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A comedian's hell
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when you’re all alone[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when you just don’t know[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they all despise you [/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they all get up and go to the loo[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they don’t laugh[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they would rather kill a calf[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they don’t get the joke[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they heckle[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they from Hyde to Jekel[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is his life[/font]
Is when you’re all alone[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when you just don’t know[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they all despise you [/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they all get up and go to the loo[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they don’t laugh[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they would rather kill a calf[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they don’t get the joke[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they heckle[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is when they from Hyde to Jekel[/font]
A comedian’s hell[/font]
Is his life[/font]
Published 25th Aug 2010
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26th Aug 2010 12:24pm
I personally think that you could have made it darker. Considering the "hell" part. Like the "Jekyll and Hyde" bit, that part is awesome. Other than that, it was a great read. Lol, thanks for posting. :)
26th Aug 2010 6:25pm
I agree but i had writers block for a while and nothing else came to mind
but thanks for the comment
