Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique
#anger
Poems about anger seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Friends
Pain creates anger
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
#anger
#friendship
#oppression
#haiku
#support
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Done
#anger
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The Beast Has Risen
You wanted the teeth
You wanted the claws
When I came close
You put me behind bars
I don’t know what you thought
I don’t know what you’re thinking
I don’t give a shit
What you’ve been drinking
This is the monster
Since the day she was born
The beast came alive
Like a perfect storm
You wanted me to kneel
You wanted me to beg
When I looked up
This is what you said
“I came to you
And gave you the words
Gave you the sweetness
And this shit occurs
Words
Words ...
You wanted the claws
When I came close
You put me behind bars
I don’t know what you thought
I don’t know what you’re thinking
I don’t give a shit
What you’ve been drinking
This is the monster
Since the day she was born
The beast came alive
Like a perfect storm
You wanted me to kneel
You wanted me to beg
When I looked up
This is what you said
“I came to you
And gave you the words
Gave you the sweetness
And this shit occurs
Words
Words ...
#anger
#betrayal
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Pheonix Rises
Every day you tell me
What I
shouldn’t
couldn’t
wouldn’t do
And this may
Holds true for you
But I
Can
Will
And wont comply.
What you deem for me
in this life
I rise everyday
and do what I must
With little complaints
And sometimes I fuss
For you to stand
Infront of me
And dictate
What you want me to be
Will not go well
For you today
I showed you who I was
In every way
So I’m going to tell you
How this will end
With my hand on this...
What I
shouldn’t
couldn’t
wouldn’t do
And this may
Holds true for you
But I
Can
Will
And wont comply.
What you deem for me
in this life
I rise everyday
and do what I must
With little complaints
And sometimes I fuss
For you to stand
Infront of me
And dictate
What you want me to be
Will not go well
For you today
I showed you who I was
In every way
So I’m going to tell you
How this will end
With my hand on this...
#anger
#frustration
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You make me feel like death
You make me feel like death
End of the road
Out of breath
You make me wanna scream
Hating myself
Killing all my dreams
You make me feel so angsty
Feathers all ruffled
Frustrated and angry
You make me wanna kill
Lost all my hopes
Passed out on a hill
You make me wanna cry
Who the fuck are you
And why can’t you go and die
I can’t believe you’ve done this
Are you really this much of a bitch
I can’t believe you’re this abusive
I’m just trying to survive
Just...
End of the road
Out of breath
You make me wanna scream
Hating myself
Killing all my dreams
You make me feel so angsty
Feathers all ruffled
Frustrated and angry
You make me wanna kill
Lost all my hopes
Passed out on a hill
You make me wanna cry
Who the fuck are you
And why can’t you go and die
I can’t believe you’ve done this
Are you really this much of a bitch
I can’t believe you’re this abusive
I’m just trying to survive
Just...
#anger
#frustration
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Burnt Canary
In the inky nighty veil, blood curdling screams,
Red and black, the colors of death's themes.
Once united, me and you
now torn apart, your fingers,
like claws, rip my heart.
Trusted you, in the light of day,
Now shattered, a million pieces stray.
Fire and smoke, burning flesh's pain,
In ashes, I dwell, in bitter disdain.
I am the Burning Canary, choked by despair,
Retribution's shadow, let me collect my debt.
From the powdery ashes, rises my call,
In flames of vengeance, I stand tall.
I AM THE BURNTCANARY
Red and black, the colors of death's themes.
Once united, me and you
now torn apart, your fingers,
like claws, rip my heart.
Trusted you, in the light of day,
Now shattered, a million pieces stray.
Fire and smoke, burning flesh's pain,
In ashes, I dwell, in bitter disdain.
I am the Burning Canary, choked by despair,
Retribution's shadow, let me collect my debt.
From the powdery ashes, rises my call,
In flames of vengeance, I stand tall.
I AM THE BURNTCANARY
#anger
#dark
#heartbroken #disappointment
#heartbroken #disappointment
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Splitting
She has an aura, it blows peace into the air
Recall the moment you step out into the spring dawn, after yesterday’s rain
Inhale… exhale out, you are grounded.
She exudes the essence of that very spring.
You can’t help but feel the attraction of her presence.
She is magnetic. Magical.
A walking daydream, in fair skin
Then,
Without a formal notice,
She is the storm that might’ve hit the day before, to drown your delightful morning.
Well, she wound back time, somehow.
She is destruction in passive, and sometimes assertive motion ...
Recall the moment you step out into the spring dawn, after yesterday’s rain
Inhale… exhale out, you are grounded.
She exudes the essence of that very spring.
You can’t help but feel the attraction of her presence.
She is magnetic. Magical.
A walking daydream, in fair skin
Then,
Without a formal notice,
She is the storm that might’ve hit the day before, to drown your delightful morning.
Well, she wound back time, somehow.
She is destruction in passive, and sometimes assertive motion ...
#anger
#MentalHealth
#confusion
#emotional
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Coming hunting
You stand there
You’re smiling
Acting like
Everything’s fine then
But really
You hurt me
Not once or twice
But everyday
For eternity
You’re cold and cruel
Taken me for a fool
How could I love
A fool such as yourself
You don’t know me
You never did
Just liked to play games
With this
Poorly head
Don’t underestimate
The lengths to which
I will take
To get back close to you
To cause revenge on you
You are twisted
You are harsh ...
You’re smiling
Acting like
Everything’s fine then
But really
You hurt me
Not once or twice
But everyday
For eternity
You’re cold and cruel
Taken me for a fool
How could I love
A fool such as yourself
You don’t know me
You never did
Just liked to play games
With this
Poorly head
Don’t underestimate
The lengths to which
I will take
To get back close to you
To cause revenge on you
You are twisted
You are harsh ...
#anger
#relationships
#hurt #NaPoWriMo2024
#hurt #NaPoWriMo2024
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Let's Get Cynical, Cynical...Again
I despise people who are two-faced liars
They pretend to be something they’re not
They get mad when the truth is too hot handle
Then change the narrative when they get caught
I dislike individuals who are duplicitous
They smile but talk smack behind your back
Acting nice in one place but toxic in another
They’re narrative is a bunch of poppycock
And if they get political
It’s cynical
They’re so hypocritical
It’s miserable
I don’t want to hear that gaudy talk
Nope, I don’t want to hear that bawdy talk
I get...
They pretend to be something they’re not
They get mad when the truth is too hot handle
Then change the narrative when they get caught
I dislike individuals who are duplicitous
They smile but talk smack behind your back
Acting nice in one place but toxic in another
They’re narrative is a bunch of poppycock
And if they get political
It’s cynical
They’re so hypocritical
It’s miserable
I don’t want to hear that gaudy talk
Nope, I don’t want to hear that bawdy talk
I get...
#anger
#funny
#frustration #disappointment
#frustration #disappointment
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Middle Hand Man
I give them all, my
Middle of the hand
Those weaving together
The fringes of our morality
Scrawling down in stone
Our words before they sway
Those entrappers, tricksters
I do despise
Beware, you self-indulgent somber prisoners of exile
Beware, hunters of plastic thrills that patchwork their voids
Ministers pit you both in opposition, erasing grey areas
May they have spiritual immolation and be charred to ash
Watch out for the menaces
Militancy behind those smiles
Operators closely standing by
In...
Middle of the hand
Those weaving together
The fringes of our morality
Scrawling down in stone
Our words before they sway
Those entrappers, tricksters
I do despise
Beware, you self-indulgent somber prisoners of exile
Beware, hunters of plastic thrills that patchwork their voids
Ministers pit you both in opposition, erasing grey areas
May they have spiritual immolation and be charred to ash
Watch out for the menaces
Militancy behind those smiles
Operators closely standing by
In...
#anger
#hate
#humankind
#frustration
#NaPoWriMo2024
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Navalny On Jeopardy
2/30
“Listen, I’ve got something very obvious to tell you. You’re not allowed to give up.
If they decide to kill me, it means that we are incredibly strong." ~ Navalny
(Quoted by our own Ahavati)
When I think of him, his last day,
I think of him there in the courtroom
behind the shatter-proof glass
grinning at Putin's judge,
joking with Putin's judge ...
“Listen, I’ve got something very obvious to tell you. You’re not allowed to give up.
If they decide to kill me, it means that we are incredibly strong." ~ Navalny
(Quoted by our own Ahavati)
When I think of him, his last day,
I think of him there in the courtroom
behind the shatter-proof glass
grinning at Putin's judge,
joking with Putin's judge ...
#anger
#grief
#shame
#despair
#emptiness
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Got Used
To the one who used me:
My bones are weak
From carrying you on my back
For so long
I satisfied my strength for you
But now I can no longer
Smile Without pain
And here you are
Walking just fine
Stronger than ever
My bones are weak
From carrying you on my back
For so long
I satisfied my strength for you
But now I can no longer
Smile Without pain
And here you are
Walking just fine
Stronger than ever
#anger
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DU Poetry : Poems About Anger Seeking Honest Critique