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The Early Bird Gets Nothing
Birds eating from trash bags,
the most visually depressing scene
no worms for them
cigarette butts instead
take the trees in the name of paper
the birds have been evicted
lifted, from their rightful place
nature sees this atrocity
wiping us out slowly
disease is what we all deserve
blind eyes, twisted tongues
fuck the moon, kill the sun
dieing is for the living
the rest of us shall reap
what someone else sewed
the most visually depressing scene
no worms for them
cigarette butts instead
take the trees in the name of paper
the birds have been evicted
lifted, from their rightful place
nature sees this atrocity
wiping us out slowly
disease is what we all deserve
blind eyes, twisted tongues
fuck the moon, kill the sun
dieing is for the living
the rest of us shall reap
what someone else sewed
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Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
8th Jan 2013 10:56pm
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8th Jan 2013 10:58pm
Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
8th Jan 2013 11:03pm
Serves `em right for crapping on our windshields........ : > )
but seriously folks...
as you know nikkeeeeee....your eloquent words
mirror my views as well......
thanks for so artfully bringing this stuff to attention
but seriously folks...
as you know nikkeeeeee....your eloquent words
mirror my views as well......
thanks for so artfully bringing this stuff to attention
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re: Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
9th Jan 2013 00:34am
Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
8th Jan 2013 11:35pm
in ny we call pigeons city chicken...the homeless eat them all the time.
powerful stuff miss nikki.........
powerful stuff miss nikki.........
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9th Jan 2013 00:36am
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9th Jan 2013 00:40am
We live in the weirdest society .... poor old tree murdered for visual entertainment......... ;) thanks broom
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9th Jan 2013 1:22am
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jan 2013 2:50am
9th Jan 2013 2:49am
Nice depressing but true write nikkimoe.
strider
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re: Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
9th Jan 2013 2:32pm
Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
9th Jan 2013 7:34am
Nicely done with this Nikkimoe. Reminds me a bit of...
"They cut down the trees,
put them in a tree museum
and charged everyone
a dollar and a half just to see 'em.
So, it always seem to go
you don't know
what you've got until its gone.
They paved paradise,
and put up a parking lot."
(Joni Mitchell)
Uley
"They cut down the trees,
put them in a tree museum
and charged everyone
a dollar and a half just to see 'em.
So, it always seem to go
you don't know
what you've got until its gone.
They paved paradise,
and put up a parking lot."
(Joni Mitchell)
Uley
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re: Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
9th Jan 2013 2:33pm
Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
9th Jan 2013 10:19am
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9th Jan 2013 2:33pm
Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
9th Jan 2013 2:26pm
The Norwegians give a sixty foot tree to London every year as a thank you for us helping them in WW2. I've never been to see it and never will.
Mother nature may be slow to respond but when she does we'd better watch our arses!
Impeccable write as usual Nikki Thank you.
Mother nature may be slow to respond but when she does we'd better watch our arses!
Impeccable write as usual Nikki Thank you.
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re: Re: The Early Bird Gets Nothing
9th Jan 2013 2:35pm
Wtf? whats with the slaughter of old trees everywhere?
mother nature will get us.........perhaps she already has
Thanks Blocat!
mother nature will get us.........perhaps she already has
Thanks Blocat!
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