Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Koulouri
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:02pm
Yesterday 11:02pm
I still have a bitter taste in my mouth
Oh,
how bitter time makes us.
I have reflected and reviewed
each moment
every second
between us.
I used to feel sad.
Guilt like a weighted blanket.
Now I am mad.
Enraged.
I think about
how you didn't even see me.
My words wasted
on a greedy mind.
Oh, how I crave for you to know,
how you have cursed me.
Yet I doubt you have
even thought
about me
since I left.
It's too late now.
And I still worry.
What if you have grown?
What if...
how bitter time makes us.
I have reflected and reviewed
each moment
every second
between us.
I used to feel sad.
Guilt like a weighted blanket.
Now I am mad.
Enraged.
I think about
how you didn't even see me.
My words wasted
on a greedy mind.
Oh, how I crave for you to know,
how you have cursed me.
Yet I doubt you have
even thought
about me
since I left.
It's too late now.
And I still worry.
What if you have grown?
What if...
#anger
#hate
#MovingOn
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PAR
Poem Published
Yesterday 11:53am
Yesterday 11:53am
lack of appetite
this is faint-astic
and in-cunt-prehensible
way out of the real cap a city
give some room
to the space extent range
in the scope of a hole sun of a compass
sorry, no pun intended...
die, motherfucker, die.
and in-cunt-prehensible
way out of the real cap a city
give some room
to the space extent range
in the scope of a hole sun of a compass
sorry, no pun intended...
die, motherfucker, die.
#anger
#anxiety
#conflict
#myself
#violence
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4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:56am
Yesterday 6:56am
Off of the Tint
See the reflection
Off of the tint
Bloody violence is the scene
Feeling Dakota in the big apple
One who walks among angels of music
Just laid down a new track
Watching the wheels spinning
As he gets into the limousine
Sittin beside him is his lady
No she didn’t break up the Beatles
She’s his companion
Through this twisted world
Skin on skin with baby Sean
Beautiful boy waiting upstairs
Pulls the handle steps out
He’s a gentleman so ...
Off of the tint
Bloody violence is the scene
Feeling Dakota in the big apple
One who walks among angels of music
Just laid down a new track
Watching the wheels spinning
As he gets into the limousine
Sittin beside him is his lady
No she didn’t break up the Beatles
She’s his companion
Through this twisted world
Skin on skin with baby Sean
Beautiful boy waiting upstairs
Pulls the handle steps out
He’s a gentleman so ...
#anger
#despair
#emptiness
#GunControl
#murder
35 reads
2 Comments
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 2:34am
11th Nov 2024 2:34am
Sick Algorithm
Another unbalanced calculation
That's keeping you out of the equation
A formula that is rather puzzling
Enjoying while they watch your struggling
Controlling your life, the rich and elites
A vicious cycle that constantly repeats
Feeding addictions corruption and greed
Tears are never cried when they see you bleed
These people sadly consumed by power
They have no remorse, your soul they devour
Eating you up before spitting you out
They take everything leaving you without
You are just a number in their...
That's keeping you out of the equation
A formula that is rather puzzling
Enjoying while they watch your struggling
Controlling your life, the rich and elites
A vicious cycle that constantly repeats
Feeding addictions corruption and greed
Tears are never cried when they see you bleed
These people sadly consumed by power
They have no remorse, your soul they devour
Eating you up before spitting you out
They take everything leaving you without
You are just a number in their...
#anger
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 6:33pm
10th Nov 2024 6:33pm
1:19 PM
I even forgot about the restaurant
That is opening today
On my street
That is not something that I will die for
A free hamburger
And I believe there is a catch to it
Because nothing is free in this world
That is opening today
On my street
That is not something that I will die for
A free hamburger
And I believe there is a catch to it
Because nothing is free in this world
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#emptiness
#rejection
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
10th Nov 2024 1:12am
10th Nov 2024 1:12am
She will never walk alone
She will never walk alone
She has God on her life
She will never walk alone
God is on her side
She will never walk alone
Because God is always watching out for her
She will never walk alone
Because she has a friend that is God
She will never walk alone
She has someone who loves her and that someone is God
She will never walk alone
Because God is a good friend of her
She will never walk alone
She will always have someone to keep her company
And that someone is God
She will never walk alone
She has God on her life
She will never walk alone
God is on her side
She will never walk alone
Because God is always watching out for her
She will never walk alone
Because she has a friend that is God
She will never walk alone
She has someone who loves her and that someone is God
She will never walk alone
Because God is a good friend of her
She will never walk alone
She will always have someone to keep her company
And that someone is God
She will never walk alone
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#bittersweet
#loneliness
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 12:22pm
9th Nov 2024 12:22pm
350 days in a year
350 days in a year
To dream
At night
350 days in a year
To go out and make friends
350 days in a year
To change your life style
By eating foods that are good for you
Because junk food is bad for you
350 days in a year
To follow your daily routine
Because you should have a routine by now
To dream
At night
350 days in a year
To go out and make friends
350 days in a year
To change your life style
By eating foods that are good for you
Because junk food is bad for you
350 days in a year
To follow your daily routine
Because you should have a routine by now
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#emptiness
#regret
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 12:18pm
9th Nov 2024 12:18pm
Don’t cry for me Africa
Don’t cry for me Africa
Because I will never let you out of my mind
I hear your voices people of Africa
I hear your cries people of Africa
I see pain in your eyes people of Africa
It is hard to describe what you people of Africa are going through
Poverty strikes you all people of Africa
Don’t cry for me Africa
Because I will keep you in my prayers people of Africa
Power to the people of Africa
People of Africa lift your spirit higher
Lord is the light and truth people of Africa
The Lord sends you a message from his heart to you...
Because I will never let you out of my mind
I hear your voices people of Africa
I hear your cries people of Africa
I see pain in your eyes people of Africa
It is hard to describe what you people of Africa are going through
Poverty strikes you all people of Africa
Don’t cry for me Africa
Because I will keep you in my prayers people of Africa
Power to the people of Africa
People of Africa lift your spirit higher
Lord is the light and truth people of Africa
The Lord sends you a message from his heart to you...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 11:01am
9th Nov 2024 11:01am
Extreme Little Big Man Syndrome
Here comes the little man
He's really fucking short
Bitter from an early age
Wasn't born a midget or even a dwarf
Never liked having to look up
Every time he needed to speak
They assumed he was an overgrown kid
He's about the height of someone's ass cheeks
Angry little man takes revenge
On the world that wronged him
Doesn't like the short jokes
Wished often for longer limbs
One day while working at his menial job
He snapped and kidnaps the secretary
A fairly attractive woman
Ties her up, gags her, oh...
He's really fucking short
Bitter from an early age
Wasn't born a midget or even a dwarf
Never liked having to look up
Every time he needed to speak
They assumed he was an overgrown kid
He's about the height of someone's ass cheeks
Angry little man takes revenge
On the world that wronged him
Doesn't like the short jokes
Wished often for longer limbs
One day while working at his menial job
He snapped and kidnaps the secretary
A fairly attractive woman
Ties her up, gags her, oh...
#anger
#funny
#identity
#MentalHealth
#rhyming
61 reads
11 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 9:19pm
8th Nov 2024 9:19pm
Cheese Trap of the Slut Ho
You’re not my girl no mo-I don’t even want you as a side ho’
Raise the fuck up bitch-you gotta go,
“No more good times, no more freaky lovin
Time to get semi bitch-so start truckin,
“Now you want me in your ass and pushing deep in your shit
But what I told you baby-you gets no mo dick,
“When we was together anal you never wanted to do
Now you giving it up anyway I want, because we’re through,
“Get off your knees and release your ass cheeks
Get like a garbage truck and hit the motherfuckin streets,
“Gather...
Raise the fuck up bitch-you gotta go,
“No more good times, no more freaky lovin
Time to get semi bitch-so start truckin,
“Now you want me in your ass and pushing deep in your shit
But what I told you baby-you gets no mo dick,
“When we was together anal you never wanted to do
Now you giving it up anyway I want, because we’re through,
“Get off your knees and release your ass cheeks
Get like a garbage truck and hit the motherfuckin streets,
“Gather...
#anger
#disappointment
#MovingOn
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2 Comments
REMARKABLE_8
RichyRich
RichyRich
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 11:11pm
7th Nov 2024 11:11pm
Diary of an angry Blackman "
Why is it that the black people don't own the land or property on which they live!!
Working hard everyday, in everyway just to give in order to be able to live!
Working the 1st Monday, Tuesday, an Wednesday, for the landlord then Thursday Working for Con-Ed, got me upset 😡 and fed!!
Fed-up with this mess and all this bullshit ass stress, then on Friday my day I'm working for myself just to have a payday!
To try and enjoy myself, an on my off day on a Saturday, soon as I take my first drink and whined up drunk, cops...
Working hard everyday, in everyway just to give in order to be able to live!
Working the 1st Monday, Tuesday, an Wednesday, for the landlord then Thursday Working for Con-Ed, got me upset 😡 and fed!!
Fed-up with this mess and all this bullshit ass stress, then on Friday my day I'm working for myself just to have a payday!
To try and enjoy myself, an on my off day on a Saturday, soon as I take my first drink and whined up drunk, cops...
#anger
#bittersweet
#disappointment
#frustration
#regret
53 reads
4 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
7th Nov 2024 11:07pm
Walks in the beach
Yes I love walks in the beach
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
First thing in the morning
When there is nobody
Else around
Early in the summer
It is very soothing
Hearing the sound of the water
#anger
#apathy
#bittersweet
#boredom
#shame
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