Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
doriann_barrere
Dorian
Dorian
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 9:53pm
8th Mar 2025 9:53pm
What Happened Was Morbid
what happened was morbid ...
Lo, they did unmake his visage, not with blade alone,
but with the cruel mirth of fate’s fell hand.
A rictus, wide as grief, as hollow as the jest
that in dark halls is whispered ‘twixt wretched men.
Was it his own trembling grasp that traced the fault?
Or some wraith of malice, unseen but keen of touch?
The steel sang not as warriors’ swords do sing,
but in hush’d susurrus, a lull’d and mocking dirge.
The lips that spake of mercy found none,
but were rather parted in twain, a wound unsealing ...
Lo, they did unmake his visage, not with blade alone,
but with the cruel mirth of fate’s fell hand.
A rictus, wide as grief, as hollow as the jest
that in dark halls is whispered ‘twixt wretched men.
Was it his own trembling grasp that traced the fault?
Or some wraith of malice, unseen but keen of touch?
The steel sang not as warriors’ swords do sing,
but in hush’d susurrus, a lull’d and mocking dirge.
The lips that spake of mercy found none,
but were rather parted in twain, a wound unsealing ...
#anger
#anxiety
#apathy
#despair
#frustration
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Alviola
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 7:44pm
8th Mar 2025 7:44pm
Conflagration
I was roused from sleep that night,
an awakening that was
like the jab of a nightmare.
With heart pounding, I wobbled
toward the door, then I stopped—
the commotion was outside.
Cautious now, I creaked it
open and sirens rushed in.
Barefoot on spiky, wet grass,
I reached the fence and tiptoed,
I felt the heat on my face
saw the skyline set aflame.
America is burning.
an awakening that was
like the jab of a nightmare.
With heart pounding, I wobbled
toward the door, then I stopped—
the commotion was outside.
Cautious now, I creaked it
open and sirens rushed in.
Barefoot on spiky, wet grass,
I reached the fence and tiptoed,
I felt the heat on my face
saw the skyline set aflame.
America is burning.
#anger
#greed
#ignorance
#sadness
#suffering
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 4:01pm
7th Mar 2025 4:01pm
The Narcissist Monologue - "God , King / Nothing"
I am the sun. They orbit me.
(They should.)
(They do.)
If they don’t—
(well. I fix that.)
What is truth but the story I tell?
What is memory but what I say happened?
What is love but control wrapped in silk?
(I am good.)
(I am kind.)
(I am the victim, aren’t I?)
—they’re so sensitive.
twist a word, they shatter.
say nothing, they shatter.
must I do everything?
they would be nothing without me.
they should thank me, really.
(they do. they should. they must.) ...
(They should.)
(They do.)
If they don’t—
(well. I fix that.)
What is truth but the story I tell?
What is memory but what I say happened?
What is love but control wrapped in silk?
(I am good.)
(I am kind.)
(I am the victim, aren’t I?)
—they’re so sensitive.
twist a word, they shatter.
say nothing, they shatter.
must I do everything?
they would be nothing without me.
they should thank me, really.
(they do. they should. they must.) ...
#anger
#dark
#denial #emptiness
#denial #emptiness
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EveAteRedApples
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 1:03am
7th Mar 2025 1:03am
No, no, keep it in your pants
Sometimes I swear
you look at me
and think
you know what our relationship
really needs? more dysfunction
And you fuck off to la la land
like I don't exist for anything
more than eye candy
and my half of the rent
The last time you took me
on a date
you complained you spent
too much money
after you wouldn't let
me split it
because being a provider
makes you feel manly
But I gotta say
you know what's not manly?
treating your lover like
a sexual...
you look at me
and think
you know what our relationship
really needs? more dysfunction
And you fuck off to la la land
like I don't exist for anything
more than eye candy
and my half of the rent
The last time you took me
on a date
you complained you spent
too much money
after you wouldn't let
me split it
because being a provider
makes you feel manly
But I gotta say
you know what's not manly?
treating your lover like
a sexual...
#anger
#disappointment
#lover
69 reads
6 Comments
poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 11:37pm
6th Mar 2025 11:37pm
Someone like me
Someone like me
You won't find anywhere else
I Iive on earth
And I enjoy living on earth
There are people
That are trying to change me
They say that is not good
For me to be a Christian
Also they want me to be perfect
I will never be that
Because I have my faults also
You won't find anywhere else
I Iive on earth
And I enjoy living on earth
There are people
That are trying to change me
They say that is not good
For me to be a Christian
Also they want me to be perfect
I will never be that
Because I have my faults also
#anger
#boredom
#despair
#heartbroken
#shame
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HadesRising
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 2:58am
6th Mar 2025 2:58am
THE UNWANTED
I am the last man standing
When all of my demons are trapped inside
Just a reliquary of life's bullshit
Haunting just like bazaar of nightmares
Incarcerated in diabolical design
A motherfucking monster in this mirror of mine
I'm at the straight razor shrine
Finger on the trigger and a foot on the landmine
On the left hand path, walking
And kicking the skulls who thought that
They were superior to anyone else
They didn't give a fuck so why should I
I am the Unwanted
Who never wanted to fit your schemes
I...
When all of my demons are trapped inside
Just a reliquary of life's bullshit
Haunting just like bazaar of nightmares
Incarcerated in diabolical design
A motherfucking monster in this mirror of mine
I'm at the straight razor shrine
Finger on the trigger and a foot on the landmine
On the left hand path, walking
And kicking the skulls who thought that
They were superior to anyone else
They didn't give a fuck so why should I
I am the Unwanted
Who never wanted to fit your schemes
I...
#anger
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Koulouri
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 9:44pm
5th Mar 2025 9:44pm
Pop.
Jealously coils like snakes around my head,
whispering and flicking tongues in my ear.
My knees feel weak,
the brittleness of my bones shake with regret.
Fear covers my skin like a cold shower,
the walls feel so close and so far.
my stomach feels full with so much anger,
I sense bitter bile rising.
Saddness is in my throat
I cough it up from the bottom of my lungs.
I push my fingers into my skull,
hoping to pressure it into happiness.
Or to squeeze till I pop,
like an ugly old pimple.
One that's just ready...
whispering and flicking tongues in my ear.
My knees feel weak,
the brittleness of my bones shake with regret.
Fear covers my skin like a cold shower,
the walls feel so close and so far.
my stomach feels full with so much anger,
I sense bitter bile rising.
Saddness is in my throat
I cough it up from the bottom of my lungs.
I push my fingers into my skull,
hoping to pressure it into happiness.
Or to squeeze till I pop,
like an ugly old pimple.
One that's just ready...
#anger
#anxiety
#depression #fear
#depression #fear
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xthan
Poem Published
5th Mar 2025 2:16pm
5th Mar 2025 2:16pm
Fangs
It was sickening having to
look straight in their eyes
no lights were on, dead
to everything in existence,
known eyes like that before
and they never leave you
alone afterwards.
All I had was an insolated room,
they couldn't unlock their side
of the door only my keys could,
if was alone, in that small room,
I couldn't bare to think what my
hands could have, would
have done.
I imagine something along
the lines of tearing limbs away,
crumbling them down like dust
wings...
look straight in their eyes
no lights were on, dead
to everything in existence,
known eyes like that before
and they never leave you
alone afterwards.
All I had was an insolated room,
they couldn't unlock their side
of the door only my keys could,
if was alone, in that small room,
I couldn't bare to think what my
hands could have, would
have done.
I imagine something along
the lines of tearing limbs away,
crumbling them down like dust
wings...
#abuse
#anger
#LGBT #transgender
#LGBT #transgender
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fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 8:05pm
3rd Mar 2025 8:05pm
I DONT GIVE A f**k!
Don’t give a fuck
What you want and how you want it
You will not get from me
Burger King is not my name
Not giving two fucks
If a march broke out
And you ass was there
I would gather all those
Sweet, daisies and rammed
So far up your ass. You would
See my manicured hand in your mouth
Three fucks not givin
This is not meant to be non violent
Martin is not my King at the moment
Malcolm said by any means necessary
How's a Sig Sauer P226 sound?
Necessary?
If this was just a one...
What you want and how you want it
You will not get from me
Burger King is not my name
Not giving two fucks
If a march broke out
And you ass was there
I would gather all those
Sweet, daisies and rammed
So far up your ass. You would
See my manicured hand in your mouth
Three fucks not givin
This is not meant to be non violent
Martin is not my King at the moment
Malcolm said by any means necessary
How's a Sig Sauer P226 sound?
Necessary?
If this was just a one...
#anger
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poet5678
CHUCKLES 123
CHUCKLES 123
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 00:05am
3rd Mar 2025 00:05am
I can't feel it
I can't feel it
That I am going on
To my manic state
I know that I am
Starting to be angry at people
I know that people starting to
Avoid me
Because they also feel hurt
They also are afraid that I
Can do something bad to them
I am trying very hard to control
My anger
That is something that I must do
Urgent
Also, I am not getting a proper
Sleep
The truth is that I need my full
Sleep every day
Now I know that my mind is foggy
I am also afraid that I could lose
My friends
And become alone...
That I am going on
To my manic state
I know that I am
Starting to be angry at people
I know that people starting to
Avoid me
Because they also feel hurt
They also are afraid that I
Can do something bad to them
I am trying very hard to control
My anger
That is something that I must do
Urgent
Also, I am not getting a proper
Sleep
The truth is that I need my full
Sleep every day
Now I know that my mind is foggy
I am also afraid that I could lose
My friends
And become alone...
#anger
#apathy
#disappointment
#emptiness
#jealousy
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
2nd Mar 2025 4:06pm
Upper-Class Low-Life
There's nothing I would do for you
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
You're a real scum bag
All you do is nag
Kiss my ass you goddamn fool
Go fuck yourself and I'll fuck your wife too!
The pile of shit is decorated for you to consume
Degradation
Accept the invitation
Your a shit sucking butt fucking disaster, now go to your room
Lick the dick you inherited between your ass cheeks!
Your nose is deep up corporate's ass
Are you his puppy?
I hate yuppies
Nobody gets a free pass
You look pathetic enough to...
#anger
#CallToAction
#corruption
#greed
#lies
99 reads
16 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 2:37pm
2nd Mar 2025 2:37pm
Let's stop pretending
From then to now what changed before our eyes 👁️👁️ As we are facing the truth of the deepness of the nonsense, that seems to take over what we see and hear 😞 YET it seems that there is no escaping from the negativity, and drama and confusion of some people's, mindset, as well as we see their heart has become bitter and cold as ice. For sure we use to be able to connect, on a positive level of common sense with intelligent, and knowledge with deep inner conversations 😞 YET that seems not to exist anymore, for now it's has become a thing of the...
#anger
#confusion
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#regret
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