Poems About Moving On by Top Critiquers
#MovingOn
Poems about moving on by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 9:19pm
8th Nov 2024 9:19pm
Cheese Trap of the Slut Ho
You’re not my girl no mo-I don’t even want you as a side ho’
Raise the fuck up bitch-you gotta go,
“No more good times, no more freaky lovin
Time to get semi bitch-so start truckin,
“Now you want me in your ass and pushing deep in your shit
But what I told you baby-you gets no mo dick,
“When we was together anal you never wanted to do
Now you giving it up anyway I want, because we’re through,
“Get off your knees and release your ass cheeks
Get like a garbage truck and hit the motherfuckin streets,
“Gather...
Raise the fuck up bitch-you gotta go,
“No more good times, no more freaky lovin
Time to get semi bitch-so start truckin,
“Now you want me in your ass and pushing deep in your shit
But what I told you baby-you gets no mo dick,
“When we was together anal you never wanted to do
Now you giving it up anyway I want, because we’re through,
“Get off your knees and release your ass cheeks
Get like a garbage truck and hit the motherfuckin streets,
“Gather...
#anger
#disappointment
#MovingOn
174 reads
2 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
29th Aug 2023 10:13am
29th Aug 2023 10:13am
I don’t want to move on
don’t want to move on, since moving on means nearer to death and I’d rather look back than ahead, thanks very much, he said
#MovingOn
166 reads
3 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 1:06pm
26th Mar 2025 1:06pm
Dumbstruck
darkness draws so close
I should have something to say
still, I remain mute
.
I should have something to say
still, I remain mute
.
#death
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#emptiness
#MovingOn
#senryu
53 reads
4 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2023 8:29pm
22nd Aug 2023 8:29pm
Let's Dance
the path of regrets
shadowed by gloom
thoughts of memories
in closed books remain
walking out closing the door
no more wallow in halls
where sorrow graffiti
decorate walls
out to the vastness
of a sunny world
once more to laugh
Live love sing dance
tea, anyone...?
shadowed by gloom
thoughts of memories
in closed books remain
walking out closing the door
no more wallow in halls
where sorrow graffiti
decorate walls
out to the vastness
of a sunny world
once more to laugh
Live love sing dance
tea, anyone...?
#MovingOn
186 reads
13 Comments
Indie
Miss Indie
Miss Indie
Poem Published
30th Jan 2021 10:58pm
30th Jan 2021 10:58pm
there's no ghosts here
I hang up washing inside
out of the reaching fingers of rain
that would have us clothesless
for a few more days
He won't come near this room
can barely step inside
without his insides breaking
into emotions you can't lock in a box
I can still see her last breaths here
if I remember to look backwards through time
a nurse of one side of her bed
me holding her hand telling her
it's going to be okay
though she wasn't lucid enough
to know I was lying
I wasn't there for her last breath
maybe I'd...
out of the reaching fingers of rain
that would have us clothesless
for a few more days
He won't come near this room
can barely step inside
without his insides breaking
into emotions you can't lock in a box
I can still see her last breaths here
if I remember to look backwards through time
a nurse of one side of her bed
me holding her hand telling her
it's going to be okay
though she wasn't lucid enough
to know I was lying
I wasn't there for her last breath
maybe I'd...
#grief
#death
#MovingOn #acceptance
#MovingOn #acceptance
481 reads
4 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
14th May 2020 8:50pm
14th May 2020 8:50pm
Rona...leave me the f**k alone-a
Stepping on a gravestone
reaching for a wishbone
feeling like Kevin from "Home Alone"
social distancing with the gnomes.
Standing in the "Drop Zone"
putting out orange cones,
watching for the Amazon drone
to bring some TP home.
Screaming out to the unknown
hanging with "Hambone-Hambone"
playing our trombones
waiting for Sylvester Stallone.
Listen ya old crone,
you smell like Grandma's cologne
and a grey-haired kidney stone...
"Leave me the Fuck Alone".
reaching for a wishbone
feeling like Kevin from "Home Alone"
social distancing with the gnomes.
Standing in the "Drop Zone"
putting out orange cones,
watching for the Amazon drone
to bring some TP home.
Screaming out to the unknown
hanging with "Hambone-Hambone"
playing our trombones
waiting for Sylvester Stallone.
Listen ya old crone,
you smell like Grandma's cologne
and a grey-haired kidney stone...
"Leave me the Fuck Alone".
#MovingOn
#separation
449 reads
10 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
13th Sep 2022 6:35pm
13th Sep 2022 6:35pm
Replacing Pictures
Images that you placed up and swore that they were you
Sweet fucking messages sent back and forth swearing that they were true
Me telling you what I fucking needed and you lying about what you would do
Please be honest, lies were told on both sides, all you wanted was me coming through
The poetry you swore was and you imagined it was all about yourself
You know that I've lost so much, but you will settle for whatever's left
Secrets were shared, things so fucking deep family and friend didn't even know
But you was not being satiated, you needed so much...
Sweet fucking messages sent back and forth swearing that they were true
Me telling you what I fucking needed and you lying about what you would do
Please be honest, lies were told on both sides, all you wanted was me coming through
The poetry you swore was and you imagined it was all about yourself
You know that I've lost so much, but you will settle for whatever's left
Secrets were shared, things so fucking deep family and friend didn't even know
But you was not being satiated, you needed so much...
#love
#relationships
#breakup
#MovingOn
#rhyming
399 reads
0 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
12th Sep 2019 3:52am
12th Sep 2019 3:52am
The Feeling of Lost
I watched another sun come up
And another sun has set
As shadows lengthen into the night
But nights no darker than the day
And my life
Both good and bad
Lies wasted in the stain
The feeling of lost
Which cradles me now in emptiness
And for what?
For saying I wanted to be kissed as if this was our last breath
For wanting to be part of us
And not a me and you
For wanting warmth and not just a body
Lying beside me in the bed
*
...
And another sun has set
As shadows lengthen into the night
But nights no darker than the day
And my life
Both good and bad
Lies wasted in the stain
The feeling of lost
Which cradles me now in emptiness
And for what?
For saying I wanted to be kissed as if this was our last breath
For wanting to be part of us
And not a me and you
For wanting warmth and not just a body
Lying beside me in the bed
*
...
#relationships
#breakup
#MovingOn #hurt
#MovingOn #hurt
692 reads
6 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 1:34pm
23rd Jan 2025 1:34pm
Spilling Sands
Time echoes aloft,
The hourglass spills,
silver grains falling soft.
Moments slide into the past,
Minutes now forever lost.
The clock ticks,
a heartbeat on the wall.
Gears turn without end,
Hands move forward,
never pausing,
never looking back.
Minutes slip through brass fingers.
Hours drift like whispers in the wind.
Rust creeps in,
but the gears still turn.
Time hums its endless song.
Copyright Malcolm Gladwin
23 January 2025
Spilling Sand © 23 January 2025, Malcolm...
The hourglass spills,
silver grains falling soft.
Moments slide into the past,
Minutes now forever lost.
The clock ticks,
a heartbeat on the wall.
Gears turn without end,
Hands move forward,
never pausing,
never looking back.
Minutes slip through brass fingers.
Hours drift like whispers in the wind.
Rust creeps in,
but the gears still turn.
Time hums its endless song.
Copyright Malcolm Gladwin
23 January 2025
Spilling Sand © 23 January 2025, Malcolm...
#memories
#MovingOn
#nostalgia
67 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 10:43pm
12th Mar 2025 10:43pm
another love poem
I had a dream
about you last
night
it ended
in murder
about you last
night
it ended
in murder
#deception
#MovingOn
121 reads
6 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
22nd Oct 2020 1:59pm
22nd Oct 2020 1:59pm
Liberated
Once a vivid outline
now a blur
Smudging into the mist of time
memories of you
linger for a while... before
..... Slowly dissipating into the atmosphere
Now, I can see clearly....
now a blur
Smudging into the mist of time
memories of you
linger for a while... before
..... Slowly dissipating into the atmosphere
Now, I can see clearly....
#MovingOn
656 reads
12 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
10th Jul 2021 2:18am
10th Jul 2021 2:18am
Time Is Calling Me (Moving On To Another Phase In My Life)
The hands of time is calling out to me
Adhere to listening to the soothing powers to be
The sandy grainy bed coated from its cool blanket in no rush to flee
The sounds of the gentle waves as it crawls upon land
Kissing the rock formation retreating as it remains to stand
Seagulls soaring, carried away by the distance wind, troubles behind they leave
Close one’s eyes, taste the salt of its embrace the mind can only perceive
The tranquility within the depths appears so vivid
Voices are quite now, so more whispers of being...
Adhere to listening to the soothing powers to be
The sandy grainy bed coated from its cool blanket in no rush to flee
The sounds of the gentle waves as it crawls upon land
Kissing the rock formation retreating as it remains to stand
Seagulls soaring, carried away by the distance wind, troubles behind they leave
Close one’s eyes, taste the salt of its embrace the mind can only perceive
The tranquility within the depths appears so vivid
Voices are quite now, so more whispers of being...
#identity
#LifeChangingMoment
#WritingPoetry
#MovingOn
#passion
781 reads
19 Comments
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