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Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
My fairytale expired
instantaneously
nothing left to kick around
its gone
twisted dreams
a fated prince
the fabric of destiny has been ironed out
no more wrinkles
a weight lifted, sort of
but a strange loneliness has crept in
I will miss the fantasy,
it lived a long life inside of me
poisoned apples from a fruitless bitch
a glass slipper that no longer fits
the hundred year sleep is over
seven league boots were made for walking
the birth of something new
the death of something old
what will be.....will be
circles and all that jazz
instantaneously
nothing left to kick around
its gone
twisted dreams
a fated prince
the fabric of destiny has been ironed out
no more wrinkles
a weight lifted, sort of
but a strange loneliness has crept in
I will miss the fantasy,
it lived a long life inside of me
poisoned apples from a fruitless bitch
a glass slipper that no longer fits
the hundred year sleep is over
seven league boots were made for walking
the birth of something new
the death of something old
what will be.....will be
circles and all that jazz
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Re: Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
31st Dec 2012 9:19pm
wow...this is really fabulous...great diction and flow with a very powerful delivery...i love it so much i put it on my reading list...my favorite of yours by far :)
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Re: Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
31st Dec 2012 9:20pm
oh, nikkimoe, i forgot to mention how perfect the picture is for your poem...excellent choice....Happy New Year!!!
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31st Dec 2012 9:23pm
Thanks so much
something I used to think about
kinda just faded.... :) Happy New Year!!!!
something I used to think about
kinda just faded.... :) Happy New Year!!!!
Re: Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
31st Dec 2012 9:29pm
Nikki you're a peach on the beach. you roar on the shore baby.
Happy New year
Happy New year
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31st Dec 2012 9:31pm
Re: Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
Nice Year End
Rite, dear.....except for 4 words
eye always cringe at that
summary cliche
"...and all that jazz"--
it has always sounded
anti-poignant/anti-climactic/ (not to mention 'dismissive' of the art of jazz)
to 'me',
butt wha'do eyeknow? BTW: Hoppy Gnu Jeer!
Rite, dear.....except for 4 words
eye always cringe at that
summary cliche
"...and all that jazz"--
it has always sounded
anti-poignant/anti-climactic/ (not to mention 'dismissive' of the art of jazz)
to 'me',
butt wha'do eyeknow? BTW: Hoppy Gnu Jeer!
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re: Re: Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
That is why it's there with what will be will be circles and all that jazz its ment to be like a yeah yeah blah blah blah. i see what you mean by being dismissive to jazz though .......
Re: Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
1st Jan 2013 00:52am
Perfect...and poignant Nikkie...
is such your way...
happy New year LOve...
May Allah Bless you with all the best!
Fire
is such your way...
happy New year LOve...
May Allah Bless you with all the best!
Fire
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Re: Kicking Down Sandcastles In My Head
1st Jan 2013 7:28pm
a weight lifted, sort of
but a strange loneliness has crept in
I will miss the fantasy,
it lived a long life inside of me
Great write, made me think :)
but a strange loneliness has crept in
I will miss the fantasy,
it lived a long life inside of me
Great write, made me think :)
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4th Jan 2013 8:08pm