LGBT Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#LGBT
LGBT seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
xthan
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 10:39am
29th Jan 2025 10:39am
Beige pigs in long wigs
I hear her and her
cronies snorting
and laughing on
four seaters
so I went over,
leaning against
her chair like
some villain
she expects
us to become
told her i'm joining in
on the conversation,
knowing I overheard
her talking about me
her three friends look
down at the floor as
the train rolls into
London St Pancras
as she continues
to deny discussing
about me soon as
I stepped aboard
this rush hour train,
I repeat word
for...
cronies snorting
and laughing on
four seaters
so I went over,
leaning against
her chair like
some villain
she expects
us to become
told her i'm joining in
on the conversation,
knowing I overheard
her talking about me
her three friends look
down at the floor as
the train rolls into
London St Pancras
as she continues
to deny discussing
about me soon as
I stepped aboard
this rush hour train,
I repeat word
for...
#conflict
#HumanRights
#LGBT
#oppression
#transgender
45 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 8:35pm
12th Jan 2025 8:35pm
Got Room For One More?
Kelly spotted Catherine
humping Mark, stripped
down and joined them.
humping Mark, stripped
down and joined them.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#LGBT
#sex
118 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
11th Jan 2025 3:23pm
I'm Sorry. But I'm Really Not Okay With It.
At first, Jennifer
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
was okay with getting nude
and into it with Lisa.
She was also with
getting into a threesome
with Lisa's lover Eric.
But that was before
she saw Eric which made poor
Jennifer have change of heart.
#fiction
#friendship
#ignorance
#LGBT
#sex
110 reads
0 Comments
Duice
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 4:19am
8th Jan 2025 4:19am
He-She-Other
Eyeing life side eyed asphyxiated in this spotters scope
concave monocular teetering in and out of trance
Observant surveilling wretched buffoonery trending
cyclic magnified in this inauspicious life dance
Shrewd to learn reasoning in intricate depths of people
evolved judgemental life views secluded
Laid in the cut calm as a fly on the textured wall
gender-neutral bathroom festering larvae included
Planted trigger behaviors become iridescently apparent
in blank jungle silence of blossoming juvenile minds
Passive watching random demonic on...
concave monocular teetering in and out of trance
Observant surveilling wretched buffoonery trending
cyclic magnified in this inauspicious life dance
Shrewd to learn reasoning in intricate depths of people
evolved judgemental life views secluded
Laid in the cut calm as a fly on the textured wall
gender-neutral bathroom festering larvae included
Planted trigger behaviors become iridescently apparent
in blank jungle silence of blossoming juvenile minds
Passive watching random demonic on...
#honesty
#LGBT
#masculinity
#morality
#transgender
93 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Dec 2024 3:37am
25th Dec 2024 3:37am
She Finds Herself Underneath The Playboy Mansion
Sylvia woke in a grotto.
She's naked with two chicks touching her.
Then, Hugh Hefner walked in.
She's naked with two chicks touching her.
Then, Hugh Hefner walked in.
#confusion
#fiction
#home
#LGBT
#sex
134 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 2:08pm
16th Dec 2024 2:08pm
Just Relax And Let Yourself Enjoy
Don't worry.
You will be just fine. All
you have to do is let his rod go
inside you. It will be painful at first. But it
won't be afterwards. Just relax and
let yourself enjoy this
bit of sin.
You will be just fine. All
you have to do is let his rod go
inside you. It will be painful at first. But it
won't be afterwards. Just relax and
let yourself enjoy this
bit of sin.
#dialogue
#fiction
#LGBT
#sex
#threesome
200 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
1st Dec 2024 00:39am
1st Dec 2024 00:39am
Insanity
Poet Pittinix has something more to say to LGBTQ people.
The comments of the poet also go for confused world leaders.
Gays, bisexuals, and trans people should be declared insane.
The gender identity of sane people matches their sexes at birth.
A man of sound mind does not behave like a woman;
Neither does a woman of sound mind behave like a man.
How can a sane woman be in love with a woman?
How can a sane man be in love with a man?
How can a sane person be in love with both sexes?
A person with a natural female form is a woman, ...
The comments of the poet also go for confused world leaders.
Gays, bisexuals, and trans people should be declared insane.
The gender identity of sane people matches their sexes at birth.
A man of sound mind does not behave like a woman;
Neither does a woman of sound mind behave like a man.
How can a sane woman be in love with a woman?
How can a sane man be in love with a man?
How can a sane person be in love with both sexes?
A person with a natural female form is a woman, ...
#LGBT
#men
#politics
#sex
#women
193 reads
7 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
27th Nov 2024 6:34pm
27th Nov 2024 6:34pm
destroyed, renewed
Something like a category fault...
a crease in what should be
the logical cleaving
of masc to femme.
But as the cold of '55
becomes the spring of '56
I'm folding into you
and it feels utterly perfect,
in those moments between
the tentative movements
of hands on arms
and when I spin to push back into you -
the record player singing its old songs -
and when the last thrust leaves us both
destroyed, renewed, destroyed, renewed.
a crease in what should be
the logical cleaving
of masc to femme.
But as the cold of '55
becomes the spring of '56
I'm folding into you
and it feels utterly perfect,
in those moments between
the tentative movements
of hands on arms
and when I spin to push back into you -
the record player singing its old songs -
and when the last thrust leaves us both
destroyed, renewed, destroyed, renewed.
#gay
#LGBT
#love #sex
#love #sex
137 reads
2 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2024 3:55am
22nd Nov 2024 3:55am
innate
a friend of mine talks of conversion
as if there could be such a thing
when what I am is just… innate, a fact,
like grass is green
and Mexico is a country in North America…
and sex has little to do with it,
it’s just an urge that carries no shame,
or shouldn’t. but somehow I can’t say
that I don’t care what St Paul said,
perhaps because a doubt lingers
that maybe it’s a sin, though I doubt it…
more like it’s just because I’m still learning
to state myself and claim a pride
in who I am, to simply be without caring, ...
as if there could be such a thing
when what I am is just… innate, a fact,
like grass is green
and Mexico is a country in North America…
and sex has little to do with it,
it’s just an urge that carries no shame,
or shouldn’t. but somehow I can’t say
that I don’t care what St Paul said,
perhaps because a doubt lingers
that maybe it’s a sin, though I doubt it…
more like it’s just because I’m still learning
to state myself and claim a pride
in who I am, to simply be without caring, ...
#faith
#hate
#LGBT #love
#LGBT #love
88 reads
2 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 11:23pm
18th Nov 2024 11:23pm
Poly-zilla
She says she doesn't get polyamory
and I return back to reading just me,
just me at the tender age of six by
Silverstein as a curious little creature.
How I rolled my eyes getting older
hearing myself getting called
a home wreck or a fuck boy,
I would imagine myself growing
tall, stomping around restaurants
shoving human beings down the
well of my throat in one go
FYI: i'm not Poly-zilla.
So I asked her, how do you feel
when the sun begins to shine?
then she proceeded to tell...
and I return back to reading just me,
just me at the tender age of six by
Silverstein as a curious little creature.
How I rolled my eyes getting older
hearing myself getting called
a home wreck or a fuck boy,
I would imagine myself growing
tall, stomping around restaurants
shoving human beings down the
well of my throat in one go
FYI: i'm not Poly-zilla.
So I asked her, how do you feel
when the sun begins to shine?
then she proceeded to tell...
#LGBT
#polyamory
#relationships
144 reads
1 Comment
xthan
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 2:30am
9th Nov 2024 2:30am
This morning
I read a
poem about
nails tapping
into coffins
and I think
about how
many of my
siblings
hear the
same nails
tapping in
their lives
across a
pond
right
now.
poem about
nails tapping
into coffins
and I think
about how
many of my
siblings
hear the
same nails
tapping in
their lives
across a
pond
right
now.
#America
#LGBT
#minimalist #transgender
#minimalist #transgender
174 reads
3 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 10:50pm
26th Oct 2024 10:50pm
Did God Really Create People As LGBTQ?
Many LGBTQ people assert that God created them the way they are.
Let us analyse the assertion to find out whether it is true or false.
God created a human being with a physical structure and a gender.
Can we say the same thing about the perverted mind and action of a person?
Did the true God create a person to think and act in a specific way?
If this were true, we could say God created Hitler as a murderer.
God did not put lustful feelings for the same sex in the mind of a person.
The things that people think and do are not the...
Let us analyse the assertion to find out whether it is true or false.
God created a human being with a physical structure and a gender.
Can we say the same thing about the perverted mind and action of a person?
Did the true God create a person to think and act in a specific way?
If this were true, we could say God created Hitler as a murderer.
God did not put lustful feelings for the same sex in the mind of a person.
The things that people think and do are not the...
#God
#LGBT
#men
#morality
#women
125 reads
3 Comments
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