I don't care for what you've given me,
What matters now is all we...
Let these be the last cruel words from your mouth.
Pushing me to the edge—this is no Morticia and Gomez tale,
Hatred in our eyes, each word a violent hail.
You once accused me of being a materialistic.
So I shattered everything, set the chaos in a swirl.
The TV—sliced with a knife,
That painting of love, torn from life.
I broke the dishes, screaming in pain,
Materialistic, I'll destroy it all in vain.
I don't care for what you've given me,
What matters now is all we...
#anger
#disappointment
#frustration
#hate
#love
81 reads
1 Comment
johnnyscarlotti
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 4:48pm
26th Jan 2025 4:48pm
f**k utah [redux]
#anger
#dark
#frustration
#regret
#sadness
49 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 2:15pm
26th Jan 2025 2:15pm
Seek Search and Find
To seek we must search to find what is it that we need and what in our lives, 🙏 for it's true that we are creatures of habits. THAT sometimes we don't have a glue on what we need and want, due to the chaos and drama and confusion and madness hidden behind a mask as a disguise. YET to really be able to sustain this beautiful element known as life. We must sometimes take a leap of faith, yet still knowing what we do know is that what we've been getting isn't it at all. 😞 YET then we start to just settle for the wrong reasons, just to say that we have someone only to say I got a...
#anger
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#StreamOfConsciousness
95 reads
2 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 4:47am
26th Jan 2025 4:47am
Pigs In A Blanket
Sinderella coped with her emotions
Comforted by her princes devotion
But a fire burned over the situation
Retribution plotted with determination
Planning meticulously for revenge
The three little pigs they would avenge
A plan set forth, the trap was set
For this night they will never forget
Sinderella wandered the cold dark streets
Waiting to be spotted by the police
Slowly she pretended to stagger home
They followed closely into the unknown ...
Comforted by her princes devotion
But a fire burned over the situation
Retribution plotted with determination
Planning meticulously for revenge
The three little pigs they would avenge
A plan set forth, the trap was set
For this night they will never forget
Sinderella wandered the cold dark streets
Waiting to be spotted by the police
Slowly she pretended to stagger home
They followed closely into the unknown ...
#anger
#dark
179 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 12:15pm
25th Jan 2025 12:15pm
A method to the madness
For sure whatever is the reason there's always an responsible method, to the deepness of the madness, that you and I must truly understand that behind everything. There's a reaction with a raw and uncut point of consequence, that will affect us in ways. THAT sometimes don't make sense. 🤨 BUT yet it's still apart of us, through the process of the journey and travel and walk. THAT we must never forget how to navigate, through the process of what is happening in our lives. FOR sure everything, will stay with you in high sight of trying. Desperately to forget but you can't forget the...
#anger
#confusion
#grief
#hope
#love
96 reads
8 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 00:09am
25th Jan 2025 00:09am
They've been strong
They've been strong
For so long
Father
Also, they have a strong
Character
And also they are
Very proud of themselves
Father
Tell me why they should
Not be proud of themselves
Yes father
You are the one that
Made them
With your holy hands
And you gave them
The gift of life
Also, they are taking good care
Of their lives
And father you are keeping them
Alive every single day
Also, they never once complained
To you about their lives once
Also father you made for them
A sleeping...
For so long
Father
Also, they have a strong
Character
And also they are
Very proud of themselves
Father
Tell me why they should
Not be proud of themselves
Yes father
You are the one that
Made them
With your holy hands
And you gave them
The gift of life
Also, they are taking good care
Of their lives
And father you are keeping them
Alive every single day
Also, they never once complained
To you about their lives once
Also father you made for them
A sleeping...
#anger
#anxiety
#disappointment
#jealousy
#loneliness
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