Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
drone
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 10:38am
27th Dec 2024 10:38am
Lively Eyes
It's a creeper
That most ignore
Until
The pain Arrives
At your door
When one try's to do
What one could do before
Your Perceptions
Now forced to change
Your view of life
From those lively eyes
Surrounded
By wrinkles
Of Old age
That most ignore
Until
The pain Arrives
At your door
When one try's to do
What one could do before
Your Perceptions
Now forced to change
Your view of life
From those lively eyes
Surrounded
By wrinkles
Of Old age
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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0 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 1:34am
27th Dec 2024 1:34am
Cruel World
We were thrown together
Working a temp job we were both overqualified for.
He, a recent college grad soon to begin a master's
And me, who had gotten my bachelor's
somewhere around the time his parents were in kindergarten.
We talked about everything
Movies
Music
Politics
What the future of the world might hold
What America would be like in fifty years
Even ten.
It turned depressing from there.
Cruel World, young guy said, shaking his head
How long have you known that? I ask
...
Working a temp job we were both overqualified for.
He, a recent college grad soon to begin a master's
And me, who had gotten my bachelor's
somewhere around the time his parents were in kindergarten.
We talked about everything
Movies
Music
Politics
What the future of the world might hold
What America would be like in fifty years
Even ten.
It turned depressing from there.
Cruel World, young guy said, shaking his head
How long have you known that? I ask
...
#denial
#fear
#TruthOfLife
59 reads
10 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
27th Dec 2024 00:56am
What ever you need and want
For sure 🙏 I'm thinking about you in your time of need when you seek clarity of understanding, is why am HERE AND NOW. 🙏 FOR I come as a blessing in disguise, for the betterment of each of your lives, 🤔 to help you navigate your ups and downs that are involved in creating a different kind of life. 🙏 For sure that's why I am here with you now, as I sit here and reflect upon the things I've seen how much this world 🌍 has changed over time. 😭 Years after YEARS of what is happening in the world, as 🌍 it becomes filled with chaos and drama...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
53 reads
4 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
26th Dec 2024 3:21am
26th Dec 2024 3:21am
THE NAKED TRUTH
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
132 reads
4 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
24th Dec 2024 1:13pm
24th Dec 2024 1:13pm
When the bridge keeps getting burnt
One has to ask
Who the arsonist is
Who the arsonist is
#SelfReflection
#TruthOfLife
48 reads
1 Comment
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
23rd Dec 2024 3:40pm
23rd Dec 2024 3:40pm
~bhakti yoga in all it’s rasas.. the liberation in love
viz: bhakti
#fire
#freedom
#love
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
109 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 11:57am
22nd Dec 2024 11:57am
Scumbags
There is no light without darkness! There is no gift without neglect. There is no happiness without sadness. There is no memory, if you don't forget.... :P i can feel it :D ;)
#TruthOfLife
75 reads
9 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:23am
22nd Dec 2024 9:23am
Hard tech
Does one
Hate to Learn
How to use
One's own personal
Soft Technology
That much
One is willing
To Sacrifice
One's own personal
Conection
To Source
To that Spark
That defines
Who You Are
Hate to Learn
How to use
One's own personal
Soft Technology
That much
One is willing
To Sacrifice
One's own personal
Conection
To Source
To that Spark
That defines
Who You Are
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
36 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 9:08am
22nd Dec 2024 9:08am
Odds
It's well over the odds
When calculating the Costs
Of the Consequences
That will Be
Incurred
When one Decides
Not to Fight
Those Thoughts
That Claim
Their Yours
When calculating the Costs
Of the Consequences
That will Be
Incurred
When one Decides
Not to Fight
Those Thoughts
That Claim
Their Yours
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
28 reads
0 Comments
Trome
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 5:48am
22nd Dec 2024 5:48am
between ages 51 and 52,
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
110 reads
3 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 4:25am
22nd Dec 2024 4:25am
Deserted
Sonoran desert
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
sparse like you
unsentimental wishes
alluring invitation
cancelled party
#desert
#hope
#TruthOfLife
79 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
22nd Dec 2024 3:18am
Spiritual Awakening
TO BE GRATEFUL AND THANKFUL AND BLESSED YET WHY is it that there is ways to go to escape, from the negativity and drama, but yet it doesn't matter what you think 🤔 and still feel. For sure we have to learn to truly navigate, through the process of the SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF THOSE THINGS. THAT SEEMS TO JUST DRAW US IN SO many LEVELS OF CONTROL OVER US. YET I have found what I need to sustain life 🙏 for it's the truth of the nonsense that doesn't matter 😔 but yet it does sometimes. 🤨 For sure everything that we have to go through, is precious to life that sometimes...
#faith
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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