Time Heals Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
Today 3:09am
Today 3:09am
Storytime! Shut up and Listen!
#courage
#patience
#TimeHeals #vanity
#TimeHeals #vanity
39 reads
1 Comment
Ryan-G-Hayward
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:41am
Yesterday 4:41am
Eyes of the Slow
Your eyes had all the intricate details,
a throbbing wash up of a shore,
a child gives push to the little sail,
and the lump in my throat,
is ministrant to your tail,
to your being of so fragile,
You're the eyes of this slow,
we just met so some-how.
a throbbing wash up of a shore,
a child gives push to the little sail,
and the lump in my throat,
is ministrant to your tail,
to your being of so fragile,
You're the eyes of this slow,
we just met so some-how.
#emotions
#hope
#kindness
#respect
#TimeHeals
32 reads
2 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 5:38pm
1st Feb 2025 5:38pm
Flight of the crow
Getting older I realise
The things I love dissappear before my eyes
Questions with answers I'll never know
Places i never wish to go
I won't talk to criticise
Everyday I'm closer to the skies
People come and people go
Why ill never know
I still dream and fantasise
Hearts still an enormous size
Journeys end and sun melts the snow
I'm off to follow the flight of the crow
The things I love dissappear before my eyes
Questions with answers I'll never know
Places i never wish to go
I won't talk to criticise
Everyday I'm closer to the skies
People come and people go
Why ill never know
I still dream and fantasise
Hearts still an enormous size
Journeys end and sun melts the snow
I'm off to follow the flight of the crow
#hope
#TimeHeals
22 reads
0 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 8:30am
1st Feb 2025 8:30am
Sometimes saltwater lingers in closed wounds
#suffering
#TimeHeals
19 reads
1 Comment
Pete_25
Poem Published
31st Jan 2025 8:08am
31st Jan 2025 8:08am
Foreign Skies
These long winding roads
Under foreign skies
Fortune favours the bold
Before you kiss goodbye
Look a little closer
Every step you take
Life is a rollercoaster
Avoiding the same mistake
Under foreign skies
Fortune favours the bold
Before you kiss goodbye
Look a little closer
Every step you take
Life is a rollercoaster
Avoiding the same mistake
#emotions
#strength
#TimeHeals
80 reads
15 Comments
asbr808
Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 8:06pm
27th Jan 2025 8:06pm
pirating a heart
a brazen delicate lingering effect
energized raison d'etre
the cabals internal
know not old or new
in many years i am to be
the chosen raring few
looking into deep water
the island feels afloat
in search of crystal harbors
upon a slender boat
seeking snaking hungry fish
at last we shout 'land ho!'
buried treasure now or never
don't dare dispute life's flow
and though we now suntan on sand
in frozen hourglass
two ships: in day and in night
do meet and come to pass
energized raison d'etre
the cabals internal
know not old or new
in many years i am to be
the chosen raring few
looking into deep water
the island feels afloat
in search of crystal harbors
upon a slender boat
seeking snaking hungry fish
at last we shout 'land ho!'
buried treasure now or never
don't dare dispute life's flow
and though we now suntan on sand
in frozen hourglass
two ships: in day and in night
do meet and come to pass
#FeelingLost
#love
#TimeHeals
43 reads
0 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
She Walks In Silence
She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
#courage
#inspirational
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
67 reads
8 Comments
Her
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 1:47am
27th Jan 2025 1:47am
Rewriting My Story (revised)
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m leaving my past and what became of me
I’m chasing the light and what’s calling me
Watch me
Mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
Mmmm
A new dawn breaks, my skies are clear
I’m wiping my tears with my fear
Step by step I’m moving on
Old days fade I’m moving on
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
I’m breaking chains, there’s no more ties to pain
Every choice, every stride
No more living in shadows, no more reason to hide
Spreading...
I’m leaving my past and what became of me
I’m chasing the light and what’s calling me
Watch me
Mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
Mmmm
A new dawn breaks, my skies are clear
I’m wiping my tears with my fear
Step by step I’m moving on
Old days fade I’m moving on
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
I’m breaking chains, there’s no more ties to pain
Every choice, every stride
No more living in shadows, no more reason to hide
Spreading...
#hope
#lyrics
#TimeHeals
98 reads
4 Comments
Her
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 3:22pm
25th Jan 2025 3:22pm
The Rising Sun
The rising sun
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Shadows crept on my lonely street
But as the dawn begins to creep
A promise stirs beneath my feet
Mmmmm
Darkness fading as a new day awakes
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm
No more pain
Mmmmm
My nights were long and filled with doubt
How many echoes screamed, I lost count
Morning light has shown my pain a new route ...
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Shadows crept on my lonely street
But as the dawn begins to creep
A promise stirs beneath my feet
Mmmmm
Darkness fading as a new day awakes
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm
No more pain
Mmmmm
My nights were long and filled with doubt
How many echoes screamed, I lost count
Morning light has shown my pain a new route ...
#courage
#hope
#lyrics #TimeHeals
#lyrics #TimeHeals
94 reads
8 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
At The Crossroads Of Life
Waiting For a New Day
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#TimeHeals
76 reads
0 Comments
Glaxian
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 11:05pm
20th Jan 2025 11:05pm
Though my love's Gone
Though my lover's gone
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
#gratitude
#love
#relationships #TimeHeals
#relationships #TimeHeals
62 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
Don't Quit
When you feel like the whole world is 🌍 against you don't quit, for it's not the end of your life. IT'S just human nature to feel that you just can't win, but yet you do win in the end 😉 by not giving up without a fight 😉 When you feel that you have to just settle down, for something else that has no real intentions of commitment and CONSISTENCY. 🤔 DON'T quit just because they don't have the intelligence, to know that they found the truth within a relationship that they say they been not getting. 🤨 Don't quit when things in your life, aren't what you...
#confusion
#disappointment
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
57 reads
0 Comments
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