I Love You Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#ILoveYou
i love you seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
Daniel Long
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:47pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:47pm
Season of Choice
It is the season of choice.
The season I find my love.
Where embers thaw and burn.
Bring me into your season.
Into warm nights of passion.
Where passion ignites senses.
Make me feel your season.
Into warm and sweaty embraces.
Where embracing smolders red hot.
Make me love and hate your season.
Love that summer of wet lips pressing.
Hate that winter of letting go.
The season I find my love.
Where embers thaw and burn.
Bring me into your season.
Into warm nights of passion.
Where passion ignites senses.
Make me feel your season.
Into warm and sweaty embraces.
Where embracing smolders red hot.
Make me love and hate your season.
Love that summer of wet lips pressing.
Hate that winter of letting go.
#crush
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
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MasterG
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2025 2:35pm
23rd Feb 2025 2:35pm
Never mine
As I take pen in hand
To write but one final verse
I stop to read your text
Examine your photos
The love begins to poor
From my eyes as rain
My hands begin to shake
Knowing this is but a farewell
It becomes hard to breathe
Catching my breath
Becoming impossible to breathe
Empty time will fill the void
As you slip thru my hands
Putting down the pen
Unable to write
I see now that was once unclear
You were never mine
To have and to hold
Till death do us part
It was but a dream
Made by the...
To write but one final verse
I stop to read your text
Examine your photos
The love begins to poor
From my eyes as rain
My hands begin to shake
Knowing this is but a farewell
It becomes hard to breathe
Catching my breath
Becoming impossible to breathe
Empty time will fill the void
As you slip thru my hands
Putting down the pen
Unable to write
I see now that was once unclear
You were never mine
To have and to hold
Till death do us part
It was but a dream
Made by the...
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#romantic
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NP_NP
Poem Published
29th Jan 2025 3:26pm
29th Jan 2025 3:26pm
Cheers To Love
I used to think love was hard to find, That only a few ever truly had it. It's crazy how, when we talk to someone new, And they ask about our ex, we start naming all their flaws, How much we detest them. But that’s not all there is, I promise.
He or she made you laugh countless times, Acting goofy at the checkout line. It was inside jokes that only you two knew, She’d roll her eyes, and he couldn’t help but laugh. It was the way she looked in the morning, With her adorable yawn.
You mean to tell me there wasn’t a happy moment, A single one that made you smile? It’s crazy how...
He or she made you laugh countless times, Acting goofy at the checkout line. It was inside jokes that only you two knew, She’d roll her eyes, and he couldn’t help but laugh. It was the way she looked in the morning, With her adorable yawn.
You mean to tell me there wasn’t a happy moment, A single one that made you smile? It’s crazy how...
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
140 reads
1 Comment
_kristiibooooo
Kristina
Kristina
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 6:23pm
22nd Jan 2025 6:23pm
These thoughts
We have been down this road before
What do I do
We have different ways of showing that we love
But it just feeling his love is going
The hurt and sadness I feel in my heart overwhelms me
The constant overthinking
That he knows I cannot help
Here I am again
Thinking
these Thoughts
I get reassurance from him
Like hey it’s just you thinking these thought there not true
But here I am again thinking
these Thought
I don’t know what I have to do
I will do anything for him
He is the only person I want ...
What do I do
We have different ways of showing that we love
But it just feeling his love is going
The hurt and sadness I feel in my heart overwhelms me
The constant overthinking
That he knows I cannot help
Here I am again
Thinking
these Thoughts
I get reassurance from him
Like hey it’s just you thinking these thought there not true
But here I am again thinking
these Thought
I don’t know what I have to do
I will do anything for him
He is the only person I want ...
#apathy
#forgiveness
#ILoveYou
#obsession
#UnrequitedLove
123 reads
9 Comments
Carlie_luv
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 3:11am
17th Jan 2025 3:11am
The Man
I miss his face his hands on my body his eyes I miss the man his soul his his hugs his kisses I miss the dreams I had in his arms.. I run I hide I love him beyond his word I crave him in more ways then one my mind pushes me to the vulnerable side of being a women to let him lead.. to love me beyond my eyes pass my exterior. I think of him all day all night I love him can’t get him out my system soul bound. His cravenness for me his personality is never given up on his patience to want me when I’m unsure of myself. The little things flowers.. calls.. check ins never forget me. Loving me I miss...
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#support
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Sappho
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 6:28pm
13th Jan 2025 6:28pm
Full Moon ín Love
Once in a month I cry for your love
Without words but loud and clear
Don't look around you, I'm not here
Find me high in the sky above
Sometimes I reach out for you
My moonbeam fingers stroke your fur
Until almost like a cat you purr
And I feel that you love me too
Protected by the velvety night
I kiss you soft and tender
Caress you with my splendor
Your yellow eyes reflect my light
Tonight you'll throw back your head
And howl a sweet melody to me
I blush with delight can you see
My moon face is...
Without words but loud and clear
Don't look around you, I'm not here
Find me high in the sky above
Sometimes I reach out for you
My moonbeam fingers stroke your fur
Until almost like a cat you purr
And I feel that you love me too
Protected by the velvety night
I kiss you soft and tender
Caress you with my splendor
Your yellow eyes reflect my light
Tonight you'll throw back your head
And howl a sweet melody to me
I blush with delight can you see
My moon face is...
#beauty
#ILoveYou
131 reads
8 Comments
BlkLyrycE
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 4:14pm
13th Jan 2025 4:14pm
A Sober Man's Heart
A Sober Man’s Heart
“The triangular theory of love holds that love can be understood in terms of three components that together can be viewed as forming the vertices of a triangle. The triangle is used as a metaphor rather than as a strict geometric model. These three components are intimacy, passion, and decision/commitment. Each component manifests a different aspect of love.” – Robert J. Sternberg
I can picture the sun reflecting from off the surface of your skin
The aroma of coconut and vanilla dancing off the miniature hairs that are reemerging from out of...
“The triangular theory of love holds that love can be understood in terms of three components that together can be viewed as forming the vertices of a triangle. The triangle is used as a metaphor rather than as a strict geometric model. These three components are intimacy, passion, and decision/commitment. Each component manifests a different aspect of love.” – Robert J. Sternberg
I can picture the sun reflecting from off the surface of your skin
The aroma of coconut and vanilla dancing off the miniature hairs that are reemerging from out of...
#admiration
#beauty
#honesty
#ILoveYou
#love
153 reads
5 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 9:30am
12th Jan 2025 9:30am
Love Script
The pen ran dry, as all love seems.
The ink no longer pours, as it use to bleed.
Lead goes dull, and erasers fade.
But the words themselves, still cut like blades.
Handwritten or typed, they all have pain.
Some worse then others, some all the same.
The ink no longer pours, as it use to bleed.
Lead goes dull, and erasers fade.
But the words themselves, still cut like blades.
Handwritten or typed, they all have pain.
Some worse then others, some all the same.
#breakup
#heartbroken
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
109 reads
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NP_NP
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 8:50pm
1st Jan 2025 8:50pm
Vibe Check
Will you pass the vibe check?
Are you the Blue Moon song—classic yet distinct.
Remember, I like plants, not flowers.
I’ll connect to you on a deeper plane, more than anyone has.
Two planets circling, locked in orbit.
Slide close to me, and I'll slide to you.
Don’t forget to open my door when I step out of the car;
I love a man who proves chivalry isn’t dead.
I want a teacher and a student.
I’ll show you my darkness
If you reveal what truly haunts you.
Forever dancing, side by side,
Traveling partners, in...
Are you the Blue Moon song—classic yet distinct.
Remember, I like plants, not flowers.
I’ll connect to you on a deeper plane, more than anyone has.
Two planets circling, locked in orbit.
Slide close to me, and I'll slide to you.
Don’t forget to open my door when I step out of the car;
I love a man who proves chivalry isn’t dead.
I want a teacher and a student.
I’ll show you my darkness
If you reveal what truly haunts you.
Forever dancing, side by side,
Traveling partners, in...
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
108 reads
0 Comments
sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2024 11:51am
22nd Dec 2024 11:51am
My Piece of Heaven
The prize is loving you and that's all I need.
Your laughter, your smile is always guaranteed.
It's the smell of your hair while laying next to me.
Holding you at night, knowing I'm your safety.
It's the way you look at me when you're angry.
Like there's a little demon about to break free.
It's your voice when you sing slightly off key.
You do it with joy because it makes me happy.
It's how I wake up thinking you're still amazing.
Before the makeup, the way God intended you to be seen.
It's all the things that fall in between, that...
Your laughter, your smile is always guaranteed.
It's the smell of your hair while laying next to me.
Holding you at night, knowing I'm your safety.
It's the way you look at me when you're angry.
Like there's a little demon about to break free.
It's your voice when you sing slightly off key.
You do it with joy because it makes me happy.
It's how I wake up thinking you're still amazing.
Before the makeup, the way God intended you to be seen.
It's all the things that fall in between, that...
#happiness
#ILoveYou
#love
#relationships
#romantic
308 reads
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cabcool
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 00:36am
18th Nov 2024 00:36am
2024 November Poems >> moments to remember
No. 06
moments to remember
“Dream as if you’ll live
forever, live as if you’ll die
today.”—James Dean
let’s build a dream that no one else can dream:
of honeysuckle kisses full of rhyme;
red heart-to-heart love promises that theme
the mountainsides with passions in their prime.
let’s leave our footprints in the sinking sand,
ere some gigantic wave comes to the shore
and ferries it across some distant land
whence, wanderlusting, we must hopes explore.
let’s populate the river with dark skin,
and...
moments to remember
“Dream as if you’ll live
forever, live as if you’ll die
today.”—James Dean
let’s build a dream that no one else can dream:
of honeysuckle kisses full of rhyme;
red heart-to-heart love promises that theme
the mountainsides with passions in their prime.
let’s leave our footprints in the sinking sand,
ere some gigantic wave comes to the shore
and ferries it across some distant land
whence, wanderlusting, we must hopes explore.
let’s populate the river with dark skin,
and...
#boyfriend
#FallingInLove
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#romantic
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sgtvasquezg
G. Vasquez
G. Vasquez
Poem Published
13th Nov 2024 12:57pm
13th Nov 2024 12:57pm
Different Lights
You've got me in a daze, trying to figure out what's up from down.
Confused and afraid to even turn around.
I would hate to lose sight of what I finally found.
These years without you, I've realized how many times I almost drowned.
You really got me in love, that you truly do.
I was about to give up when God sent me you.
My future is in your hands and I bet you have no clue.
I understand a lot of what it is that you are going through.
I have also walked those same miles but from a father's view.
Just one more reason why I want to do right by you. ...
Confused and afraid to even turn around.
I would hate to lose sight of what I finally found.
These years without you, I've realized how many times I almost drowned.
You really got me in love, that you truly do.
I was about to give up when God sent me you.
My future is in your hands and I bet you have no clue.
I understand a lot of what it is that you are going through.
I have also walked those same miles but from a father's view.
Just one more reason why I want to do right by you. ...
#FallingInLove
#ILoveYou
#love #relationships
#love #relationships
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