Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
4th Mar 2024 3:50pm
4th Mar 2024 3:50pm
Immortal Love 2
I was the only being existing on earth with immortal love.
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
For millennia, I sought true love that could not die,
But this kind of love did not exist on the planet.
The love of the daughters of earth could not last forever.
They were mortals and I was an immortal being.
I knew that the love I had been searching for would come one day.
I awaited the arrival of a compatible being with love like mine.
How I wanted to get out of this dying world.
Then at last, I saw an advanced starship descending slowly.
An alien...
#love
#universe
#aliens
#scifi
#travel
216 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2024 8:24pm
3rd Mar 2024 8:24pm
Progeny
alpha waves are affected sending synapses misfiring
the message is translated as an act of war
communications in
visuals stimulate thoughts
radio signals cause a disturbance
complex chaos ensues
I communicate with beings I can't see
it disrupts my alpha rhythms
so I block them out
the mind won't accept what the eyes can't see
telepathy, some beings communicate mind-to-mind
are part of a collective thought
they are here and can appear as human
they have no problem assimilating our language
because they...
the message is translated as an act of war
communications in
visuals stimulate thoughts
radio signals cause a disturbance
complex chaos ensues
I communicate with beings I can't see
it disrupts my alpha rhythms
so I block them out
the mind won't accept what the eyes can't see
telepathy, some beings communicate mind-to-mind
are part of a collective thought
they are here and can appear as human
they have no problem assimilating our language
because they...
#aliens
#scifi
197 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 9:14pm
1st Mar 2024 9:14pm
Elizabelle the series~Bren
Daddy did you not know?
Bren has come from her wandering in the universes
she has returned to Earth to rest
while I silently listen to her observations taking note
she is an earthling I am not
I am here with her experiencing secondhand what she feels
I make my observations and share them with you my father
I am brens alien spirit child
she is my mother and host
I would like to have my own mortal body someday
but I should also very much like to travel space
like a space pirate
Bren is communing today with the...
Bren has come from her wandering in the universes
she has returned to Earth to rest
while I silently listen to her observations taking note
she is an earthling I am not
I am here with her experiencing secondhand what she feels
I make my observations and share them with you my father
I am brens alien spirit child
she is my mother and host
I would like to have my own mortal body someday
but I should also very much like to travel space
like a space pirate
Bren is communing today with the...
#universe
#aliens
167 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 00:55am
1st Mar 2024 00:55am
Hidden Memories The Regress
my tapestry of hidden memories
rise within me bringing back to memory past lives
a place of visions
a place where I can breathe
I regress into nothingness
to the void before time existed
like a space mermaid, I swim
echoing high and low seeking the others
swimming so deep into the abyss that I tire
I cover myself with the dark and anchor in to rest
waking from startling visions of what is to be
first, I was awake and aware I was
using sonar-like pings
I send them out on the waves in space
then wait to...
rise within me bringing back to memory past lives
a place of visions
a place where I can breathe
I regress into nothingness
to the void before time existed
like a space mermaid, I swim
echoing high and low seeking the others
swimming so deep into the abyss that I tire
I cover myself with the dark and anchor in to rest
waking from startling visions of what is to be
first, I was awake and aware I was
using sonar-like pings
I send them out on the waves in space
then wait to...
#universe
#aliens
#scifi
170 reads
8 Comments
Abracadabra
Poem Published
11th Feb 2024 9:16pm
11th Feb 2024 9:16pm
They've Landed -- Don't Panic
At the bottom of the garden
gleams a ship from outer space
They've come back
to keep us company
to save the human race
With technology that's smarter
they've abolished wars and greed
There's no money on their planet
and everything is free
The weather gets controlled
so the skies are always blue
No-one catches colds
and sneezing is taboo
They don't eat fish or meat
your dinner's just a pill
you take one every day
but two can make you ill
Having sex
is rather...
gleams a ship from outer space
They've come back
to keep us company
to save the human race
With technology that's smarter
they've abolished wars and greed
There's no money on their planet
and everything is free
The weather gets controlled
so the skies are always blue
No-one catches colds
and sneezing is taboo
They don't eat fish or meat
your dinner's just a pill
you take one every day
but two can make you ill
Having sex
is rather...
#humankind
#evolution
#aliens
160 reads
2 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
31st Jan 2024 00:03am
31st Jan 2024 00:03am
Ancient Memories: Justice on Centar Thir
#technology
#war
#aliens
#revenge
#morality
143 reads
0 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
28th Jan 2024 9:12pm
28th Jan 2024 9:12pm
Klingon Legends: The Forgotten Gods of Karklon Gamma
- Klingon Legends: The Forgotten Gods of Karklon Gamma -
The planet named, in the language of Federation Standard, as Karklon Gamma... was considered to be a forbidden world for any star ship to approach... it was at the outermost fringes of the neutral zone that was set up between the worlds of the Federation and those of the Klingon Empire. It was owned by the Klingon Empire, technically, and was protected by the Imperial Klingon Defense Forces since as far off and back into history as anyone could remember. It was, however, not marked on any star maps that did with a good...
The planet named, in the language of Federation Standard, as Karklon Gamma... was considered to be a forbidden world for any star ship to approach... it was at the outermost fringes of the neutral zone that was set up between the worlds of the Federation and those of the Klingon Empire. It was owned by the Klingon Empire, technically, and was protected by the Imperial Klingon Defense Forces since as far off and back into history as anyone could remember. It was, however, not marked on any star maps that did with a good...
#secrets
#family
#aliens
#passion
#scifi
196 reads
2 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
28th Jan 2024 9:06pm
28th Jan 2024 9:06pm
Mira in the Crimson Union
#lust
#oppression
#aliens
#ForbiddenLove
#scifi
155 reads
0 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2023 11:19am
2nd Dec 2023 11:19am
The Mask Of Lies
The Fragile Flesh Of Elegance
From the deep empty souls
That need much to be filled
Delusions of the grandeur
Push their sickness to be spilled
Some of them build castles
Of princess in fairy realms
Stories full of chaotic hustle
Dreams of acting in real films
They conceive a maze of riddles
Where they lie like wise sphinx
With poetic words, love to twiddle
Bewildered by their own ego, methinks.!
But, the future will surely spark
When the tricks will be revealed
And those...
From the deep empty souls
That need much to be filled
Delusions of the grandeur
Push their sickness to be spilled
Some of them build castles
Of princess in fairy realms
Stories full of chaotic hustle
Dreams of acting in real films
They conceive a maze of riddles
Where they lie like wise sphinx
With poetic words, love to twiddle
Bewildered by their own ego, methinks.!
But, the future will surely spark
When the tricks will be revealed
And those...
#devil
#aliens
#witches
214 reads
4 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Nov 2023 10:15pm
5th Nov 2023 10:15pm
Astral Hopping
Love astray on the astral plane
slings star daggers my way
assaulting all things in their wake
Determining fate...
The facts are delirious
just delusions of a waking mind
Its a rigged game...
Predestined to ache
I am a tortured soul
Singing to the universes
hallelujah brothers and sisters
welcome to Earth
Constellations of doubt keep me from rising
I get only so far in the atmosphere
before I'm grounded again
Two, three, four
abort, abort, abort
mission to mars cancelled ...
slings star daggers my way
assaulting all things in their wake
Determining fate...
The facts are delirious
just delusions of a waking mind
Its a rigged game...
Predestined to ache
I am a tortured soul
Singing to the universes
hallelujah brothers and sisters
welcome to Earth
Constellations of doubt keep me from rising
I get only so far in the atmosphere
before I'm grounded again
Two, three, four
abort, abort, abort
mission to mars cancelled ...
#love
#aliens
205 reads
13 Comments
Kilronanmac
Poem Published
11th Oct 2023 6:38am
11th Oct 2023 6:38am
The Facebook Voyeur
The Facebook Voyeur
By Michael McManus
He lingers on Facebook's digital street,
A voyeur, silent, in his quiet seat,
No posts to share, no words to convey,
He watches from shadows, night and day.
Invisible, he scrolls through each friend's life,
A silent spectator, free from strife,
He learns their stories, their joys, and despair,
A Facebook voyeur, no content to share.
Portrait of The Facebook Voyeur. Graphite.
By Michael McManus
He lingers on Facebook's digital street,
A voyeur, silent, in his quiet seat,
No posts to share, no words to convey,
He watches from shadows, night and day.
Invisible, he scrolls through each friend's life,
A silent spectator, free from strife,
He learns their stories, their joys, and despair,
A Facebook voyeur, no content to share.
Portrait of The Facebook Voyeur. Graphite.
#aliens
147 reads
4 Comments
Kilronanmac
Poem Published
10th Oct 2023 5:13pm
10th Oct 2023 5:13pm
The Nose-hair Fashionista.
Nose-hair Fashionista
By Michael McManus
In the mirror I spy a sight, long nose-hairs, dear, oh my!
They dance and sway with every breath as I let out a sigh,
For some they're signs of aging's grace, a badge of years gone by,
But I can't help but wish they’d trim and not let them reach the sky.
Though age is just a number, they say, it's hard to not feel shy,
Long nose-hairs whisper tales of time, as they reach down, far too high,
And as they gather dust and muck, I can't help but wonder why
They don't snip them, clip them,...
By Michael McManus
In the mirror I spy a sight, long nose-hairs, dear, oh my!
They dance and sway with every breath as I let out a sigh,
For some they're signs of aging's grace, a badge of years gone by,
But I can't help but wish they’d trim and not let them reach the sky.
Though age is just a number, they say, it's hard to not feel shy,
Long nose-hairs whisper tales of time, as they reach down, far too high,
And as they gather dust and muck, I can't help but wonder why
They don't snip them, clip them,...
#aliens
242 reads
6 Comments
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