Poems for and About Best Friends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about best friends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:31am
Yesterday 00:31am
Embrace
#BestFriend
#friendship
#love
20 reads
10 Comments
Dragonnora
Nora
Nora
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 10:27pm
1st Apr 2024 10:27pm
In his arms
It should make me happy
He makes her feel warm
Happy to know
she is safe in his arms
and the sight of her laugh
fills him with glee
happier than ever is not happy for me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
those foolish butterflies
that I recognise
look so much better
in her pretty eyes
as if I could come close
to all that they will be
she keeps that happiness far away from me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
I am a monster
with all the time I spend
secretly hating
her...
He makes her feel warm
Happy to know
she is safe in his arms
and the sight of her laugh
fills him with glee
happier than ever is not happy for me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
those foolish butterflies
that I recognise
look so much better
in her pretty eyes
as if I could come close
to all that they will be
she keeps that happiness far away from me
her happy ever after is not happy for me
I am a monster
with all the time I spend
secretly hating
her...
#jealousy
#BestFriend
#heartbroken
#LGBT
#UnrequitedLove
88 reads
1 Comment
Angel24
Poem Published
28th Mar 2024 4:21am
28th Mar 2024 4:21am
Angel Hudson
This name
Oh oh this name
Well I represented
With youthful pride
To be one of you
Is like honouring Christ
Like the resurrection today
Good Friday
My name represents unity
Unity meaning all
Our genre all the generic
People get together
To celebrate success
With Mr Saul Hudson Slash
I love you all
And hope I can bring
Some mercy to the
People that nominated us
In good faith to be winners
And Hudson
My love for you
Is deeper than any river
Maybe the rockpool in Darwin
Where we met...
Oh oh this name
Well I represented
With youthful pride
To be one of you
Is like honouring Christ
Like the resurrection today
Good Friday
My name represents unity
Unity meaning all
Our genre all the generic
People get together
To celebrate success
With Mr Saul Hudson Slash
I love you all
And hope I can bring
Some mercy to the
People that nominated us
In good faith to be winners
And Hudson
My love for you
Is deeper than any river
Maybe the rockpool in Darwin
Where we met...
#love
#BestFriend
#friendship #rose
#friendship #rose
42 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
13th Mar 2024 9:36pm
13th Mar 2024 9:36pm
Of Drinking Too Much Booze On Kevin's Last Single Night
Ginger woke up with a hangover
and found herself naked in the
bedroom of her son Kevin's
best friend Peter as a
result of drinking
too much booze on
Kevin's last
single
night.
and found herself naked in the
bedroom of her son Kevin's
best friend Peter as a
result of drinking
too much booze on
Kevin's last
single
night.
#mother
#BestFriend
#alcohol
#fiction
#sensual
86 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Feb 2024 1:36am
19th Feb 2024 1:36am
BENEATH THE DEEPNESS
BENEATH the deepness of your mind and heart and soul. ✍️ WHAT are you feeling when you decide to think with your heart and not with your mind. For do you open up your heart and close your eyes and mind, as you wear it on your selves 🤔 for do you truly believe the words that comes from out of their mouth 🤔 To express their love for you, without no real communications and commitment and no real consistency, with honest truth and genuine trust. I'm just going through this out in the wind of self consciousness of what you need and want in the world of REAL reality...
#BestFriend
#relationships
#friendship
#lover
#support
101 reads
0 Comments
Sexyseaschelle
Poem Published
6th Jan 2024 6:00am
6th Jan 2024 6:00am
My sexy, friend, cowboy. Part ???
Thank you Wes !!
For coming thru for me last night.
I needed help and you came to my rescue.
I guess we're just friends now and ill take that.
I called you and needed help and you didn't hesitate to come thru.
It was great to see you.
You said I was one of the strongest willed women you ever met.
My dad said that once so it touched me.
I still love you but im glad we're still friends.
My sexy cowboy and true friend!
I still am amazed and still wonder was I dreaming but it was not an erotic encounter. Just a friend.... and I needed...
For coming thru for me last night.
I needed help and you came to my rescue.
I guess we're just friends now and ill take that.
I called you and needed help and you didn't hesitate to come thru.
It was great to see you.
You said I was one of the strongest willed women you ever met.
My dad said that once so it touched me.
I still love you but im glad we're still friends.
My sexy cowboy and true friend!
I still am amazed and still wonder was I dreaming but it was not an erotic encounter. Just a friend.... and I needed...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#heroic
151 reads
4 Comments
LongTubiFree
Poem Published
19th Dec 2023 1:57am
19th Dec 2023 1:57am
Collapsing
Verse 1
I worry for you, you being my brother
unable to breathe, the world crushing you
making it hard to speak the words you need to say
I just hope and pray,
you find yourself, somewhere with a breeze
to finally at last feel at ease.
Chorus
The world is never going to be the way you need
perfect isn't a thing we can feed
collapsing into yourself, like you always have,
smile and making friends,
but always feeling your knees bend
as you forget to stand tall
waiting on someone to call
...
I worry for you, you being my brother
unable to breathe, the world crushing you
making it hard to speak the words you need to say
I just hope and pray,
you find yourself, somewhere with a breeze
to finally at last feel at ease.
Chorus
The world is never going to be the way you need
perfect isn't a thing we can feed
collapsing into yourself, like you always have,
smile and making friends,
but always feeling your knees bend
as you forget to stand tall
waiting on someone to call
...
#BestFriend
#family
#friendship
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0 Comments
PurplePandas
Poem Published
13th Dec 2023 4:31am
13th Dec 2023 4:31am
Broken Best Friends
I still have the towels when we dyed our hair.
It's been so long, but the stains are still there.
I normally succeed in not thinking about you.
The towel reminded me of what we would do.
Dying our hair when something went wrong.
Talking that would last all night long.
Laughing until we cried at the dumbest jokes.
Crying so hard we'd swear we'd have a stroke.
Answering the phone when no one else would.
Doing anything and everything because we could.
We were grown and free.
Back when it was a we.
It's something we...
It's been so long, but the stains are still there.
I normally succeed in not thinking about you.
The towel reminded me of what we would do.
Dying our hair when something went wrong.
Talking that would last all night long.
Laughing until we cried at the dumbest jokes.
Crying so hard we'd swear we'd have a stroke.
Answering the phone when no one else would.
Doing anything and everything because we could.
We were grown and free.
Back when it was a we.
It's something we...
#BestFriend
#friendship
75 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
30th Nov 2023 3:56am
30th Nov 2023 3:56am
Her Best Friend... The Artist
Catherine was standing in
the middle of her best
friend Gwen's studio
nude
and
with
Gwen doing a new
statue of Catherine
before Todd walked in that room.
the middle of her best
friend Gwen's studio
nude
and
with
Gwen doing a new
statue of Catherine
before Todd walked in that room.
#BestFriend
#fiction
#lover
#art
#sensual
109 reads
0 Comments
SeaCat
Poem Published
10th Nov 2023 9:44am
10th Nov 2023 9:44am
Matters of Attraction
My beloved showed me beauty, the strong
nuclear force, binding quarks —
and its marvellous spin-off, uniting bodies.
Spanning atoms or stars, mysterious
glue, exchange of tangling tokens,
trinkets, touches, words —
body-breathed, fingertip written,
tracing undulating contours.
Following spacetime dimples, planets blindly
orbit their star.
Charmed, we lie, still,
eye to eye, in a darkened room, and worlds
fall away. The cosmos shrinks
wrapping us.
nuclear force, binding quarks —
and its marvellous spin-off, uniting bodies.
Spanning atoms or stars, mysterious
glue, exchange of tangling tokens,
trinkets, touches, words —
body-breathed, fingertip written,
tracing undulating contours.
Following spacetime dimples, planets blindly
orbit their star.
Charmed, we lie, still,
eye to eye, in a darkened room, and worlds
fall away. The cosmos shrinks
wrapping us.
#BestFriend
#relationships
#LongDistanceRelationship #FirstLove
#LongDistanceRelationship #FirstLove
153 reads
2 Comments
Lss
Poem Published
26th Oct 2023 2:31am
26th Oct 2023 2:31am
The Sun (Reprised)
You are not the sun.
I cower and hide from the sun,
Not from you, never from you.
You are not the moon.
The moon is miles away and
you are holding me carefully in your hands.
You are not darkness.
I see you, I know you,
Nothing is mysterious about you.
You are not the light.
Not pure, Not clean and unfiltered,
You have made mistakes and your hands have hurt.
I look at you like you are the sun and the moon,
Like you are here to save me.
I fall, you bandage my cuts and I look at you like
You are outside...
I cower and hide from the sun,
Not from you, never from you.
You are not the moon.
The moon is miles away and
you are holding me carefully in your hands.
You are not darkness.
I see you, I know you,
Nothing is mysterious about you.
You are not the light.
Not pure, Not clean and unfiltered,
You have made mistakes and your hands have hurt.
I look at you like you are the sun and the moon,
Like you are here to save me.
I fall, you bandage my cuts and I look at you like
You are outside...
#love
#BestFriend
#friendship
126 reads
1 Comment
Lss
Poem Published
25th Oct 2023 1:39am
25th Oct 2023 1:39am
The Sun
I fall, you bandage my cuts and I look at you
Like you are outside of yourself, your
Presence floating in the wind.
I am looking at you and you are not the sun,
I cower and hide from the sun,
Not from you, never from you.
You are not the moon, the moon is miles away
And you are holding me carefully in your hands.
You are not darkness, I see you,
I know you, nothing is mysterious about you.
You are not the light, not pure,
Not clean and unfiltered,
You have made mistakes and your hands have hurt.
I look at...
Like you are outside of yourself, your
Presence floating in the wind.
I am looking at you and you are not the sun,
I cower and hide from the sun,
Not from you, never from you.
You are not the moon, the moon is miles away
And you are holding me carefully in your hands.
You are not darkness, I see you,
I know you, nothing is mysterious about you.
You are not the light, not pure,
Not clean and unfiltered,
You have made mistakes and your hands have hurt.
I look at...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#humankind
101 reads
2 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems for and About Best Friends Seeking Honest Critique
