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Subjective Objectives
perhaps my interior
really is inferior
not getting any nearer
to goals implanted yesteryear
however,
these Objectives
are purely Subjective
accepted by those who recognize
previously instituted constructs of measure
It`s a course for which
we dont even Register
it`s a super-imposition
we are hopelessly entrenched in
by the time we can put two words together
particularly early
came awareness
of my "Outsider" status
it emerged when elders
still had control of my surface
even then, within
milieu given,
I had doubts
I could ever serve any purpose
stretches of time
showing my seemingly effective,
well adjusted systemic interaction
are merely evidence
I was temporarily distracted
by our establishment`s
time-proven material attractions
the emptiness of which
usually takes
a half-dozen decades
to dawn-upon a person
for me, that notion was built-in
from inception
yet
Fate scattered
frightening mitigating factors
and involuntary dramas
upon my Dharma,
unconciously destructive
ulterior motives
among my financial and spiritual benefactors,
and ill-equipt idiosyncracies
upon my character,
dis-engaged the ability
to recognize tactics within my grasp
and help navigate these personal matters
ergo my existential disaster
Published 13th Jan 2013
| Edited 14th Jan 2013
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14th Jan 2013 1:36am
14th Jan 2013 2:43am
14th Jan 2013 3:03am
Well it took me seven decades! Always was slow on the uptake!
Good write my friend.
Good write my friend.
14th Jan 2013 3:39am
14th Jan 2013 5:49am
"stretches of time
showing my seemingly effective,
well adjusted systemic interaction
are merely evidence
I was temporarily distracted
by our establishment`s
time-proven material attractions
the emptiness of which
usually takes
a half-dozen decades
to dawn-upon a person
for me, that notion was built-in
from inception"
That is awesome. Great poem.
If you have a chance, check mine out as well. Its called "The Conscience of Words"
showing my seemingly effective,
well adjusted systemic interaction
are merely evidence
I was temporarily distracted
by our establishment`s
time-proven material attractions
the emptiness of which
usually takes
a half-dozen decades
to dawn-upon a person
for me, that notion was built-in
from inception"
That is awesome. Great poem.
If you have a chance, check mine out as well. Its called "The Conscience of Words"
14th Jan 2013 11:40pm
Anonymous
14th Jan 2013 9:15am
Go with the flow drivel
strider
strider
14th Jan 2013 11:40pm
16th Jan 2013 00:56am
Standing on the outside gives you better perspective, within the circle you get nearer perspectives...Good one, D.
16th Jan 2013 00:57am
