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"Psycho"-Therapy ??
"Psycho"-
Gazing with glazed eyes,
I watch the valium visions
of endless ebony dragons kiss the molten sky--
feel the earth stretch, and yawn,underneath my feet.
Writhing within my skull,
I am tortured by the feasting
of the translucent, conqueror worm--
that will never slumber, that can never die.
Every night--all night--as through a violent storm,
I hear incessant, indistinct voices calling--
shouting out my name upon the wildly whimpering wind,
while the monsters and the demons destroy my guilty mind.
-Therapy ??
Please--expose your inner-self,and
Succumb to INTROSPECTION--
While being prepped for their DISSECTION--
Their closely scrutinized INSPECTION--
But....who will pay the price
of one soul p e e l e d,
and thinly sliced ???
"Psycho"-Therapy ??
Alone, I can escape,
in one unleashed, fragmented hour--
the hour in which the clear cup drowns
the memories it renews.
While tranquil, lithium lullabies bring
nightmares filled with thrones and silver crowns
in pulsating, poisoned patterns
of brilliant whirling hues.
"Psycho"-
All the iridescence, opalescence--
melding into incandescence--
of the swirling ceiling lights
in this pristine, padded prison
that protects me from myself.
-Therapy ??
In blissful unawareness, your memory bathes
my serrated, soul in gladness,
until conciousness means cruelty, with pain...
I awaken to the screaming, with infernal
flaying flames of madness
roaring, raging unchecked through my brain.
Published 13th Jan 2013
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13th Jan 2013 4:13pm
13th Jan 2013 4:33pm
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, for your exciting, gracious words of praise, and for your welcome to the DU. ALL are appreciated and mean a great deal to me!!
Enchantress
Enchantress
13th Jan 2013 4:59pm
15th Jan 2013 3:21am
Do you perform? With this kind of rhythm, this is one of those pieces that really ought to be heard.. There's a definite flow here. As a spoken word artist I find myself trying to interpret how you might deliver it. Also, your work is very visual, and as an illustrator, I really enjoy your descriptive style.
"Alone, I can escape,
in one unleashed, fragmented hour--
the hour in which the clear cup drowns
the memories it renews.
While tranquil, lithium lullabies bring
nightmares filled with thrones and silver crowns
in pulsating, poisoned patterns
of brilliant whirling hues."
--This section, in particular "rings in my ears".. I'm not good at describing why or how something strikes me as profound or relative to me, just know that it did!
"Alone, I can escape,
in one unleashed, fragmented hour--
the hour in which the clear cup drowns
the memories it renews.
While tranquil, lithium lullabies bring
nightmares filled with thrones and silver crowns
in pulsating, poisoned patterns
of brilliant whirling hues."
--This section, in particular "rings in my ears".. I'm not good at describing why or how something strikes me as profound or relative to me, just know that it did!
19th Jan 2013 00:28am
Thank you...thank you...thank you!!
I have so much admiration, and respect, for your writing...I am humbled by your creative talent! For you to say that my piece ought to be heard, well--that is unquestionably more than I ever expected, more than I could ever hope for!
I am ever so grateful for your comments--especially your compliments on this particular section...one of my favorite sections, too.
I honestly appreciate the time you took to read this poem, and your words of praise.
Enchantress
I have so much admiration, and respect, for your writing...I am humbled by your creative talent! For you to say that my piece ought to be heard, well--that is unquestionably more than I ever expected, more than I could ever hope for!
I am ever so grateful for your comments--especially your compliments on this particular section...one of my favorite sections, too.
I honestly appreciate the time you took to read this poem, and your words of praise.
Enchantress
20th Jan 2014 2:40pm
22nd Jan 2014 4:02pm
19th Jan 2013 7:23pm
19th Jan 2013 10:31pm
I thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem, and for your gracious praise! Both are ever so appreciated, and I accept with humble gratitude.
Sionch`ain leat,
Enchantress
Sionch`ain leat,
Enchantress
Anonymous
8th May 2013 8:54am
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8th May 2013 11:22pm
Thank you ever so much, Theo!
It is grateful that i am, to be certain , for your encouragement. I am humbled, and honored!!
I thank you, as well, for adding this poem to your reading list! I truly do appreciate this!!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
It is grateful that i am, to be certain , for your encouragement. I am humbled, and honored!!
I thank you, as well, for adding this poem to your reading list! I truly do appreciate this!!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
Anonymous
4th Jun 2013 10:07pm
This poem takes you on one wild ride, and
the reader loves it:). I am tongued tied
and medicated, wanting to take another
ride..lol Your word usage is very creative
and descriptive. You lay it on thick and
take no prisoners...great job:)
the reader loves it:). I am tongued tied
and medicated, wanting to take another
ride..lol Your word usage is very creative
and descriptive. You lay it on thick and
take no prisoners...great job:)
5th Jun 2013 00:50am
AngelicDarkness,
I am honored, and humbled, to be certain, by your very creative comments! I am pleased that you enjoyed your 'ride.'
Thank you, ever so much, for taking the time to read,and leave your thoughts beneath my poem...I am grateful.
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
I am honored, and humbled, to be certain, by your very creative comments! I am pleased that you enjoyed your 'ride.'
Thank you, ever so much, for taking the time to read,and leave your thoughts beneath my poem...I am grateful.
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
20th Jul 2013 10:12pm
20th Jul 2013 10:26pm
Thank you soo much for your generous praise! i am always glad, and grateful, whenever a i have a new review of one of my pieces.
i truly appreciate the time you spent reading, and commenting, on my poem--both truly mean so very much to me! i am happy that you enjoyed this!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
i truly appreciate the time you spent reading, and commenting, on my poem--both truly mean so very much to me! i am happy that you enjoyed this!
Sioch`ain leat,
Enchantress
26th Jul 2013 8:46pm
Favorite line:
"endless ebony dragons kiss the molten sky"
can't beat a dragon!
Enjoyed, added to my list.
"endless ebony dragons kiss the molten sky"
can't beat a dragon!
Enjoyed, added to my list.
26th Jul 2013 9:07pm
O,when it comes to dragons...indeed, nothing can!!
Thank you soo much for taking the time to read and comment! Always glad to find a new reviewer!
Thanks for the reading list addition, as well !!
Thank you soo much for taking the time to read and comment! Always glad to find a new reviewer!
Thanks for the reading list addition, as well !!
Dark and foreboding look into
a distraught mind, one capable
of crystal clarity.
Chilling work.
I keep thinking of psychotic-therapy.
a distraught mind, one capable
of crystal clarity.
Chilling work.
I keep thinking of psychotic-therapy.
27th Nov 2013 2:00pm
Beautiful writing, chilling in some areas, but I can relate to the "Psycho" part very well.
Thanks for a great read!
Thanks for a great read!
27th Nov 2013 2:31pm
Welcome Wicked!
It is always a pleasure--indeed--to welcome a new visitor within my realm! Please feel free to drift in, anytime.....
Thank you for taking the time to read my piece, and for your thoughtful, generous praise.....a special thanks, as well, for your reading list add! ALL of these are truly appreciated---to be certain!
It is always a pleasure--indeed--to welcome a new visitor within my realm! Please feel free to drift in, anytime.....
Thank you for taking the time to read my piece, and for your thoughtful, generous praise.....a special thanks, as well, for your reading list add! ALL of these are truly appreciated---to be certain!
13th Jan 2014 1:45pm
"But....who will pay the price
of one soul p e e l e d,
and thinly sliced ???"
Every word personally touching and distressing Miss DE.
Some reflection. A lot memories. Quite a talent M'lady. A fan of your work. I thank you.
of one soul p e e l e d,
and thinly sliced ???"
Every word personally touching and distressing Miss DE.
Some reflection. A lot memories. Quite a talent M'lady. A fan of your work. I thank you.
TS...
I thank you--ever soo much-- for your thoughtful, gracious, generous words of praise, and for your support! ALL are so deeply appreciated--to be certain! I am humbled, and honored!
You are so surely correct about the memories...some personal...some based on a cherished friend's treatments,
It is always such a pleasure, to have a new visitor within my realm! Please feel free to visit any time! You are always most welcome--indeed!
I thank you--ever soo much-- for your thoughtful, gracious, generous words of praise, and for your support! ALL are so deeply appreciated--to be certain! I am humbled, and honored!
You are so surely correct about the memories...some personal...some based on a cherished friend's treatments,
It is always such a pleasure, to have a new visitor within my realm! Please feel free to visit any time! You are always most welcome--indeed!
20th Jan 2014 2:40pm
holy sh*t... sorry but that was very ... um ... correctly descriptive of the way some things are...awesome...i am amazed by your writing...how you put into words the feelings and state of mind i am sure many feel...
22nd Jan 2014 4:01pm
(LOL!) No apology necessary--I assure you!
I am just glad that my poem was able to offer some insight in to the tormented lives of those who have been diagnosed with mental illness.
(thank you for your sensitive understanding, as well!)
I would also, like to thank you, for taking the time to read this piece, and for your awesome comments! ALL are appreciated so very much!
I am just glad that my poem was able to offer some insight in to the tormented lives of those who have been diagnosed with mental illness.
(thank you for your sensitive understanding, as well!)
I would also, like to thank you, for taking the time to read this piece, and for your awesome comments! ALL are appreciated so very much!
21st Dec 2015 3:08pm
