Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
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#addiction
Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
oldmanG
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 5:09am
14th Dec 2024 5:09am
(Man In Black) Tethered to my Body by a Johnny Thread
(Man in Black)Tethered to my body by a Johnny thread
Been poppin pills
Til the sun rises
Cash is in trouble
Can’t walk the line
It’s in a cave
In Tennessee
Fighting the demons
Heroin numbs him
June comes along
He can’t resist
His secret crush
She’ll save him
Folsom prison blues
San Quentin too
But my name is Sue
How do you do
Rosanne said daddy you gotta
Go to Betty Ford
Can’t have this no more
The man in black
She said no more
...
Been poppin pills
Til the sun rises
Cash is in trouble
Can’t walk the line
It’s in a cave
In Tennessee
Fighting the demons
Heroin numbs him
June comes along
He can’t resist
His secret crush
She’ll save him
Folsom prison blues
San Quentin too
But my name is Sue
How do you do
Rosanne said daddy you gotta
Go to Betty Ford
Can’t have this no more
The man in black
She said no more
...
#addiction
#alcohol
#drugs #heroin
#drugs #heroin
36 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 2:32pm
10th Dec 2024 2:32pm
Oh My God! What Have I Been Drinking Last Night?!
Xaviera
was sitting naked on
the foot of the bed and looking scared
before she turned and glanced at Aaron and Skylar
still sleeping until she stood up and
looked at the Las Vegas
skyline there.
was sitting naked on
the foot of the bed and looking scared
before she turned and glanced at Aaron and Skylar
still sleeping until she stood up and
looked at the Las Vegas
skyline there.
#alcohol
#city
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
112 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:45pm
9th Dec 2024 8:45pm
Got Beer?
In 2010 Lance Lyde threw a giant party to mark his tenth anniversary as a master brewer. In the middle of the celebration, Lyde took a dive into a giant vat of beer. Friends and relatives at the party were unable to pull him out. He drowned in his own brew.
#alcohol
#fiction
#ignorance
#satirical
#ShortStory
62 reads
13 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 11:27am
9th Dec 2024 11:27am
Some Friends Crashed A Neighbor's New Years Eve Party
Pam
and some
friends crashed a
neighbor's New Years
Eve party because
they figured that nothing
bad would happen to them. But
that was before she woke up the
next day naked, hungover and with
realizing they've gotten in too deep.
and some
friends crashed a
neighbor's New Years
Eve party because
they figured that nothing
bad would happen to them. But
that was before she woke up the
next day naked, hungover and with
realizing they've gotten in too deep.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
108 reads
0 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 7:09pm
7th Dec 2024 7:09pm
Red Wine and Money
Feel like the home team prevails
Perfect day to play two
Popcorn and pretzels
On
Bleachers scream home team
Grabbing some dogs and beer
Phone bet 200
Settle seat rooting for money
9th inning tied game
Buckner 1st base
Pitch in place
Man on third
Ball rolling down the line
Sets his feet
Glove almost down
Ghost ball through the 5 hole
Next day put down 20 wine and spirits
Green bottle in bag
Look down the green lens
See empty bottle
...
Perfect day to play two
Popcorn and pretzels
On
Bleachers scream home team
Grabbing some dogs and beer
Phone bet 200
Settle seat rooting for money
9th inning tied game
Buckner 1st base
Pitch in place
Man on third
Ball rolling down the line
Sets his feet
Glove almost down
Ghost ball through the 5 hole
Next day put down 20 wine and spirits
Green bottle in bag
Look down the green lens
See empty bottle
...
#addiction
#alcohol
#money #sports
#money #sports
56 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 00:26am
5th Dec 2024 00:26am
to the bloke in the pub who likes to shout
think what you will
you ever keep quiet
and still it’s your right
or wrong to spurt what you like
a child who demands loudly to be heard,
night after night
I try to write
and find the very word ..
you ever keep quiet
and still it’s your right
or wrong to spurt what you like
a child who demands loudly to be heard,
night after night
I try to write
and find the very word ..
#alcohol
42 reads
4 Comments
Mars_August
Mars August
Mars August
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
4th Dec 2024 2:15pm
Ode to the Drunk Girl, Don't Text That Man
Babe, we’ve talked about this too many times to be sane.
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
Put your cell phone away, there’s nothing to be gained
from texting a man who knows you miss him.
You sent the long paragraph, he doesn’t care,
which is why you’re six shots in, and I’m holding your hair.
You can’t fix him, he’s not a flat tire.
His mama should have named him “Selfish Fucking Liar”.
In fact, we’re changing his contact name to that right now.
Give me your phone, your keys, and sit your ass back down.
He forgot your birthday and didn’t know your favorite song. ...
#alcohol
#breakup
#friendship
#love
#motivational
141 reads
13 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 11:49am
26th Nov 2024 11:49am
This Is How We Found Her On New Years Day
Julie staggered in
hungover and wearing Keith's
shirt on her naked body.
hungover and wearing Keith's
shirt on her naked body.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
78 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 1:23am
26th Nov 2024 1:23am
alcoholic poet(ry)
a man of letters,
who pens
upon the trivial
matters
in convivial
inns and dens,
where his life is spent invariably
in tatters
who pens
upon the trivial
matters
in convivial
inns and dens,
where his life is spent invariably
in tatters
#alcohol
81 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 12:46pm
24th Nov 2024 12:46pm
Mingle Hells
Jingle bells, the night prevails,
the skull full of vodka sways.
Through the snow the spirits flow
in a haze of holiday craze.
Silent nights with blurry sights.
Laughter echoes in the air.
Raise a toast to the ghost
of memories we all share.
Cheers to friends and to the ends
of bottles lined in a row.
In the glow let it show.
The warmth of hearts we know.
Jingle bells, the story tells
of nights both wild and bright.
With the skull full of vodka
we toast to the festive light.
the skull full of vodka sways.
Through the snow the spirits flow
in a haze of holiday craze.
Silent nights with blurry sights.
Laughter echoes in the air.
Raise a toast to the ghost
of memories we all share.
Cheers to friends and to the ends
of bottles lined in a row.
In the glow let it show.
The warmth of hearts we know.
Jingle bells, the story tells
of nights both wild and bright.
With the skull full of vodka
we toast to the festive light.
#alcohol
#Christmas
#hell
#holiday
#lies
74 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 2:00pm
23rd Nov 2024 2:00pm
You're So Hungover, Sis.
It looks like
you're so hungover, Sis.
The guy you were found naked with is
still throwing up in the bathroom and you still have
no way of knowing who he is nor
how you got those tattoos
on your skin.
you're so hungover, Sis.
The guy you were found naked with is
still throwing up in the bathroom and you still have
no way of knowing who he is nor
how you got those tattoos
on your skin.
#alcohol
#dialogue
#fiction
#sex
#sister
98 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 11:17am
23rd Nov 2024 11:17am
Violence and Sex
She hated violence and sex
She believed to much of it was ruining our youth
She made sure her two sons aged 11 & 14 weren't exposed to this smut anywhere in life
She has a drinking problem
Often, she would monitor their phones, their friends, their music and tv
They went to church every Sunday
They carried & read the good book everywhere they went
Their father left them when they were very young
They were altar boys at their church
One night their mother drove to the church to pick up her children
She was obliterated
Her outfit...
She believed to much of it was ruining our youth
She made sure her two sons aged 11 & 14 weren't exposed to this smut anywhere in life
She has a drinking problem
Often, she would monitor their phones, their friends, their music and tv
They went to church every Sunday
They carried & read the good book everywhere they went
Their father left them when they were very young
They were altar boys at their church
One night their mother drove to the church to pick up her children
She was obliterated
Her outfit...
#abuse
#alcohol
#children
#sex
#violence
38 reads
2 Comments
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