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Love Bound
I left you speechless
over stories
of sinful fantasy,
where I fulfill
your every desire.
You know me
heart and soul,
but you have not felt
all the joys I hold.
Allow me
a personal poetry reading
from my tongue
to your skin.
I will lick away
every doubt left between us.
Paint me in beautiful colors
from the aura
of your fingertips.
No word is left unspoken
through the language
of our bodies
and the expression
of hearts on lips
as we kiss.
Bound in a union
of fluid and movement
we hold one another
in the pinnacle of ecstasy.
The heavens our only witness.
Love
the only power
we answer to.
over stories
of sinful fantasy,
where I fulfill
your every desire.
You know me
heart and soul,
but you have not felt
all the joys I hold.
Allow me
a personal poetry reading
from my tongue
to your skin.
I will lick away
every doubt left between us.
Paint me in beautiful colors
from the aura
of your fingertips.
No word is left unspoken
through the language
of our bodies
and the expression
of hearts on lips
as we kiss.
Bound in a union
of fluid and movement
we hold one another
in the pinnacle of ecstasy.
The heavens our only witness.
Love
the only power
we answer to.
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Re: Love Bound
13th Nov 2012 12:17pm
Damn! I think it's safe to say that you have become DU's #1 erotic writer. The poems I have seen by you the past couple months are blowing my mind. I think this is your niche, my sweet angel.
Gemini
Gemini
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re: Re: Love Bound
19th Nov 2012 3:53pm
You are too kind, my dear. Thank you! I am sure I am far from #1. lol Blowing your mind, really? That's awesome! :) I think I did stumble into a niche, yes. I have been helped along into it a bit as well. Haha. <3
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13th Nov 2012 2:35pm
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Re: Love Bound
14th Nov 2012 1:35am
A love story that renews itself and emerges fresh daily.
The bond of such love grows roots deep beyond the physical. Lovely
The bond of such love grows roots deep beyond the physical. Lovely
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re: Re: Love Bound
19th Nov 2012 3:55pm
Very deep beyond the physical. It is amazing and I am blessed beyond measure to experience such love.
Thank you for reading and your always insightful comments.
:)
Thank you for reading and your always insightful comments.
:)
Re: Love Bound
Anonymous
14th Nov 2012 8:32am
I know everyone's wary of the erotic genere these days, but this poem would do well there; it reminded me vaguely of Anaïs Nin. It's sensual in a quiet and lulling way which captures the beauty of lovemaking. Your use of free verse is also effective. I much prefer this to your rhyming pieces, I must admit. Critique is JMHO. Thanks for the read.
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re: Re: Love Bound
19th Nov 2012 3:58pm
Ah, my sweet Jack! A comment from you feels like the Gods have turned their eyes to me for a moment. :)
Yes, I am much better with free verse than rhyming. Thank you for the complement, my dearest, and for reading my humble work. <3
Yes, I am much better with free verse than rhyming. Thank you for the complement, my dearest, and for reading my humble work. <3
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19th Nov 2012 3:56pm
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26th Nov 2012 6:50pm
"No word is left unspoken
through the language
of our bodies"
My Star I'm blow away! Wow.. This is a great write sweetheart..
through the language
of our bodies"
My Star I'm blow away! Wow.. This is a great write sweetheart..
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26th Nov 2012 6:54pm
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14th Dec 2012 11:43am
Thank you for taking the time to read, RT. :) So happy to have you grace my pages.
Re: Love Bound
4th Dec 2012 8:19pm
Love
the only power
we answer to.
loved this poem and enjoy reading your poetry.xx
the only power
we answer to.
loved this poem and enjoy reading your poetry.xx
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14th Dec 2012 11:44am
Re: Love Bound
17th Dec 2012 10:41am
Speechless sinful fantasies... Always a favorite. I, umm, well, as you know... am speechless.
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19th Dec 2012 7:17pm