Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 9:00am
15th Dec 2024 9:00am
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Fish love toothy smiles.
Yet, fear the crocodiles.
They swim in gut loads full of bile.
One by one; single file.
The guys love porn on site.
The girls love wine and late nights.
We all love the spotlights.
We're all stars shining bright.
We love our inner child.
Imaginary friends make us wild.
Not too crazy; only mild.
Leaves us thirsty to be beguiled.
Perversion isn't right.
It's not just sex that unites.
Sometimes it's the darkest night.
A surrender to the fight.
Surrounded by the...
Yet, fear the crocodiles.
They swim in gut loads full of bile.
One by one; single file.
The guys love porn on site.
The girls love wine and late nights.
We all love the spotlights.
We're all stars shining bright.
We love our inner child.
Imaginary friends make us wild.
Not too crazy; only mild.
Leaves us thirsty to be beguiled.
Perversion isn't right.
It's not just sex that unites.
Sometimes it's the darkest night.
A surrender to the fight.
Surrounded by the...
#inspirational
#meditation
#TruthOfLife
84 reads
14 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
15th Dec 2024 00:03am
15th Dec 2024 00:03am
My life is in your HANDS
From within the very depth of my own thoughts, 🤔 here I am as I am just a mortal man. 💪 Strong in my beliefs of my faith, 🙏 it's that reason I am sitting here watching the world, 🌍 as it changes into a eclipse of a beautiful dream. YET now that is only a illogical illustration of thoughts. 🤔 For the deepness of the mind and heart and soul, can only take so much before it BREAKS. 💔 For it surely goes to the deepness of the feelings and emotions, and the deepness of my thoughts and insight and imagination. For sure I am grateful and thankful and...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
64 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 6:56pm
14th Dec 2024 6:56pm
Sanity or Insanity
Illusion or reality
Sane or insanity
Demons running through my veins
There's nothing I would ever change
Network damage - Connection Split
Input - Output - Complete Shit
Illusion or reality
Sane or insanity
Harsh stories & poems run through my brain
Inside my body, a madman reigns
It's my reality
It's my illusion
It's my burning pain
Never one for a New Years Resolution
The one thing I'll never refuse to give up
Is to screw with people's minds
Ya know....Fuck shit up!! ...
Sane or insanity
Demons running through my veins
There's nothing I would ever change
Network damage - Connection Split
Input - Output - Complete Shit
Illusion or reality
Sane or insanity
Harsh stories & poems run through my brain
Inside my body, a madman reigns
It's my reality
It's my illusion
It's my burning pain
Never one for a New Years Resolution
The one thing I'll never refuse to give up
Is to screw with people's minds
Ya know....Fuck shit up!! ...
#confessional
#fiction
#LifeAsAWriter
#nonfiction
#TruthOfLife
75 reads
6 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
14th Dec 2024 4:28am
14th Dec 2024 4:28am
IM FEELING LIKE HÉRCULES
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
101 reads
4 Comments
drone
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
The Harvest
It is said
There are people
Who are like
Factory mushrooms
Who like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
There are people
Who are like
Factory mushrooms
Who like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
54 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 7:03am
13th Dec 2024 7:03am
Life Friends
Is it not
When one passes
Those teenage year's
One's new friends
Could well Define
Who and what
You Really are
For the rest
Of your Life
When one passes
Those teenage year's
One's new friends
Could well Define
Who and what
You Really are
For the rest
Of your Life
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
40 reads
0 Comments
Tia
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 7:18pm
12th Dec 2024 7:18pm
Better or worse
People think about others
That's just a fact
But they do it in two different ways
Some people compare themselves to their supposed superiors
Those who they believe are better than them
Others prefer to ignore that
And focus on those who are worse, inferior
Is it a cruel trick or fate that we all live this way?
Or is it simply the common flaw of humanity?
Perhaps comparison is simply our truth
That's just a fact
But they do it in two different ways
Some people compare themselves to their supposed superiors
Those who they believe are better than them
Others prefer to ignore that
And focus on those who are worse, inferior
Is it a cruel trick or fate that we all live this way?
Or is it simply the common flaw of humanity?
Perhaps comparison is simply our truth
#humankind
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
38 reads
2 Comments
moon_bather
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 3:11am
12th Dec 2024 3:11am
Espejo
Distracted by
Distraught interactions
with others who don’t understand
nor do they care
nor do I care if
who gives a shit?
Rambling on again and again
to somehow heal
through an idiot’s catharsis
Believing in something
to believe in something
to feel a reason
to keep on believing
that life is worth living
but in the end
all the same bullshit
just painted a different color
Join their party?
Why would I?
Well
of course I...
Distraught interactions
with others who don’t understand
nor do they care
nor do I care if
who gives a shit?
Rambling on again and again
to somehow heal
through an idiot’s catharsis
Believing in something
to believe in something
to feel a reason
to keep on believing
that life is worth living
but in the end
all the same bullshit
just painted a different color
Join their party?
Why would I?
Well
of course I...
#confessional
#FreeVerse
#StreamOfConsciousness
#suffering
#TruthOfLife
67 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 3:48pm
9th Dec 2024 3:48pm
Sexual Oxygen
I watch you
Recognition
Need
It's written all over you
Dripping
Sensual carnal desire
The prize is orgasm
Quest
Maddening heights
Mayhem in your loins
There's a price
You haven't paid it yet
Keep breathing lust
Vapor too
I know you
I've lived this
I know how it shakes out
Do you understand ?
Recognition
Need
It's written all over you
Dripping
Sensual carnal desire
The prize is orgasm
Quest
Maddening heights
Mayhem in your loins
There's a price
You haven't paid it yet
Keep breathing lust
Vapor too
I know you
I've lived this
I know how it shakes out
Do you understand ?
#lover
#risk
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
#TruthOfLife
140 reads
31 Comments
drone
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:56am
9th Dec 2024 8:56am
Amazing
Amazing opportunities
When one's imagination
Fly's
When intuition
Shows you the way
Strange things
Begin to happen
When you Train
Your Brain
When one's imagination
Fly's
When intuition
Shows you the way
Strange things
Begin to happen
When you Train
Your Brain
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
54 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:12am
9th Dec 2024 8:12am
IT Stays On
Morning grey
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me ...
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me ...
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
62 reads
2 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 5:53pm
8th Dec 2024 5:53pm
Not a rant, not sure really just things (not a poem)
Why do people believe in this world? Why is it not ok to question beliefs. Why is it ok that the things people believe can be broadcast all over everthing and left as little asides but I'm not allowed to question that? Why is it ok to say you're going to hell or I'll pray for your soul to an non believer but not be allowed to tell them why their god doesn't exist? I understand might see it as sn attack on them but ultimately the same person is still lying to themselves in both scenarios. Obviously you can see it from either or perspective and think that too. I might across like I am attacking...
#TruthOfLife
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2 Comments
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