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Unfocused Omni-Directional Quickie #1
thoughts scatter
it`s not as if
they matter
every faun and flatter
rides motive ulterior
do we want love,
just to get off,
or access to a better cable plan?
I too
seek carnalita
to bring
just a bit of cheer
temporarily unshroud
painted corners
on cold concrete
austere
most of Us
horribly altered natives
peasant pissants
ultimately
dentured servants
our prescious bio-time
vacuumed
sucked out by commerce
it`s not as if
they matter
every faun and flatter
rides motive ulterior
do we want love,
just to get off,
or access to a better cable plan?
I too
seek carnalita
to bring
just a bit of cheer
temporarily unshroud
painted corners
on cold concrete
austere
most of Us
horribly altered natives
peasant pissants
ultimately
dentured servants
our prescious bio-time
vacuumed
sucked out by commerce
Published 22nd Feb 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Feb 2013 9:49pm
You have a style that is so unique.
You remind me of the poetry of EE. Cummings
who was known for his style of poetry.
You are on a similar vein...
Good work
Write on
Cheers
Kitty
You remind me of the poetry of EE. Cummings
who was known for his style of poetry.
You are on a similar vein...
Good work
Write on
Cheers
Kitty
22nd Feb 2013 10:05pm
your encouragement and stamps of approval
help keep me expressing........
thanks kitty
help keep me expressing........
thanks kitty
22nd Feb 2013 11:37pm
You are so incredible with a pen, drivel!
Your ink often leaves me speechless, in a beautiful way!
Poetic Love! Xoxo
Your ink often leaves me speechless, in a beautiful way!
Poetic Love! Xoxo
23rd Feb 2013 11:30am
thank you !
this one is so off-the-cuff ,
kinda thematically unstructured ---
Im surprised it was received well --
this one is so off-the-cuff ,
kinda thematically unstructured ---
Im surprised it was received well --
23rd Feb 2013 00:08am
23rd Feb 2013 11:28am
23rd Feb 2013 2:25pm
Damn Drivel you always make me think and it hurts me old head! Great write mate well penned! :-)
23rd Feb 2013 7:26pm
