LGBT Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#LGBT
LGBT seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
xthan
Poem Published
2nd Jul 2024 3:26pm
2nd Jul 2024 3:26pm
People prepare meals before a body dies
but never prepare
recipes when a body
begins to blossom.
recipes when a body
begins to blossom.
#LGBT
#LifeCycle
#minimalist #transgender
#minimalist #transgender
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neves
Poem Published
30th Jun 2024 3:16am
30th Jun 2024 3:16am
Gothicking
Haven't been to
Chaucertown since
I was a young one
but that was a
retreat where
you ate very little,
you had a secret
stash of sweets
waiting for you
because hunger is
a savage bastard
that doesn't settle
down for crumbs,
I think how odd
it all looks since
i've grown older
looking at tickets
costing a bomb
just to gaze into
place of worship,
how we wandered
around outside it
the evening before
like rebels without
sacrificing...
Chaucertown since
I was a young one
but that was a
retreat where
you ate very little,
you had a secret
stash of sweets
waiting for you
because hunger is
a savage bastard
that doesn't settle
down for crumbs,
I think how odd
it all looks since
i've grown older
looking at tickets
costing a bomb
just to gaze into
place of worship,
how we wandered
around outside it
the evening before
like rebels without
sacrificing...
#LGBT
#polyamory
#relationships #religion
#relationships #religion
271 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
14th Jun 2024 1:54am
14th Jun 2024 1:54am
Red dress in NOLA - 2
#escape
#freedom
#LGBT
236 reads
22 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th May 2024 9:45pm
11th May 2024 9:45pm
To Join Me And My Friend In Getting It On
Tony,
we both are
so glad
that you got naked
and decided to
join me and my friend
Kelly
in getting
it on.
we both are
so glad
that you got naked
and decided to
join me and my friend
Kelly
in getting
it on.
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#LGBT
#sensual
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neves
Poem Published
1st May 2024 2:45pm
1st May 2024 2:45pm
Those sister signs have got it in for me
They personify day
that burning star
hanging in blue skies
like a stranger, my
pupils dilating in
and out settling
into the light
they shed.
I personify night
that bombay cat
under a streetlight
replicating chaos
beneath a humid
dark summer sky,
cleaning whiskers
in the aftermath of
marking their skin
in rituals, slowly
peeling away a
unfamiliarity in
their core.
that burning star
hanging in blue skies
like a stranger, my
pupils dilating in
and out settling
into the light
they shed.
I personify night
that bombay cat
under a streetlight
replicating chaos
beneath a humid
dark summer sky,
cleaning whiskers
in the aftermath of
marking their skin
in rituals, slowly
peeling away a
unfamiliarity in
their core.
#erotic
#LGBT
#love
#polyamory
#relationships
291 reads
1 Comment
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
29th Apr 2024 1:55am
29th Apr 2024 1:55am
Truth that is Nurtured, and Other Teachings
- Truth that is Nurtured, and Other Teachings -
I bear witness and testimony that Allah is greater than all things, for Allah is all things and within and a part of all things, and apart from all things eternally and without ending. There is nothing that can be truly called God save for Allah! The angels that are Allah's messengers revere the Eternal One. The Jinn serve the will of the Eternal One. Even those that are fallen from grace, are so by the will of that Eternal One, for there is nothing that is not in accordance with what was foreseen by Allah. That which we may...
I bear witness and testimony that Allah is greater than all things, for Allah is all things and within and a part of all things, and apart from all things eternally and without ending. There is nothing that can be truly called God save for Allah! The angels that are Allah's messengers revere the Eternal One. The Jinn serve the will of the Eternal One. Even those that are fallen from grace, are so by the will of that Eternal One, for there is nothing that is not in accordance with what was foreseen by Allah. That which we may...
#LGBT
#philosophical
#religion
#spiritual
#wisdom
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Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
28th Apr 2024 2:07am
28th Apr 2024 2:07am
Do Not Presume
- Do Not Presume -
- Oh Allah! I say this unto those who have misunderstood my nature,
I say this not in anger but so that they may know me better.
The recitation of these verses, is to teach about myself,
Because understanding brings peace, the greatest wealth.
“Do not presume, to know of my true gender better than I!
When I have so laid down in my writings the spectrum of it.
I declared myself to be far beyond the binary of merely two,
Born as I was in the image...
- Oh Allah! I say this unto those who have misunderstood my nature,
I say this not in anger but so that they may know me better.
The recitation of these verses, is to teach about myself,
Because understanding brings peace, the greatest wealth.
“Do not presume, to know of my true gender better than I!
When I have so laid down in my writings the spectrum of it.
I declared myself to be far beyond the binary of merely two,
Born as I was in the image...
#identity
#LGBT
#myself
#philosophical
#spiritual
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0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
18th Apr 2024 11:53am
18th Apr 2024 11:53am
Acid
If you're not going to eat me, you better not marinate.
#LGBT
135 reads
7 Comments
Northern_Soul
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 8:40am
9th Apr 2024 8:40am
Hymn to Dark Fruit
I.
what must it be like
for your ripe meat
to fall between
thumb and
finger
to pluck you straight
from the tree where
juice runs sweet
II.
your apple
is overturned,
love—
Eve only ever
loved men
III.
I think of you
in Persephone’s garden
laden in pomegranates
imagining you
at your most beautiful
every morning, red jewels
escape from your thighs
IV.
...
what must it be like
for your ripe meat
to fall between
thumb and
finger
to pluck you straight
from the tree where
juice runs sweet
II.
your apple
is overturned,
love—
Eve only ever
loved men
III.
I think of you
in Persephone’s garden
laden in pomegranates
imagining you
at your most beautiful
every morning, red jewels
escape from your thighs
IV.
...
#women
#LGBT
#pagan #metaphor
#pagan #metaphor
152 reads
2 Comments
neves
Poem Published
7th Apr 2024 5:01pm
7th Apr 2024 5:01pm
On that particular spark
There's no denying
those regimental ways
tucked in your bones
or your sarcasm
making me laugh
until I burst,
the way you turn
up having carefully
planned out a day
before it begins
as I insist on
being a tease by
calling you the
itinerary king
and in return
you remind me
how shameless
and feral I am.
Truth is I adore
that most about
you and about us
how you show up
like a burning star
hanging in skies
filled with...
those regimental ways
tucked in your bones
or your sarcasm
making me laugh
until I burst,
the way you turn
up having carefully
planned out a day
before it begins
as I insist on
being a tease by
calling you the
itinerary king
and in return
you remind me
how shameless
and feral I am.
Truth is I adore
that most about
you and about us
how you show up
like a burning star
hanging in skies
filled with...
#love
#LGBT
#confessional
315 reads
3 Comments
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 10:27pm
1st Apr 2024 10:27pm
In his arms
It should make me happy
He makes her feel warm
Happy to know
she is safe in his arms
and the sight of her laugh
fills him with glee
happier than ever is not happy for me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
those foolish butterflies
that I recognise
look so much better
in her pretty eyes
as if I could come close
to all that they will be
she keeps that happiness far away from me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
I am a monster
with all the time I spend
secretly hating
her...
He makes her feel warm
Happy to know
she is safe in his arms
and the sight of her laugh
fills him with glee
happier than ever is not happy for me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
those foolish butterflies
that I recognise
look so much better
in her pretty eyes
as if I could come close
to all that they will be
she keeps that happiness far away from me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
I am a monster
with all the time I spend
secretly hating
her...
#jealousy
#BestFriend
#heartbroken
#LGBT
#UnrequitedLove
250 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2024 12:18pm
23rd Mar 2024 12:18pm
This Is For Kicking Me Out Of Your Life
During her separation
from Delilah, Vickilyn
allowed herself to get
naked with a blonde
stud who is Delilah's
brother Harrison.
from Delilah, Vickilyn
allowed herself to get
naked with a blonde
stud who is Delilah's
brother Harrison.
#LGBT
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#suffering
#sensual
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