LGBT Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#LGBT
LGBT seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
_feral
Poem Published
19th Feb 2024 11:59pm
19th Feb 2024 11:59pm
Audacity of a seed
She said seedy
believing my sheets
belong behind closed
doors in hotel rooms
on half gnawed streets
marrying occupied beds
lights dimmed in red,
I sit back a moment
allowing white hot
rage to pass over
I think of seeds;
how each root
burrows further
underground
hoping to keep
plants anchored
in all of it's ways,
how every shoot
desires reaching
for a burning star
in broad daylight
regardless what...
believing my sheets
belong behind closed
doors in hotel rooms
on half gnawed streets
marrying occupied beds
lights dimmed in red,
I sit back a moment
allowing white hot
rage to pass over
I think of seeds;
how each root
burrows further
underground
hoping to keep
plants anchored
in all of it's ways,
how every shoot
desires reaching
for a burning star
in broad daylight
regardless what...
#LGBT
#confessional
#polyamory
145 reads
2 Comments
neves
Poem Published
25th Jan 2024 3:00am
25th Jan 2024 3:00am
In sight, in mind
You have no idea
how colossal
this lit up city
made me feel
until your mouth
filled my thoughts
with stories you
shared with me.
Even in
your absence
I feel your soft
hands running
over my skin
as I lay by
my windowsill
blowing smoke
watching city
lights fading
into morning.
how colossal
this lit up city
made me feel
until your mouth
filled my thoughts
with stories you
shared with me.
Even in
your absence
I feel your soft
hands running
over my skin
as I lay by
my windowsill
blowing smoke
watching city
lights fading
into morning.
#love
#LGBT
#confessional
201 reads
3 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
24th Jan 2024 2:52pm
24th Jan 2024 2:52pm
Speak For or Against the LGBTQ Issue
Some unreasonable websites only accept favourable opinions about LGBTQ people,
But writing or speaking about the LGBTQ issue should never be a one-sided thing.
Let those who support LGBTQ people and their activities speak in favour of them.
And let those who disagree with LGBTQ people and their lifestyles speak against them.
In some countries, LGBTQ people have the right to live the life they want and say what they want.
Heterosexuals have the same right and they should be allowed to express themselves freely.
If you only allow people to speak...
But writing or speaking about the LGBTQ issue should never be a one-sided thing.
Let those who support LGBTQ people and their activities speak in favour of them.
And let those who disagree with LGBTQ people and their lifestyles speak against them.
In some countries, LGBTQ people have the right to live the life they want and say what they want.
Heterosexuals have the same right and they should be allowed to express themselves freely.
If you only allow people to speak...
#LGBT
#humankind
#freedom
#philosophical
#morality
63 reads
2 Comments
newbardontheblock
bardy
bardy
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2024 6:55pm
2nd Jan 2024 6:55pm
Cyber Slut
#lust
#erotic
#technology
#LGBT
#dirty
215 reads
2 Comments
newbardontheblock
bardy
bardy
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2024 4:28am
2nd Jan 2024 4:28am
Magic Wand
#gay
#LGBT
#rhyming
#dirty
#orgasm
283 reads
1 Comment
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
6th Dec 2023 3:24pm
6th Dec 2023 3:24pm
My Last Post on AP
Hi, to all my fans and supportive readers, I just came back to tell you goodbye.
Mischievous LGBTQ people have been fighting against my work since I joined this website.
The administrator of AP is undoubtedly a partial, unjust and unwise man.
He has easily played right into the hands of the wicked LGBTQ individuals.
This is exactly what they want, but their malicious actions will not dissuade me.
I thought the administrator of this website had integrity, but I was wrong.
Is he a member of the LGBTQ community or did they corrupt him with money?
I...
Mischievous LGBTQ people have been fighting against my work since I joined this website.
The administrator of AP is undoubtedly a partial, unjust and unwise man.
He has easily played right into the hands of the wicked LGBTQ individuals.
This is exactly what they want, but their malicious actions will not dissuade me.
I thought the administrator of this website had integrity, but I was wrong.
Is he a member of the LGBTQ community or did they corrupt him with money?
I...
#corruption
#LGBT
#money
#WritingPoetry
#morality
125 reads
0 Comments
_feral
Poem Published
6th Dec 2023 11:46am
6th Dec 2023 11:46am
do not mistake my politeness for kindness
seven years ago
you would think
differently of me
fists slamming
down on counters,
kicking pretentious
bins across rooms
middle fingers
pointed towards
everybody who
were clueless,
they didn't
understand back
then and they still
don't understand
today either
couldn't help
feeling like that
22 year old again
receiving that
phonecall,
i wanted to throw
the entire world
into the ether
but i'm an old dog
who's been playing ...
you would think
differently of me
fists slamming
down on counters,
kicking pretentious
bins across rooms
middle fingers
pointed towards
everybody who
were clueless,
they didn't
understand back
then and they still
don't understand
today either
couldn't help
feeling like that
22 year old again
receiving that
phonecall,
i wanted to throw
the entire world
into the ether
but i'm an old dog
who's been playing ...
#LGBT
#HumanRights
#transgender
161 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
29th Nov 2023 11:01am
29th Nov 2023 11:01am
After They Took Off The Clothes
After they took off the
clothes drenched by
the summer rain, they
stared at each other
and had a threesome.
clothes drenched by
the summer rain, they
stared at each other
and had a threesome.
#LGBT
#rain
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sensual
122 reads
0 Comments
_Sunshine_
Poem Published
29th Nov 2023 2:50am
29th Nov 2023 2:50am
A Journey through Sexuality and Gender
i was taught as a child
Straight was the only way
It was never acceptable
For anyone to decide that they were gay
men who liked men
lived their lives in sin
A disgusting abomination
As time went on
I left my dogma behind
i opened my eyes
expanded my mind
Why should I care if a guy wants a guy?
Once or twice, one even caught my eye
It wasn't wrong
But it still wasn't good
They were often cast out
And always misunderstood
I thought that I believed that it really was alright
But I realized even I was still...
Straight was the only way
It was never acceptable
For anyone to decide that they were gay
men who liked men
lived their lives in sin
A disgusting abomination
As time went on
I left my dogma behind
i opened my eyes
expanded my mind
Why should I care if a guy wants a guy?
Once or twice, one even caught my eye
It wasn't wrong
But it still wasn't good
They were often cast out
And always misunderstood
I thought that I believed that it really was alright
But I realized even I was still...
#LGBT
#transgender
#PersonalGrowth
66 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
27th Nov 2023 7:31pm
27th Nov 2023 7:31pm
LGBTQ Propaganda Poetry
A certain social media platform supports LGBTQ propaganda poems.
I wonder if it also supports anti-LGBTQ poems and free speech.
A gay poet wrote, “You don’t fall in love with the gender, you fall in love with the person.”
This author does not have accurate knowledge of the subject.
I will not pull my punches, I say that line is a heap of garbage with a stench.
An intelligent person would not invent such nonsensical reasoning.
In fact, no individual exists without an identifiable gender.
The mind cannot give a person a gender of his or her choice. ...
I wonder if it also supports anti-LGBTQ poems and free speech.
A gay poet wrote, “You don’t fall in love with the gender, you fall in love with the person.”
This author does not have accurate knowledge of the subject.
I will not pull my punches, I say that line is a heap of garbage with a stench.
An intelligent person would not invent such nonsensical reasoning.
In fact, no individual exists without an identifiable gender.
The mind cannot give a person a gender of his or her choice. ...
#love
#women
#men
#LGBT
#WritingPoetry
70 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Nov 2023 1:55pm
25th Nov 2023 1:55pm
Is She Really Herself Or Someone Else?
Now, I know that this may sound crazy but the
one minute, this party guest is too shy to look
at us. And the next, she stripped down and joined a
couple for a threesome like she's someone else there.
one minute, this party guest is too shy to look
at us. And the next, she stripped down and joined a
couple for a threesome like she's someone else there.
#LGBT
#fiction
#dialogue
#confusion
#sensual
112 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
24th Oct 2023 3:53am
24th Oct 2023 3:53am
Agreement and Disagreement on Opinions
I write the truth about people who perform wicked deeds.
Some commenters say they disagree with most of my opinions.
I expect to hear this kind of comment from wicked persons.
If I wanted agreement, I would try to please the lovers of lies.
Who cares what brainwashed and misguided people think?
I never told anybody that I was seeking agreement on my work.
Truth cannot change whether everyone agrees with it or not.
Of course, those who hate truth will disagree with my opinions.
Some readers do not like my opinions because they hate truth. ...
Some commenters say they disagree with most of my opinions.
I expect to hear this kind of comment from wicked persons.
If I wanted agreement, I would try to please the lovers of lies.
Who cares what brainwashed and misguided people think?
I never told anybody that I was seeking agreement on my work.
Truth cannot change whether everyone agrees with it or not.
Of course, those who hate truth will disagree with my opinions.
Some readers do not like my opinions because they hate truth. ...
#politics
#LGBT
#religion
#WritingPoetry
#reading
94 reads
0 Comments
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