Poems for and About Best Friends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about best friends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Pimp2ThaFuture04
Poem Published
30th Jun 2020 1:58pm
30th Jun 2020 1:58pm
Just Friends
It's been a long time since
I have seen your pretty face
We don't talk or see each other
As often as we use to
Because someone else has filled
That space
Where I use to be and by
Me not being there, just proves that
Life ain't fair
I've never told you how I felt
So that's my fault
You have no idea, you have no clue
Of how much I think about you
When I close my eyes I picture
Us together all the time
I must stay strong and have discipline
It's hard to be around you knowing...
I have seen your pretty face
We don't talk or see each other
As often as we use to
Because someone else has filled
That space
Where I use to be and by
Me not being there, just proves that
Life ain't fair
I've never told you how I felt
So that's my fault
You have no idea, you have no clue
Of how much I think about you
When I close my eyes I picture
Us together all the time
I must stay strong and have discipline
It's hard to be around you knowing...
#BestFriend
#heartbroken
#FallingInLove #emotions
#FallingInLove #emotions
93 reads
16 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
28th Jun 2020 5:17pm
28th Jun 2020 5:17pm
WHEN WAS THE LAST TIME
When was the last time we were together by the sea shores feeling, the cool water rush up against our skin as we embrace the moment of the silence, and the deepness within the beauty of listening to the music of the ocean breeze. When was the last time we were together, as we walk across the beach leaving our footprints in the sand, as we feel the warmth of the sun slowly begin to warm the depth of our heart and soul. When was the last time we were together as one, as you continue to show me your deepest level of emotions and feelings with unconditional love. For I remember it was at the...
#BestFriend
#relationships
#friendship
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
56 reads
10 Comments
Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
25th Jun 2020 5:21pm
25th Jun 2020 5:21pm
The Abandon Bandage
enemies will cut
friends watch you bleed
besties throw the bandage before they leave
friends watch you bleed
besties throw the bandage before they leave
#sadness
#BestFriend
#friendship #TruthOfLife
#friendship #TruthOfLife
27 reads
2 Comments
JohnnyBlaze
Poem Published
7th Jun 2020 1:00pm
7th Jun 2020 1:00pm
Universe House X
Sitting on my ass, enjoying
coffee in morning's quietude
I'm having a thought—
sudden — unlike most any
Epiphany! Not so much
an adrenaline shot to the heart;
more so an epi pen in the fanny
The Universe reads our poetry
fleshing in roughly drafted verse
with its process of association
what we are wanting
what we believe in;
we only have to spell it out
in so many words
allowing this attentive audience ...
coffee in morning's quietude
I'm having a thought—
sudden — unlike most any
Epiphany! Not so much
an adrenaline shot to the heart;
more so an epi pen in the fanny
The Universe reads our poetry
fleshing in roughly drafted verse
with its process of association
what we are wanting
what we believe in;
we only have to spell it out
in so many words
allowing this attentive audience ...
#love
#BestFriend
#home
#universe
#spiritual
114 reads
14 Comments
Stoney223
Poem Published
1st Jun 2020 7:25pm
1st Jun 2020 7:25pm
HOW CAN YOU MISS
Let us unshackle the true depth of your subconsciousness of your mind eyes, as we silently dig deep into the awakening thoughts buried deep down inside your mind. For I want to explore the true depth of your mind of those things, you try to hide from preying eyes for how can you miss someone who isn't yours to miss. When they belong to another that they won't leave for you no matter how much you ask them, for how can you dream about someone who isn't mine to have in heart and soul and mind, yet be dreaming about them holding you so forever tight. Yet how can you love someone who isn't yours...
#BestFriend
#marriage
#friendship
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
104 reads
10 Comments
Jermainesplain
Poem Published
25th May 2020 5:34pm
25th May 2020 5:34pm
Jermaine the Joker
One of my favorite practical jokes
Was replacing people’s drugs with sugar
Or coffee grounds
Or flour
Or whatever I could find that looked like their drug of choice
Typically coke or heroin
Until a dear friend passed away
After one of my practical jokes went sideways
I hadn’t replaced enough of his heroin
With bleach
To save his life
Drugs are no laughing matter
Was replacing people’s drugs with sugar
Or coffee grounds
Or flour
Or whatever I could find that looked like their drug of choice
Typically coke or heroin
Until a dear friend passed away
After one of my practical jokes went sideways
I hadn’t replaced enough of his heroin
With bleach
To save his life
Drugs are no laughing matter
#BestFriend
#friendship
#support
63 reads
0 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
25th May 2020 6:26am
25th May 2020 6:26am
Kissing the Devil
it's like you're kissing someone else"
That knife twisted in my stomach
As my heart rolled to the floor.
I held him weakly in my hands
Aching to give myself away
Wholly as before.
But I left pieces of me on a dirt road
In the arms of my best friend.
A moment immortalized yet fleeting fast.
God himself would have to strike me down
If I ever found my way back to him.
Because the thin veil between hell and heaven right now
Is too much to bear.
That knife twisted in my stomach
As my heart rolled to the floor.
I held him weakly in my hands
Aching to give myself away
Wholly as before.
But I left pieces of me on a dirt road
In the arms of my best friend.
A moment immortalized yet fleeting fast.
God himself would have to strike me down
If I ever found my way back to him.
Because the thin veil between hell and heaven right now
Is too much to bear.
#love
#BestFriend
#devil
#lover
#ForbiddenLove
91 reads
2 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
25th May 2020 4:44am
25th May 2020 4:44am
Please
If you only knew the depth of my need
And the sheer pain of what cannot be.
I crave the midnight air on my face
And the rush of pure joy in my veins.
My lips burn for the coolness of you
That one kiss that took away my breath.
I want more, love.
Always more.
And the sheer pain of what cannot be.
I crave the midnight air on my face
And the rush of pure joy in my veins.
My lips burn for the coolness of you
That one kiss that took away my breath.
I want more, love.
Always more.
#BestFriend
#sex
#friendship
#lover
#ForbiddenLove
196 reads
2 Comments
Chris_Pleasures
Poem Published
24th May 2020 6:50pm
24th May 2020 6:50pm
Conflicted
A feeling for whom
Carrying these desires for two.
No option to really choose
My heart is full of blue.
Around her a smile blooms
The other is just as cool
What do I do ?
Here I am with J*** and,
In her eyes I’m just the best man
But then there’s my friend,
For her I want to be the best man.
Carrying these desires for two.
No option to really choose
My heart is full of blue.
Around her a smile blooms
The other is just as cool
What do I do ?
Here I am with J*** and,
In her eyes I’m just the best man
But then there’s my friend,
For her I want to be the best man.
#anxiety
#love
#BestFriend
#relationships
#FeelingLost
47 reads
3 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
22nd May 2020 4:11pm
22nd May 2020 4:11pm
Melt Me
You bring me to my knees with words alone
In your presence I melt into your hands
Your lips taste like ambrosia and sunsets
A burning love searing through my veins
We're drifting around back roads searching for each other
Silent screams in the night of your name
My body is here but my heart is with you
Aching for just one more taste
In your presence I melt into your hands
Your lips taste like ambrosia and sunsets
A burning love searing through my veins
We're drifting around back roads searching for each other
Silent screams in the night of your name
My body is here but my heart is with you
Aching for just one more taste
#love
#BestFriend
#countryside
#UnrequitedLove
#ForbiddenLove
123 reads
1 Comment
kathyrivers
Kathy Rivers
Kathy Rivers
Poem Published
19th May 2020 10:16pm
19th May 2020 10:16pm
my speech
People of this earth, I’d like to thank you for giving me a chance by listening to this speech. If you noticed how I didn’t start out with the classic “ladies and gentleman” introduction then you should know I have my reasons for doing so. My first reason is that I don’t believe that phrase works anymore, there are too many new categories for that to be sufficient. My second reason? Well... it’s because I’m just weird like that!! (pause for laughter) Today, there are so many new categories of people… if you can give me a second, I’d like to list them all. Okay, here they are: Cisgender,...
#anger
#BestFriend
#LGBT #bisexual
#LGBT #bisexual
54 reads
0 Comments
Lazy_Dead
.Julia.
.Julia.
Poem Published
19th May 2020 1:15am
19th May 2020 1:15am
The Drive
There he was with his left hand on the steering wheel and his right hand intertwined with her delicate fingers, doing his best to keep his gaze on the open road in front of him. But it was hard to focus on the road ahead when his entire world was to his right, sitting shot gun, bouncing along to the music and playfully capturing his attention.
There was something magical about this dynamic between them. There was this magnetic pull that neither one of them understood or could explain, but neither of them wanted to resist. Somehow, no matter what was happening in their little world...
There was something magical about this dynamic between them. There was this magnetic pull that neither one of them understood or could explain, but neither of them wanted to resist. Somehow, no matter what was happening in their little world...
#love
#BestFriend
#memories
#travel
#nostalgia
109 reads
14 Comments
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