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Pass The Tequila But Don't Spill The Passion
I find it to be quite sexy
The rhythm to which your hair swings
When you softly run your fingers through
It is but only a reverie to yearn
To see many happy, shiny faces
With a striking quality such as yours
And to drink of your lips
Within the wake of the moon
The rhythm to which your hair swings
When you softly run your fingers through
It is but only a reverie to yearn
To see many happy, shiny faces
With a striking quality such as yours
And to drink of your lips
Within the wake of the moon
Published 7th Dec 2012
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22nd Dec 2012 7:52am
I was feeling this until I got to "To see many happy, shiny faces
With a striking quality such as yours".
Those words seemed to reduce her unique appeal to another face in the crowd?
Love the title!
With a striking quality such as yours".
Those words seemed to reduce her unique appeal to another face in the crowd?
Love the title!
4th Sep 2013 1:25am
Anonymous
13th Mar 2014 8:26pm
It's interesting that you suggest tequila to be more of an easy persons drink, compared to the subtle reminder of the second half of your title: but don't spill the passion! Ah, I did enjoy that.
Lyrically beautiful.
Thank you for the read.
Lyrically beautiful.
Thank you for the read.
