Time Heals by Top Critiquers Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
5th Mar 2021 12:07pm
5th Mar 2021 12:07pm
No Reasons
No reason behind the indifference
just not caring much anymore
at least that's what he said once
but today its a different story
there's something blue
and a lot of sparkles in between
I think he's in love
unfortunately I'm not the recipient
or fortunately maybe
as I don't really care either
sad to see a passion fire die
and watch the ashes blown away
so coffee anyone?
just not caring much anymore
at least that's what he said once
but today its a different story
there's something blue
and a lot of sparkles in between
I think he's in love
unfortunately I'm not the recipient
or fortunately maybe
as I don't really care either
sad to see a passion fire die
and watch the ashes blown away
so coffee anyone?
#strength
#TimeHeals
#apathy
613 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
12th Sep 2024 6:38pm
12th Sep 2024 6:38pm
Cascades Of Healing
waterfalls are tears
of past pains cascading down
replenishing life
of past pains cascading down
replenishing life
#love
#senryu
#TimeHeals
127 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
6th Apr 2022 00:06am
6th Apr 2022 00:06am
Healed... Seen Through My Eyes
I am finally returning to my place of employment from a beautiful self-battle journey on 04-06-22
For the day of 02-08-22, that unfaithful day will always be the day that has changed my life, my way of thinking, and to be grateful to myself for making a full recovery.
I’ve heard God places no more on a person than they can bear. One hundred and twenty-three pounds of weight on a healing fractured injury, I had to test that Heavenly oath.
I have learned I am my own fate. The only person who speaks for me when I seemed I could not go...
For the day of 02-08-22, that unfaithful day will always be the day that has changed my life, my way of thinking, and to be grateful to myself for making a full recovery.
I’ve heard God places no more on a person than they can bear. One hundred and twenty-three pounds of weight on a healing fractured injury, I had to test that Heavenly oath.
I have learned I am my own fate. The only person who speaks for me when I seemed I could not go...
#TimeHeals
#SelfReflection
636 reads
15 Comments
JusTim_
Poem Published
7th Nov 2021 2:17pm
7th Nov 2021 2:17pm
til the end
the sun comes a little early
and reminds
of yesteryears
when freedom was just a place to call your own
the vast expanse as far as one could see
when time had no meaning or thought
where hands touched hands
and hearts were full
walking miles in worn out shoes
stepping on toes
caring, yes caring
but sometimes that's how it goes
taking a bullet for the cause
for effect, but still not affecting the outcome
I'm in for the long haul
the sun comes a little early
and whispers her wants and...
and reminds
of yesteryears
when freedom was just a place to call your own
the vast expanse as far as one could see
when time had no meaning or thought
where hands touched hands
and hearts were full
walking miles in worn out shoes
stepping on toes
caring, yes caring
but sometimes that's how it goes
taking a bullet for the cause
for effect, but still not affecting the outcome
I'm in for the long haul
the sun comes a little early
and whispers her wants and...
#TimeHeals
384 reads
3 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2022 2:15pm
2nd Jan 2022 2:15pm
Abandoning 2021
Abandoning 2021
When a job
Becomes
Too much,
We quit
Before
We get fired.
When
A relationship
Hits bottom,
We have
To
Decide
If this it;
It's gone
Rotten.
2021,
I'm so done
With you,
Not sorry
To say we're
Totally through.
You took
My last
Smile,
Got on
My last
Nerve,
Stole
All
My verve,
Took
All my joy,
I'm abandoning you.
I've found
A new love ...
When a job
Becomes
Too much,
We quit
Before
We get fired.
When
A relationship
Hits bottom,
We have
To
Decide
If this it;
It's gone
Rotten.
2021,
I'm so done
With you,
Not sorry
To say we're
Totally through.
You took
My last
Smile,
Got on
My last
Nerve,
Stole
All
My verve,
Took
All my joy,
I'm abandoning you.
I've found
A new love ...
#hope
#courage
#motivational
#inspirational
#TimeHeals
405 reads
4 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 9:21pm
28th Feb 2025 9:21pm
you touch me
the wind carries your heart
the sun spreads your warmth
the birds sing in your voice
i see your smile everywhere i go
in faces,in windows
in the clouds and in my mind
i feel your love surround me
envelope me,cover me everyday
you touch me
you sing to me
you warm me
you carry my heart
your soul is mine
i love you
never are you gone
you're always here ♥
the sun spreads your warmth
the birds sing in your voice
i see your smile everywhere i go
in faces,in windows
in the clouds and in my mind
i feel your love surround me
envelope me,cover me everyday
you touch me
you sing to me
you warm me
you carry my heart
your soul is mine
i love you
never are you gone
you're always here ♥
#love
#TimeHeals
88 reads
4 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
14th Aug 2019 5:29am
14th Aug 2019 5:29am
six word love story
your hand on
my face
memories
my face
memories
#love
#TimeHeals
629 reads
2 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 11:19pm
7th Dec 2024 11:19pm
Just Wait
You’re a devil running through heaven,
Left me tasting flames,
Ashes burned into my eyes.
Love blinded me so,
Locked heart, locked the skies.
Still, I watched you fly.
Angel with a devil’s tail,
Or devil with an angel’s wings
How do I escape you?
A ghost runs through my mind,
Eyes fixed on fading light,
What was our love, but a sick joke?
Just wait, the stars will turn,
One day, the flames won’t burn.
You’ll see the truth in the scars I earned, ...
Left me tasting flames,
Ashes burned into my eyes.
Love blinded me so,
Locked heart, locked the skies.
Still, I watched you fly.
Angel with a devil’s tail,
Or devil with an angel’s wings
How do I escape you?
A ghost runs through my mind,
Eyes fixed on fading light,
What was our love, but a sick joke?
Just wait, the stars will turn,
One day, the flames won’t burn.
You’ll see the truth in the scars I earned, ...
#hurt
#LifeCycle
#love #TimeHeals
#love #TimeHeals
120 reads
1 Comment
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:31pm
2nd Apr 2025 7:31pm
Like A Beacon
I thought you’d left a light on for me
in that place we built from thin air
and pieces of ourselves we hid
it stood as a monument to everything
I didn’t know I wanted
in that time it stilled
a grand design
a Van Gogh
using pain and suffering to
paint our version of “Starry Night”
turning it into the most gorgeous suffering
of fools in love
we emblazoned our names into the the bust of the mantle
with little hearts
like love sick teenagers
so someone could...
in that place we built from thin air
and pieces of ourselves we hid
it stood as a monument to everything
I didn’t know I wanted
in that time it stilled
a grand design
a Van Gogh
using pain and suffering to
paint our version of “Starry Night”
turning it into the most gorgeous suffering
of fools in love
we emblazoned our names into the the bust of the mantle
with little hearts
like love sick teenagers
so someone could...
#emotions
#hope
#TimeHeals
62 reads
1 Comment
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
7th Dec 2018 6:46pm
7th Dec 2018 6:46pm
Argument Aftermath
With feigned indifference
I tried to arrest your heart.
But my sensitive eyes
and gentle tone of voice
gave me away.
The warmth of your embrace
gave way to tears,
and the love on your face
erased most of my fears.
To err is mortal,
And love is not without
pains along the way.
Out of the portal
of love, comes much
apologies and forgiveness.
These 2 facets
of love
eases the hurts
along the way.
So.............
how can I continue to
be angry ----...
I tried to arrest your heart.
But my sensitive eyes
and gentle tone of voice
gave me away.
The warmth of your embrace
gave way to tears,
and the love on your face
erased most of my fears.
To err is mortal,
And love is not without
pains along the way.
Out of the portal
of love, comes much
apologies and forgiveness.
These 2 facets
of love
eases the hurts
along the way.
So.............
how can I continue to
be angry ----...
#sadness
#anger
#love
#forgiveness
#TimeHeals
469 reads
2 Comments
Numer90
Numer0-un0
Numer0-un0
Poem Published
30th Jul 2021 9:54pm
30th Jul 2021 9:54pm
My Jury
An hour of administering impressant..
Follows the next with a depressant..
THE DEAD TELL NO TALES
Completing a consistent twenty four hour cycle..
A food chain?
Life or a food web cycle..
Call it..
By chance I survive by some miracle..
Know this, in what I do, I am being a hell of an actor..
Neither the act..
And fuck the fact..
This is a factor..
Persistent bipolar disorder..
Stranded in a land of...
Follows the next with a depressant..
THE DEAD TELL NO TALES
Completing a consistent twenty four hour cycle..
A food chain?
Life or a food web cycle..
Call it..
By chance I survive by some miracle..
Know this, in what I do, I am being a hell of an actor..
Neither the act..
And fuck the fact..
This is a factor..
Persistent bipolar disorder..
Stranded in a land of...
#strength
#TimeHeals
534 reads
2 Comments
Sappho
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 10:09am
15th Jan 2024 10:09am
Enchanted Heart
Wise old trees
Whispering mysteries
Tiny plant devas
Buzzing around wildflowers
Healing water of life
Flowing above gnarly roots
In small cascades within
The magical forest of my heart
I roam the wilderness in my chest
A willow basket
With little gifts in my hands
I feed the wildlife and
Leave gemstones for the fairies
I radiate loving kindness
Scooping of the abundance
Of my overflowing heart
All of a sudden
You cross my mind and
I...
Whispering mysteries
Tiny plant devas
Buzzing around wildflowers
Healing water of life
Flowing above gnarly roots
In small cascades within
The magical forest of my heart
I roam the wilderness in my chest
A willow basket
With little gifts in my hands
I feed the wildlife and
Leave gemstones for the fairies
I radiate loving kindness
Scooping of the abundance
Of my overflowing heart
All of a sudden
You cross my mind and
I...
#love
#kindness
#inspirational #TimeHeals
#inspirational #TimeHeals
181 reads
2 Comments
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