Stream Of Consciousness by Top Critiquers Poems
#StreamOfConsciousness
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
30th Jan 2025 12:02pm
30th Jan 2025 12:02pm
The NAO Amalgamate Inc. chapter1 part 1
The brown brick building at 1015 Chambers Street was not as easy to find as everyone may have thought. It was surrounded by other buildings that look identical to it. The only stand out feature that it had going for it was a small porcelain vase, off to the right, by the door way had one purple tulip in it.
Before entering the obscure building. Kat made sure to touch up her (tourmaline) red lipstick. Her hair was behaving itself and not puffing out due to the hot, humid day New York was having at the moment.
She was supposed to be on the twelfth floor, room 322. She...
Before entering the obscure building. Kat made sure to touch up her (tourmaline) red lipstick. Her hair was behaving itself and not puffing out due to the hot, humid day New York was having at the moment.
She was supposed to be on the twelfth floor, room 322. She...
#StreamOfConsciousness
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10 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
19th Feb 2024 5:17pm
19th Feb 2024 5:17pm
Spirit In The Sky
in my sanctuary I wait
tender to the touch, I yearn
a gentleness of soul, understood only by you
you alone reach me here
sanctity of spirit
you alone know me
you sit with me on the full days
and shine on me in the emptiness
sacred truth you are my greatest lover
sincere in your approach
my honesty greets you
caressing the dawn that brought you
I worship you in the celestial
my prayers rise on the winds as incense
in your tabernacle I am recognised
my body reaches for the heavens
my...
tender to the touch, I yearn
a gentleness of soul, understood only by you
you alone reach me here
sanctity of spirit
you alone know me
you sit with me on the full days
and shine on me in the emptiness
sacred truth you are my greatest lover
sincere in your approach
my honesty greets you
caressing the dawn that brought you
I worship you in the celestial
my prayers rise on the winds as incense
in your tabernacle I am recognised
my body reaches for the heavens
my...
#spiritual
#StreamOfConsciousness
185 reads
10 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:27am
Yesterday 5:27am
Streaming
Inside each of us is a streaming service
Delivering images,sound,movies
No subscription needed
It's free for life and
Makes life for you
What's playing in your head right now?
A horror movie?
A drama perhaps?
A comedy, if you're lucky!
The service has no index or filter
You have to make that yourself.
If you don't, you accept the dross that's
delivered .....and more will be delivered.
Netflix or Mindflix
Both are the same
They are there to distract you from
your true self.
Delivering images,sound,movies
No subscription needed
It's free for life and
Makes life for you
What's playing in your head right now?
A horror movie?
A drama perhaps?
A comedy, if you're lucky!
The service has no index or filter
You have to make that yourself.
If you don't, you accept the dross that's
delivered .....and more will be delivered.
Netflix or Mindflix
Both are the same
They are there to distract you from
your true self.
#StreamOfConsciousness
26 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
13th Nov 2019 6:04pm
13th Nov 2019 6:04pm
Leaf Song
I have hiked most of my life—
huffed up hills unawares
of the delicate leaf song
when Grandfather Sun
warmed frost on their bones;
as though a tribe of women
kneading bread in the kitchen—
throated hums echoing
methodical hands in rhythm
There are three score years
and a trillion steps under my belt;
yet, was never aware
of their liminal passage rite
unto the Valley of Death
One lifetime is never enough
to learn, nor appreciate it all
~
huffed up hills unawares
of the delicate leaf song
when Grandfather Sun
warmed frost on their bones;
as though a tribe of women
kneading bread in the kitchen—
throated hums echoing
methodical hands in rhythm
There are three score years
and a trillion steps under my belt;
yet, was never aware
of their liminal passage rite
unto the Valley of Death
One lifetime is never enough
to learn, nor appreciate it all
~
#nature
#spiritual
#music
#wisdom
#StreamOfConsciousness
1293 reads
52 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
7th Nov 2024 2:07pm
10 COMMANDMENTS FOR POETS
1. THOU SHALL write to please self.
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
2. THOU SHALL not be a slave to rules.
3. THOU SHALL not be afraid of rejection.
4. THOU SHALL not expect every poem to be perfect.
5. THOU SHALL read the works of others.
6. THOU SHALL always be looking for ideas.
7. THOU SHALL not confuse inspiration with perspiration.
8. THOU SHALL remember writing poetry makes you a poet.
9. THOU SHALL not be a plagiarist.
10. THOU SHALL not quit!
#emotional
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
#symbolism
#uplifting
220 reads
13 Comments
Anne-Ri999
Poem Published
28th Dec 2024 10:40am
28th Dec 2024 10:40am
From an eight to a nine, from dragon into snake 2025
end year
birthing pains exist
some times lasting
an hourglass away
time
requests
ask
from
glistening tear
inner most
heart chamber
dear one
here
I ignite
universal
guidance
dear one
from sprouting
inklings
Happy
newest
year
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2024
all rights reserved
birthing pains exist
some times lasting
an hourglass away
time
requests
ask
from
glistening tear
inner most
heart chamber
dear one
here
I ignite
universal
guidance
dear one
from sprouting
inklings
Happy
newest
year
copyrights © owned by Rianne 2024
all rights reserved
#StreamOfConsciousness
81 reads
6 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 10:24pm
10th Jan 2025 10:24pm
Training Mission South Pole
Stationed off the grid
Population under 50
CIA comrades
Hookers wearing a wire
Granola with Wild Turkey 101
Booting Heroin speedballs
A life we chose
Exile from normal
No filter
Penguin Bar after dark
No cover
Juke box takes coins only
Black night
No stars
The color of salvation
BBQ with the enemy tonight
Tomorrow is cancelled
Population under 50
CIA comrades
Hookers wearing a wire
Granola with Wild Turkey 101
Booting Heroin speedballs
A life we chose
Exile from normal
No filter
Penguin Bar after dark
No cover
Juke box takes coins only
Black night
No stars
The color of salvation
BBQ with the enemy tonight
Tomorrow is cancelled
#philosophical
#risk
#StreamOfConsciousness
#ThrillSeeking
#war
138 reads
30 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Today 1:58am
Today 1:58am
GOOD VERSUS EVIL
🙊🙈🙉 There is always gonna be good versus evil forces, no matter how much you don't care, to stop and look and listen, for even through centuries back in time of biblical beliefs. WE stood as one nation under one GOD OF COMMAND. But yet instead here we are still fighting against the evil forces, for political games that they say that the greatest, thing the devils in human skin has done was to have some of you to believe, that he doesn't really don't exist. 🤔 YET here we are now in 2025, still going through things that are really unnecessary, and for what...
#HumanRights
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeStruggles
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
19 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 3:09pm
21st Apr 2024 3:09pm
Phantasm Turbo Flux
A multi layered lofty screen of mist
did what it could to hide the moon and stars,
but the mix was a scene so beauty kissed
I wondered at theurgy in isobars;
a transubstantiation of rare gas
Into astral argent and lunar gold
as spagyric miracle come to pass
in the blear of dungeon undercroft cold
sweeping a dew of dreams across the sky;
a net to drag the slumbrous aerosphere
like Morpheus with a fathomless sigh
adding still more depth every haunting year
to the stupor strata of humankind...
a substrate...for the...
did what it could to hide the moon and stars,
but the mix was a scene so beauty kissed
I wondered at theurgy in isobars;
a transubstantiation of rare gas
Into astral argent and lunar gold
as spagyric miracle come to pass
in the blear of dungeon undercroft cold
sweeping a dew of dreams across the sky;
a net to drag the slumbrous aerosphere
like Morpheus with a fathomless sigh
adding still more depth every haunting year
to the stupor strata of humankind...
a substrate...for the...
#StreamOfConsciousness
118 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
17th Apr 2023 11:59pm
17th Apr 2023 11:59pm
Consciousness
say what they say
conscience does not weigh
consciousness is a state
comatose and translucent
who does not suffer any
effect on the part of
gravitational pull
conscience is synonymous
to forgetfulness...
consciousness is absence
of a scapegoat
consciousness is a moment
of millimeters in opening
of the blinds
it's the face in the dark
the shadow behind the curtain
the unknown look
in the rays of light that tear
the trellises, the silk and the
usefulness
metaphysical...
conscience does not weigh
consciousness is a state
comatose and translucent
who does not suffer any
effect on the part of
gravitational pull
conscience is synonymous
to forgetfulness...
consciousness is absence
of a scapegoat
consciousness is a moment
of millimeters in opening
of the blinds
it's the face in the dark
the shadow behind the curtain
the unknown look
in the rays of light that tear
the trellises, the silk and the
usefulness
metaphysical...
#atheism
#philosophical
#wisdom #StreamOfConsciousness
#wisdom #StreamOfConsciousness
228 reads
5 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 1:18pm
27th Jan 2025 1:18pm
~karmic traverses of cosmic nomads
a dusty sandy opacity saree
you drape.. over your ironic
silk cottony desiccated arms
in an all out vertical spreads..
& those stretched out devilish
castor leafed bony fingers of
a darkened green canopies
as if in an eerie waiting trap
are in a karmic converse
to the slenderish mimosas
with their shrinking inner
shyly touch-me-nots.. &
their nearby seen in divine
similitudes.. the minutely
detailing Acacias in pinnate
greens & smiling catechus
..with their springing young ...
you drape.. over your ironic
silk cottony desiccated arms
in an all out vertical spreads..
& those stretched out devilish
castor leafed bony fingers of
a darkened green canopies
as if in an eerie waiting trap
are in a karmic converse
to the slenderish mimosas
with their shrinking inner
shyly touch-me-nots.. &
their nearby seen in divine
similitudes.. the minutely
detailing Acacias in pinnate
greens & smiling catechus
..with their springing young ...
#StreamOfConsciousness
62 reads
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
3rd Jan 2024 3:10pm
3rd Jan 2024 3:10pm
The 5th
It is a blessing to be the giver of much delight
The redeemer of lyrics played sweetly, felt without the eyes of sight
Benediction in my cause unto those handsome Yoruba Gods as they sought my alluring music
Instruments played of me could soften the sacred psyche of any Cherubic
Blessed with cosmic beauty to share the truth
Expand to you the wisdom, as the knowledge whispered to your heart shall soar us in flight
Hold me tight in this mad world with all your Hebrew might
I shall play the passion of my seductive...
The redeemer of lyrics played sweetly, felt without the eyes of sight
Benediction in my cause unto those handsome Yoruba Gods as they sought my alluring music
Instruments played of me could soften the sacred psyche of any Cherubic
Blessed with cosmic beauty to share the truth
Expand to you the wisdom, as the knowledge whispered to your heart shall soar us in flight
Hold me tight in this mad world with all your Hebrew might
I shall play the passion of my seductive...
#sun
#water
#lover
#StreamOfConsciousness
#seductive
294 reads
12 Comments
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