I Love You Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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i love you seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 12:12pm
14th Feb 2024 12:12pm
A Bloodthirsty Vision With Love
A peaceful world is not what I see,
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though all those thoughts disappear,
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more fighting, no more wars.
death, lies & murder, I just want to flee
when I see you though all those thoughts disappear,
you make my world complete; I love you my dear
Happy Valentines Day to you & many many more
peace on earth, no more fighting, no more wars.
#love
#ILoveYou
#war #ValentinesDay
#war #ValentinesDay
102 reads
3 Comments
ClovenTongue34
Poem Published
14th Feb 2024 00:20am
14th Feb 2024 00:20am
Never Ending
Taken in, enraptured at a glance
Honing in on this romance
Usurping my heart through my eyes
Novice hopes called to light
Dreams come alive where fantasy dies
Enduring beyond a moment, a lifetime’s promise, a lover’s fight
Revolutions of palpitations
Stirring up passions to relive first sensations
Tried and true, a vows kiss beyond infatuation
Rendered undone by love satisfied by in-satiation
Under the influence of what brings both clarity and chemical inebriation
Cadence set in harmony to imbue
Kinetic collisions...
Honing in on this romance
Usurping my heart through my eyes
Novice hopes called to light
Dreams come alive where fantasy dies
Enduring beyond a moment, a lifetime’s promise, a lover’s fight
Revolutions of palpitations
Stirring up passions to relive first sensations
Tried and true, a vows kiss beyond infatuation
Rendered undone by love satisfied by in-satiation
Under the influence of what brings both clarity and chemical inebriation
Cadence set in harmony to imbue
Kinetic collisions...
#love
#relationships
#marriage
#ILoveYou
#ValentinesDay
141 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Jan 2024 3:42am
26th Jan 2024 3:42am
Risk
my sadness swell within me
I ache in the moment
dwelling inside the darkness of shadows
your figure over me hesitated
then reach in and gave me your love
it was a secret confession from your soul to mine
I took you to my inner woman
so you would know I love you in my sacredness
heart of my heart
I know you
because you trust me
I wish I was what you wanted
fate was cruel to us
close enough just to touch
and no more
inside my sorrow, you are a bright spot
lighting up my darkness
with...
I ache in the moment
dwelling inside the darkness of shadows
your figure over me hesitated
then reach in and gave me your love
it was a secret confession from your soul to mine
I took you to my inner woman
so you would know I love you in my sacredness
heart of my heart
I know you
because you trust me
I wish I was what you wanted
fate was cruel to us
close enough just to touch
and no more
inside my sorrow, you are a bright spot
lighting up my darkness
with...
#love
#ILoveYou
143 reads
13 Comments
peninnah
Poem Published
20th Jan 2024 12:39pm
20th Jan 2024 12:39pm
Hello Tomorrow~
Dear Gifted Hands,
My first thoughts of you were, well, I didn't have any! Haha! I did not particularly notice you;
An electric shock rather, reverberates ever since the first Hello; a pungent pungent ache to hold and protect you from any hurt.
I did not fall into love with you. There were no butterflies to write about. Meeting you was a mother's joy to a son's homecoming!
Hello Tomorrow~
My first thoughts of you were, well, I didn't have any! Haha! I did not particularly notice you;
An electric shock rather, reverberates ever since the first Hello; a pungent pungent ache to hold and protect you from any hurt.
I did not fall into love with you. There were no butterflies to write about. Meeting you was a mother's joy to a son's homecoming!
Hello Tomorrow~
#ILoveYou
#beauty
#admiration
#respect
#IMissYou
126 reads
4 Comments
peninnah
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 9:26am
15th Jan 2024 9:26am
A MATTER OF TIME
"Guard yourself!" I long to chat him, "until you in my arms again."
But beauty lies unspoken in truth.
It's well understood;
He is my home and I am his.
But beauty lies unspoken in truth.
It's well understood;
He is my home and I am his.
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#admiration
#respect
#IMissYou
127 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 4:50am
8th Jan 2024 4:50am
Misty Moments Inbetween
in the passing moments I fade
when you fail to see me I go away
I wanted you to know I carry my thoughts of you with me
cradling the years with the memories
I wanted you to know I desired you
did you desire me?
I gave you my heart
you have the best of me
sadness of heart
a stillness of soul
I tell you honestly
as I caress your doubt with my love
I don't wish to linger in your thoughts as a ghost
who haunts but I do
as the woman you've never held
you have the best of me ...
when you fail to see me I go away
I wanted you to know I carry my thoughts of you with me
cradling the years with the memories
I wanted you to know I desired you
did you desire me?
I gave you my heart
you have the best of me
sadness of heart
a stillness of soul
I tell you honestly
as I caress your doubt with my love
I don't wish to linger in your thoughts as a ghost
who haunts but I do
as the woman you've never held
you have the best of me ...
#love
#ILoveYou
209 reads
19 Comments
peninnah
Poem Published
5th Jan 2024 8:15am
5th Jan 2024 8:15am
OH MY LOVE!ALL MY LOVE!
He said to me, He Who Is My Heart, He said:
"Don't love me because I AM God,"
"Don't Love me because I AM Lord Jesus Christ."
"Don't love me because I AM The Lord of Hosts"
"Love me for me; LORD"
"Don't love me because I AM God,"
"Don't Love me because I AM Lord Jesus Christ."
"Don't love me because I AM The Lord of Hosts"
"Love me for me; LORD"
#love
#ILoveYou
#God #FirstLove
#God #FirstLove
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2 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
28th Dec 2023 7:41pm
28th Dec 2023 7:41pm
AS I STILL WAIT FOR YOU (revised)
How your silhouette it
still lingers
In wee hours just before
the dawn
Memories of your kisses
and fingers
I'm keeping you safely
tucked away
In moments of frequent
longing
All I ask is if you would
please stay
My door is locked and
candle unlit
Still wanting for you to
come home
My love for you will not
ever quit
My need for you and your
gentle touch
Sways like the ocean under
my skin.
You’re a wave still remembered
so much
Don't leave
...
still lingers
In wee hours just before
the dawn
Memories of your kisses
and fingers
I'm keeping you safely
tucked away
In moments of frequent
longing
All I ask is if you would
please stay
My door is locked and
candle unlit
Still wanting for you to
come home
My love for you will not
ever quit
My need for you and your
gentle touch
Sways like the ocean under
my skin.
You’re a wave still remembered
so much
Don't leave
...
#ILoveYou
#admiration
211 reads
4 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
27th Dec 2023 7:45pm
27th Dec 2023 7:45pm
AS I WAIT FOR YOU
I'll see your silhouette in the shadows as I turn into my bed, imagine your body draped across mine like fog in the bay in the early hours just before the sun rises. Will your kisses taste like dew when the sun rises just right?
Can I keep you here, with me, in the shadows? I just want to keep you, any part of you. Will your shadow be good enough to stay, stitched to a thimble long after you've left and gone? I hate to be so lonely without your touch, and the sway of the branches outside does nothing more than remind me of our own rhythm.
I'll lock my door so my visage...
Can I keep you here, with me, in the shadows? I just want to keep you, any part of you. Will your shadow be good enough to stay, stitched to a thimble long after you've left and gone? I hate to be so lonely without your touch, and the sway of the branches outside does nothing more than remind me of our own rhythm.
I'll lock my door so my visage...
#ILoveYou
#IMissYou
261 reads
4 Comments
SunflowerShares
Poem Published
6th Nov 2023 1:57pm
6th Nov 2023 1:57pm
Sunshine
Falling inlove with you
is a daily affair.
For when you rise and set,
I will be there
to witness your
first and last lights.
In my mind is where
you're constantly at,
and in my heart
is where you reside.
You are the sunshine I need
to go through my day,
the sunshine I yearn for
at night.
My heart beats steadily
to your presence.
~SUNFLOWER.SHARES
is a daily affair.
For when you rise and set,
I will be there
to witness your
first and last lights.
In my mind is where
you're constantly at,
and in my heart
is where you reside.
You are the sunshine I need
to go through my day,
the sunshine I yearn for
at night.
My heart beats steadily
to your presence.
~SUNFLOWER.SHARES
#relationships
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#admiration
441 reads
4 Comments
SunflowerShares
Poem Published
5th Nov 2023 5:41pm
5th Nov 2023 5:41pm
The Lover Of My Heart
YOU!
You are my anchor,
my charmer,
a harbour to my sailing heart.
My heart is spilling flaming love wailing for you.
For you are embracing to my love
My body and soul are screaming for you.
You embody me for the better
For the bitter times,
you trigger the winner in me
as you are quicker to sail into my heart.
My heart palpitates at the regard of you.
My mind halts at the thought of you.
You make me perceive things I never knew existed.
Your entity electrifies my soul
pervading my body...
You are my anchor,
my charmer,
a harbour to my sailing heart.
My heart is spilling flaming love wailing for you.
For you are embracing to my love
My body and soul are screaming for you.
You embody me for the better
For the bitter times,
you trigger the winner in me
as you are quicker to sail into my heart.
My heart palpitates at the regard of you.
My mind halts at the thought of you.
You make me perceive things I never knew existed.
Your entity electrifies my soul
pervading my body...
#love
#relationships
#ILoveYou #admiration
#ILoveYou #admiration
301 reads
2 Comments
cabcool
Poem Published
29th Oct 2023 3:38am
29th Oct 2023 3:38am
ó ó dancing ó ó
Dancing is the poetry of the foot.”—John Dryden
if you find me dancing,
chances are i've found my happiness,
arabesque romancing,
fleet feet kissing floors with wantonness.
your sweet laugh, the music,
as your heart the metronomic pulse,
though a fragile yardstick
for to measure how my dreams...
if you find me dancing,
chances are i've found my happiness,
arabesque romancing,
fleet feet kissing floors with wantonness.
your sweet laugh, the music,
as your heart the metronomic pulse,
though a fragile yardstick
for to measure how my dreams...
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#UnrequitedLove
#dance
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