Poems for and About Best Friends by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about best friends by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
stardust
jealously simmers then fades
you miss the good times with him that's all it is
days when you smiled and laughed
simpler days before hurt entered in
let go of what is no more
love gets more complicated as you go
there'll be days in the sun
and laughter too
nights when you chase dreams together
mornings when all you can do is cry
don't hold on too tightly and damage what's already beautiful
because there isn't another relationship like this one
unique personalities are woven intricately in this universe: ...
you miss the good times with him that's all it is
days when you smiled and laughed
simpler days before hurt entered in
let go of what is no more
love gets more complicated as you go
there'll be days in the sun
and laughter too
nights when you chase dreams together
mornings when all you can do is cry
don't hold on too tightly and damage what's already beautiful
because there isn't another relationship like this one
unique personalities are woven intricately in this universe: ...
#love
#BestFriend
#son
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17 Comments
Thanks for watching over me
I write these words ✍️ from pen to paper, as well l give thanks to GOD ALMIGHTY, 😇 for what he has done for me 🙏 over my journey and travel and walk. FOR I am grateful as I am yes thankful 🙏 as I am blessed ❤️ in more ways than one to still, being here right here in now. I truly thank my faith and my perseverance for not giving up without a future fight, for sure I would rather be on my feet than being on my knees for he isn't ready for me to come home 🏡 For sure I am a firm believer that it ain't over when you lose, it's over when...
#BestFriend
#LifeAsAWriter
#relationships
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
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6 Comments
Poetry...After Dark
What kind of hold do you have on me woman?
There are nights when you’re all over my mind
I feel a lil’ thrill when I spill with this kind of quill I just
I just don’t know
I don’t know
I guess I need keep digging this mine
Searching for mine
I’ve been through this door before
(Un momentito por favor)
Playing audio on the scenario as I go on to the next line
I’m not sure
I’d say be kind and rewind
But nobody uses any tape anymore
Been searching for mine
No rhyme or pun intended
But I think it’s kind of...
There are nights when you’re all over my mind
I feel a lil’ thrill when I spill with this kind of quill I just
I just don’t know
I don’t know
I guess I need keep digging this mine
Searching for mine
I’ve been through this door before
(Un momentito por favor)
Playing audio on the scenario as I go on to the next line
I’m not sure
I’d say be kind and rewind
But nobody uses any tape anymore
Been searching for mine
No rhyme or pun intended
But I think it’s kind of...
#love
#BestFriend
#sensual
650 reads
4 Comments
Sleepover’s (What girls talk about early teens)
Cast: Julie, Francine, Gloria and Mei
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
#BestFriend
#lesbian
#confusion
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11 Comments
Honorificabilitudinitatibus!

#BestFriend
#marriage
284 reads
3 Comments
Best Pal
We captured frogs
had marble races
got humped by dogs
made up our faces
We walked to the pool
got lost in the woods
played hooky from school
devoured baked goods
We climbed in trees
and hopped on ice floes
scraped up our knees
watched music videos
You helped clean my room
I helped dirty yours
when I couldn’t go play
you finished my chores
Got into punk rock
and changed our hair
adventures followed us
everywhere
Life took us away
to different towns
but...
had marble races
got humped by dogs
made up our faces
We walked to the pool
got lost in the woods
played hooky from school
devoured baked goods
We climbed in trees
and hopped on ice floes
scraped up our knees
watched music videos
You helped clean my room
I helped dirty yours
when I couldn’t go play
you finished my chores
Got into punk rock
and changed our hair
adventures followed us
everywhere
Life took us away
to different towns
but...
#love
#BestFriend
#childhood
#friendship
#NaPoWriMo2022
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3 Comments
Cipher)))O(((rehpiC
Were you voted most likely to succeed?
… Most likely to breed?
… Most likely to sing?
… Most likely to do nothing?
… Most likely to do anything?..
… Most likely to say:
Fuck all yall and everything?..
… We were on the topic of fuck.
or… In this case
Fuck you.
That is… Fuck the system
This got me to thinking
or… Reminiscing.
I thought of an old year book…
Hidden in a dusty nook.
A friend did a drawing of me
clad in characteristic garb...
An over extended arm ...
… Most likely to breed?
… Most likely to sing?
… Most likely to do nothing?
… Most likely to do anything?..
… Most likely to say:
Fuck all yall and everything?..
… We were on the topic of fuck.
or… In this case
Fuck you.
That is… Fuck the system
This got me to thinking
or… Reminiscing.
I thought of an old year book…
Hidden in a dusty nook.
A friend did a drawing of me
clad in characteristic garb...
An over extended arm ...
#BestFriend
#marijuana
#LifeAsAWriter
#aliens
#magic
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2 Comments
Belonging
Navigating the new and ancient friend zone.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
#BestFriend
#friendship
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#love
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6 Comments
My Braid Challenge Is Coming To An Official End As Of 09-13-22
Beauty is the skin we are in.
Does it matter if we have long hair, short hair. or someone who has lost their hair due to chemotherapy. or the medical condition Alopecia.
You are the person who shine. from the inner to the outside.
Loving yourself truly is the greatest love of all.. be beautiful. and make sure you wear it well. therefore. it projects to others. In addition, keep a positive attitude, always, it makes the heart pulsate with gladness and it caresses the mind to a state of universal oblivion.
About to get dressed from returning from...
Does it matter if we have long hair, short hair. or someone who has lost their hair due to chemotherapy. or the medical condition Alopecia.
You are the person who shine. from the inner to the outside.
Loving yourself truly is the greatest love of all.. be beautiful. and make sure you wear it well. therefore. it projects to others. In addition, keep a positive attitude, always, it makes the heart pulsate with gladness and it caresses the mind to a state of universal oblivion.
About to get dressed from returning from...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#vanity
#passion
#ThrillSeeking
773 reads
8 Comments
A Friend
I relate to you.
Let's be best friends.
Take my side,
We're one of the same.
I'm with you until the end.
Just don't turn your back to me.
Don't hide in the dark.
Don't go with those I don't follow.
Don't leave me all alone.
We're only friends if we're similar.
I only feel for things I've known.
I can't love you if your not like me.
I don't want a stranger in my home.
You're not unique.
You're just like me.
We're best friends.
We are one.
The purpose we have together
Is to shut...
Let's be best friends.
Take my side,
We're one of the same.
I'm with you until the end.
Just don't turn your back to me.
Don't hide in the dark.
Don't go with those I don't follow.
Don't leave me all alone.
We're only friends if we're similar.
I only feel for things I've known.
I can't love you if your not like me.
I don't want a stranger in my home.
You're not unique.
You're just like me.
We're best friends.
We are one.
The purpose we have together
Is to shut...
#BestFriend
#friendship
640 reads
4 Comments
Annually
I wonder
if galactic races
ponder the meaning
of multicolored lights
and "Peace on Earth
Goodwill to men"
annually
vs daily
How the majority
of the planet
lays down its arms
to string strands
from tree & rooftop
to outlet power,
but not for understanding
or Love
Why consumers
spend and pretend
regret won't swallow
the budget whole
in the year to come
All because we fear
the unknown: ...
if galactic races
ponder the meaning
of multicolored lights
and "Peace on Earth
Goodwill to men"
annually
vs daily
How the majority
of the planet
lays down its arms
to string strands
from tree & rooftop
to outlet power,
but not for understanding
or Love
Why consumers
spend and pretend
regret won't swallow
the budget whole
in the year to come
All because we fear
the unknown: ...
#love
#BestFriend
#universe
#Christmas
#aliens
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30 Comments
And then, suddenly, someone said Shakespeare has died
old long since
sadness are the shore shingles
which will never drown,
we watched our school friends die together
How many women took us up the stairs
to touch to feel to caress,
our webbed fingers never made us Superman
there was always Lex Luthor, dredged in black
metaphorical chains gallow’ed upon neck
Well, not quite
Indigo in eyes of his children
north by northwest, or north by fucking anywhere
are rainbow’ed hues of the future
and I know (I know) rainbows are such a poetic cliché.
Turn my...
sadness are the shore shingles
which will never drown,
we watched our school friends die together
How many women took us up the stairs
to touch to feel to caress,
our webbed fingers never made us Superman
there was always Lex Luthor, dredged in black
metaphorical chains gallow’ed upon neck
Well, not quite
Indigo in eyes of his children
north by northwest, or north by fucking anywhere
are rainbow’ed hues of the future
and I know (I know) rainbows are such a poetic cliché.
Turn my...
#BestFriend
#identity
91 reads
3 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems for and About Best Friends by Top Critiquers