Poems About Moving On Seeking Honest Critique
#MovingOn
Poems about moving on seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
Today 9:19pm
Today 9:19pm
Cheese Trap of the Slut Ho
You’re not my girl no mo-I don’t even want you as a side ho’
Raise the fuck up bitch-you gotta go,
“No more good times, no more freaky lovin
Time to get semi bitch-so start truckin,
“Now you want me in your ass and pushing deep in your shit
But what I told you baby-you gets no mo dick,
“When we was together anal you never wanted to do
Now you giving it up anyway I want, because we’re through,
“Get off your knees and release your ass cheeks
Get like a garbage truck and hit the motherfuckin streets,
“Gather...
Raise the fuck up bitch-you gotta go,
“No more good times, no more freaky lovin
Time to get semi bitch-so start truckin,
“Now you want me in your ass and pushing deep in your shit
But what I told you baby-you gets no mo dick,
“When we was together anal you never wanted to do
Now you giving it up anyway I want, because we’re through,
“Get off your knees and release your ass cheeks
Get like a garbage truck and hit the motherfuckin streets,
“Gather...
#anger
#disappointment
#MovingOn
15 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
4th Nov 2024 11:50pm
Clear Haiku
Crystal clarity
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
In glass, a pure reflection
Warmth in cold embrace.
#alcohol
#haiku
#MovingOn #sea
#MovingOn #sea
46 reads
4 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2024 4:57am
23rd Oct 2024 4:57am
My Beloved Consumer
Asphyxiation becomes you, like unto a vacuum
Always sucking, never consuming enough
Always consuming the air of we in your circle
There are no pills, no cure
Because you are not sick
There is nothing in your toolbox
Rusting there for you to fix
What you think is not broken
I moaned for you when consequence had no remedy
I tried to believe your didactic charms. Honestly
I still don’t know if this is all my fault
Even though they tell me it is not
They say to put on your own oxygen mask
Before assisting...
Always sucking, never consuming enough
Always consuming the air of we in your circle
There are no pills, no cure
Because you are not sick
There is nothing in your toolbox
Rusting there for you to fix
What you think is not broken
I moaned for you when consequence had no remedy
I tried to believe your didactic charms. Honestly
I still don’t know if this is all my fault
Even though they tell me it is not
They say to put on your own oxygen mask
Before assisting...
#disappointment
#escape
#MovingOn
40 reads
0 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 00:53am
20th Oct 2024 00:53am
To Love You Again
Broken promises and lost dreams
This dead relationship that once was so sweet
Who I was then and who I am now
Have learned to reconcile as much as my heart allowed.
The past is the past; the future has yet to come
I’m feeling once again when I used to be numb
My heart, my life, my soul
The shattered pieces of me have become whole.
Hush child, it’s okay to cry
You’ve been strong for so long, and you’ll continue to soar high
Love hurts, but that’s part of the journey
Some people are meant to be left in a memory.
If I...
This dead relationship that once was so sweet
Who I was then and who I am now
Have learned to reconcile as much as my heart allowed.
The past is the past; the future has yet to come
I’m feeling once again when I used to be numb
My heart, my life, my soul
The shattered pieces of me have become whole.
Hush child, it’s okay to cry
You’ve been strong for so long, and you’ll continue to soar high
Love hurts, but that’s part of the journey
Some people are meant to be left in a memory.
If I...
#breakup
#love
#MovingOn
#rhyming
#separation
134 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 7:34pm
10th Oct 2024 7:34pm
You gotta stop now
When your down low,
and you don't know, Which end is up
You got to stop now,
think about how, Which end is up
You got plans now, and I got mine
If you don't love me babe, don't waste my time
You can't say that you really love me, Which end is up
You can try to but you can't see, Which end is up
I know what your gonna say
you say you don't love me
This time I'm not gonna stay
I'm gonna turn my back & walk away... from you
You gonna stop now,
and think about me, Which end is up
and you don't know, Which end is up
You got to stop now,
think about how, Which end is up
You got plans now, and I got mine
If you don't love me babe, don't waste my time
You can't say that you really love me, Which end is up
You can try to but you can't see, Which end is up
I know what your gonna say
you say you don't love me
This time I'm not gonna stay
I'm gonna turn my back & walk away... from you
You gonna stop now,
and think about me, Which end is up
#breakup
#girlfriend
#love
#lyrics
#MovingOn
93 reads
4 Comments
LunasChild8
Poem Published
8th Oct 2024 11:26pm
8th Oct 2024 11:26pm
Relinquish
Faith in myself
Is the only substance keeping me going in this waking hell
Held in a divine embrace
The world smudges into a blur as I wonder at my own pace.
I set off into the darkness to cast the divine light
I rose up from the ashes to continue the fight
Hazy dreams are all that remain
I no longer have the willpower to play this mind game.
Come and find me in your memories
I gave you life every time I’d bleed
My flesh and soul were offered willingly
Now you’re left with ashes and lost dreams.
Our connection had a...
Is the only substance keeping me going in this waking hell
Held in a divine embrace
The world smudges into a blur as I wonder at my own pace.
I set off into the darkness to cast the divine light
I rose up from the ashes to continue the fight
Hazy dreams are all that remain
I no longer have the willpower to play this mind game.
Come and find me in your memories
I gave you life every time I’d bleed
My flesh and soul were offered willingly
Now you’re left with ashes and lost dreams.
Our connection had a...
#bittersweet
#memories
#MovingOn
#rhyming
#separation
111 reads
6 Comments
not_accounted_for
Poem Published
7th Oct 2024 3:06am
7th Oct 2024 3:06am
To All The People I've Known Before
I've got to know some people, they're nice.
Made a few friends once or twice.
But years they keep on fading
And my life just goes on changing.
The years they kept on slipping past.
The friends I made, they never last.
I had to push them further away
For my future, they couldn't stay.
But does future come in front of
The spell love casts?
I wish I could look back
And see them once more
Because the fact is
those people I adored.
Maybe I could
In another life.
I made an opportunity, ...
Made a few friends once or twice.
But years they keep on fading
And my life just goes on changing.
The years they kept on slipping past.
The friends I made, they never last.
I had to push them further away
For my future, they couldn't stay.
But does future come in front of
The spell love casts?
I wish I could look back
And see them once more
Because the fact is
those people I adored.
Maybe I could
In another life.
I made an opportunity, ...
#dreams
#loneliness
#MovingOn
#risk
#sacrifice
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dead_lluwi
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 2:50pm
5th Oct 2024 2:50pm
dead beat
The season of love has ended and so did we—
Those few days with you didn’t strengthen me. Instead, you broke my perception of love. The idea of liking someone felt tangible. Yet just like Icarus, I fell down in flames, burned my wings,incinerated. It disappeared into ashes that flew away along with my senses.
The thought of me being in one. Perhaps I'll enter when the crows shed its wings, transforming its dark feathers into snow coloured ones. Possibly when the heavens crashed with the earth and turned the world upside down. But for the...
Those few days with you didn’t strengthen me. Instead, you broke my perception of love. The idea of liking someone felt tangible. Yet just like Icarus, I fell down in flames, burned my wings,incinerated. It disappeared into ashes that flew away along with my senses.
The thought of me being in one. Perhaps I'll enter when the crows shed its wings, transforming its dark feathers into snow coloured ones. Possibly when the heavens crashed with the earth and turned the world upside down. But for the...
#bittersweet
#breakup
#MovingOn
#separation
#UnrequitedLove
87 reads
0 Comments
B_xav_jay
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 7:27pm
25th Sep 2024 7:27pm
Bandaids
Time
It comes and it goes
Something’s aren’t meant to last forever
What started off as I love you
Slowly turned to I hate you
Or maybe I hate myself
For loving you so much
You’ve torn me down and broken me
For that I should be grateful
Or so you remind me
I deserved it it’s all my fault
Or so you remind me
You stripped me of my pride
You stripped me of my dignity
And between the bruises
I love yous meant like bandaids
But they don’t band do they
And through it all
My...
It comes and it goes
Something’s aren’t meant to last forever
What started off as I love you
Slowly turned to I hate you
Or maybe I hate myself
For loving you so much
You’ve torn me down and broken me
For that I should be grateful
Or so you remind me
I deserved it it’s all my fault
Or so you remind me
You stripped me of my pride
You stripped me of my dignity
And between the bruises
I love yous meant like bandaids
But they don’t band do they
And through it all
My...
#DomesticViolence
#manipulation
#MovingOn
#sadness
#separation
88 reads
0 Comments
TimWombles
Poem Published
11th Sep 2024 00:03am
11th Sep 2024 00:03am
Rise Above
I used to see that sparkle in your eyes
But now the light seems dim
Buried under a mountain of lies
Only because you believed in him
I used to see your wonderful smile
But now that smile has disappeared
Sit down next to me for awhile
Things aren't as bad as you feared
Just because you were fooled by someone
Someone you thought loved you
Nothing you did wrong, could have been anyone
There was nothing you could do
Just because the one you loved was a fool
Just because you took a chance on love
No way you could...
But now the light seems dim
Buried under a mountain of lies
Only because you believed in him
I used to see your wonderful smile
But now that smile has disappeared
Sit down next to me for awhile
Things aren't as bad as you feared
Just because you were fooled by someone
Someone you thought loved you
Nothing you did wrong, could have been anyone
There was nothing you could do
Just because the one you loved was a fool
Just because you took a chance on love
No way you could...
#betrayal
#breakup
#deception #MovingOn
#deception #MovingOn
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Sep 2024 11:52am
3rd Sep 2024 11:52am
A New Chapter
Lies ended when he died
A life of deceit has passed
Memories were lies
A life of deceit has passed
Memories were lies
#deception
#lies
#MovingOn #senryu
#MovingOn #senryu
70 reads
10 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
26th Aug 2024 11:25am
26th Aug 2024 11:25am
8 stops until the moon.
And there he was, distracted by the stars
passing through the glass window of the bus.
Pondering what he had heard aside:
..."maybe it's not ideal for you"...
and the hours it could take to arrive
in that small town where they met.
Would time that passes be able to confirm it
to be worth the effort to go and try?
passing through the glass window of the bus.
Pondering what he had heard aside:
..."maybe it's not ideal for you"...
and the hours it could take to arrive
in that small town where they met.
Would time that passes be able to confirm it
to be worth the effort to go and try?
#hope
#mirror
#MovingOn
#stars
#travel
72 reads
2 Comments
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