Time Heals by Top Critiquers Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
A New Truth
There are a few people
I know won’t lie to me
I know this
I don’t have to
Fake it til I make it
I don’t have to question
If it’s real
I don’t have to wonder
If my decision making
Is sound
I can trust this
Pretty huge for a girl
Who can’t trust much
For the first time in a long time
Maybe, for the first time ever
I have people who are real
In my corner
Who have my back
And the lies I’ve been told
That I’ve taught myself to believe
Don’t exist
I know won’t lie to me
I know this
I don’t have to
Fake it til I make it
I don’t have to question
If it’s real
I don’t have to wonder
If my decision making
Is sound
I can trust this
Pretty huge for a girl
Who can’t trust much
For the first time in a long time
Maybe, for the first time ever
I have people who are real
In my corner
Who have my back
And the lies I’ve been told
That I’ve taught myself to believe
Don’t exist
#gratitude
#PersonalGrowth
#TimeHeals
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Deja vu
speaking visions into being
I see them so I tell you freely
altered reality bends destiny
wrapping fate in its wings
Deja vu, do you remember me?
sulking in the shadows waiting to be free
I call the dawn and my children with her
walking through the shade of the moon
a Goddess, a rite, a ritual
under a spell you are beckoned now come forth
turning through time, eons untold
I am among you
here are the keys to the universes
let's walk in the sun-night of a new era
birthed of an immortal lineage ...
I see them so I tell you freely
altered reality bends destiny
wrapping fate in its wings
Deja vu, do you remember me?
sulking in the shadows waiting to be free
I call the dawn and my children with her
walking through the shade of the moon
a Goddess, a rite, a ritual
under a spell you are beckoned now come forth
turning through time, eons untold
I am among you
here are the keys to the universes
let's walk in the sun-night of a new era
birthed of an immortal lineage ...
#love
#TimeHeals
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Regular / Irregular/ Regulated
Giving thanks this holiday season
Some of you knew
Others didn’t
In early January 2024
I was diagnosed with having a/fib
Atrial Fibrillation
How could that be ?
I never felt the symptoms particularly
Yet it was
Blood thinners immediately prescribed
Other heart drugs too
Then
Complications from drugs
More doctors
Lots of tests
Terrible interrupted sleep
Peeing like no tomorrow
Then
I started to listen to my doctors
Also to myself
Decisions to be...
Some of you knew
Others didn’t
In early January 2024
I was diagnosed with having a/fib
Atrial Fibrillation
How could that be ?
I never felt the symptoms particularly
Yet it was
Blood thinners immediately prescribed
Other heart drugs too
Then
Complications from drugs
More doctors
Lots of tests
Terrible interrupted sleep
Peeing like no tomorrow
Then
I started to listen to my doctors
Also to myself
Decisions to be...
#friendship
#healing
#LifeCycle
#MentalHealth
#TimeHeals
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The balance of life
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ For let's take a a minute to answer, that question 🤔 in the depth of just understanding, what is the balance of life. 🤨 For example for with everything having to deal with situations, that we shall go through in life there are somethings. That are involved in creating a solid attitude in other ways, to be able to navigate through the process of life. Now let's go even deeper than deep into the deepness of your mind and heart ❤️ For example sometimes we might have to learn, to agree or disagree with...
#healing
#learning
#LifeChangingMoment
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
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willful amnesia
how honest are we with ourselves
when the night howls
& memory lies behind our eyes
is it the heart & it's infinite capacity to forget
gaslighting us into believing we must have...
...what we desire
as if that worked out so well the last time
& truth is...
reality tastes better dipped in arsenic
going down...at any rate
it's the gut clawing crawl to the end that reminds us
too late to kick ourselves
or renege on the deal we made
to appease our desperate need
to cave...giving in
...like a...
when the night howls
& memory lies behind our eyes
is it the heart & it's infinite capacity to forget
gaslighting us into believing we must have...
...what we desire
as if that worked out so well the last time
& truth is...
reality tastes better dipped in arsenic
going down...at any rate
it's the gut clawing crawl to the end that reminds us
too late to kick ourselves
or renege on the deal we made
to appease our desperate need
to cave...giving in
...like a...
#honesty
#memories
#SelfReflection #TimeHeals
#SelfReflection #TimeHeals
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TRAVELING THE ROAD OF LOVE
When I first started on
the road to love I thought
the journey would be easy:
"Two hearts in FULL agreement."
NOT SO!
The road to love is paved
with ruts, potholes, and detours.
It is not a one-way, super highway
with no detours, it is not all
beautiful landscape; there
are back roads. From time to time
you stop to have a picnic in a
beautiful meadow or roadside park;
you run behind in arriving at
your destination and wonder is
the trouble worth it; your dreams
and wishes on the road to love
aren't...
the road to love I thought
the journey would be easy:
"Two hearts in FULL agreement."
NOT SO!
The road to love is paved
with ruts, potholes, and detours.
It is not a one-way, super highway
with no detours, it is not all
beautiful landscape; there
are back roads. From time to time
you stop to have a picnic in a
beautiful meadow or roadside park;
you run behind in arriving at
your destination and wonder is
the trouble worth it; your dreams
and wishes on the road to love
aren't...
#happiness
#love
#inspirational
#TimeHeals
#emotions
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Soul Hour Power
Blown beyond summer's triangle stars
The clouds made way for the setting moon
And the campfire wood that newly chars
By way of kindling combustion tune
Gently applying to overwhelmed ears
A sound thrice sacred to my lunacy
And for which I provide three silent cheers
To emphasize an importunacy
Beseeching that maintenance of repose
Best lit by moonbeams and firelight
And whichever way the starlight glows
All through the middle of a summer night
Whose hours reestablish a soul
As less traffic helps with traffic control.
The clouds made way for the setting moon
And the campfire wood that newly chars
By way of kindling combustion tune
Gently applying to overwhelmed ears
A sound thrice sacred to my lunacy
And for which I provide three silent cheers
To emphasize an importunacy
Beseeching that maintenance of repose
Best lit by moonbeams and firelight
And whichever way the starlight glows
All through the middle of a summer night
Whose hours reestablish a soul
As less traffic helps with traffic control.
#TimeHeals
#meditation
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a new change
after you
left me,
moved
out
for the
final time,
it took
some
strength
but hurt
and
sorrow
have now
lost most
of their
bitter taste,
loneliness
stayed
around
for awhile,
but now
a new
change is
moving in.
left me,
moved
out
for the
final time,
it took
some
strength
but hurt
and
sorrow
have now
lost most
of their
bitter taste,
loneliness
stayed
around
for awhile,
but now
a new
change is
moving in.
#anger
#breakup
#disappointment
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
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Buy Curious
#TimeHeals
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The Light From Lu Bu's Bridge
Come meet me at the pillars
of Lu Bu's bridge, at dusk.
Through, and although, the crowd.
I will be distinguished,
by a torch held high.
A beacon for you, as unchanging
as it was once then.
During the expanse
of our separate journeys,
I met Father Time.
He called me up
several more steps
of his creaking porch.
Although I stepped back once,
perhaps twice, telling him
not that many just yet.
He said 'Then change'.
So I've traded my armor
for a mule.
My arrows are...
of Lu Bu's bridge, at dusk.
Through, and although, the crowd.
I will be distinguished,
by a torch held high.
A beacon for you, as unchanging
as it was once then.
During the expanse
of our separate journeys,
I met Father Time.
He called me up
several more steps
of his creaking porch.
Although I stepped back once,
perhaps twice, telling him
not that many just yet.
He said 'Then change'.
So I've traded my armor
for a mule.
My arrows are...
#love
#hope
#TimeHeals
787 reads
20 Comments
2024
The year of twenty twenty-four is near
and with it comes a hope for better days.
A time to heal the wounds of yesteryear
and face the future in a brighter gaze
But what will be the challenges ahead?
What trials and tribulations will we face?
Will we be able to overcome the dread
that lingers from the past and leaves a trace?
In nineteen twenty-four, a year of change.
Two men of different fates and different lands:
One breathed his last, the other saw the light
one left a legacy, the other began his fight.
...
and with it comes a hope for better days.
A time to heal the wounds of yesteryear
and face the future in a brighter gaze
But what will be the challenges ahead?
What trials and tribulations will we face?
Will we be able to overcome the dread
that lingers from the past and leaves a trace?
In nineteen twenty-four, a year of change.
Two men of different fates and different lands:
One breathed his last, the other saw the light
one left a legacy, the other began his fight.
...
#LifeStruggles
#TimeHeals
#MovingOn
#healing
#emotions
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Cascades Of Healing
waterfalls are tears
of past pains cascading down
replenishing life
of past pains cascading down
replenishing life
#love
#senryu
#TimeHeals
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