Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PAR
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:43am
Yesterday 00:43am
unexplainable draw
Beneath the surface
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
there's a blackhole of secrets
where trust was devoured
by the gravity of lies.
A smile, a porcelain mask,
delicate and fragile,
concealing the cracks
of betrayal beneath.
Each word spoken,
an origami fold,
Intricate and beautiful.
Battles within the hearts.
Yet a cuckoo's call
that echoed
as the whirlpool's pull
became too strong to resist.
#anger
#emotional
#hypocrisy
#lies
#passion
62 reads
6 Comments
BatPowers
Bat Powers
Bat Powers
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 7:56pm
26th Jan 2025 7:56pm
Pen to Paper
A land that's been invaded
by hate and vitriol
with my left hand i stand waving
high school band passes by
is that flag tattered
failing in the wind
or torn apart
by favors
that will take us to our end
right hand over my heart
loyalty to a king
not a chance
not my trance
they will open your eyes
to the pain
While they ban the pages
we write more
blasphemy to the power
come knocking on your door
hands are tools of precision
minds sharp and strong
here we write the...
by hate and vitriol
with my left hand i stand waving
high school band passes by
is that flag tattered
failing in the wind
or torn apart
by favors
that will take us to our end
right hand over my heart
loyalty to a king
not a chance
not my trance
they will open your eyes
to the pain
While they ban the pages
we write more
blasphemy to the power
come knocking on your door
hands are tools of precision
minds sharp and strong
here we write the...
#anger
#grief
46 reads
6 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 7:05pm
26th Jan 2025 7:05pm
Black Rose
Why must we fight, day in, day out?
Let these be the last cruel words from your mouth.
Pushing me to the edge—this is no Morticia and Gomez tale,
Hatred in our eyes, each word a violent hail.
You once accused me of being a materialistic.
So I shattered everything, set the chaos in a swirl.
The TV—sliced with a knife,
That painting of love, torn from life.
I broke the dishes, screaming in pain,
Materialistic, I'll destroy it all in vain.
I don't care for what you've given me,
What matters now is all we...
Let these be the last cruel words from your mouth.
Pushing me to the edge—this is no Morticia and Gomez tale,
Hatred in our eyes, each word a violent hail.
You once accused me of being a materialistic.
So I shattered everything, set the chaos in a swirl.
The TV—sliced with a knife,
That painting of love, torn from life.
I broke the dishes, screaming in pain,
Materialistic, I'll destroy it all in vain.
I don't care for what you've given me,
What matters now is all we...
#anger
#disappointment
#frustration
#hate
#love
56 reads
1 Comment
johnnyscarlotti
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 4:48pm
26th Jan 2025 4:48pm
f**k utah [redux]
#anger
#dark
#frustration
#regret
#sadness
32 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 2:15pm
26th Jan 2025 2:15pm
Seek Search and Find
To seek we must search to find what is it that we need and what in our lives, 🙏 for it's true that we are creatures of habits. THAT sometimes we don't have a glue on what we need and want, due to the chaos and drama and confusion and madness hidden behind a mask as a disguise. YET to really be able to sustain this beautiful element known as life. We must sometimes take a leap of faith, yet still knowing what we do know is that what we've been getting isn't it at all. 😞 YET then we start to just settle for the wrong reasons, just to say that we have someone only to say I got a...
#anger
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#StreamOfConsciousness
52 reads
2 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 4:47am
26th Jan 2025 4:47am
Pigs In A Blanket
Sinderella coped with her emotions
Comforted by her princes devotion
But a fire burned over the situation
Retribution plotted with determination
Planning meticulously for revenge
The three little pigs they would avenge
A plan set forth, the trap was set
For this night they will never forget
Sinderella wandered the cold dark streets
Waiting to be spotted by the police
Slowly she pretended to stagger home
They followed closely into the unknown
She fumbled around with her keys
Falling...
Comforted by her princes devotion
But a fire burned over the situation
Retribution plotted with determination
Planning meticulously for revenge
The three little pigs they would avenge
A plan set forth, the trap was set
For this night they will never forget
Sinderella wandered the cold dark streets
Waiting to be spotted by the police
Slowly she pretended to stagger home
They followed closely into the unknown
She fumbled around with her keys
Falling...
#anger
#dark
70 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 12:15pm
25th Jan 2025 12:15pm
A method to the madness
For sure whatever is the reason there's always an responsible method, to the deepness of the madness, that you and I must truly understand that behind everything. There's a reaction with a raw and uncut point of consequence, that will affect us in ways. THAT sometimes don't make sense. 🤨 BUT yet it's still apart of us, through the process of the journey and travel and walk. THAT we must never forget how to navigate, through the process of what is happening in our lives. FOR sure everything, will stay with you in high sight of trying. Desperately to forget but you can't forget the...
#anger
#confusion
#grief
#hope
#love
68 reads
8 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 00:09am
25th Jan 2025 00:09am
They've been strong
They've been strong
For so long
Father
Also, they have a strong
Character
And also they are
Very proud of themselves
Father
Tell me why they should
Not be proud of themselves
Yes father
You are the one that
Made them
With your holy hands
And you gave them
The gift of life
Also, they are taking good care
Of their lives
And father you are keeping them
Alive every single day
Also, they never once complained
To you about their lives once
Also father you made for them
A sleeping...
For so long
Father
Also, they have a strong
Character
And also they are
Very proud of themselves
Father
Tell me why they should
Not be proud of themselves
Yes father
You are the one that
Made them
With your holy hands
And you gave them
The gift of life
Also, they are taking good care
Of their lives
And father you are keeping them
Alive every single day
Also, they never once complained
To you about their lives once
Also father you made for them
A sleeping...
#anger
#anxiety
#disappointment
#jealousy
#loneliness
23 reads
0 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 9:15pm
24th Jan 2025 9:15pm
Hunm
One unruly truth about this life we tread
Where whispers gather when backs are turned instead
is that.. people, family, friends; a familiar tide
Ganging up behind; where shadows hide
They spew their tales; this and that they claim
Calling you reckless; tarnishing your name
Your flaws they tally; your worth they erase
Blind to the battles you silently face
They know not the weight your shoulders have borne
The nights you’ve weathered; weary and worn
Through storms unyielding; you’ve held your own
A fortress of will; though...
Where whispers gather when backs are turned instead
is that.. people, family, friends; a familiar tide
Ganging up behind; where shadows hide
They spew their tales; this and that they claim
Calling you reckless; tarnishing your name
Your flaws they tally; your worth they erase
Blind to the battles you silently face
They know not the weight your shoulders have borne
The nights you’ve weathered; weary and worn
Through storms unyielding; you’ve held your own
A fortress of will; though...
#anger
#LifeStruggles
#sadness
45 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 5:22am
24th Jan 2025 5:22am
Why some just don't get it
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ Now Let's take a moment to analyze something, that has been going on way to long, to the point it hides behind close doors away from peeking eyes 👁️👁️ For example have you ever been in a relationship, that started off with good vibes and good intentions. But yet as it slowly begins to pass on through, the process of getting, to know each other. THINGS began to take, a evil turn not for the betterment of life, and the relationship but it became a living hell just to survive. What I'm saying is that...
#anger
#dark
#disappointment
#emptiness
#heartbroken
57 reads
0 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 1:48am
22nd Jan 2025 1:48am
What Hell Exists Today
Waking up each day painfully
To the misery of my existence
Life looking at me disdainfully
Heart and mind fading resistance
Every minute of every day
Obstacles challenge me religiously
I just want to run away
Doubting what's real suspiciously
How is any of this possible
Having so many broken dreams
My success once felt unstoppable
Now consumed by nightmarish screams
The cards all stacked against me
Its impossible to get ahead
Walls closing in on my reality
Only ambition now is being dead
...
To the misery of my existence
Life looking at me disdainfully
Heart and mind fading resistance
Every minute of every day
Obstacles challenge me religiously
I just want to run away
Doubting what's real suspiciously
How is any of this possible
Having so many broken dreams
My success once felt unstoppable
Now consumed by nightmarish screams
The cards all stacked against me
Its impossible to get ahead
Walls closing in on my reality
Only ambition now is being dead
...
#anger
#disappointment
#emptiness
#frustration
#shame
69 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
21st Jan 2025 2:19pm
21st Jan 2025 2:19pm
Orange Felon
Orange Felon
As the story goes
It was 4 years ago
An orange felon with a pen
Wiped away all their sins
Cops were beaten down
With flagpoles bear spray and batons
Now those criminals go free
Where is the justice for the we
The police endorsed an orange felon
I don’t hear any outrage from them
I guess it’s ok if your on the orange side
If your not you must abide by the guide
Not even one day in the White House
As Elon gives a Roman salute not once but twice
Proud boys and...
As the story goes
It was 4 years ago
An orange felon with a pen
Wiped away all their sins
Cops were beaten down
With flagpoles bear spray and batons
Now those criminals go free
Where is the justice for the we
The police endorsed an orange felon
I don’t hear any outrage from them
I guess it’s ok if your on the orange side
If your not you must abide by the guide
Not even one day in the White House
As Elon gives a Roman salute not once but twice
Proud boys and...
#anger
#ignorance
#inequality
#shame
#violence
45 reads
0 Comments
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