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The Gangbang Girl
School had just got out and I’d had a shitty day
My boyfriend was at work and I wanted to go play
First on the agenda was to score some killer coke
Then I’d find some cock for my juicy cunt to stroke
I called up my dealer who’s supply had run bone dry
I thought up an idea, I was determined to get high
I called up my friend Suzie, at the club, she tended bar
She gave me her hookup and I climbed into my car
Cruising down the freeway to South Central L.A.
Found the house off Normandie where Suzie’s dealers stay
They were chillin’ on the porch, it was straight out of a movie
I told them who I was, they’d received a call from Suzie
There were five of them and we went into the house
They thought I was a cop so I unbuttoned my blouse
They wanted to be sure so they told me to strip down
I asked them for a line as my panties hit the ground
I sniffed the hearty line, it was pretty good cocaine
It made my pussy wet and I had fucking on my brain
The leader offered coke for cunt in lieu of money
An eight ball for each dick, I’d fuck them like a bunny
They yanked out their black dicks, thick and hanging low
I took one in my mouth and my twat began to flow
The other four stroked their meat, getting hard for me
All of them were giant and I expected ecstasy
One lied on his back, with ten inches standing tall
I slid my pussy onto him, all the way down to his balls
I was bouncing like a cowgirl as he latched onto my breasts
I was pushed down from behind, our bodies chest to chest
I felt spit dripping down my crack, then an eight inch stick
He eased his rocket into me, I was getting double dicked
They were paying me in blow for what I would have done for free
They were fucking me so hard that I could barely see
I felt another giant cock pressed against my lips
I opened wide for it while still gyrating my hips
Ten more inches fucking me, deep down my warm throat
While my pussy and my ass were rocking like a boat
I grabbed ten inches in my left hand, twelve more in my right
I stroked those giant cocks with all my lustful might
Ana’s ‘50 Shades of Grey’ couldn’t hang with me
I had 50 inches of black cock and never felt so free
They continued trading holes and hands
Giving more hot cock than I could stand
Finally they let me free and I lied down on the bed
Surrounded by five huge cocks aiming at my head
Hot cum began to fly all around the place
They soaked me in hot jizz, covering my face
I moaned in ecstasy with my left hand on my tits
While my right hand gave my aching clit orgasmic fits
I went to the bathroom and cleaned up the hot mess
I was handed twenty grams of coke while getting dressed
They fucked me so hard that I ‘crip walked’ out the door
I drove back to East Hollywood, gangbanged to the core!
My boyfriend was at work and I wanted to go play
First on the agenda was to score some killer coke
Then I’d find some cock for my juicy cunt to stroke
I called up my dealer who’s supply had run bone dry
I thought up an idea, I was determined to get high
I called up my friend Suzie, at the club, she tended bar
She gave me her hookup and I climbed into my car
Cruising down the freeway to South Central L.A.
Found the house off Normandie where Suzie’s dealers stay
They were chillin’ on the porch, it was straight out of a movie
I told them who I was, they’d received a call from Suzie
There were five of them and we went into the house
They thought I was a cop so I unbuttoned my blouse
They wanted to be sure so they told me to strip down
I asked them for a line as my panties hit the ground
I sniffed the hearty line, it was pretty good cocaine
It made my pussy wet and I had fucking on my brain
The leader offered coke for cunt in lieu of money
An eight ball for each dick, I’d fuck them like a bunny
They yanked out their black dicks, thick and hanging low
I took one in my mouth and my twat began to flow
The other four stroked their meat, getting hard for me
All of them were giant and I expected ecstasy
One lied on his back, with ten inches standing tall
I slid my pussy onto him, all the way down to his balls
I was bouncing like a cowgirl as he latched onto my breasts
I was pushed down from behind, our bodies chest to chest
I felt spit dripping down my crack, then an eight inch stick
He eased his rocket into me, I was getting double dicked
They were paying me in blow for what I would have done for free
They were fucking me so hard that I could barely see
I felt another giant cock pressed against my lips
I opened wide for it while still gyrating my hips
Ten more inches fucking me, deep down my warm throat
While my pussy and my ass were rocking like a boat
I grabbed ten inches in my left hand, twelve more in my right
I stroked those giant cocks with all my lustful might
Ana’s ‘50 Shades of Grey’ couldn’t hang with me
I had 50 inches of black cock and never felt so free
They continued trading holes and hands
Giving more hot cock than I could stand
Finally they let me free and I lied down on the bed
Surrounded by five huge cocks aiming at my head
Hot cum began to fly all around the place
They soaked me in hot jizz, covering my face
I moaned in ecstasy with my left hand on my tits
While my right hand gave my aching clit orgasmic fits
I went to the bathroom and cleaned up the hot mess
I was handed twenty grams of coke while getting dressed
They fucked me so hard that I ‘crip walked’ out the door
I drove back to East Hollywood, gangbanged to the core!
Written by
nymphomaniac
(Holly)
Published 24th Feb 2013
| Edited 26th Feb 2013
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Re: The Gangbang Girl
24th Feb 2013 9:28pm
Love it. This was so fucking real. From start to finish you had me. Great ink.
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26th Feb 2013 9:29am
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24th Feb 2013 11:29pm
This was a part of living in Los Angeles I must have missed! (too busy playing basketball and guitar I guess)
Full of flavor this write is!
Full of flavor this write is!
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re: Re: The Gangbang Girl
26th Feb 2013 9:35am
Oh, Jazz, what a shame. You were driving to the wrong "hole." You should have played with this team of five. There's always room for a "sixth man." lol
Thank you for your comment.
Holly
Thank you for your comment.
Holly
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4th Mar 2013 3:46pm
Guess that would be better then living in Florida and dealing with a sink hole!
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25th Feb 2013 5:16pm
Loved it raw and erotic no holds barred and loved the images as I was reading.
A great write.
A great write.
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26th Feb 2013 9:38am
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Anonymous
25th Feb 2013 6:51pm
Holly,
You return HOT as ever! With not one, but five hot pokers in the fire ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
You return HOT as ever! With not one, but five hot pokers in the fire ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
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26th Feb 2013 9:43am
Re: The Gangbang Girl
26th Feb 2013 00:44am
Damn!!!! This was ultra erotic. Damned near pornographic. Dick is hard as hell right now.....got to go find the right friggin' stroke!!!
That is a high compliment Holly-wanna'-go-to-California. such a nasty, delicious write.
Much Aplomb!!!
That is a high compliment Holly-wanna'-go-to-California. such a nasty, delicious write.
Much Aplomb!!!
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re: Re: The Gangbang Girl
26th Feb 2013 9:51am
Hi Music Man! 'Near pornographic' means I missed the mark. Damn it! I better write something more nasty next time. Thank you, Music Man. It's good to see you again.
Holly
Holly
Re: The Gangbang Girl
26th Feb 2013 6:23am
Holly I can't help but think I'd absolutely love to hang out and party with you!
If I had a dick, I suppose I'd tell you how hard you make it when I read your poems!
Two things: 1.The word "hot" is used too many times too closely together for my taste. Maybe trade 1 or 2 for 'warm' or another word to describe the jizz?
2. I think it is supposed to be spelled "crip walk"
If I had a dick, I suppose I'd tell you how hard you make it when I read your poems!
Two things: 1.The word "hot" is used too many times too closely together for my taste. Maybe trade 1 or 2 for 'warm' or another word to describe the jizz?
2. I think it is supposed to be spelled "crip walk"
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26th Feb 2013 10:02am
Thank you, Mrs. Gemini. Good looking out, girl. I'll cool off some of those hots to warms when I get a chance. You're right, it is crip walk. They fucked me so hard that I can't even spell!
You can tell me how wet my poems make you. I get so wet when I write them which ultimately wreaks havoc on my keyboard. lol.
Holly
You can tell me how wet my poems make you. I get so wet when I write them which ultimately wreaks havoc on my keyboard. lol.
Holly
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2nd Mar 2013 9:22am
You are a very talanted poet miss. I read all your stuff and liked about every single one. Please keep the pen flowing.
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7th Mar 2013 4:43am
Loved it! So hot and sexy and could make anyone feel wet. Can't wait to read the rest of your work;p
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16th Jun 2013 6:22am
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31st May 2013 9:05am
Wow,that's hot and supersexy!!!!!What a pleasurable read,just one problem though,how to get my dick down after that?(Smile and grinn)
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re: Re: The Gangbang Girl
16th Jun 2013 6:25am
Just squeeze that hot cum out of that throbbing tube of man meat. Need some help? ;)
Holly
Holly
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16th Jun 2013 7:48pm
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18th Jun 2013 1:34am
All nymphs lay down and spread your legs for the reading of the cocaine girl's gangbang national anthem!!!!!!!!
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29th Jun 2013 6:52pm
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23rd Jun 2013 3:42am
what can say......Your a dirty little whore..
I fucking love it
regards daddycool
I fucking love it
regards daddycool
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29th Jun 2013 6:53pm
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23rd Jun 2013 8:46pm
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29th Jun 2013 6:54pm
Hi Winter. Thanks for stopping by with your moistness, my partner in filthy slut life. :)
Holly
Holly
Re: The Gangbang Girl
1st Jul 2013 2:54pm
Wow where the hell do women like u a thallus exist! lol
Shit that was like cock hardener for the cock lol
Aweso
Sly nasty n wet n delicious! lol
Shit that was like cock hardener for the cock lol
Aweso
Sly nasty n wet n delicious! lol
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24th Sep 2013 5:47pm
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24th Sep 2013 5:48pm
I haven't done a good job if it was only your mind that got an erection. :)
Holly
Holly
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24th Sep 2013 6:11pm
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28th Oct 2013 11:37pm
This was great, I was so into it, didn't want it to end. Part two? Great write Holly
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1st Nov 2013 5:34pm
There might be a part two featuring you! Look at you with your new hair style and gorgeous blue eyes. I'd do ya. Welcome back, Girl! You've been missed!
Holly
Holly
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2nd Nov 2013 3:29pm
Yeah, I'd do ya too, Thanks for the kind words and I have missed everyone!
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3rd Nov 2013 6:11pm
Perhaps we should collab on some hot girl on girl action. The boys of DU would love it. Then we'd attract our studs for The Gangbang Girl II, featuring Milky, Holly, and the DU gangbang boys! :)
Holly
Holly
Re: The Gangbang Girl
29th Oct 2013 11:11am
damn it u give me nasty dreams girl... nice write overall it is difficult to manage the rhyme flow with such high sensuality ..
i salute u for sharing ur wild fantasy with DUP.. write on ..
cyanide...
i salute u for sharing ur wild fantasy with DUP.. write on ..
cyanide...
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1st Nov 2013 5:35pm
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1st Nov 2013 5:24pm
Holly you got me wet with your sexy red hot gangbang experience.. fuck that was sizzling and you didn't miss a beat in the telling!!! peace Crim
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1st Nov 2013 5:36pm
Thank you, Crim. If I got you wet then I've done my job as an erotic poet. Thank you for your comment.
Holly
Holly
Re: The Gangbang Girl
10th Nov 2013 00:22am
DAMN sweets you had me from beginning to end!!
Great write and read !!
Loved it!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write and read !!
Loved it!!
Sir Lancelott
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30th Dec 2013 5:24pm
So vivid I could smell sex in the air
such rhythmic pulses charging sensations
such rhythmic pulses charging sensations
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4th Jan 2014 7:49pm
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20th Jan 2014 5:51pm
Yes! Yes! Yes! Oh yes! Right there! Don't stop! Mmmmm!
Old Soul, Mr M, Navy Tony, Jazz, and Sir Lance - I'd love to relive this experience with you five men of African roots. The gangbangers (pun intended) were fun and they gave it to me hard and rough but to be ravaged by five poets could be even more fulfilling. I love submitting to strong men but five strong men with a sensitive side that poets have would make me feel like a worshiped sex Goddess in addition to a slutty sex toy.
Holly
Old Soul, Mr M, Navy Tony, Jazz, and Sir Lance - I'd love to relive this experience with you five men of African roots. The gangbangers (pun intended) were fun and they gave it to me hard and rough but to be ravaged by five poets could be even more fulfilling. I love submitting to strong men but five strong men with a sensitive side that poets have would make me feel like a worshiped sex Goddess in addition to a slutty sex toy.
Holly
Re: The Gangbang Girl
1st Feb 2014 11:49pm
50 inches of Amazon
mandolin
I can well imagine
five to handle
by a single hot engine
I composed my poem
three in me -some
and two handsome
full of buckets of cum
my boy friend was taken
as ransom
then he had to face
mandolins some one's
couldn't help resist
seeing the fun
why did he have
now to cum
fucking beautiful
hottest poem
mandolin
I can well imagine
five to handle
by a single hot engine
I composed my poem
three in me -some
and two handsome
full of buckets of cum
my boy friend was taken
as ransom
then he had to face
mandolins some one's
couldn't help resist
seeing the fun
why did he have
now to cum
fucking beautiful
hottest poem
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Re: The Gangbang Girl
27th Aug 2017 4:04pm
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28th Aug 2017 9:45pm
you have been away since ages do tell us now of your escapades with so many pages i have held you in my poetic vaults hoping to see some hopping stories ur sexiness in poetry surpasses mine i am now a long since forgotten story show to all now your glory....
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Re: The Gangbang Girl
2nd Sep 2017 4:12pm
Thanks but I'm pretty much forgotten too. I'm considering a collab with Gemini but he's not ready yet. Thanks for your support. And this message was a lot more clear than the last one. Thanks for dropping most of the text speak. It unnerves me when I see writers being lazy. That's just me though. :)
Re: The Gangbang Girl
29th Jun 2014 6:40am
Fantastic job! Pleased to make your acquaintance. Your name drew me in, and the smell of your cunt will keep me in!
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27th Aug 2017 4:05pm
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Re: The Gangbang Girl
27th Aug 2017 4:06pm
Thanks. I'm no great writer but E.L. James is pitiful in my opinion so fuck her. lol
Re: The Gangbang Girl
21st Feb 2015 11:09am
If dylan was to write a gang bang song this would be it. Great narrative, the flow of words just gliding across smooth and easy, keep it coming
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Re: The Gangbang Girl
27th Aug 2017 4:13pm
Haha! Dylan would never write a gangbang song but if Fergie had written a lyrical version of this and performed it, that would have me dripping fucking wet!
Re. The Gangbang Girl
2nd Sep 2017 4:42pm
Holly
What a goodtime girl you are - good at fucking and fucking good at writing about it.
You inspire me.
I sat myself between his thighs
Looked him deeply in the eyes
Nourished by my poet's tongue
He arose like the sun
He was the bat, I the ball
He bounced me up and down my hall
We played all night and then we scored
I put my legs up in the air
Bound my ankles in my hair
Cooked his cock any where
Any way that he would do me.
He was the bat, I the ball
He bounced me up and down my hall
We played all night and then we scored.
Any time that he would do me.
What a goodtime girl you are - good at fucking and fucking good at writing about it.
You inspire me.
I sat myself between his thighs
Looked him deeply in the eyes
Nourished by my poet's tongue
He arose like the sun
He was the bat, I the ball
He bounced me up and down my hall
We played all night and then we scored
I put my legs up in the air
Bound my ankles in my hair
Cooked his cock any where
Any way that he would do me.
He was the bat, I the ball
He bounced me up and down my hall
We played all night and then we scored.
Any time that he would do me.
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8th Sep 2017 2:54pm
Thank you! I'm glad I inspired you and I love what you wrote from that inspiration!
Re. The Gangbang Girl
9th Sep 2017 00:12am
Your writing is sexy and enjoyable. You just made my favorite list . Keep up the good work , keep writing too . Lol
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