Poems for and About Best Friends Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems for and about best friends seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
S-m-sawyer
Poem Published
17th Aug 2022 00:53am
17th Aug 2022 00:53am
People are like books
People are like books,
There are many Chapters
You can flick through
Make you're own judgement
Create a point of veiw
We're strangers in the early stages
Many stories
Lay among the pages
Shaping us...
Life.. love.. loss...
We can all make assumptions
Think we know somebody
Things are not always black and white
Like the words we sometimes struggle to find
It takes time, trust
We need to read between the lines
Every chapter,, from cover to cover
Form a connection
Discover
Because...
There are many Chapters
You can flick through
Make you're own judgement
Create a point of veiw
We're strangers in the early stages
Many stories
Lay among the pages
Shaping us...
Life.. love.. loss...
We can all make assumptions
Think we know somebody
Things are not always black and white
Like the words we sometimes struggle to find
It takes time, trust
We need to read between the lines
Every chapter,, from cover to cover
Form a connection
Discover
Because...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#books
#LifeAsAWriter
#healing
49 reads
14 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
5th Aug 2022 9:46am
5th Aug 2022 9:46am
My whisky used to wear a trilby
Ashes, of what were his life
more than just a faithful true companion
I keep him in an urn of white
to my furry friend, I post this anthem
The greeting of his force 10 purr
at feeding time he would clean out the tin
for he was a cat-food raconteur
finish it off with a Cheshire catgrin
My whisky's spirit, it lingers still
his personal pride, would be my guide
to [u]clean up well[u]when lethargy was top of my bill
so sleek of coat and worn with pride
Out of the blue he adopted me
threw in his hat, and sensed my...
more than just a faithful true companion
I keep him in an urn of white
to my furry friend, I post this anthem
The greeting of his force 10 purr
at feeding time he would clean out the tin
for he was a cat-food raconteur
finish it off with a Cheshire catgrin
My whisky's spirit, it lingers still
his personal pride, would be my guide
to [u]clean up well[u]when lethargy was top of my bill
so sleek of coat and worn with pride
Out of the blue he adopted me
threw in his hat, and sensed my...
#BestFriend
41 reads
0 Comments
RagingFlames
Poem Published
13th May 2022 8:58pm
13th May 2022 8:58pm
Almost 15 years… gone
When it happened
I wasn’t sure what to do?
I laughed it off
Then screamed on day two.
In my mind
It wasn’t that bad
But just a few words
Made them so fucking mad.
I stayed up for days
Crying and screaming
I hoped and prayed
That it wasn’t real and I was just dreaming
“We can still fix this”
“We can still fix this”
I was frantic
Trying not to forget this
*blocked*
I was so scared
So afraid
Unprepared
And in so much pain
Months later
Still I try
Call...
I wasn’t sure what to do?
I laughed it off
Then screamed on day two.
In my mind
It wasn’t that bad
But just a few words
Made them so fucking mad.
I stayed up for days
Crying and screaming
I hoped and prayed
That it wasn’t real and I was just dreaming
“We can still fix this”
“We can still fix this”
I was frantic
Trying not to forget this
*blocked*
I was so scared
So afraid
Unprepared
And in so much pain
Months later
Still I try
Call...
#sadness
#depression
#BestFriend
#relationships
#hurt
136 reads
2 Comments
ansh_chauhan
Ansh Chauhan
Ansh Chauhan
Poem Published
1st May 2022 10:39am
1st May 2022 10:39am
Me and my love
My first friendship with a beautiful lady
My first friendship,
My first confession,
My first love,
My first support.
My first friendship with a beautiful lady,
My first awkward message to her ,
My first time talking to a lady over WhatsApp,
My first time love i don't want to loose.
My first friendship with a beautiful lady,
My first friend who is best chef ,
My first friend with i can share my everything,
My first friend i proposed to be my love.
My first friendship with a beautiful lady,
My first...
My first friendship,
My first confession,
My first love,
My first support.
My first friendship with a beautiful lady,
My first awkward message to her ,
My first time talking to a lady over WhatsApp,
My first time love i don't want to loose.
My first friendship with a beautiful lady,
My first friend who is best chef ,
My first friend with i can share my everything,
My first friend i proposed to be my love.
My first friendship with a beautiful lady,
My first...
#BestFriend
#relationships
#LongDistanceRelationship
#FirstLove
#crush
203 reads
0 Comments
Fishmander
Poem Published
28th Apr 2022 8:48am
28th Apr 2022 8:48am
Someone
I can feel you in the air,
I can feel you at my door
Like the cool touch of rain.
I could hide you in a rhyme,
I could keep you in the dark
Of storms that have passed on
If I chose to be that someone.
I'm enchanted by your world
And I wield it like a sword
Cleaved by metaphors malign.
I could leave you with the mess,
I could drink you like a wine
And put this all to rest
Or rather put me to rest.
I'm running out of space,
Been running and misguided
On the roads we can't escape.
I could blame you...
I can feel you at my door
Like the cool touch of rain.
I could hide you in a rhyme,
I could keep you in the dark
Of storms that have passed on
If I chose to be that someone.
I'm enchanted by your world
And I wield it like a sword
Cleaved by metaphors malign.
I could leave you with the mess,
I could drink you like a wine
And put this all to rest
Or rather put me to rest.
I'm running out of space,
Been running and misguided
On the roads we can't escape.
I could blame you...
#love
#dark
#BestFriend
138 reads
0 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
26th Feb 2022 4:59pm
26th Feb 2022 4:59pm
Secrets
A secret is knowledge which only one person knows.
You tell your best friend a secret in confidence.
And your best friend tells his or her best friends about it.
They also tell their best friends the information.
And everybody’s best friends will know it sooner or later.
If you reveal a secret to someone, it’s no longer a secret.
So you should keep your personal secrets to yourself.
You tell your best friend a secret in confidence.
And your best friend tells his or her best friends about it.
They also tell their best friends the information.
And everybody’s best friends will know it sooner or later.
If you reveal a secret to someone, it’s no longer a secret.
So you should keep your personal secrets to yourself.
#BestFriend
#secrets
#inspirational #philosophical
#inspirational #philosophical
168 reads
2 Comments
Wired6
Poem Published
8th Feb 2022 11:01am
8th Feb 2022 11:01am
Where Are The Women?
2 everyone,appeared a charming man.
So Simpatico,
A highly simpatico figure of a man.
Very hue--man.
That he is.
A very hue- man,man of man.
He has many testestorone driven hue-- man friends.
Salt-of-the-earth,kindda men.
Support them,2 the bitter end.
He's a champion,of champion man friend.
Men!
Men!
Men!
Men!
Where are the women amongst his friends?
©Wired6. 21/1/2022
So Simpatico,
A highly simpatico figure of a man.
Very hue--man.
That he is.
A very hue- man,man of man.
He has many testestorone driven hue-- man friends.
Salt-of-the-earth,kindda men.
Support them,2 the bitter end.
He's a champion,of champion man friend.
Men!
Men!
Men!
Men!
Where are the women amongst his friends?
©Wired6. 21/1/2022
#BestFriend
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Stoney223
Poem Published
1st Jan 2022 10:27pm
1st Jan 2022 10:27pm
AS THE TIDES TURN
As the tides turn into a new world order for yesterday I was healthy and strong, yet that has changed as my body has been attack by different stages of cancer. For now I no longer will have to just work through the process of learning the new, but how much I can improve on the quality of my own life itself as I am going through these trying times. For example as I continue to work with my cancer treatments, as there has been a few ups and downs I have my good days and my bad days. Yet I refuse to lost hope that one day I will get better for my life, for there is no cure for stage 4 cancer...
#strength
#courage
#BestFriend
#friendship
#patience
277 reads
2 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
1st Jan 2022 9:14am
1st Jan 2022 9:14am
Fragile Like a Bomb
You're like the tinkling
Of a fairy voice,
Leaving bits of pixie dust
Scattered wherever you walk,
With a tinge of Alice in Wonderland
Mad Hatter delusions.
Glazed eyes
And doped up smiles
With cynical jokes
To cover the melancholy
That consumes you
When you swallow
The doc's endless prescriptions.
"I'm alive, I'm alive!"
Your gleeful presence
Seems to declare.
Somewhere hidden
In the thoughtful lyrics
On your playlist
And in the blank space
Of your dissociation, ...
Of a fairy voice,
Leaving bits of pixie dust
Scattered wherever you walk,
With a tinge of Alice in Wonderland
Mad Hatter delusions.
Glazed eyes
And doped up smiles
With cynical jokes
To cover the melancholy
That consumes you
When you swallow
The doc's endless prescriptions.
"I'm alive, I'm alive!"
Your gleeful presence
Seems to declare.
Somewhere hidden
In the thoughtful lyrics
On your playlist
And in the blank space
Of your dissociation, ...
#love
#BestFriend
#friendship
#drugs
#MentalHealth
201 reads
2 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
1st Jan 2022 1:06am
1st Jan 2022 1:06am
Black Ink Promises
Your presence sometimes becomes
Something of a distant thought,
A long gone childhood friend
Lost to the years of our grown up distress,
But no, how could I ever forget?
Springing up most haphazardly,
We observe one other with shaking heads,
Only arriving when a storm is brewing
Or just beginning to settle into dust...
Tell me, is it this black ink promise that we trust?
Engraved in our skin forever,
These words are a stubborn tie
Bonding us even in silence;
I fear that you no longer see me,
As if I am...
Something of a distant thought,
A long gone childhood friend
Lost to the years of our grown up distress,
But no, how could I ever forget?
Springing up most haphazardly,
We observe one other with shaking heads,
Only arriving when a storm is brewing
Or just beginning to settle into dust...
Tell me, is it this black ink promise that we trust?
Engraved in our skin forever,
These words are a stubborn tie
Bonding us even in silence;
I fear that you no longer see me,
As if I am...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#memories
#addiction
#support
234 reads
1 Comment
Ahavati
Poem Published
26th Dec 2021 00:04am
26th Dec 2021 00:04am
Annually
I wonder
if galactic races
ponder the meaning
of multicolored lights
and "Peace on Earth
Goodwill to men"
annually
vs daily
How the majority
of the planet
lays down its arms
to string strands
from tree & rooftop
to outlet power,
but not for understanding
or Love
Why consumers
spend and pretend
regret won't swallow
the budget whole
in the year to come
All because we fear
the unknown: ...
if galactic races
ponder the meaning
of multicolored lights
and "Peace on Earth
Goodwill to men"
annually
vs daily
How the majority
of the planet
lays down its arms
to string strands
from tree & rooftop
to outlet power,
but not for understanding
or Love
Why consumers
spend and pretend
regret won't swallow
the budget whole
in the year to come
All because we fear
the unknown: ...
#love
#BestFriend
#universe
#Christmas
#aliens
779 reads
30 Comments
KittyFromHell
Poem Published
22nd Dec 2021 7:49am
22nd Dec 2021 7:49am
My Day One
You knew me before all the damage was done.
Plucked from the crowd and placed together,
Back then it was random chance and innocent love.
Throughout the years, fate revealed a part of it's hand,
As paths split and rebelled yet remained somehow intertwined.
I'm standing here broken and afraid of even you,
You who has known me all these years.
You scolded me when I wasted my talents
Chasing temporary escapes
Until your voice grew tired
And my head was too far gone.
Now no one fusses or calls my bluff,
Just overly nice fronts that...
Plucked from the crowd and placed together,
Back then it was random chance and innocent love.
Throughout the years, fate revealed a part of it's hand,
As paths split and rebelled yet remained somehow intertwined.
I'm standing here broken and afraid of even you,
You who has known me all these years.
You scolded me when I wasted my talents
Chasing temporary escapes
Until your voice grew tired
And my head was too far gone.
Now no one fusses or calls my bluff,
Just overly nice fronts that...
#love
#depression
#BestFriend
#friendship
#LifeStruggles
358 reads
2 Comments
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