Poems About Alcohol Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about alcohol seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 4:12am
21st Apr 2025 4:12am
Bourbon and Trouble Redux
Don't know nothing about religion
Politics stay away from me
I know about hard work
Women and bourbon
That's enough trouble for any man
Politics stay away from me
I know about hard work
Women and bourbon
That's enough trouble for any man
#alcohol
#job
#religion #women
#religion #women
106 reads
26 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Apr 2025 2:26am
9th Apr 2025 2:26am
Diana Woke With A Hangover
Diana woke with a hangover.
She saw herself naked in a mirror.
Then, she remembered Derek's party.
They were celebrating finally graduating from college.
She and Luke gulped one too many.
She saw herself naked in a mirror.
Then, she remembered Derek's party.
They were celebrating finally graduating from college.
She and Luke gulped one too many.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#school
#sex
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
6th Apr 2025 11:24pm
6th Apr 2025 11:24pm
He Worked, He Drank
He worked
He worked
He worked
and worked
He drank
He drank
He drank
and drank
His job wasn't to far from his home
He would walk home the same route every day
It wasn't the greatest neighborhood
Hobo's were always near the liquor store he would stop by each evening
He'd buy a bottle and have it finished by the time he arrived home
Trash littered the streets & sidewalks
He would always look down to see if any scratch-offs were thrown on the ground
Once he found a used scratch-off that had a 2 dollar...
He worked
He worked
and worked
He drank
He drank
He drank
and drank
His job wasn't to far from his home
He would walk home the same route every day
It wasn't the greatest neighborhood
Hobo's were always near the liquor store he would stop by each evening
He'd buy a bottle and have it finished by the time he arrived home
Trash littered the streets & sidewalks
He would always look down to see if any scratch-offs were thrown on the ground
Once he found a used scratch-off that had a 2 dollar...
#alcohol
#boredom
#death #home
#death #home
95 reads
13 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 9:10pm
3rd Apr 2025 9:10pm
She Found Herself Topless On The Beach
Some friends went to Florida.
Spring Break was happening at Fort Lauderdale.
Everyone's having fun going wild.
One night, Rachel woke up.
She found herself topless on the beach.
That's before she spotted Adam.
He gave her some coffee.
She asked where Bridgette and Lisa were.
Adam said, "They're in jail."
Racel bailed those two out.
Lisa suddenly remembered a wet t-shirt contest.
Some guys approached the trio.
Claiming to be with Girls Gone Wild.
Lisa and Bridgette streaked in a church.
Spring Break was happening at Fort Lauderdale.
Everyone's having fun going wild.
One night, Rachel woke up.
She found herself topless on the beach.
That's before she spotted Adam.
He gave her some coffee.
She asked where Bridgette and Lisa were.
Adam said, "They're in jail."
Racel bailed those two out.
Lisa suddenly remembered a wet t-shirt contest.
Some guys approached the trio.
Claiming to be with Girls Gone Wild.
Lisa and Bridgette streaked in a church.
#alcohol
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
139 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 1:16am
2nd Apr 2025 1:16am
reading in the pub
saw you sitting alone here
with a book and a pint
and I thought you might need a friend
would know better
than to interrupt ..
with a book and a pint
and I thought you might need a friend
would know better
than to interrupt ..
#alcohol
#reading
90 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 4:56pm
30th Mar 2025 4:56pm
the george inn
a sunday roast down the george
is when I’m at my most
garrulous
my voice can be heard
above the clashing
of cutlery and the toasting with glasses
my word! I’m sure they’ve put beer
in this gravy!
is when I’m at my most
garrulous
my voice can be heard
above the clashing
of cutlery and the toasting with glasses
my word! I’m sure they’ve put beer
in this gravy!
#alcohol
69 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 11:39am
29th Mar 2025 11:39am
Last night at a party somewhere
These guys were beer-bonging at a party last night
This one guy was shotgunning a beer and didn't know that someone had put bleach in it
He swallowed the beer & bleach right down
He hit the floor and went into convulsions
The guy who did it was 5 blocks away by that time
He did it because he thought the guy had ripped off his brother's skateboard!
This one guy was shotgunning a beer and didn't know that someone had put bleach in it
He swallowed the beer & bleach right down
He hit the floor and went into convulsions
The guy who did it was 5 blocks away by that time
He did it because he thought the guy had ripped off his brother's skateboard!
#alcohol
#anger
#fiction
#ignorance
#satirical
74 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
28th Mar 2025 7:52pm
28th Mar 2025 7:52pm
He Apologized For Last Night
Nastassja woke up on Sunday.
She got hungover from drinking that champagne.
That's before she saw Jason.
He walked from the bathroom.
She discovered he was hungover and naked.
He apologized for last night.
She looked at Jason confused.
Then, she discovered she was also naked.
The confusion turned into shock.
She attended his bachelor party.
He challenged her to a drinking contest.
It doesn't matter who won.
Jason is supposed to marry Julie tomorrow.
What should they try to tell her?
She got hungover from drinking that champagne.
That's before she saw Jason.
He walked from the bathroom.
She discovered he was hungover and naked.
He apologized for last night.
She looked at Jason confused.
Then, she discovered she was also naked.
The confusion turned into shock.
She attended his bachelor party.
He challenged her to a drinking contest.
It doesn't matter who won.
Jason is supposed to marry Julie tomorrow.
What should they try to tell her?
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#suffering
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Mar 2025 11:11am
27th Mar 2025 11:11am
Each Time I Look At The Picture
Each time I look at
the picture of you
with that smile, it
hurts to miss you
so much even today.
A year ago today,
a drunk driver
murdered you.
the picture of you
with that smile, it
hurts to miss you
so much even today.
A year ago today,
a drunk driver
murdered you.
#alcohol
#death
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
90 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 2:26pm
25th Mar 2025 2:26pm
She'll Get In Trouble For Throwing A Wild Party
Gabriela woke with a hangover.
She saw herself and the others naked.
Thankfully, her parents aren't home.
She saw herself and the others naked.
Thankfully, her parents aren't home.
#alcohol
#fiction
#home
#sex
#suffering
86 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Mar 2025 1:46am
25th Mar 2025 1:46am
That Hangover Made Lori Want To Stay
Lori woke on a Sunday.
She was hungover in a big way.
Then, she looked at Trey.
Saw they're both naked on that day.
That hangover made Lori want to stay.
She was hungover in a big way.
Then, she looked at Trey.
Saw they're both naked on that day.
That hangover made Lori want to stay.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#SelfDiscovery
#sex
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 10:07pm
21st Mar 2025 10:07pm
One night at the bar
A man minding his own business is sitting in a bar.
Enjoying some downtime after a hard days work.
Sometime later, a drunken, loud, brash man comes stumbling in.
He's causing a raucous all around him.
He sits his ass down right near the quiet man.
This drunk stunk of sweat and booze.
The drunk fuck turned to the quiet man and said, "What's your issue? Why do you look like that? Why do you look troubled?"
The quiet man said, "No issue, just minding my own business".
The drunk didn't like that answer and continued...
Enjoying some downtime after a hard days work.
Sometime later, a drunken, loud, brash man comes stumbling in.
He's causing a raucous all around him.
He sits his ass down right near the quiet man.
This drunk stunk of sweat and booze.
The drunk fuck turned to the quiet man and said, "What's your issue? Why do you look like that? Why do you look troubled?"
The quiet man said, "No issue, just minding my own business".
The drunk didn't like that answer and continued...
#alcohol
#anger
#bullying
#ShortStory
#violence
95 reads
6 Comments
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