Poems About Alcohol by Top Critiquers
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Poems about alcohol by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
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Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 8:11pm
15th Apr 2024 8:11pm
A Why In Every While
Ah, how high i am taken !
When i read about Nature
And then, terribly shaken
To read a poem of self-torture
How desperate, then i feel !
To know you are barely twenty
But the joys of life you kill
While your blessings grow plenty
Shall you some day wake up and see
Your life's been vainly wasted
Between drugs, flesh and fake poetry
Finally, alas! nothing sweetly tasted
You have the power to break the walls
No regrets of the bad life and past
When you give deaf ear to evil's calls ...
When i read about Nature
And then, terribly shaken
To read a poem of self-torture
How desperate, then i feel !
To know you are barely twenty
But the joys of life you kill
While your blessings grow plenty
Shall you some day wake up and see
Your life's been vainly wasted
Between drugs, flesh and fake poetry
Finally, alas! nothing sweetly tasted
You have the power to break the walls
No regrets of the bad life and past
When you give deaf ear to evil's calls ...
#BDSM
#money
#alcohol
#addiction
#consumerism
163 reads
0 Comments
Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
9th Nov 2017 8:33am
9th Nov 2017 8:33am
Gypsy
Beware the faces of understanding
they are wolves in sheeps clothing
every time...
Deep throated promises when in need,
but only redeemable
on a first come first serve
self indulgent type shade.
You're all the same, cunt hole on a stick,
you lying fucken bitch.
Who's worse off than me?
I plea...
Who's the real alcoholic in this house anyway?
Obviously the fucken elephant standing right here in this pigsty! ...
they are wolves in sheeps clothing
every time...
Deep throated promises when in need,
but only redeemable
on a first come first serve
self indulgent type shade.
You're all the same, cunt hole on a stick,
you lying fucken bitch.
Who's worse off than me?
I plea...
Who's the real alcoholic in this house anyway?
Obviously the fucken elephant standing right here in this pigsty! ...
#anger
#alcohol
#addiction #frustration
#addiction #frustration
757 reads
9 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 1:11am
25th Dec 2024 1:11am
stream of barely consciousness
the rhine, he maintains, is far superior to
the thames in every way bar one chap says
then pray tell us what it is always the
bloody same with old blokes down the pub
the thames in every way bar one chap says
then pray tell us what it is always the
bloody same with old blokes down the pub
#alcohol
66 reads
1 Comment
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
6th Jul 2024 1:25am
6th Jul 2024 1:25am
A Vacation
on a vacation from their wives two men did gallivant
in a merry tipsy gait britches all askew
singing together happily causing quite the brouhaha
quite a sight they were with their antics and shenanigans
at night beer in hand they walked the street
a jalopy they found thought it would be sweet
to give pity to its situation take it for a drive
on the streets they drove without care for the rigamarole
their laughter rang through the night
with skull duggery in mind they stood together
their daring tipsy groove flummoxed all ...
in a merry tipsy gait britches all askew
singing together happily causing quite the brouhaha
quite a sight they were with their antics and shenanigans
at night beer in hand they walked the street
a jalopy they found thought it would be sweet
to give pity to its situation take it for a drive
on the streets they drove without care for the rigamarole
their laughter rang through the night
with skull duggery in mind they stood together
their daring tipsy groove flummoxed all ...
#alcohol
#holiday
128 reads
12 Comments
Rew
Poem Published
3rd Jul 2024 8:35pm
3rd Jul 2024 8:35pm
Red Red Wine
I kissed my friend's red ruby lip
and vowed we'd never part,
and stroked her neck and took a sip
to warm my cold, cold heart.
I caressed her shoulder all dewy eyed
as on her lip I kiss and kiss,
her smoothness soothed me nigh to cry
such sweetness I had long, long missed.
I'd loved her from my very first
when her spirit suffused through me
such pleasure I thought I would burst
and for a time she set me free...
She was gone during that short dark night
when I woke I cursed her near to dead, ...
and vowed we'd never part,
and stroked her neck and took a sip
to warm my cold, cold heart.
I caressed her shoulder all dewy eyed
as on her lip I kiss and kiss,
her smoothness soothed me nigh to cry
such sweetness I had long, long missed.
I'd loved her from my very first
when her spirit suffused through me
such pleasure I thought I would burst
and for a time she set me free...
She was gone during that short dark night
when I woke I cursed her near to dead, ...
#alcohol
#rhyming
129 reads
6 Comments
FATBOY300PLUS
Poem Published
21st Jul 2024 9:52pm
21st Jul 2024 9:52pm
Caramel Macchiato
Cafe au Lait on full display
The most perfect mixture
is heading my way
Skin perfectly blended,
evenly Brown
Like espresso with sweet cream
Color of
Bailey's, a perfect double-shot,
dropped in warm Guinness
Skin glistens softly, teasingly tan
Like caramel over pralines
A glimpse her way
wards your troubles away
Or do they follow in the wake of her passage?
She is the kind of pretty that means
both "peace" and "trouble"
Her look can...
Mellow you...
The most perfect mixture
is heading my way
Skin perfectly blended,
evenly Brown
Like espresso with sweet cream
Color of
Bailey's, a perfect double-shot,
dropped in warm Guinness
Skin glistens softly, teasingly tan
Like caramel over pralines
A glimpse her way
wards your troubles away
Or do they follow in the wake of her passage?
She is the kind of pretty that means
both "peace" and "trouble"
Her look can...
Mellow you...
#alcohol
#lover
#magic #strength
#magic #strength
159 reads
3 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
30th Jan 2023 1:16pm
30th Jan 2023 1:16pm
Drunk dragging its feet in the city
There are a lot of reasons why I write
I am curious for this dark matter
Because I like shooting
I take psychedelic snapshots
Because I need to get my fill of heroin
These days I am reading for other reasons though
Well I find my life unfullfilling in the brothel
So in order to escape
And to avoid the numb
These days I get regularly drunk.
I am curious for this dark matter
Because I like shooting
I take psychedelic snapshots
Because I need to get my fill of heroin
These days I am reading for other reasons though
Well I find my life unfullfilling in the brothel
So in order to escape
And to avoid the numb
These days I get regularly drunk.
#alcohol
226 reads
2 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
Ode to the Drunk Girl, Don't Text That Man
Babe, we’ve talked about this too many times to be sane.
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
#alcohol
#breakup
#friendship
#love
#motivational
201 reads
13 Comments
Marks
Poem Published
6th Sep 2017 9:33pm
6th Sep 2017 9:33pm
Only Just Poetry Secrets
.. ... ... ...
Obsession
Good and evil
Creation
Loneliness or love
Let obsession run deep
Let creation be deep
Do not select the theme of the poem
The theme always selects one's soul
... ... ... ...
Obsession
Good and evil
Creation
Loneliness or love
Let obsession run deep
Let creation be deep
Do not select the theme of the poem
The theme always selects one's soul
... ... ... ...
#alcohol
653 reads
3 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
28th Jun 2024 8:07am
28th Jun 2024 8:07am
The power of drugs
The power of drugs
is a curious thing
Send one to the gutter
Expand another's brain
Turn a lion meek
A mouse a raging lunatic
You can grow
Or create your own
Use a credit card to ride the dealers train
But it might just change your life
That's the power of drugs
Legally a doctor can alter the mind
Or a brewery internally pickle thee
Nicotine chewing gum
Legitimate heroin just a kinder surprise
You can have them prescribed
Or on a shelf in glass bottles
Use...
is a curious thing
Send one to the gutter
Expand another's brain
Turn a lion meek
A mouse a raging lunatic
You can grow
Or create your own
Use a credit card to ride the dealers train
But it might just change your life
That's the power of drugs
Legally a doctor can alter the mind
Or a brewery internally pickle thee
Nicotine chewing gum
Legitimate heroin just a kinder surprise
You can have them prescribed
Or on a shelf in glass bottles
Use...
#alcohol
#drugs
#marijuana
360 reads
1 Comment
Adelphina
Poem Published
26th Feb 2022 7:49pm
26th Feb 2022 7:49pm
Dinking My Cosmo
Hear my diamond dripping rings
Click-ity-clink against my drink
Waving signaling to the waitress
Needing a decompress of all of my stress
Drink sip-ity drink
Sipping my Cosmo
Heading toward dance floor
Bartendy charge two more for me
Start a tab compliments of the CEO
I’m forgetting it all
Don’t worry about me
Cause I won’t fall
Opal flowers growing
Curving around my halo
Friday night and I’m soaring
Stretching my wings
Through Saturday morning
Mirrored...
Click-ity-clink against my drink
Waving signaling to the waitress
Needing a decompress of all of my stress
Drink sip-ity drink
Sipping my Cosmo
Heading toward dance floor
Bartendy charge two more for me
Start a tab compliments of the CEO
I’m forgetting it all
Don’t worry about me
Cause I won’t fall
Opal flowers growing
Curving around my halo
Friday night and I’m soaring
Stretching my wings
Through Saturday morning
Mirrored...
#music
#alcohol
#dance
620 reads
22 Comments
Thor_Azine
Poem Published
30th Apr 2024 6:40pm
30th Apr 2024 6:40pm
Take It
The clouds are not cotton candy
and no unicorns are here shitting
rainbows and skittles, it’s just the
city, sticky with a side of grit
A perfect world would be fucking dandy
but alas, the fists of life keep hitting
knocking on thin walls without pity
until you scream “goddamn this shit!”
Some bourbon and smoke would be handy
drowning it all while you’re quitting
throwing down the real nitty gritty
pushing the plunger for the big hit
The hourglass broke and left you sandy
open to no rules and restless...
and no unicorns are here shitting
rainbows and skittles, it’s just the
city, sticky with a side of grit
A perfect world would be fucking dandy
but alas, the fists of life keep hitting
knocking on thin walls without pity
until you scream “goddamn this shit!”
Some bourbon and smoke would be handy
drowning it all while you’re quitting
throwing down the real nitty gritty
pushing the plunger for the big hit
The hourglass broke and left you sandy
open to no rules and restless...
#alcohol
#drugs
#LifeChangingMoment
21 reads
15 Comments
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