Poems for and About Best Friends by Top Critiquers
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Poems for and about best friends by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Sleepover’s (What girls talk about early teens)
Cast: Julie, Francine, Gloria and Mei
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
Mei
I love romantic movies—the happy ever after and the kiss.
Francine
Nope. That movie was dry. There was no tongue in that kiss
Julie
You always want tongue, Fran. I think your hormones need to be leashed
Gloria
Not my kind of movie
Fran, Julie, and Mei say at the same time
Of course not. No girl-on-girl action.
Gloria
Well, I know what gets me going, and that was not it.
Mei
I heard that Joey will make a play for you, Fran. ...
#BestFriend
#lesbian
#confusion
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stardust
jealously simmers then fades
you miss the good times with him that's all it is
days when you smiled and laughed
simpler days before hurt entered in
let go of what is no more
love gets more complicated as you go
there'll be days in the sun
and laughter too
nights when you chase dreams together
mornings when all you can do is cry
don't hold on too tightly and damage what's already beautiful
because there isn't another relationship like this one
unique personalities are woven intricately in this universe: ...
you miss the good times with him that's all it is
days when you smiled and laughed
simpler days before hurt entered in
let go of what is no more
love gets more complicated as you go
there'll be days in the sun
and laughter too
nights when you chase dreams together
mornings when all you can do is cry
don't hold on too tightly and damage what's already beautiful
because there isn't another relationship like this one
unique personalities are woven intricately in this universe: ...
#love
#BestFriend
#son
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17 Comments
Annually
I wonder
if galactic races
ponder the meaning
of multicolored lights
and "Peace on Earth
Goodwill to men"
annually
vs daily
How the majority
of the planet
lays down its arms
to string strands
from tree & rooftop
to outlet power,
but not for understanding
or Love
Why consumers
spend and pretend
regret won't swallow
the budget whole
in the year to come
All because we fear
the unknown: ...
if galactic races
ponder the meaning
of multicolored lights
and "Peace on Earth
Goodwill to men"
annually
vs daily
How the majority
of the planet
lays down its arms
to string strands
from tree & rooftop
to outlet power,
but not for understanding
or Love
Why consumers
spend and pretend
regret won't swallow
the budget whole
in the year to come
All because we fear
the unknown: ...
#love
#BestFriend
#universe
#Christmas
#aliens
1399 reads
30 Comments
A Friend
I relate to you.
Let's be best friends.
Take my side,
We're one of the same.
I'm with you until the end.
Just don't turn your back to me.
Don't hide in the dark.
Don't go with those I don't follow.
Don't leave me all alone.
We're only friends if we're similar.
I only feel for things I've known.
I can't love you if your not like me.
I don't want a stranger in my home.
You're not unique.
You're just like me.
We're best friends.
We are one.
The purpose we have together
Is to shut...
Let's be best friends.
Take my side,
We're one of the same.
I'm with you until the end.
Just don't turn your back to me.
Don't hide in the dark.
Don't go with those I don't follow.
Don't leave me all alone.
We're only friends if we're similar.
I only feel for things I've known.
I can't love you if your not like me.
I don't want a stranger in my home.
You're not unique.
You're just like me.
We're best friends.
We are one.
The purpose we have together
Is to shut...
#BestFriend
#friendship
582 reads
4 Comments
Thanks for watching over me
I write these words ✍️ from pen to paper, as well l give thanks to GOD ALMIGHTY, 😇 for what he has done for me 🙏 over my journey and travel and walk. FOR I am grateful as I am yes thankful 🙏 as I am blessed ❤️ in more ways than one to still, being here right here in now. I truly thank my faith and my perseverance for not giving up without a future fight, for sure I would rather be on my feet than being on my knees for he isn't ready for me to come home 🏡 For sure I am a firm believer that it ain't over when you lose, it's over when...
#BestFriend
#LifeAsAWriter
#relationships
#StreamOfConsciousness
#uplifting
70 reads
6 Comments
Did I Ever Really Know You?
I've been trying bestie...
to understand the changes in you.
You can't look me in eye!
I don't know...what i can do!
I've caught you in a terrible lie
Is our friendship...going to die?
Is it that man...tell me sister...
what has he done to you?
I used to read you like a book.
Every crook and every hook...
We used to think the very same...
Sometimes joy sometimes rage!
I knew every single page...but...
You cut me off
You cut me out
You cut my heart in two!
Did I ever really know you?
...
to understand the changes in you.
You can't look me in eye!
I don't know...what i can do!
I've caught you in a terrible lie
Is our friendship...going to die?
Is it that man...tell me sister...
what has he done to you?
I used to read you like a book.
Every crook and every hook...
We used to think the very same...
Sometimes joy sometimes rage!
I knew every single page...but...
You cut me off
You cut me out
You cut my heart in two!
Did I ever really know you?
...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#lies
53 reads
4 Comments
Honorificabilitudinitatibus!
#BestFriend
#marriage
249 reads
3 Comments
Belonging
Navigating the new and ancient friend zone.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
#BestFriend
#friendship
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#love
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6 Comments
In This Place
In this place I am one.
I know this fair strand.
For countless times have I walked it.
And numberless are the sands.
Familiar to me as the salt air breezes,
Known and unknown,
We are one.
Each made for the other…
Two limestone stacks stand offshore
Some say there stand two brothers; others, there two sisters bathe.
To my mind come the words of a simple phrase:
We are one together, yet separate and single.
I have watched them all my days
...
I know this fair strand.
For countless times have I walked it.
And numberless are the sands.
Familiar to me as the salt air breezes,
Known and unknown,
We are one.
Each made for the other…
Two limestone stacks stand offshore
Some say there stand two brothers; others, there two sisters bathe.
To my mind come the words of a simple phrase:
We are one together, yet separate and single.
I have watched them all my days
...
#love
#BestFriend
#relationships
#friendship
#support
595 reads
4 Comments
My Braid Challenge Is Coming To An Official End As Of 09-13-22
Beauty is the skin we are in.
Does it matter if we have long hair, short hair. or someone who has lost their hair due to chemotherapy. or the medical condition Alopecia.
You are the person who shine. from the inner to the outside.
Loving yourself truly is the greatest love of all.. be beautiful. and make sure you wear it well. therefore. it projects to others. In addition, keep a positive attitude, always, it makes the heart pulsate with gladness and it caresses the mind to a state of universal oblivion.
About to get dressed from returning from...
Does it matter if we have long hair, short hair. or someone who has lost their hair due to chemotherapy. or the medical condition Alopecia.
You are the person who shine. from the inner to the outside.
Loving yourself truly is the greatest love of all.. be beautiful. and make sure you wear it well. therefore. it projects to others. In addition, keep a positive attitude, always, it makes the heart pulsate with gladness and it caresses the mind to a state of universal oblivion.
About to get dressed from returning from...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#vanity
#passion
#ThrillSeeking
731 reads
8 Comments
Poetry...After Dark
What kind of hold do you have on me woman?
There are nights when you’re all over my mind
I feel a lil’ thrill when I spill with this kind of quill I just
I just don’t know
I don’t know
I guess I need keep digging this mine
Searching for mine
I’ve been through this door before
(Un momentito por favor)
Playing audio on the scenario as I go on to the next line
I’m not sure
I’d say be kind and rewind
But nobody uses any tape anymore
Been searching for mine
No rhyme or pun intended
But I think it’s kind of...
There are nights when you’re all over my mind
I feel a lil’ thrill when I spill with this kind of quill I just
I just don’t know
I don’t know
I guess I need keep digging this mine
Searching for mine
I’ve been through this door before
(Un momentito por favor)
Playing audio on the scenario as I go on to the next line
I’m not sure
I’d say be kind and rewind
But nobody uses any tape anymore
Been searching for mine
No rhyme or pun intended
But I think it’s kind of...
#love
#BestFriend
#sensual
613 reads
4 Comments
Best Pal
We captured frogs
had marble races
got humped by dogs
made up our faces
We walked to the pool
got lost in the woods
played hooky from school
devoured baked goods
We climbed in trees
and hopped on ice floes
scraped up our knees
watched music videos
You helped clean my room
I helped dirty yours
when I couldn’t go play
you finished my chores
Got into punk rock
and changed our hair
adventures followed us
everywhere
Life took us away
to different towns
but...
had marble races
got humped by dogs
made up our faces
We walked to the pool
got lost in the woods
played hooky from school
devoured baked goods
We climbed in trees
and hopped on ice floes
scraped up our knees
watched music videos
You helped clean my room
I helped dirty yours
when I couldn’t go play
you finished my chores
Got into punk rock
and changed our hair
adventures followed us
everywhere
Life took us away
to different towns
but...
#love
#BestFriend
#childhood
#friendship
#NaPoWriMo2022
393 reads
3 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems for and About Best Friends by Top Critiquers