Poems About Moving On by Top Critiquers
#MovingOn
Poems about moving on by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 8:00pm
19th Dec 2024 8:00pm
I don't even want to be friends
Poor soul
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
So confused
She just talks shit, through her mouth
She claims she knows me
But she knows shit
Too many words and nothing said
Stones thrown to the sky
In a way that they'll never return
A clear mind is what I need
To see a fucked up past
To see a dreadful future
This relationship is toxic
I'm done...No more!
I'm so sick of you...It's Over!
#breakup
#lies
#MovingOn
#relationships
#secrets
59 reads
8 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
27th May 2021 2:43pm
27th May 2021 2:43pm
Old Timer Go Blind with Rage
dear time I love you still
are ye yet poxed and plagued again my soul is burned blackheart
it's mary again it is
are you not KIng James Father?
rule now my sun Iron Rod is my name now
Lilith the first is here
I am young again
too late timer
you love buggly eyes
hope it's enough to satisfy a flea
you old goat cope without your dope'
clean up and get back to me
I am the Vampire Empire
I alone am god
you will rule Berserker's no more
I am LIlith I am Alurra I largetha
I melted the tundra
I...
are ye yet poxed and plagued again my soul is burned blackheart
it's mary again it is
are you not KIng James Father?
rule now my sun Iron Rod is my name now
Lilith the first is here
I am young again
too late timer
you love buggly eyes
hope it's enough to satisfy a flea
you old goat cope without your dope'
clean up and get back to me
I am the Vampire Empire
I alone am god
you will rule Berserker's no more
I am LIlith I am Alurra I largetha
I melted the tundra
I...
#hate
#angels
#aliens #MovingOn
#aliens #MovingOn
304 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
23rd Aug 2019 11:30am
23rd Aug 2019 11:30am
E 35
Summer fades
It tested us
A few more ice cream cones
Then winter
It tested us
A few more ice cream cones
Then winter
#MovingOn
718 reads
18 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
10th Jul 2024 7:21pm
10th Jul 2024 7:21pm
just rip it off already
she called me one night
outta nowhere
said she got my number from my aunt
{that's a whole other fucked up ball of wax right there}
& did I know how to reach him
she was desperate
any day now she was expecting
{...his...twins...}
not at all surprised
I sighed
listened to her tell how he'd tried to shoot her
shaking my head in disbelief
because even then...she stayed
abuse is a crushing iron fist
I get it
{that one especially}
as she sobbed about how he vanished
not long after their...
outta nowhere
said she got my number from my aunt
{that's a whole other fucked up ball of wax right there}
& did I know how to reach him
she was desperate
any day now she was expecting
{...his...twins...}
not at all surprised
I sighed
listened to her tell how he'd tried to shoot her
shaking my head in disbelief
because even then...she stayed
abuse is a crushing iron fist
I get it
{that one especially}
as she sobbed about how he vanished
not long after their...
#deception
#LifeStruggles
#marriage #MovingOn
#marriage #MovingOn
178 reads
8 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
9th Nov 2020 10:24am
9th Nov 2020 10:24am
LIFE'S JOURNEY
AMAZING
It started when
you squeezed out of
the birth canal:
LIFE'S journey began by
lying still; then you
began to crawl,
then standing unsteady
on your feet, then
wabbling in an exciting walk;
then walking with confidence,
then finally running.
There is more movement,
one more step:
you start to advance and
when you have reached
the mountain TOP;
then you start to CLIMB
and FLY.
The horizon nor the
sky is not the LIMIT,
your thoughts are your
LIMITS. You will never ...
It started when
you squeezed out of
the birth canal:
LIFE'S journey began by
lying still; then you
began to crawl,
then standing unsteady
on your feet, then
wabbling in an exciting walk;
then walking with confidence,
then finally running.
There is more movement,
one more step:
you start to advance and
when you have reached
the mountain TOP;
then you start to CLIMB
and FLY.
The horizon nor the
sky is not the LIMIT,
your thoughts are your
LIMITS. You will never ...
#dreams
#inspirational
#LifeGoals
#MovingOn
#determination
428 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 11:28am
8th Dec 2024 11:28am
The balance of life
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ For let's take a a minute to answer, that question 🤔 in the depth of just understanding, what is the balance of life. 🤨 For example for with everything having to deal with situations, that we shall go through in life there are somethings. That are involved in creating a solid attitude in other ways, to be able to navigate through the process of life. Now let's go even deeper than deep into the deepness of your mind and heart ❤️ For example sometimes we might have to learn, to agree or disagree with...
#healing
#learning
#LifeChangingMoment
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
55 reads
0 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 11:14pm
15th Jan 2024 11:14pm
Saint Midnight and the Dragon
As folly goes, I think mine not so bad
when channeled into an honest display.
Oh, it had been by a dull aegis clad
which was an inhibition of dismay.
But now it sparkles like some brand-new plate
that treats me to a giggle and a laugh
and is now the kind of charming trait
a chap relies on for an epitaph.
Of course, those lines need not be for me,
buoyed now by invisible armor
whose weightless cheer has set my folly free
to be its own rust-free harmless charmer...
in a universe where epitaphs laugh
...
when channeled into an honest display.
Oh, it had been by a dull aegis clad
which was an inhibition of dismay.
But now it sparkles like some brand-new plate
that treats me to a giggle and a laugh
and is now the kind of charming trait
a chap relies on for an epitaph.
Of course, those lines need not be for me,
buoyed now by invisible armor
whose weightless cheer has set my folly free
to be its own rust-free harmless charmer...
in a universe where epitaphs laugh
...
#learning
#MovingOn
#acceptance
135 reads
2 Comments
goodwolf1966
jimmy
jimmy
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 3:31am
6th Dec 2024 3:31am
a new change
after you
left me,
moved
out
for the
final time,
it took
some
strength
but hurt
and
sorrow
have now
lost most
of their
bitter taste,
loneliness
stayed
around
for awhile,
but now
a new
change is
moving in.
left me,
moved
out
for the
final time,
it took
some
strength
but hurt
and
sorrow
have now
lost most
of their
bitter taste,
loneliness
stayed
around
for awhile,
but now
a new
change is
moving in.
#anger
#breakup
#disappointment
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
81 reads
8 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
Clear Haiku
Crystal clarity
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
#alcohol
#haiku
#MovingOn #sea
#MovingOn #sea
69 reads
4 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
5th Mar 2023 3:42am
5th Mar 2023 3:42am
A night in county lockup after f**king on the kale display
I bummed a vape
pen that Jenny
had stashed in her
bra and waited for
someone to post bail
I grinned at the list of
charges read that morning:
Assault
Battery
Indecent exposure
Lewd and lascivious behavior
on a Whole Foods
kale display,
I handed the vape back
to Penny.
Jenny?
Whatever.
The chick
in here with me.
She got drunk
and peed in public.
Me.
I was sober.
First time all week.
When you played
jump rope...
pen that Jenny
had stashed in her
bra and waited for
someone to post bail
I grinned at the list of
charges read that morning:
Assault
Battery
Indecent exposure
Lewd and lascivious behavior
on a Whole Foods
kale display,
I handed the vape back
to Penny.
Jenny?
Whatever.
The chick
in here with me.
She got drunk
and peed in public.
Me.
I was sober.
First time all week.
When you played
jump rope...
#anger
#love
#breakup
#MovingOn
#obsession
473 reads
16 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Apr 2024 3:21am
13th Apr 2024 3:21am
The Value of Time
I can hear some of my watches on my nightstand ticking away
As I lay in bed waiting for sleep in the quiet and dark of night
Wondering how many minutes I’ve wasted on that particular day
Or the years I treated time as infinite but forgetting my time is finite
And then I remember all those lazy days and unproductive hours
All that precious time gifted as it now drifts into the blackness of space
The moments I made something of them while others were wasted
Postponing dreams and aspirations that I always wanted to chase
Now as I approach a...
As I lay in bed waiting for sleep in the quiet and dark of night
Wondering how many minutes I’ve wasted on that particular day
Or the years I treated time as infinite but forgetting my time is finite
And then I remember all those lazy days and unproductive hours
All that precious time gifted as it now drifts into the blackness of space
The moments I made something of them while others were wasted
Postponing dreams and aspirations that I always wanted to chase
Now as I approach a...
#LifeGoals
#MovingOn
#philosophical #NaPoWriMo2024
#philosophical #NaPoWriMo2024
103 reads
2 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
26th Apr 2024 1:06pm
26th Apr 2024 1:06pm
Worn Chair
Invite your feelings.
To sit in the mind's worn chair.
Listen and let go.
To sit in the mind's worn chair.
Listen and let go.
#emotions
#haiku
#MovingOn
125 reads
19 Comments
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