Time Heals Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 11:19am
16th Nov 2024 11:19am
All gone
Her anguish, no longer her burden.
Remnants of what she can count on.
Loyalty proves nothing certain.
Like him the pain is gone.
A R.M.
Remnants of what she can count on.
Loyalty proves nothing certain.
Like him the pain is gone.
A R.M.
#TimeHeals
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Whackytraveler
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 2:43pm
15th Nov 2024 2:43pm
My father’s grief
He wears a smile on his face
And works almost every day
He stays up late
Will often go outside to rake
The leaves out of the yard
I mentioned the missing tombstone
But all I get is a reply
That says next time
My father’s grief
Hides itself well
I often wish it would come out of its shell
If not sadness then at least shed a tear
So his health I won’t fear
My father’s grief is locked away in a shell
No one knows when it comes out
I wish it was loud
And works almost every day
He stays up late
Will often go outside to rake
The leaves out of the yard
I mentioned the missing tombstone
But all I get is a reply
That says next time
My father’s grief
Hides itself well
I often wish it would come out of its shell
If not sadness then at least shed a tear
So his health I won’t fear
My father’s grief is locked away in a shell
No one knows when it comes out
I wish it was loud
#apathy
#father
#TimeHeals
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Whackytraveler
Poem Published
11th Nov 2024 1:38pm
11th Nov 2024 1:38pm
I forget why
Some days life passes by
I go about my day
And I don’t ask why
It has to be this way
I go about my day
And I don’t ask why
It has to be this way
#bittersweet
#TimeHeals
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 4:18pm
8th Nov 2024 4:18pm
All The Darkness Fades Into Light
what shall i compose about the darkness
when the truth is bright like the sun
and spend a life in reasonless sadness*
while i can rejoice in smiles and fun.
do i have to complain of my own stress
isn't it empathic to keep it unsaid ?!
In self resilience, stoic, i progress
To rebuild a broken bone instead
i have to burn in the bright sunshine
as the truth lights my abyssal depths
my innerness swallows the heart that pines
grieving; is never a spiritual wealth
i will light a...
when the truth is bright like the sun
and spend a life in reasonless sadness*
while i can rejoice in smiles and fun.
do i have to complain of my own stress
isn't it empathic to keep it unsaid ?!
In self resilience, stoic, i progress
To rebuild a broken bone instead
i have to burn in the bright sunshine
as the truth lights my abyssal depths
my innerness swallows the heart that pines
grieving; is never a spiritual wealth
i will light a...
#emotions
#hope
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
126 reads
6 Comments
DarkPassion
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 10:18am
7th Nov 2024 10:18am
Ka represents vital essence
Remember to breathe.
Plus three.
Release mind in serene pastures. Vibrate in a safe place.
Supreme precedence set in stone. Android engineered micro clones.
Miracles grown, fragile powdered bones.
Rising in thee knew whirld.
Have know intention to make it alone.
Pledge for allegiance.
Thirsty in an overflowing well of surprise.
Sheer sacrifice.
Fearless fruit forbidden yet redeemed EVE 🧬 Gene-Eroot.
Shocking Ra to scream.
Gut at the altar. Is this justice for a altered throne?.
Lift that Magnifies the way home…...
Plus three.
Release mind in serene pastures. Vibrate in a safe place.
Supreme precedence set in stone. Android engineered micro clones.
Miracles grown, fragile powdered bones.
Rising in thee knew whirld.
Have know intention to make it alone.
Pledge for allegiance.
Thirsty in an overflowing well of surprise.
Sheer sacrifice.
Fearless fruit forbidden yet redeemed EVE 🧬 Gene-Eroot.
Shocking Ra to scream.
Gut at the altar. Is this justice for a altered throne?.
Lift that Magnifies the way home…...
#healing
#honesty
#peace
#SelfDiscovery
#TimeHeals
75 reads
4 Comments
Whackytraveler
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 6:51am
7th Nov 2024 6:51am
Ocean Blue
The sound of the sea
I feel the breeze
It carries me
The scent of coconuts
And palm trees that stretch high
And then curve as if to sigh
In the breeze
My hair flows
I don’t have a use for bows
The waves in my hair
Are something new
My skin, a golden hue
I love the ocean blue
It reminds me of you
I feel the breeze
It carries me
The scent of coconuts
And palm trees that stretch high
And then curve as if to sigh
In the breeze
My hair flows
I don’t have a use for bows
The waves in my hair
Are something new
My skin, a golden hue
I love the ocean blue
It reminds me of you
#sea
#TimeHeals
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cabcool
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 4:47pm
3rd Nov 2024 4:47pm
October Poems 2024 >> it is finished!
October Poems 2024
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
DAY 31
it is finished!
my days of reckless dalliance are gone,
as on the edge of ancientness i stand
to welcome, from the mist, a soberer dawn,
whence infidelity is strictly banned.
my restless pen has found a nobler ink
for every parchment worthy of its merit;
it supersedes pedantic mental quinque,
to bless the page on which i would confer it.
my stormy fights with youth phenomena,
upon daredevil precipice and cliff, ...
A poem for each day of the month in which I was born
DAY 31
it is finished!
my days of reckless dalliance are gone,
as on the edge of ancientness i stand
to welcome, from the mist, a soberer dawn,
whence infidelity is strictly banned.
my restless pen has found a nobler ink
for every parchment worthy of its merit;
it supersedes pedantic mental quinque,
to bless the page on which i would confer it.
my stormy fights with youth phenomena,
upon daredevil precipice and cliff, ...
#birthday
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeCycle
#TimeHeals
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2024 10:20pm
22nd Oct 2024 10:20pm
MAY HOW TIME FLIES BY
From the deepness of my thoughts to the memories of you and I. 💞 Two souls who became friends and then we became partners and then we decided to be just one. For sure we had our rough times and good times, that happen in our lives. Yet you were there for me, as I was there for you, ❤️ as a love building a strong relationship, as a foundation of steel and stones. For sure we became inseparable with the passing of time, For sure our lives change right before our eyes. When cancer invade our lives, 😞 for a minute we really thought that I wasn't going to make it, to...
#courage
#hope
#redemption
#strength
#TimeHeals
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KendalM
Poem Published
21st Oct 2024 5:51pm
21st Oct 2024 5:51pm
Processing
As I have previously written, my mother growing up was hard to live with, and that's putting it nicely. I never felt good enough, but now, she's back...the mother that I had up until I was about five, before she turned into a hard women.
As she lay there curled up on the sofa, her ice water with the straw clanking against the metal thermos sides as she stirred the half melted chunks around it's perimeter, all got quiet as she out of no where says, Sis...I need to tell you a few things.
As the lump in my throat seemed as if it was starting to block my airway, I mumbled ok, but wasn't...
As she lay there curled up on the sofa, her ice water with the straw clanking against the metal thermos sides as she stirred the half melted chunks around it's perimeter, all got quiet as she out of no where says, Sis...I need to tell you a few things.
As the lump in my throat seemed as if it was starting to block my airway, I mumbled ok, but wasn't...
#emotions
#forgiveness
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
64 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 10:57am
20th Oct 2024 10:57am
Vacant
It is said
Respect for the memories
For the personality
For which you once knew
Has far more value
Then the respect
For a vacant body
Respect for the memories
For the personality
For which you once knew
Has far more value
Then the respect
For a vacant body
#courage
#grief
#respect
#sadness
#TimeHeals
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
18th Oct 2024 3:16pm
18th Oct 2024 3:16pm
IT'S ONLY THE BEGINNING
From my own life I take a page from out of my life, as I reflect on the power of the mind and heart, and spiritual soul. For even though I was looking death in eye, I knew that I had to be able to share my own personal thoughts, for sure we will never know how someone else is doing in there own struggles. As life is a struggle In different stages of experience, whether in a relationship or with friends and family. 😔 Yet it is those times when we all will need that helping hand 🙏 to be able to share the deepness of what it means to be a kindred spiritual person. For sure it's...
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#strength
#TimeHeals
86 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Oct 2024 6:31pm
12th Oct 2024 6:31pm
SACRED HEALING
SACRED HEALING is more beneficial to you, more than anything that you could do to improve. YOUR quality of life and health and wellness of your healing, process through the process of your your own mind and heart and spiritual soul transferring. THE real deepness of your personal thoughts, from negativity to positivity for sure no matter what we have to do, to improve the process of healing. DO it with your inner strength and courage and perseverance. For we must never give up 🤨 the fight, for the betterment of life. For let the fire 🔥 that burns inside of you, let it ignite,...
#LifeChangingMoment
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TimeHeals #uplifting
#TimeHeals #uplifting
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