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Alone
Joyous laughter
of a reveling crowd
cacophony of sounds
from sources of hundreds
on city sidewalks
there I heard a feather fall
I heard the thread
sewn into a ripped
old garment
Im alone in my world
Of silence
When I close my eyes
The raging silence screams
In the darkness
Without sights
I stretch my hands
Hold it, and lead me
across the busy road,
But touch me not
with pity
I may be blind
And so alone
But I'm never lonely
I hear sounds of angels
In kind voices
the touch of divinity
from loving hands.
of a reveling crowd
cacophony of sounds
from sources of hundreds
on city sidewalks
there I heard a feather fall
I heard the thread
sewn into a ripped
old garment
Im alone in my world
Of silence
When I close my eyes
The raging silence screams
In the darkness
Without sights
I stretch my hands
Hold it, and lead me
across the busy road,
But touch me not
with pity
I may be blind
And so alone
But I'm never lonely
I hear sounds of angels
In kind voices
the touch of divinity
from loving hands.
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Re: Alone
18th Mar 2013 3:13pm
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Re: Alone
18th Mar 2013 4:23pm
https://foursquare.com/v/robert-francis-bridge/4e18b76ba8097d08b23a30e5
The sign on this bridge says, "Alone, but never lonely."
The sign on this bridge says, "Alone, but never lonely."
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Re: Alone
18th Mar 2013 5:11pm
Beautifully written, reminded me of my uncle, he had super senses, a wonderful man ......Thank you...Cassie
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19th Mar 2013 00:08am
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18th Mar 2013 7:17pm
Oh Grace I so understand the feelings in this piece. Thanks for sharing it.
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19th Mar 2013 00:09am
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Anonymous
18th Mar 2013 7:31pm
Never alone but lonely...I so understand Grace.
Strider :)
Strider :)
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19th Mar 2013 00:10am
Re: Alone
"But touch me not with pity
I may blind
And so alone
But I'm never lonely"
I love these lines...nice write. Its so positive and motivating.
I may blind
And so alone
But I'm never lonely"
I love these lines...nice write. Its so positive and motivating.
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Re: Alone
19th Mar 2013 11:46am
"But touch me not with pity
I may blind
And so alone
But I'm never lonely"
I have a peculiar interest in these lines...nice write. Its so positive and motivating.
I may blind
And so alone
But I'm never lonely"
I have a peculiar interest in these lines...nice write. Its so positive and motivating.
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19th Mar 2013 1:50pm
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19th Mar 2013 9:14pm
This was so beautiful Grace,
the senses are just the tools
that last stanza is where those tools led us
This was an excellent write my friend
Much love
G
the senses are just the tools
that last stanza is where those tools led us
This was an excellent write my friend
Much love
G
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7th Apr 2013 8:39am
im happy your never lonely...all you need is yourself..beautiful poem
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13th Nov 2015 3:25am
My pet chinchilla died the other day. This reminded me of him, may you forever rest in piece, Arnie.
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