Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 10:40pm
6th Dec 2024 10:40pm
From out of darkness
Some say that we all know what is darkness and when it's time. ⌚ As a spiritual entity of another place. 🙏 BUT yet there are those who believe in life after death. ☠️ But yet the elders say it doesn't have to be that way, because your thoughts and spirit, will continue to live on in the after realms, in a different kind of mentally stimulation in a world. 🌍 Far away in the light.🕯️For sure out of the darkness of night, it can be a place with it's own shadows. Roaming free like angles of heaven in a fight between the devil's in human skin....
#faith
#morality
#redemption
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 3:52pm
6th Dec 2024 3:52pm
Ultimately Nullified
All is ruination supreme
and life a bitter joke
in desolation nightmare scream
on universal folk...
as if in horror cinema
whose cast must suffer stunts
where matter force in minima
means bearing real brunts.
Thus for sure reality sucks;
a clock just winding down
away from youth and thrilling fucks
like verbs reduced to noun.
And so to death we modify,
even during Yule,
regifting fodder when we die;
with ourselves as gruel.
and life a bitter joke
in desolation nightmare scream
on universal folk...
as if in horror cinema
whose cast must suffer stunts
where matter force in minima
means bearing real brunts.
Thus for sure reality sucks;
a clock just winding down
away from youth and thrilling fucks
like verbs reduced to noun.
And so to death we modify,
even during Yule,
regifting fodder when we die;
with ourselves as gruel.
#TruthOfLife
#universe
126 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 3:48am
6th Dec 2024 3:48am
You will never know
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ they say that we will never know, what is waiting for us that it could change the very outcome, of what is expected that we found it in another person, that happens in time. For sure we can talk about what we know that we want and need, 🤔 to help us navigate through the process, of the ups, Still and yet there will be downs. For sure we will try to create a vision of what we need and want, 🤨 but yet find ourselves involved in a entanglement.🤨 Trying to figure out how did we get here and now. 😞 YET there is...
#faith
#fate
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 11:43pm
5th Dec 2024 11:43pm
I'm not you and you are not me.
Sometimes we have to go through somethings, that will affect the very foundation of our lives and life. For sure let us be able to be honest with ourselves, for sure we don't have to prove anything, that we say or do to anyone but ourselves. For sure we will be judge, by what we believe in or say is the truth of my faith. Yet it is my alone my own opinions, for we each are entitled to have our own opinions. YET we be still judge by what other people's say or think. 🤔 But yet it's here and now I still stand firmly, on my decisions base upon my own dreams and life. For sure it's...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
48 reads
0 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 5:13am
4th Dec 2024 5:13am
ISOLATED
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
135 reads
2 Comments
NP_NP
NP
NP
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 2:44am
4th Dec 2024 2:44am
Step In My Circle
They’ll call me the greatest, and I haven’t even published yet. Fans and critics already circle, craving words that burn with raw, unfiltered passion. Sorry, kids—nothing you’ve got comes close to what I bring. Let me torch the poetry community and rebuild it on my terms.
I’ve been waging a war of words since I was thirteen. Someone once asked if I feared thieves stealing my work. I laughed. Take one, and I’ll write ten more in thirty minutes.
It’s not cockiness—it’s my ego, unapologetic and earned.
NP
I’ve been waging a war of words since I was thirteen. Someone once asked if I feared thieves stealing my work. I laughed. Take one, and I’ll write ten more in thirty minutes.
It’s not cockiness—it’s my ego, unapologetic and earned.
NP
#funny
#identity
#TruthOfLife
111 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 7:06pm
3rd Dec 2024 7:06pm
Our Simple Gratification...
Our Simple Gratification...
We crave the quick...
a spark,
a fragment,
a line.
Depth feels distant,
too heavy to hold.
Poetry shrinks
to fit the scroll.
A whisper of meaning,
half-formed,
assumed profound.
The page waits,
but we turn to screens.
Books linger unread,
their weight
a burden we refuse.
Why read
when the world sings
in flashes and noise?
Why think
when quick answers
quell the ache?
Effort feels cruel—
to linger, ...
We crave the quick...
a spark,
a fragment,
a line.
Depth feels distant,
too heavy to hold.
Poetry shrinks
to fit the scroll.
A whisper of meaning,
half-formed,
assumed profound.
The page waits,
but we turn to screens.
Books linger unread,
their weight
a burden we refuse.
Why read
when the world sings
in flashes and noise?
Why think
when quick answers
quell the ache?
Effort feels cruel—
to linger, ...
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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0 Comments
MYSTERIOUS_GIRL
Lizzy_3164
Lizzy_3164
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 5:42am
3rd Dec 2024 5:42am
THE RIGHT DOSE
The difference between being their medicine
And being the poison that fills their veins
Is the dose you're willing to give them
It's knowing when they need a shoulder to cry on
But also when they need a kick up the arse
~
It's knowing everyone will fall at some point
But a helping hand isn't always the answer
Sometimes they need to rise on their own
To truly understand how strong they really are
A warrior sometimes has to fight without a shield
~
It's about still being there in the crowd
Letting them know you're their...
And being the poison that fills their veins
Is the dose you're willing to give them
It's knowing when they need a shoulder to cry on
But also when they need a kick up the arse
~
It's knowing everyone will fall at some point
But a helping hand isn't always the answer
Sometimes they need to rise on their own
To truly understand how strong they really are
A warrior sometimes has to fight without a shield
~
It's about still being there in the crowd
Letting them know you're their...
#LifeStruggles
#TruthOfLife
65 reads
1 Comment
MalcolmG
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 9:29pm
2nd Dec 2024 9:29pm
A Life of Contradictions
Change is the constant; the rhythm of time never ceases its cycle.
Longing for peace, yet preparing for war in the shadows of fear.
Walls that we build to protect us will also confine us in silence.
Happiness drifts as we chase it, elusive and fading from view.
Richest in gold, yet the poorest in spirit, the heart remains hollow.
Independence demands that we lean on the strength of another.
Leaders are strong when their hearts lay exposed to the winds of destruction.
Trying to blend, we are lost in the masses; ourselves disappear.
Knowledge...
Longing for peace, yet preparing for war in the shadows of fear.
Walls that we build to protect us will also confine us in silence.
Happiness drifts as we chase it, elusive and fading from view.
Richest in gold, yet the poorest in spirit, the heart remains hollow.
Independence demands that we lean on the strength of another.
Leaders are strong when their hearts lay exposed to the winds of destruction.
Trying to blend, we are lost in the masses; ourselves disappear.
Knowledge...
#TruthOfLife
64 reads
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xthan
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 4:34pm
2nd Dec 2024 4:34pm
Silk
I avoid common
pleasantries we end
up falling merciless
at the knees to
as I imagine
you get asked
these questions
quite often,
so we discuss the mentees who
still ring you occasionally, eagerly
filling you in about what's happening
because the powdered wig remains
your life long companion,
how one got their first win recently
and couldn't believe it until they
returned to chambers, you show
me silk scarves your sister gifted
last month as she accompanied
you to your...
pleasantries we end
up falling merciless
at the knees to
as I imagine
you get asked
these questions
quite often,
so we discuss the mentees who
still ring you occasionally, eagerly
filling you in about what's happening
because the powdered wig remains
your life long companion,
how one got their first win recently
and couldn't believe it until they
returned to chambers, you show
me silk scarves your sister gifted
last month as she accompanied
you to your...
#confessional
#humankind
#LifeCycle #TruthOfLife
#LifeCycle #TruthOfLife
89 reads
1 Comment
drone
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 8:29am
2nd Dec 2024 8:29am
Weak Willed
Being feeble minded
Has been
Psychologicaly
And Scientifically
Stolen from the old
Now trending
Among the Young
Has been
Psychologicaly
And Scientifically
Stolen from the old
Now trending
Among the Young
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
51 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2024 8:07am
2nd Dec 2024 8:07am
To High
Wilfull ignorance
Is bliss
So people say
Unconsciously
I agree
To live one's life
Believing everything
That one is told
Is real
Without Questioning
Being Directed
To all these different groups
Based on Nothing but
Theory's and Lies
Circler thinking
Feeding the loop
Echoing
Off the bars
Of a Cage
That you made
But for some of us
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
Is bliss
So people say
Unconsciously
I agree
To live one's life
Believing everything
That one is told
Is real
Without Questioning
Being Directed
To all these different groups
Based on Nothing but
Theory's and Lies
Circler thinking
Feeding the loop
Echoing
Off the bars
Of a Cage
That you made
But for some of us
The Price
Is to High
To Pay
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
48 reads
0 Comments
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