Time Heals by Top Critiquers Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Styxian
Poem Published
21st Aug 2022 4:31pm
21st Aug 2022 4:31pm
The Light From Lu Bu's Bridge
Come meet me at the pillars
of Lu Bu's bridge, at dusk.
Through, and although, the crowd.
I will be distinguished,
by a torch held high.
A beacon for you, as unchanging
as it was once then.
During the expanse
of our separate journeys,
I met Father Time.
He called me up
several more steps
of his creaking porch.
Although I stepped back once,
perhaps twice, telling him
not that many just yet.
He said 'Then change'.
So I've traded my armor
for a mule.
My arrows are...
of Lu Bu's bridge, at dusk.
Through, and although, the crowd.
I will be distinguished,
by a torch held high.
A beacon for you, as unchanging
as it was once then.
During the expanse
of our separate journeys,
I met Father Time.
He called me up
several more steps
of his creaking porch.
Although I stepped back once,
perhaps twice, telling him
not that many just yet.
He said 'Then change'.
So I've traded my armor
for a mule.
My arrows are...
#love
#hope
#TimeHeals
788 reads
20 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
10th Dec 2022 6:24am
10th Dec 2022 6:24am
Concept
every horror
mini horror
demi horror
rocky horror
whatever
I've been through
in the past few months
every lapse in gratitude
every war zone day
every tear filled night
every deceitful person
for every maddening frustration
every night of fitful sleep
every comfort
far out of reach
there's the abstract
concept
of balance
equilibrium
hope
tangled in a fine gold chain
tiny two point font
whispers of joy
a paradigm shift
stuck between gears ...
mini horror
demi horror
rocky horror
whatever
I've been through
in the past few months
every lapse in gratitude
every war zone day
every tear filled night
every deceitful person
for every maddening frustration
every night of fitful sleep
every comfort
far out of reach
there's the abstract
concept
of balance
equilibrium
hope
tangled in a fine gold chain
tiny two point font
whispers of joy
a paradigm shift
stuck between gears ...
#hope
#TimeHeals
#frustration #despair
#frustration #despair
504 reads
16 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
6th Apr 2022 1:06am
6th Apr 2022 1:06am
Healed... Seen Through My Eyes
I am finally returning to my place of employment from a beautiful self-battle journey on 04-06-22
For the day of 02-08-22, that unfaithful day will always be the day that has changed my life, my way of thinking, and to be grateful to myself for making a full recovery.
I’ve heard God places no more on a person than they can bear. One hundred and twenty-three pounds of weight on a healing fractured injury, I had to test that Heavenly oath.
I have learned I am my own fate. The only person who speaks for me when I seemed I could not go...
For the day of 02-08-22, that unfaithful day will always be the day that has changed my life, my way of thinking, and to be grateful to myself for making a full recovery.
I’ve heard God places no more on a person than they can bear. One hundred and twenty-three pounds of weight on a healing fractured injury, I had to test that Heavenly oath.
I have learned I am my own fate. The only person who speaks for me when I seemed I could not go...
#TimeHeals
#SelfReflection
588 reads
15 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
8th Jun 2022 2:03pm
8th Jun 2022 2:03pm
Just Wait
hollow effort
ticking in vain
time moves forward
nothing remains
success or failure
wrong or right
all of it fades
in dark of night
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
days are hours
hours are breaths
boxes of dust
striving for death
triumphs worthless
anguish too
all that lingers
is how I touch you
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
ticking in vain
time moves forward
nothing remains
success or failure
wrong or right
all of it fades
in dark of night
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
days are hours
hours are breaths
boxes of dust
striving for death
triumphs worthless
anguish too
all that lingers
is how I touch you
this will pass
just wait
none of it matters
just wait
#depression
#death
#TimeHeals #apathy
#TimeHeals #apathy
533 reads
12 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
31st May 2023 00:16am
31st May 2023 00:16am
Know-it-all People
Know-it-all people
are driving me insane
It's okay if you are
smart but do not
gloat about it
help the other
person don't
make them feel
bad about
themselves
you want to
put good out
Into the world
not evil
are driving me insane
It's okay if you are
smart but do not
gloat about it
help the other
person don't
make them feel
bad about
themselves
you want to
put good out
Into the world
not evil
#women
#men
#family
#environment
#TimeHeals
278 reads
9 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 7:19pm
26th Nov 2024 7:19pm
Walk On The Path Of Love
Walk on the path of love
by your very soul.
Listen to the laughter of your heart
alone..
Feel in the sweet sound of the light steps of love
sashaying in your whole
alone..
Bathe in the warm flow of love
till your soul is suffused with beauty.
Let your love be enshrined in the sacred path of heart
hide it between his layers
keep it out of sight
keep it away from the path of mind
Let it escape its books and frames
Love has its very mood and sways!
The mind has its very language and ways!
Tell your love to stay away...
by your very soul.
Listen to the laughter of your heart
alone..
Feel in the sweet sound of the light steps of love
sashaying in your whole
alone..
Bathe in the warm flow of love
till your soul is suffused with beauty.
Let your love be enshrined in the sacred path of heart
hide it between his layers
keep it out of sight
keep it away from the path of mind
Let it escape its books and frames
Love has its very mood and sways!
The mind has its very language and ways!
Tell your love to stay away...
#inspirational
#love
#spiritual
#strength
#TimeHeals
76 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
8th Dec 2024 11:34am
Wise Moments In The Wild
Around The Future
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
i spent the morning on the mountain, roaming like a drifter searching a new way
to chase away my stress, and spill out the bitter spleen in my heart, striding along,
passing every stone, climbing each rock, hearing every bird sending his complains, filling the dead void with a thousand sighs..
The pine forest lies quite on the steep rocky plain, anchored firmly to a childhood earth,
as some joyous robins and goldfinch broke my thoughts with a twitter and a gentle birdie scream,
Seemingly, Spring has sped some happy harbingers...
#admiration
#emotions
#inspirational
#summer
#TimeHeals
64 reads
2 Comments
Lilliputian
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 9:45pm
28th Nov 2024 9:45pm
Eternal Vestige
Bright “Time heals” quotes
Only made my waiting dismal,
Pointless clock,
Broken pendulum,
A lifetime ticking in vain.
Slowly rotting in despair,
As if I’m unworthy
For the years to embrace me,
For the months to mend my shards,
For the weeks to cure my wounds,
For the days to treat my scars,
For the minutes to wipe my tears,
For the seconds to hush my ache.
Left with undying remnants,
Imprinted marks of anguish,
Sharpened claws of nightmares,
Tucked beneath my pillow—
An eternal vestige.
Only made my waiting dismal,
Pointless clock,
Broken pendulum,
A lifetime ticking in vain.
Slowly rotting in despair,
As if I’m unworthy
For the years to embrace me,
For the months to mend my shards,
For the weeks to cure my wounds,
For the days to treat my scars,
For the minutes to wipe my tears,
For the seconds to hush my ache.
Left with undying remnants,
Imprinted marks of anguish,
Sharpened claws of nightmares,
Tucked beneath my pillow—
An eternal vestige.
#despair
#TimeHeals
77 reads
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
6th Mar 2023 00:18am
6th Mar 2023 00:18am
drama at a busy surgery
I said to the doctor how
long have I got
he says I can give
you five minutes
what’s the problem ..
long have I got
he says I can give
you five minutes
what’s the problem ..
#TimeHeals
195 reads
1 Comment
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
5th Mar 2021 12:07pm
5th Mar 2021 12:07pm
No Reasons
No reason behind the indifference
just not caring much anymore
at least that's what he said once
but today its a different story
there's something blue
and a lot of sparkles in between
I think he's in love
unfortunately I'm not the recipient
or fortunately maybe
as I don't really care either
sad to see a passion fire die
and watch the ashes blown away
so coffee anyone?
just not caring much anymore
at least that's what he said once
but today its a different story
there's something blue
and a lot of sparkles in between
I think he's in love
unfortunately I'm not the recipient
or fortunately maybe
as I don't really care either
sad to see a passion fire die
and watch the ashes blown away
so coffee anyone?
#strength
#TimeHeals
#apathy
571 reads
4 Comments
Lamjhnsn1
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:10pm
Yesterday 1:10pm
Tomorrow
Tomorrow is disruption!
A time to come, & possibility....
Today is ladened, & waste.
What a ruin, I've made!
Blocks, that are toothed....
Have caused me to stumble.
But, tomorrow is prospect.
The 'morrow is undried....& unsettled.
Hope is unbridled, & unwed!
Yesterday is faded, & small.
To that which towered over....
To whatever posed a threat, yesterday....
It now lie in state.
The day before this, is a devoured ghost.
A time to come, & possibility....
Today is ladened, & waste.
What a ruin, I've made!
Blocks, that are toothed....
Have caused me to stumble.
But, tomorrow is prospect.
The 'morrow is undried....& unsettled.
Hope is unbridled, & unwed!
Yesterday is faded, & small.
To that which towered over....
To whatever posed a threat, yesterday....
It now lie in state.
The day before this, is a devoured ghost.
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational #TimeHeals
#motivational #TimeHeals
35 reads
0 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
22nd Dec 2024 3:52am
These Scars Wont Define Us
Heartfelt, this goes out to all the poets here
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
those that for whatever the reason
have chosen to share their scars
I appreciate you all
Together WE shall cross this river
#gratitude
#healing
#support #TimeHeals
#support #TimeHeals
51 reads
3 Comments
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