Poems About Moving On by Top Critiquers
#MovingOn
Poems about moving on by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 11:26pm
1st Jan 2025 11:26pm
Another stupid poem
I miss you
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
I wish you never left me
Sadness follows me
A new year, with the same old sorrows
Screw this!
I'm too old for this shit
My feelings and this poem were pathetic
I'm gonna blast some Deicide, cook some burgers and later on watch some Stallone, Schwarzenegger or Lundgren films
By tomorrow morning, she'll be a distant memory.
#love
#MovingOn
#WritingPoetry #fiction
#WritingPoetry #fiction
131 reads
16 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
9th Nov 2020 10:24am
9th Nov 2020 10:24am
LIFE'S JOURNEY
AMAZING
It started when
you squeezed out of
the birth canal:
LIFE'S journey began by
lying still; then you
began to crawl,
then standing unsteady
on your feet, then
wabbling in an exciting walk;
then walking with confidence,
then finally running.
There is more movement,
one more step:
you start to advance and
when you have reached
the mountain TOP;
then you start to CLIMB
and FLY.
The horizon nor the
sky is not the LIMIT,
your thoughts are your
LIMITS. You will never ...
It started when
you squeezed out of
the birth canal:
LIFE'S journey began by
lying still; then you
began to crawl,
then standing unsteady
on your feet, then
wabbling in an exciting walk;
then walking with confidence,
then finally running.
There is more movement,
one more step:
you start to advance and
when you have reached
the mountain TOP;
then you start to CLIMB
and FLY.
The horizon nor the
sky is not the LIMIT,
your thoughts are your
LIMITS. You will never ...
#dreams
#inspirational
#LifeGoals
#MovingOn
#determination
485 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 6:47pm
11th Jan 2025 6:47pm
IT is these times
For the elders say that in each of our lives, 🙏 that we have to make a real hard decision, on what we want to deal with and what we won't deal with in our lives. For there will come a time when we have to learn how to navigate real hard through. The process of just only realizing it is necessary to eliminate the nonsense, that comes with some people's self centered drama. For all of and confusion and madness of causing nothing but insanity 😭 to our lives. I'm gonna lay this down for those who have to learn the hard way, how to navigate through the very negativity of some...
#learning
#LifeChangingMoment
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
#StreamOfConsciousness
77 reads
0 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
12th Mar 2025 8:18pm
12th Mar 2025 8:18pm
I keep picking the scabs with the clock hands
My bloody heel prints
marked a path from the
broken clockface to the door
where I wandered
this last time
there was a part of me
that believed we'd meet again
and a smaller part
that wanted to
I limp away
to find a Walgreens
or a CVS
where I can buy
a bottle of peroxide
and a box of band aids
time only heals cuts
you don't re-open
marked a path from the
broken clockface to the door
where I wandered
this last time
there was a part of me
that believed we'd meet again
and a smaller part
that wanted to
I limp away
to find a Walgreens
or a CVS
where I can buy
a bottle of peroxide
and a box of band aids
time only heals cuts
you don't re-open
#acceptance
#breakup
#MovingOn
146 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 5:24am
2nd Jan 2025 5:24am
Around the Sun
Around the Sun
#MovingOn
#universe
189 reads
8 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
10th Jul 2024 7:21pm
10th Jul 2024 7:21pm
just rip it off already
she called me one night
outta nowhere
said she got my number from my aunt
{that's a whole other fucked up ball of wax right there}
& did I know how to reach him
she was desperate
any day now she was expecting
{...his...twins...}
not at all surprised
I sighed
listened to her tell how he'd tried to shoot her
shaking my head in disbelief
because even then...she stayed
abuse is a crushing iron fist
I get it
{that one especially}
as she sobbed about how he vanished
not long after their...
outta nowhere
said she got my number from my aunt
{that's a whole other fucked up ball of wax right there}
& did I know how to reach him
she was desperate
any day now she was expecting
{...his...twins...}
not at all surprised
I sighed
listened to her tell how he'd tried to shoot her
shaking my head in disbelief
because even then...she stayed
abuse is a crushing iron fist
I get it
{that one especially}
as she sobbed about how he vanished
not long after their...
#deception
#LifeStruggles
#marriage #MovingOn
#marriage #MovingOn
245 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th May 2021 2:43pm
27th May 2021 2:43pm
Old Timer Go Blind with Rage
dear time I love you still
are ye yet poxed and plagued again my soul is burned blackheart
it's mary again it is
are you not KIng James Father?
rule now my sun Iron Rod is my name now
Lilith the first is here
I am young again
too late timer
you love buggly eyes
hope it's enough to satisfy a flea
you old goat cope without your dope'
clean up and get back to me
I am the Vampire Empire
I alone am god
you will rule Berserker's no more
I am LIlith I am Alurra I largetha
I melted the tundra
I...
are ye yet poxed and plagued again my soul is burned blackheart
it's mary again it is
are you not KIng James Father?
rule now my sun Iron Rod is my name now
Lilith the first is here
I am young again
too late timer
you love buggly eyes
hope it's enough to satisfy a flea
you old goat cope without your dope'
clean up and get back to me
I am the Vampire Empire
I alone am god
you will rule Berserker's no more
I am LIlith I am Alurra I largetha
I melted the tundra
I...
#hate
#angels
#aliens #MovingOn
#aliens #MovingOn
344 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2019 11:30am
23rd Aug 2019 11:30am
E 35
Summer fades
It tested us
A few more ice cream cones
Then winter
It tested us
A few more ice cream cones
Then winter
#MovingOn
747 reads
18 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 11:14pm
15th Jan 2024 11:14pm
Saint Midnight and the Dragon
As folly goes, I think mine not so bad
when channeled into an honest display.
Oh, it had been by a dull aegis clad
which was an inhibition of dismay.
But now it sparkles like some brand-new plate
that treats me to a giggle and a laugh
and is now the kind of charming trait
a chap relies on for an epitaph.
Of course, those lines need not be for me,
buoyed now by invisible armor
whose weightless cheer has set my folly free
to be its own rust-free harmless charmer...
in a universe where epitaphs laugh
...
when channeled into an honest display.
Oh, it had been by a dull aegis clad
which was an inhibition of dismay.
But now it sparkles like some brand-new plate
that treats me to a giggle and a laugh
and is now the kind of charming trait
a chap relies on for an epitaph.
Of course, those lines need not be for me,
buoyed now by invisible armor
whose weightless cheer has set my folly free
to be its own rust-free harmless charmer...
in a universe where epitaphs laugh
...
#learning
#MovingOn
#acceptance
178 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 11:29am
25th Feb 2025 11:29am
Hoods
Childhood
Winds may blow harshly
Roots persist beneath the storm
We remain ourselves.
Adulthood
Light on the horizon
Path unshadowed by others
I am my own guide.
Elderhood
In the mirror, strength
Reflection of courage true
Voice of liberty.
Winds may blow harshly
Roots persist beneath the storm
We remain ourselves.
Adulthood
Light on the horizon
Path unshadowed by others
I am my own guide.
Elderhood
In the mirror, strength
Reflection of courage true
Voice of liberty.
#aging
#LifeCycle
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
#TimeHeals
107 reads
13 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 1:06pm
26th Apr 2024 1:06pm
Worn Chair
Invite your feelings.
To sit in the mind's worn chair.
Listen and let go.
To sit in the mind's worn chair.
Listen and let go.
#emotions
#haiku
#MovingOn
160 reads
19 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
Today 00:58am
Today 00:58am
Your City
Do you like your city?
Is it pretty
or is it shitty
Does it make you elate
or irate
Are there great places to go
or just too much snow
Do you love it day to day
or do you want to run away
Are there fun things to do
or is it so boring you want to boo
Does it inspire you
or tire you
Do you feel lucky
or what the fucky
Would you want to move
or are you in the groove
Would you say move here
or stay away, dear
I really want to know
I need a...
Is it pretty
or is it shitty
Does it make you elate
or irate
Are there great places to go
or just too much snow
Do you love it day to day
or do you want to run away
Are there fun things to do
or is it so boring you want to boo
Does it inspire you
or tire you
Do you feel lucky
or what the fucky
Would you want to move
or are you in the groove
Would you say move here
or stay away, dear
I really want to know
I need a...
#city
#MovingOn
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